A possible version:
Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve this goal?
First of all, we should cultivate a
A possible version:
Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve this goal?
First of all, we should cultivate a good attitude towards life. Life has not only sunshine, but also hardships. We should face the difficulties bravely. Secondly, we must study hard, because knowledge is power. If we have the ability, we can help make our country stronger and enjoy our life better. In order to study well, we need to do exercise, so that we can keep healthy. After a day's study, we can go running, play ball games or just take a walk.
If we do these things well, we will grow up happily and healthily.
Test analysis: this written expression requires writing a short article with the content of "healthy growth", including an optimistic attitude; Study hard; And take part in exercise. The writing requirement is only to give an outline, which requires students to use their imagination and add details appropriately in writing to make the writing clear and informative. For example, the purpose of studying hard, the benefits of taking part in exercise and so on. At the same time, conjunctions should be used appropriately in writing, such as the first, second, third and, more importantly, dreams. This shows the relationship between progress. In order to increase the highlights of the article, we should also try to use a variety of sentence structures, such as attributive clauses, adverbial clauses, non-predicates and so on. Finally, it should be noted that the article should use the simple present tense and the first person.
The highlights show that the written expression of this article is short and pithy, with comprehensive points, clear levels and coherent language. Start by asking questions and lead to healthy topics. Then use the first, second and third to introduce three points: attitude towards life, study hard and exercise actively. The author not only uses some advanced words, phrases and conjunctions, such as consensus, hardness and face, but also uses conditional adverbial clauses if we have the ability, if we do these things well, and objective adverbial clauses so that we can keep healthy, which have become the highlights of the article and improved the taste of the article.