The Immortal Sword Divine Comedy vs Immortal Punishment, read it and comment on it.

My favorite novel is the immortal, do not like the immortal sword divine music

The owner of the building, you said that the immortal "heaven and earth is not benevolent, to all things for the ruminant dog" main theme is not clearly elaborated, that's because you do not understand, but I have read the true meaning of this sentence. This sentence through the fate of Zhang Xiaofan interpretation of the best, do not you think so? Do you have to write a paragraph explaining this sentence in order to call it elaborated?

Specifically:

Characters: Most of the characters in the Immortal Sword Divine Comedy are still alive and well, but personally speaking, I think the biggest failure is in the two main female characters, and I don't see any difference in the character of the two main female characters! Xue'er only showed her willfulness when she first met Ding Yuan as a child, and since then she has become a soft woman, if not for the fact that the Niu Whisperer herself told the readers very clearly at the beginning of the novel that Xue'er was willful, I really don't know what type of person she is! And Jade is also in addition to the childhood performance in addition to love to cry, from now on also become a soft and gentle good girl, I have to say that these two female protagonists have no readability; and the exorcism of the Immortals, Zhang Xiaofan, Lu Xueqi, Baguio's characterization of the deep, very graphic. However both of them have characters that serve no purpose at all: like Qian Qian and Lady Helian in Immortal Sword, and Lin Jingyu in Immortal Execution, which is where they **** the same failure!

Plot: Immortal Sword Divine Comedy used too much of the old set of martial arts plot, to put it mildly, every plot in the book I can find in the shadow of Jin Yong's martial arts book counterparts; Immortal Punishment plot is more innovative. When I look at the exorcism of the immortal very have to continue to see the desire, while the immortal sword has no desire, to be honest, I was to see the "immortal sword divine song is in addition to the immortal the most good-looking novel," this sentence is barely to the immortal sword finished, and the immortal sword divine song late plot is all ding yuans running here to fight a fight running there to fight a fight, what is the readability of this?

The writing: the sword of immortality in some words particularly good, but also some words are very idiotic, such as some of the obvious things he has to use a paragraph to explain, very long-winded, and the exorcism of immortality is even more long-winded, dao xuan on the column incense also used thousands of words, speechless ...... to say mature words, I think the exorcism of immortality than the sword of immortality is more mature because The immortal sword is only some places of language beyond the exorcism, and even comparable to Jin Yong, but some places are also childish unbearable, so in general, exorcism to be more mature, at least the exorcism is more stable a little bit.

The lines: the immortal in a few words is very shocking, there are a lot of classic lines, and after watching the immortal sword is not any feeling, a sentence can not remember::::: the immortal is more like a person's vomit of effort, the immortal sword is more like a fast food novel (purely personal opinion)

The fight: the immortal sword Divine Comedy of the fight than the fight of the wuxia is still difficult to see, the old is a move what so on and so forth, and a move what so on, this is the Xuan Yuan Yuan. It's a metaphysical novel, how can you write fighting like this? Mr. Jin Yong's martial arts fights are more spectacular than Immortal Sword's fights. The fights in Immortal Exorcism make me feel what is called fantasy. I personally think that the fight is the biggest failure of the immortal sword, but also the biggest success of the exorcism of the immortal.

Possibly most of the people who say bad things about Xianxian are still because of Baguio's death and the hasty ending, but I think the ending of Xianxian is already very good. There are a lot of people on the internet who have listed dozens of loopholes in the exorcisms, and I've read them, and I don't think any of them are valid, and most of them are just a matter of common sense (which is a bit of an egomaniacal thing to say \(^o^)/~)

Guowei said, "All scenic language is love language," and the scenic descriptions that are just meant to promote the development of the plot are considered to be something that is not. What is it? First of all, is the owner in middle school? It feels very... If the scene description, delicate psychological description and so on is irrelevant, just as in the filming of the movie on the blank background of the characters fighting, of course, for the owner, perhaps there is no background does not make a difference.

3. To the owner of the reading ability, read the immortal after not memorable plot that is natural. (Joking, huh) but please do not think that others do not have memory to their own memory, you think that the nonsense of the description of the wind and snow, not coincidentally, I and many of my good friends can be said to be the backward recitation, you think that the nonsense of the soul of the immortal in our view is precisely where the soul of the exorcism, it is precisely those depictions of the Lu Xueqi, Baguio, they can be in our hearts to leave the beauty of the insurmountable,

China is the only place where the soul of the immortal in our hearts, it is the only way to get a better picture of the immortal in the world. It is the description of those seemingly bland without plot, in order to let the so-called plot to come when the feelings of strong beyond reproduction!

I think it's very true that the rendering of plot in exorcism is not comparable to that of the average writer!

8th floor. You are strong! Kudos!

Upstairs, the Punisher's fights are depicted as empty? Jokes! Also the number of times you read a book doesn't prove anything, some people read a book once and figure out what it means. Some people read ten times and still do not know anything.