On the day of the Lantern Festival, after dinner, I went to Xinda Plaza with my father, mother, and my second aunt's family.
There is a sea of people, colorful lights, fire trees and silver flowers, there is a stage to sing opera, there are performing songs and dances, there are playing the lion, there is a night market to sell snacks, everywhere overflowing with a faction of the New Year's festivities. Our family looked around, enjoying the beautiful night scene of the New Year's Eve. Suddenly always sharp-eyed second aunt found not far from a large group of people gathered there do not know what to do. Closer to see, it turned out that they are guessing riddles. So, we also joined the riddle army, overhead red lanterns hanging below various types of puzzles. I also tried to guess a few, and surprisingly I was able to guess the answer. Just as I was running to cash in my prize, I was dumbfounded. There was a long dragon in front of me, and the queue for the prizes was several hundred meters long. I was disappointed and gave up the idea of receiving the prize. When I heard my dad say that we were going to put on a wishing lamp, I was as excited as if I had been activated. We hurriedly got into the car and went straight to the Riverside Avenue.
When we got there, my sister and I hurriedly took out our pre-prepared wishing lamps, while my aunt took out his pen, which never leaves his body, and wrote down our first wish on the lamp. Auntie and Dad were there to help. I took a closer look and realized that it was for me. It said, "May our little princess grow thinner and prettier." I couldn't help but snicker when I realized that my aunt had changed last year's "grow fatter and fatter" to "grow thinner and thinner," I said. The first wishing lamp was successfully placed in the sky. Then my aunt wrote down the second and third wishes,......, some wishing my sister to win the gold medal, and some wishing my grandpa and grandma good health. When the last wishing lamp flew up to the sky, we watched the released wishing lamps slowly floating into the distance. The seven wishing lamps were like seven stars winking mischievously at us. With our family's New Year's blessings flew into the dark night sky.
Ah! What a happy Lantern Festival. I really hope the next Lantern Festival will come soon.
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Lantern Festival
Last night, my mom and dad and I went to the street to see the lights. Although the weather in the north is incredibly cold, but the cold can not stop people's enthusiasm .
Just to the road, I saw a sea of people on the road, the whole road has become a "sidewalk", a glance at the end of the invisible flow of people.
My mom and dad and I also with the flow of people into the light district Desheng Street. Only to see that the street's big building, colorful, "ten million" strip of golden yellow flash from six or seven meters "high altitude" hanging down, such as waterfalls, it is really "suspected that the Golden River fell Desheng" ah. Oops, this is the first time I saw so many, so strange lights. See can not see over. Look, that a colorful lanterns are really a feast for the eyes. There is a red "five-pointed star", the head of the "rooster", lively and lovely "little monkey"...... you see that the spirit of the phoenix! Two pearl-like round eyes, radiating white light. Beautiful. Straight to the I looked dumbfounded
We continue to walk forward, only to hear the song I do not know where to come from "in my territory you have to listen to my ......". That must be the promotion of the mobile communication company. Sure enough, there was a stage in front of me. Although it was empty, but next to a cell phone, (quite an image, at a glance, I know it is a cell phone advertisement) the screen of the cell phone and animation. Oh, no wonder I heard singing, only to see the screen of Jay Chou is holding the microphone, singing! It seems that the Lantern Festival is not only good-looking lights, but also full of business opportunities everywhere.
This side just sent away Jay Chou, that side of the knife Lang came again. Because of the familiar melody "the first snow in XX year, came later than ever" really leisurely ah. So it's an advertisement for the Jiuqu Yellow River Formation. Look at the Nine-Quarter Yellow River Formation, turning left and right, exquisite, just like the road of life, although left and right, but finally will go out and get the victory.
The moon is gradually setting in the west, I reluctantly leave. But the people watching the lanterns are still endless, all kinds of colorful lamps like the stars in the sky, shine brightly. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on some of the best products and services in the world, and you'll be able to do it all in one place.
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Lantern Festival
"Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month of the lunar calendar, red hot over the New Year". The annual Lantern Festival is coming. Look at all the smiling faces of the families to welcome the Lantern Festival. Some houses not only hang big red watermelon lanterns, but also Kongming lanterns, silk lanterns, orange lanterns ...... all kinds of colorful lanterns. The whole village is illuminated as if it were daytime.
Look at this side of the hall more lively, lanterns more beautiful. There are so many different kinds of lanterns here that you can't stop looking at them.
