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The blue planet, spinning unceasingly, the magnificent sea, with its white waves; the trickling streams, flowing through the fields, the countryside and the towns. These are all manifestations of the vitality of life.
(Excerpted from "Life in Your Hands" by a candidate from Hebei Province)
The wind chimes of youth, blowing open the heart, the colorful flute of youth, blowing the dream, the notes of youth drive me to run towards hope. Youth, this wonderful season, it is the time for us to sow hope, cherish it, grasp it, let it in our hands to put out the eye-catching luster
(From the Hebei Province students "grasp youth")
It is said that the ship of life can not be without the sail of the ideal.
It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life.
And the happiest time in the ideal life is the flowering season of dreams.
(From "Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season" by Jingzhou City)
Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, dispelling the bitter frost; love is a sweet rain after a long drought, moisturizing the cracked heart; love is a beacon in the ocean, pointing to the hope of new life.
(From the Jingzhou City Examiner "Bringing Love to Others")
I don't know if you have ever brushed past, you are gently as a thin cloud in the sky, even if it can be encountered, but not to be sought, but also take away the attention of my heart ......
(From the Guangdong Province Examiner "I pay attention to the life of the droplets")
In life, everyone encounters unsatisfactory things, such as suffering setbacks, being misunderstood, criticized and so on. At the time, it felt like an insurmountable obstacle. But when you look back later, it's just a wave in the river of life, a fragrance of the colorful years.
(Excerpted from the Chongqing candidate's "fragrance wisps")
Life needs applause.
Many people have often lamented that it is difficult to find a good friend. What is a soulmate, is not a soulmate the sound of applause in life?
(Excerpted from Anhui Province candidates "life needs applause")
Just like the wind for the sails, just like the temperature for the seeds, just like the sunshine and rain for the growth of all things, praise is an indispensable spiritual nourishment in our growth process.
(Excerpted from "Longing for Praise" by a candidate from Anhui Province)
There is a kind of flower in the world that will not wither, and that is the smile. It opens regardless of the seasons, regardless of north or south, wherever there are crowds of people. The more noble the mind, the more beautiful the flower of the smile.
(From "Bringing Smile to Life" by Jingzhou Candidate)
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Life is a flame that is burning, and it will radiate equally well in the ashes, for life is in your hands, and you just have to grasp it.
(Excerpted from "Life is in Your Hands" by a candidate from Hebei Province)
What is youth? Youth is hope. What does youth need? Youth needs to be grasped. The youth of no regrets, the perfect answer, grasp it. When the spring breeze blew by, looking back on the past, their own serious grasp, do a good job of every thing that should be done, at least "this" is also a kind of account of our life. Youth in the hands, will hope in mind, with hopes and dreams, to pursue, to struggle, to create the splendor of youth.
(Excerpted from "Grasp Youth" by Hebei students)
In the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good advice of the prophet:
The ship in life can't be without the sail of ideal.
The ideal in life is for the ideal life.
(Excerpted from Jingzhou City candidates "bring the dream to the flowering season")
Let's take action to bring love to those out-of-school children, to those widows and orphans ...... to everyone around us. When you give love to others, you also gained great happiness. To believe that, as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful earth.
(From Jingzhou candidates "to bring love to others")
Concern need not be pretentious, attention will only be unintentional, that seriousness and persistence, like a butterfly flying to the sky, take away my attention, and unintentionally bring the news of life and love to the life of the little and little!
(Excerpted from Guangdong Province candidates "I pay attention to the life of the little drops")
Every time I think of this incident, the heart is sour, just this aggression did not sublimate into hate, but created my strong character, I also understand the teacher's feelings. Without that one time, can I realize the taste of aggression? Haha! There is no trace of the years, but the fragrance of the fragrance.
(Excerpted from Chongqing Candidate's "Wisps of Cozy Fragrance")
The applause of life can never stop? It will always inspire people to pursue the nobility and perfection of the soul. Applause is more important than love, more important than money.
Let the applause ring out, life needs applause.
Dear teacher, how eager to get your praise, even if it is one or two simple words!
(Excerpted from "Longing for Praise" by a candidate from Anhui Province)
Bring a smile to life, and embellish it with a smile. There is no need to search for happiness and beg for the mercy of time, but to walk through the seasons with a smile on your face, then store them up as a fine wine of happiness and enjoy them for a lifetime.
