Teaching objectives of writing fairy tales1;
1, read the example "Looking for Hunger" to understand its main contents and the general requirements for self-editing fairy tales.
2. Guide students to put their favorite toys, use their imagination and make up an interesting fairy tale.
3. Learn to correct words with obvious mistakes in practice.
4. Cultivate students' interest in homework and make them dare to think, love to talk and love to write.
Teaching process:
First of all, the news is very interesting:
Students, do you like reading fairy tales? Why? (Interesting and anthropomorphic) Can you make up fairy tales? (Showing pictures) A third-grade child like you compiled an interesting composition based on these two panda toys, which was also published in Little Fairy Tale Forest magazine and used as a model essay by our current textbooks. do you want to see it ? (Students can open the book on page 122 or watch the screen display. )
Second, the model essay leads the way:
1, let the students read the example of "looking for hunger" and think:
What does this fairy tale tell? Why are panda dolls hungry? How do you find hunger? What is the result?
(2) What paragraph do you think the little author wrote naturally well? Why? (Look for words of action, language and expression)
2. Students are also two panda toys. The author can imagine such an attractive character in the story. Do you find this fairy tale interesting? Do you admire the young author's imagination? In fact, our children here are great, too. I believe the story you made up today will be much more wonderful than Looking for Hunger. Do you have confidence? (Show good news)
Good news: Fairy tales will be selected again in Little Fairy Tale Forest. Whoever has the richest imagination and the most interesting story is the "fairy tale king" of the small fairy tale forest, and his story will be compiled into the small fairy tale forest and made into an cartoon.
Students, do you want your story to be compiled into "Little Fairy Tale Forest" and animated? Let's act quickly,
Third, prompt the topic and show the toys.
1. Today, let's perform and tell their fairy tales. (blackboard writing: putting toys to make fairy tales)
The teacher shows two animal toys and asks the students to imagine what might happen between them. At the same time, let the students write on the blackboard.
Choose the most interesting topic on the blackboard to deepen the understanding of the writing process. The first thing is to think about what will happen between them? Tell me again why this happened. Then explain how it happened, and finally explain how it turned out. The key point is to write the story clearly and show the key paragraphs of Looking for Hunger. The camera consolidates the concreteness of action, expression and language)
Show me a warm reminder:
When animals are selected, we must imagine what will happen between them. Then write clearly why this is so. Then explain how it happened, and finally explain how it turned out. The key point is to write clearly what happened, and pay attention to the movements, demeanor and language of the protagonist!
2. Let the students put a toy and make up a fairy tale. You can make it yourself, you can cooperate with your deskmate for two minutes, and try to make up fairy tales. (The teacher makes a patrol and leaves at the right time)
3. Students meditate and write fairy tales. (Show Cumulative)
4. Exchange the best parts of fairy tales. Pay attention to the title of the fairy tale first, and then * * * enjoy your wonderful fragments, okay?
Fourth, activity summary: the teacher listened to the story you made up and wanted to say to you: "Little fairy tale", you are great! If you write down your story completely and send it to Little Fairy Tale Forest magazine, you will definitely become a real "fairy tale king". The author of this story is neither Andersen nor Brothers Grimm, but our classmates here. They must be no worse than the fairy tale masters such as Andersen and Brothers Grimm!
Please read your article to your good friends or parents, listen to their opinions and revise the draft. Copy the article in the composition book after correcting it.
On a sunny day, Mother Rabbit asked Baby Rabbit to pick some radishes from the field across the river.
Beibei came to the river, looked at the radish on the other side and looked at the river. He felt something was wrong. Later, his mind moved and he shouted, "Ah! I can't swim, how can I go to the other side to pull radish! " Babe is like an ant on hot bricks.
At this time, Grandpa Tortoise passed by, looked at the anxious rabbit and swam over to ask, "Rabbit, what's wrong with you?" Beibei replied, "I want to pull radish across the street, but this river is in my way." Grandpa tortoise patted his chest and said, "I'll carry you across the river." The rabbit quickly jumped on Grandpa Tortoise's back and ran to the other side. Beibei quickly took out some radishes and said, "Grandpa Tortoise, this is the radishes I gave you. Thank you, goodbye! "
Once upon a time, there was a butterfly kingdom built in a small garden.
In this kingdom, there are thousands of beautiful butterflies. Each butterfly has its own house. Some are made of green leaves and some are made of colorful flowers. All kinds of butterflies are very interesting!
Like the tree demon, they all have their own means of transportation. Butterfly's means of transportation are grandma Feng and sunflower field. When Grandma Feng blows hard, the sunflower will sway with the wind, and the sunflower will be a booster for butterflies, making them fly higher!
Write the fourth fairy tale "The representative Council of China's great changes in life in the 40 years of reform and opening up begins now!" All kinds of items representing 40 years of reform and opening up gathered in the appraisal hall, and only the chandelier slowly began to announce on the roof.
There are a sea of people in the audience, all wanting to witness the appraisal meeting of the 40th anniversary of reform and opening up.
