When I was a child, I was naughty and didn't like to eat. My mother is always following me, chasing me with a bowl. Gradually, when I grew up, my mother and I made an agreement: for health, I will eat by myself in the future.
I am also very obedient, keep this mother's agreement and eat very full every day. As time went by, I also developed a good habit of eating by myself.
But since my father became a fruit seller, all kinds of fresh fruits have been placed in front of me. I can't control my delicious mouth. As long as my stomach is a little full, I will fill my stomach with fruit. In this way, while my mother was not looking, my weight soared 10 kg. Now, my mother says she wants to lose weight for me. So, we started skipping again. But I just don't want to jump, just because skipping rope is too tired. Mom has a new trick: jump rope with me. A month passed, and I really lost weight.
I not only learned to eat by myself, but also learned how to keep healthy. For the sake of health, I keep my agreement with my mother every day.
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Comment: What is the title of this composition? Is there an agreement? , does not mean that there can only be one protocol, but also refers to multiple protocols. In this article, what about children and mothers? An agreement? Is to eat by yourself. But writing about food is too monotonous. The children also wrote about doing exercise to lose weight after eating fruit, making this agreement more detailed. From the expression point of view, the sentence is also very smooth, and the meaning between the upper and lower paragraphs has priority. Can it be at the end? Point? It can not only summarize the previous content, but also emphasize the center of the article again.
If your father doesn't sell fruit, how do you write it? You can only write practical things in combination with life, and you won't succeed without composition. After hard work, you did a good job.
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Author: Zhang Yu
Source: WeChat official account: Sishipu Zhongyuan Primary School