(From "Bringing a Smile to Life" by Jingzhou Candidate)
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Taste the past, there is bitter and sweet, a wave, a wisp of fragrance like a never-extinguished sacred fire, will be my lamp of hope lit, so again see the road, step forward.
(Excerpted from Chongqing Municipal Candidate's "A Wisp of Cozy Fragrance")
There is also a dance in the ordinary life, and there is also a song in the small things of mortals. Success is the heart strings plucked out of the aggressive melody, success is the calm emotional lake into the droplets of progress of the riffles. Taste their own even a very small, very small success, no one applauded and what harm can it do?
Excerpted from the Anhui Province candidates "applause for themselves")
Praise is the fire of their own hearts to ignite the fire of other people's hearts, is to their own hearts to find other people's hearts, is the spring breeze and rain silently.
(From Anhui Province candidate "desire for praise")
Winter does not have the prosperity of spring, no summer flaunting, no autumn fruitfulness, and what is unique to her is that the holy, perseverance, selfless quality.
(Excerpted from the candidate of Zibo City, "the personality of winter")
Yes, love blows away the cloudy frontier of life and sows the gorgeous sunshine. If happiness is fire, love is burning, happiness is water, love is flowing. Love and happiness are interdependent ah!
(Excerpted from Jingzhou City Candidate's "Bringing Love to Others")
Innovation is to say goodbye to the past, innovation is to grasp the present, and innovation is to welcome the future.
(From Chongqing Municipal Candidate "Cool")
How about a lot of troubles. But I always believe that even the cloudiest weather will be sunny.
(From "Growing Up Troubles" by Linyi Candidate)
So I reorganized my old bag, propped up the dust on my body, exchanged the illusion of the past for a staidness, and stepped out with the firmness I once had to make a deep imprint under my feet. Step forward, toward the front, no regrets to meet that life's splendor, create that life's fire red.
(Excerpted from "When I Face the Rising Sun" by a candidate from Henan Province)
I am grateful to nature for its angelic notes, which have given me a character like the wind, like the flower, like the grass, and which have made me intoxicated in another world of happiness.
(From Yiyang City candidates "grateful")
In the long history of human social development, who will not be smooth sailing to reach the other side of the ideal, there will always be bumps, there will always be shocking waves, so that, at all times need to grasp the coordinates of life, to find their own position. In this way, the brilliant tomorrow, a better future will definitely belong to you.
(From "Grasping the Coordinates of Life" by a candidate from Hebei Province)
Life in the world, not only should be temperate, not humble and not overbearing, but also should make their lives meaningful.
(From "Life in Your Hands" by candidates from Hebei Province)
With a heart of sincerity, and with a boldness that is not hidden, you can spread your brightest smile to every corner of the world, and scatter it to every space of life, and your life, as a result, will blossom into a gorgeous flower.
(Excerpted from Jingzhou City candidates "bring a smile to life")
The performance without applause is terrible, who can stand the deathly silence? Life without applause is pathetic, who wants to live in depression?
(From "Life Needs Applause" by a candidate from Anhui Province)
Art is beautiful, but art created in cooperation is even more beautiful, and it is precisely because human beings know how to cooperate that they have created more beauty for the world.
(Excerpted from Nantong City Candidate's "Cooperation")
Love is the most precious soul of a nation and the strongest fortress of a country. As long as love survives, no matter how difficult it is, it will be able to save the building from falling and the building from being tipped over.
(Excerpted from the Jingzhou City candidates "to bring love to others")
Love in my mind ripples, I am also in the heart of the attention of this speechless love.
Ordinary is not mediocre, ordinary is the beauty in the small!
Life is small, but also has the value of people's attention.
(From the Guangdong provincial candidate "I pay attention to the little things in life")
Blue sky, just when I was speechless to it, a strong call with the bright blue light into my body and mind, a voice said softly:
"Fly! Backwardness and ignorance should not bind your wings, fly toward the blue sky, for your ideal!"
(Excerpted from "When I Face the Blue Sky" by a candidate from Henan Province)
The best lines of baking clouds and moon, borrowing the scenery to express feelings, and supporting things to express one's aspirations.
