| Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue. To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of dancing. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue. To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are not able to enjoy square dancing. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers. In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others' needs. What's more, our government should invest more money to build some specified?recreation centers? In my view square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others' needs. What's more, our government should invest more money to build some specified?recreation centers for people. The highlights illustrate the use of very good phrases and sentences to add color to the essay, such as throw doubt on, be opposed to, etc. and with compound structure. It also utilizes the use of that-led homonymous clauses, the application of the present participle considering, and so long as-led conditional clauses. And pay attention to the articulation of sentences, such as: to be honest, besides, What's more and so on. |