Look at the peach lanterns, with a pink background, a little red on the tip of the peach, and big green leaves on the bottom of the peach, it is really beautiful and simple.
Look at the golden pig lamp, after making a good frame, with shiny gold paper glued to the frame, so that a golden pig is immediately displayed in front of the eyes, and then look at the fan lamp has been out of time, although it is out of time, but still so youthful and so graceful and courageous. And ...... is really hard to say ah!
Heh! There are also colorful firecrackers, from the sky and bombing, as if to make the sky explode a hole in the sky, full of stars from the sky a spread down. Look! Colorful fireworks fell from the sky and lit up the whole village. Everyone was amazed at how spectacular and beautiful the scene was! It was really a bit of "flying down three thousand feet, suspected to be the Milky Way falling nine days" flavor. Gradually the sparks "fly" away, the sky and all of a sudden become dark, just that scene, as a dream in my mind.
Listen, a burst of gongs and drums constantly attracted me, so I had to turn around this "Vertigo Formation of the Nine-Quarter Yellow River", I came to the array of mouth to see, one side of the attraction to the ear of the written entrance, one side of the greatly written exit, I went from the entrance into the array of gongs and drums beat my young mind, I could not resist the temptation, I couldn't help but the feet of the wind beyond the front of the people, jumped to finish the walk! The "Vertigo Formation of the Nine Quarters of the Yellow River".
I spent a happy Lantern Festival in this strong celebration.
What a beautiful Lantern Festival I saw!
I see the Lantern Festival is so beautiful! But I believe that in this developed country, the future Lantern Festival will be better, more brilliant, more brilliant!
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The Lantern Festival is really lively
"The Lantern Festival is held on the 15th day of the first month, and it is a big year in red." The annual Lantern Festival is coming. Every house is full of red smile to welcome the arrival of the Lantern Festival. Some people not only hang big red watermelon lanterns, but also Kongming lanterns, silk lanterns, orange lanterns ...... are various and colorful, lighting up the whole village as if it were daytime. Look at this side of the auditorium is more lively, lanterns are more beautiful. Here a wide range of lanterns dazzle people, see can not see over. Look at the peach lanterns, with a pink background, a bit of red on the tip of the peach, and big green leaves on the bottom of the peach, it is really both beautiful and simple. Look at that golden pig lamp, make a good frame, with shiny gold paper paste the frame, so a golden pig is immediately displayed in front of the eyes, and then look at that has been out of time fan lights, although it is out of time, but still so youthful so graceful and courageous. And ...... it is really hard to say ah! Hehe! There are also colorful firecrackers, from the sky and bombing, as if to make the sky explode a hole in the sky, full of stars from the sky all of a sudden scattered down. Look! The colorful fireworks fell from the sky, lighting up the whole Upper Smoke Village at once. At this time, the people present are stunned, this scene how spectacular, how beautiful ah!
There are really some "flying straight down three thousand feet, suspected that the Milky Way fell nine days" flavor. Gradually the sparks "fly" away, the sky and all of a sudden become darker, just now the scene, as a dream in my mind. Listen, a burst of gongs and drums continue to attract me, so I had to come to turn around this "Vertigo Formation Nine Yellow River", I came to the entrance of the formation to see, one side of the attraction to the ear of the written entrance, one side of the greatly written with the exit, I went from the entrance into the formation, a burst of gongs and drums beat my young mind, I could not resist the temptation, involuntarily feet! I can not resist the temptation, I can not help but feet beyond the people in front of the wind, jumping to walk through the "ecstasy nine Yellow River". I am in this thick celebration, spent a happy Lantern Festival. I see the Lantern Festival is really beautiful! But I believe that in this developed motherland, the future Lantern Festival will be better, brighter and more brilliant!
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This article describes a variety of colorful lanterns and colorful fireworks, describes the joy of swimming "Vertigo Formation of the Nine-Quiver Yellow River", expresses the author's happy mood, and glorifies the prosperity of the motherland. The article structure is complete, the scene is blended, the language is rich and beautiful, read as if in the lively, festive Lantern Festival.
Lantern Festival
Today is the Lantern Festival, and catch the first Pingguo Aluminum light show. It says it starts at 8:00 pm sharp, and I ran over there at less than 7:00 pm.
Before seeing its shape, first heard its sound. Just run out a few dozen meters, the melodious music into my ears: there is a beautiful piano, there is a sweet flute; there is a "New Year's Day", there is a "Chinese New Year". I was simply mesmerized by the world of music.