Some people face difficulties, do not want to make progress, succumbed to the harsh environment, they may have temporary comfort and peace, but at the cost of individuality since some people choose to escape, they hide in their own small space to escape from the predicament, they may have a lifetime of peace, but never fly personality, but in this society, there is inevitably a class of people, they are not willing to mediocrity, do not want to They are not willing to be mediocre and do not want to follow the trend, so they try to change the harsh environment around them and eventually make the whole environment full of charm because of their own personality.
(From Zibo candidates "coffee beans personality")
If I am a bird, I will remember that the birth of the nest, if I am a sapling, I am incapable of forgetting that nourish my land, if I am a river, the snowy plateau has become my memory of the brand, if ...... no matter what I am, no matter what way I exist, I will not be able to forget. I am in what way to exist, I can forget everything around me, and can even abandon themselves, but there is one thing is indelible --
That is the return.
(Excerpted from Guiyang City Candidate's "Interpretation of Reward")
Winter, riding on the winds of autumn, does not have the beautiful flowers of spring, the rich beauty of summer, and even less of the fruitfulness of autumn. When it comes to winter, many people immediately think of its cold and depressed, withered arts and the remnants of grass. In fact, not, winter personality lies here.
(Excerpted from Zibo candidates "winter's personality")
Most of the roots of trees and flowers are not beautiful, while most of the flowers are glorious, beautiful. It is because of these not beautiful tree roots and flower roots that the trees are verdant and lush, the peony's national colors, the fragrance of osmanthus, the plum blossom's proud of the snow and red ...... The world is becoming colorful because of the beauty of the roots stretched out. In fact, we people are the same, the appearance is only a kind of decoration, and the real expression of their own is the beauty of the outstretched.
(From Zibo City candidates "outstretched beautiful")
Some people say, the sun is speechless, but bring warmth; the earth is speechless, but show broad; the ocean is speechless, but pregnant with life. I would like to say that love is speechless, but it benefits the world.
(From "Bringing Love to Others" by Jingzhou Candidate)
No one can exist independently in this world, and nothing can be successful completely apart from the whole society. In such a rapidly developing information society, we have to be more aware of the importance of cooperation.
(Excerpted from Nantong City Candidate's "Cooperation")
The notes are like little angels, with a hint of smile, with a hint of mischievousness, gently slipping out from between my fingers, and linking up to form a rainbow of beautiful music. The notes are soft, one after another, open their mouths, the mood of the player, through the mellow music, gently sang out. Thus, the sweet notes seemed to be filled with the odor of flowers. The cells of my body were drunk on the sweet flower wine, and I fell into the embrace of the notes.
(Excerpted from Yiyang City Candidate's "Gratitude")
I long to have the teacher's green heart, drenched in the colors of spring, vibrant and hopefulE I look forward to having the teacher's heart that belongs to the spring, in which grows a large, flourishing tree; I hope to have the teacher's heart that reproduces the spring, with its bright sunshine and its ethereal I hope to have the teacher's heart to reproduce spring, with bright sunshine and misty sky, with green buds and blossoming flower buds, with pleasant breeze and continuous drizzle. Because of this dream, my flower season will be forever intoxicated in the sunny days ......
(from Jingzhou City candidates "bring the dream to the flower season")
Winter, nurturing the spring without competing for the spring, when the spring comes, her icy clear skin gradually melted into a trickle of spring water, selflessly irrigating the greedy sucking The seedlings of the greedy sucking. Wait until everywhere in the blossoms, vibrant, wait until we hear the sound of the trees pulling, she completed a year of historical mission, with the thanks of spring quietly returned to heaven, waiting for the next year's advent.
(Excerpted from Zibo City candidates "winter personality")
I held the hopeful grass ring, watching him slowly disappear in my line of sight. I smiled and sat down, only to realize that the grass behind me was so vibrantly green.
(Excerpted from "Bless You, Big Brother of One Side of the Family" by a candidate from Taiyuan)
Praise is hope, praise is motivation. A goal without hope is like an extinguished lighthouse, and a trip without motivation is difficult.
(From "Longing for Praise" by a candidate from Anhui Province)
Bringing smiles to life has the same charm as the sunlight shining on the earth, the warmth of the breeze caressing the woods, the blaze of the setting sun burning up the heavens, and the passion of the waves washing over the reefs.......