At this time, a car slowly drove into the hall and proudly said, "If reform and opening up are to be counted, it must be me." Look, 40 years ago, people traveled on two legs. Now every family has a car. "Then turned around and walked to the people. The red shell and indoor seats are as easy to sit as sofas, and the leather seats are also luminous. People can't help but nod and say, "Without reform and opening up, there really isn't! "
A silent air conditioner spoke: "It is not easy to be a representative. 1978 before the reform and opening up, it was good to have a fan at home. Now every household has air conditioning. " The people in the audience nodded and smiled. The air conditioner suddenly blew cold air, and the audience nodded and said, "Yes, yes, it can represent change."
At this moment, the retractable door was carried in by two people, and the retractable door slowly opened: "Now retractable doors can be seen everywhere, which was not available before the reform and opening up." He gave a quick spin. Everyone was shocked again, thinking of the wooden doors and bamboo doors before, they couldn't help nodding their heads again to show that there was no problem.
Just when everyone thought that these representatives were enough, TV and e-books came in together: "We are a necessity for every household now. We are much better than the previous 14 inch black-and-white TV and paper books, which brings convenience and comfort. " They said with one voice. Everyone thought about the small TV and thick books before, saying that there is no objection!
"None of you can represent me. I am the boss here. If there was such a bright environment 40 years ago, wait for the appraisal meeting in the dim light! " The lights swaggered to the center of the stage. ...
Forty years ago, before the reform and opening up, it was so poor here, but now it has undergone earth-shaking changes. How happy we are now! But some children still don't know when to be blessed! I hope they can attend such an appraisal meeting.
Deep in the virgin forest, there is a rose house.
The rose room is made up of several roses, and each rose is hung with a small sign that says kitchen, living room, gym and so on.
After a while, its owner, Flower Fairy, came back. She walked towards the gate. The petals of the gate slowly opened and the flower fairy flew in. In front of her is a huge rose petal. She stood up and moved with a wave of her hand. She took the petal elevator up and came to the living room. There is a white sofa in the living room. This sofa is made of shiny cotton, soft and comfortable!
I really want to see the rose room and meet the flower fairy!
It rained cats and dogs yesterday, and the water on the river rose. It's sunny today. Little rabbit Lele is going to pull radish across the river. Lele came to the river happily and looked at the radish on the other side. "wow! What a big radish! "
However, there is a wide river in the middle, and the river flows fast. She can't swim, and she is anxious around the river bank, but the river shows no signs of weakening, and it is still rushing. The rabbit is anxious like an ant on hot bricks. Just then, the enthusiastic Grandpa Tortoise came. She asked the little rabbit, "What's the matter with you? What can I do for you? " Little Nutbrown hare said, "I'm going to pull the radish across the river, but the water is too big for me." . ""I see! Then I will carry you across the river. "The rabbit was very grateful to Grandpa Tortoise, so he jumped on Grandpa Tortoise's back and crossed the river smoothly. The rabbit said, "Thank you, Grandpa Tortoise. Let me give you some radishes! """Thank you, no, you'd better keep it for yourself!" Grandpa tortoise just left.
Rabbit thanks grandpa tortoise very much!
In fairy tale kingdom, there is a fruit room.
There are many kinds of fruit houses, strawberries, grapes, peaches and apples.
There are several buttons in the house. Press the first button and the house will fly to the sky automatically. Press another button and it will be restored. The last button is to help you clean up.
The furniture inside is particularly beautiful, all of which are fruity. For example, an apple chair, a mahogany bed, a strawberry table and an orange sofa ... In this fruit house, you can not only satisfy your body's relaxation needs, but also satisfy your taste buds!
Do you like this fruit house? Welcome to visit!
One day in the dead of night, suddenly, a cry came into Xiao Ming's ear. Xiao Ming got up from the bed and vaguely heard the conversation between the table and the chair.
The chair sobbed and said, "Cousin, I am always engraved and shaken. My compatriots wavered and wavered, and many of them collapsed. " The chair finished and began to cry again. "Stop crying!" The table said quietly, "I have an appointment with all our compatriots." How about a collective escape tonight? " The more you chat, the more excited you get.
Hearing this, Xiao Ming was very anxious. He hurried to his parents' bedroom, but his father said, "It's just a dream. Don't be paranoid. " Right, right. "Mother also echoed.
The next day, people woke up and exclaimed, "Where are my desks and chairs?" "Where are the desks and chairs?" People can't do many things without desks and chairs. For example, homework, eating and writing can't be done normally. As the days passed, people thought of various ways. The last thing they thought was whether the desks and chairs left home because they didn't care about public property. So people came to the square one after another and shouted in unison: "We will never destroy public property again, and we will never destroy public property again." The desks and chairs were stunned when they heard someone shouting, and then cheered. The chair said, "Cousin, let's go home!" ""all right! " Said the table.
The next day, the tables and chairs came back. People understand a truth: we must take good care of public property!