When I arrived at the square - wow, it was beautiful! Jade rabbit lamps, horse lanterns, peacock lanterns, carp lamps, dragon lamps, lotus lamps, torch lamps, crystal lamps, riddle lamps, really colorful, colorful, I was so excited that I was going to jump up!
You see, the square in the middle of the two are pulling carrots of the rabbit is very cute: pointed ears like scissors, small eyes like cherry, snow-white body soft as a mass of cotton, and even the short tail is like a pompom, a pouting mile!
Next to the rabbit lamp, is a pink lotus lamp, it is light and elegant, "out of the mud and not stained", so by everyone's favorite.
From the Lotus Lantern to the left, a pole land, is an eight-pronged horse lantern, painted in the lamp is the magnificent mountains and rivers of the motherland, the lamp of the six carvings hanging three red lanterns, showing the festive atmosphere of joy.
Along the horse lanterns to the left turn a corner, straight ahead, suddenly found a 6-meter-high "copper" column coiled with a dragon, it is coiled dragon lamp. Look at the dragon, see it claws like a sword, beard like silk, scales glittering, the mouth also contains a bright gold strike beads, it is very powerful.
At this time, the people watching the lantern suddenly more up, converged into a stream of people, crowded the entire square.
From the coiled dragon lamp to the right turn a corner, into the eyes of a gorgeous peacock lamp, it has a green-red hair crown, turquoise long plume and colorful screen-like feathers, can be charming.
The most amusing is the carp lamp next to the peacock lamp. It has a big belly, bulging eyes like copper bells, tail wagging, seems to jump over the Dragon Gate, looking for delicious food!
The crystal lamp at the back of the carp lamp is innovative - the whole lamp is made of small glass bottles neatly arranged, which is both simple and affordable, and exquisite, really unique.
There are also butterfly lamps, windmill lamps, train lamps ......
This is really a stream of light and colorful joy unprecedented, the fire tree and silver flowers not night sky!
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The Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month
" The Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month is a great way to celebrate the New Year. The annual Lantern Festival is coming. The first time I've ever seen the festival, I've seen the red faces of all the families welcoming the Lantern Festival. Some people not only hang big red watermelon lanterns, but also lanterns, silk lanterns, orange lanterns ...... all kinds of colorful. The whole village is illuminated as if it were daytime. Look at this side of the hall is more lively, lanterns are more beautiful. Here a wide range of lanterns dazzle people, see can not see over. Look at the peach lanterns, with a pink background, a bit of red on the tip of the peach, and big green leaves on the bottom of the peach, it is really both beautiful and simple. Look at that golden pig lamp, make a good frame, with shiny gold paper paste the frame, so a golden pig is immediately displayed in front of the eyes, and then look at that has been out of time fan lights, although it is out of time, but still so youthful so graceful and courageous. And ...... it is really hard to say ah! Hehe! There are also colorful firecrackers, from the sky and bombing, as if to make the sky explode a hole in the sky, full of stars from the sky all of a sudden scattered down. Look! The colorful fireworks fell from the sky, lighting up the whole Upper Smoke Village at once. At this time, the people present are stunned, this scene how spectacular, how beautiful ah!
There are really some "flying straight down three thousand feet, suspected that the Milky Way fell nine days" flavor. Gradually the sparks "fly" away, the sky and all of a sudden become darker, just now the scene, as a dream in my mind. Listen, a burst of gongs and drums continue to attract me, so I had to come to turn around this "Vertigo Formation Nine Yellow River", I came to the entrance of the formation to see, one side of the attraction to the ear of the written entrance, one side of the greatly written with the exit, I went from the entrance into the formation, a burst of gongs and drums beat my young mind, I could not resist the temptation, involuntarily feet! I can not resist the temptation, I can not help but feet beyond the people in front of the wind, jumping to walk through the "ecstasy nine Yellow River". I am in this thick celebration, spent a happy Lantern Festival. I see the Lantern Festival is really beautiful! But I believe that in this developed motherland, the future Lantern Festival will be better, brighter and more brilliant!
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This is a narrative article, the author tells about the Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month. The language of the article is beautiful, and the author is able to describe in detail the process of enjoying lanterns. When describing the lanterns, the author observes meticulously, "the pink background color, the peach tip painted a little red, the bottom of the peach has a bright green large leaves, it is really both beautiful and simple", reflecting the lively scene of the Lantern Festival. The article adopts the form of total division, the end of the author straight to the heart, expressed the best wishes for the motherland.
The Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month
"The Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month is a great success. Households have hung up lanterns to meet the arrival of the Lantern Festival, lanterns of all kinds, there are watermelon lamps, silk lamps, orange lamps ...... auditorium this side of the lanterns are more beautiful, look at the peach lanterns, the pink background, the tip of the peach coated with a little red, the bottom of the peach has a bright green leaves, it is really both beautiful and simple. Look at the golden pig lamp, after making a good frame, with shiny gold paper glued to the frame, so that a golden pig will immediately show in front of the eyes, and ...... really hard to say ah! There are also the colorful firecrackers, blasted from the sky, as if the sky is full of stars scattered from the sky. At this time, the people present all screamed, the neighborhood became a sea of joy!
Looked at the sky flying Kongming lanterns, I also want to put one. So we bought a Kongming lantern, look - it is wearing an orange coat, the coat is also embroidered with two fish, representing the yearly surplus. I couldn't wait to take my unusual lantern to an open space in the neighborhood. I first unfolded the lantern and fixed the pine oil on the wire. The next step was to get the whole family together. Mom and I worked together to open the lantern. Dad, cat waist, with a lighter to light the middle of the lamp base of the square piece of wax, the flame is burning more and more vigorous, our Kongming lantern cover a little bit of bulging, mom saw the Kongming lantern full of hot air, and quickly said: "Let's let go first, try to fly!" I heard, carefully loosened the hand, the Kongming lantern like a toddler toddler, staggering in front of the eyes of the staggering, until the lampshade is full only to fly high into the air....... Quickly make a wish, mom shouted. I fixed my mind, put my hands together, closed my eyes and made a wish. I opened my eyes and looked at the Kongming Lantern it is carrying my wishes, flying into the distance, and finally disappeared from our vision ......
"the first month of the fifteenth haunted Lantern Festival, red hot over the New Year," I really hope that the next Lantern Festival quickly come ah!
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This article describes what "I" saw and heard on the night of the Lantern Festival. The first and last echo, the middle part of the article from the lanterns, firecrackers to write, and then wrote in detail about our family release flying Kongming lanterns. The author uses accurate words, such as: "a sea of joy" to write out the people's joyful mood.
Lantern Festival
"Lantern Festival on the 15th day of the first month of the lunar calendar is a great way to celebrate the New Year." Lantern Festival is a traditional festival in China, eating Lantern Festival, enjoying lanterns and guessing lantern riddles are the customs of Lantern Festival.
In order to celebrate the arrival of the Lantern Festival, our school also held such an interesting activity.
The corridor by the small playground is full of colorful lanterns and dense riddles, and everywhere is full of joy and a sea of people, the small playground is brilliant.
Look, the gentle and lovely white rabbit beckons to us. Long ears, red eyes, white fluffy, lifelike; budding lotus lamps are also good, delicate, soft lotus petals white and red, red with pink, don't mention that there are all the beauty of it; sparkling star lights is more people like, it is golden, very dazzling, from time to time flashing a strange light; I am the most impressive is that the countless transparent plastic cups made of large ball lights, it is like a big crystal ball. The most impressive is the big ball lamp made of countless transparent plastic cups, it is like a big crystal ball, really unique design, unique.
We were like bees in the sea of lanterns. After enjoying the lanterns, guessing riddles brought us a lot of fun. I was so happy that I jumped three feet high, guessing lantern riddles for me, but Zhang Fei ate bean sprouts - a piece of cake. I couldn't wait to give it a try! The first riddle that caught my eye was "From a distance it looks like a cow, but up close it has no head." (I thought about it for a while and came up with the word "noon". I quickly put my answer under the riddle. At this time, Chen Jie next to me seemed to be stopped by a "mountain tiger", only to see her frown tightly frowned, eyes staring at the riddle, thinking hard. Finally, her frown loosened and a happy smile appeared on her face as she solved the puzzle. Another riddle drew me in, "Four nights." (playing a word) This riddle was a bit difficult, and I racked my brain for a while to come up with it. "Four nights," "night" is "eve," and "four" plus an "eve. "four" and "eve" is the word "Luo"! I was ecstatic, happy hands and feet.
The Lantern Festival is so much fun! I look forward to next year's Lantern Festival, the school will also hold a Lantern Festival activities.
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This is a description of the Lantern Festival article, through the author's vivid description, the teacher also seems to be in the middle of this interesting Lantern Festival activities, between the lines of the happy Lantern Festival. The whole language is fluent and natural, more vivid, is a good exercise.
Lantern Festival Light Show
Lanterns on the 15th of the first month, after dinner, our family went up to the street to watch the lights.
At this time the curtain has been opened, the square is full of all kinds of lights, it is really the world of lights, the sea of people, the Century Square, a sea of people, colorful flowers. It is the "fire trees and silver flowers haunted the whole city, ten thousand heads to enjoy the lanterns. No wonder people call it the first scene, a billion trillion stars can Dragon Palace." In the crowd, we do not care to look at, follow the crowd forward, the first into my eyes is a large rooster-type lights, only to see it all over the body feathers colorful, head high and chest is to the tourists chirping, as if to tell people that spring is coming. I have not seen enough, it was a rowdy crowd rolled to a carp lamp, see it is a rectangular base, the background is the Qinghe Reservoir Management Bureau office building model, in front of two large carp, scales glittering, the fish's mouth one by one, the tail wagged, as if it was for the tourists to pay tribute to the New Year. It is really: "Fish jumping on the blue wave of the beautiful spring, smell the chicken dance family happy." Continue to go forward, is the Qinghe steel plant machinery lights, rectangular base of two majestic roosters in the chirping, next to a diamond-shaped mechanical carousel, one side of the writing of the word Ji, written on one side of the steel plant, said the steel plant in 2004 production reached 70,000 tons, profits and taxes of 18,980,000 yuan, respectively, compared with last year's growth rate of 35%, 48%. "It is really the golden rooster dawn Teng event, steel and silver flowers haunted the new year." I was overwhelmed with emotion, a large mechanical lamp appeared in front of me, his base is rectangular, above which a child is playing the golden toad to make it spit out more money, the golden toad's mouth one by one, in front of the eight copper coins of different sizes and a treasure bowl, the basin is written on the good luck and prosperity. It was wishing the people of Qinghe to be rich in the year of the Rooster. People are talking a lot, then I heard the sound of gongs and drums on the road, a group of rice-planting team came, this side of the gongs and drums, the other side of the ceremonial flowers, the ground is crowded, the sky streaming light, it is really beautiful.
The glittering colored lights, illuminating the night as day, so that people see the sweetness of life, everyone's face rippling with smiles!
Unforgettable, the night of the 15th day of the first month ......
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Watching fireworks at the Lantern Festival
Today is the fifteenth day of the first month, and the annual Lantern Festival is here again. Whenever this time comes, I think of watching fireworks.
Heh! There is a huge crowd of people watching the fireworks, everyone is talking and imagining the beautiful fireworks. I was looking up at the sky, hoping for a point of light to appear in the darkness of the night. "Whoosh" a fire rushed to the sky whistle, breaking the words just now, the fire like a comet, dragging a small golden tail, threw into the embrace of the night. "Boom" fire seedling sailed out of the "seventy-two changes" of the Great Sage, instantly in the air bloomed a beautiful smile. Hey! Look, a glorious queen of flowers, the great peony, made its appearance! The colors are too numerous to count: red, orange, yellow, green, green, blue, purple, richer than the clouds of the morning sun, and immense. Its elegant and simple dance made the spectators praise, I can not help but shout, then, the peony that peony scattered into a twinkling little star in the air shaking, this peony has not yet curtain, which purple orchid and then followed. One after another, the fireworks are powdered on stage, their beautiful dance dazzled us, shouted again and again.
But the most outstanding or "meteor shower", only to see the fire a flying sky, instantly exploded in the air, the sound of thunder, exploded meteors dragging a long thin tail scattered fleeing, and floated and burned down, dragged to the small tail, look! Tails have become only unfolded with yellow leaves of the willow, and then rose a wisp of white smoke, like the spring wind curls, my thoughts flew to the "green make-up into a tree high, ten thousand hanging down the green silk ribbon" in the willow group. The night sky is like an all-encompassing satin, embroidered with one after another colorful flowers, colorful, so that everyone issued a thunderous applause.
Fireworks party is over, I am still immersed in the light shining, I really admire the fireworks, one by one, they rushed to the sky, all of a sudden shattered, although the life is short, but they are in order to make everyone, make a bright image of the flow of light color, this is how respectable and praiseworthy "fireworks" spirit!
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