(From "Bringing Smiles to Life" by a candidate from Ishou City)< /p>
It is always like a round of sun when people are cold, a breeze when they are hot, a good meal when they are hungry, and a sweet rain when they are dry ...... comes down when people need it.
(From the candidate of Yizhou City, "Bringing Smiles to Life")
Life, like wildflowers open in the countryside, all purple and red, fragrant, life's applause, like sunshine and rain, moisturizing every leaf petal. Gift is a piece of sunshine irradiated in the winter, so that the hungry and cold people feel the warmth of the earth, and the applause is more important than the gift, the spirit of encouragement to inspire every lonely and helpless people.
(Excerpted from Anhui Province candidates "life needs applause")
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In the flower season, I am making a beautiful literary dream ......
In the flower season, I am making a wonderful celebrity dream ......
In the flower season, I am making a colorful teacher dream ......
(From "Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season" by a candidate from Jingzhou City)
Winter, a symbol of holiness ......
Winter is an honorable and strict teacher... ...
Winter is the cradle of nurturing spring ......
(From Zibo City candidates "winter personality")
For a secondary school student, in today's era only book knowledge and lack of practical ability, that is not a qualified personnel. ......
For a worker, to find a position in the coordinates of the knowledge economy, market economy ......
For a businessman, but also to keep up with the pace of the times, to change the concept of the ......
For a leading cadres, the positioning of life, coordinates, quadrant must be grasped ......
(From the Hebei Province candidates, "grasp the coordinates of life")
One of my appearance is not shocking language is not outstanding Teacher ......
My talented but poor cousin ......
My unassuming, hardworking and thrifty neighbor ......
< p>(Excerpted from "Applause for Myself" by a candidate from Anhui Province)Do you think that this is my personality-a middle school student whose heart is full of negativity, sighs and helplessness? No, I have a whole new look in my life!
(Excerpted from Zibo City candidate "my personality to you")
The river, winding in the mountains and forests, it is the lifeblood of the town, is the town people and the outside world is the only channel of communication. That boat, the vicissitudes of the rustic, it is the town's only transportation. Because of that, that boat, there is that ferryman touching story.
(From Xuzhou City candidates "ferry old mute")
So stripped off the success of the glittering gorgeous outfit, looking for success, which found success everywhere a
(From Anhui Province candidates "applause for their own ringing"
And slow down, based on the small I talk about the cool, can only be a superficial cool, look at the big time to talk about the cool, to find the real cool! The only way to find the real cool is to look at the big picture.
(Excerpted from the Wuhan candidate's "Cool"
The best sentence is a combination of the whole and the scattered, the form is neat, the momentum is coherent, and the meaning is clear.
The quiet and serene prose, the unique biographies of famous people, the mysterious and unpredictable science fiction, and the humorous and lively foreign masterpieces are my only favorites in the dead of night.
(From Wuxi City Candidate's "Enjoying the Pleasure of Buying Books")
I appreciate the subtlety of Wang Guozhen's "Sigh", the depth of Zhu Ziqing's "Rush", the romance of Qiong Yao's "Smoke and Rain", and the sharpness of Lu Xun's "The Theory of the Surprise of Friendly Countries".
(Excerpted from "Bringing Dreams to the Flowering Season" by a candidate from Jingzhou City)
The flood demon ravaged the city, how many villages and towns were swallowed up, how many fields were buried, and how many people were displaced from their homes, and how many were struggling in the flood. At this time, the good cadres of the Party came, the loveliest people came, the young volunteers came, and they used their flesh and blood to withstand the attack of the flood demon again and again.
(Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by a candidate from Jingzhou)
The composer puts them down on his heartstrings, and the performer lets them flow in his mind. Listen carefully! That lovely song, from the treetops, from the shadow of the moon, from the grassland, gently spreads in all directions.
(From "Gratitude" by a candidate from Yiyang City)
Smile, and you will find what a noble virtue it is--
When you fall down, it gives people sunny assistance;
When you are confused, it gives people wave-like courage;
When you are lost, it gives When you are poor in spirit, you want to be applauded.
(From Anhui Province candidate "life needs applause")
Innovation makes this era rapidly changing: the creation of the Special Administrative Region, the ancient fishing village into a prosperous modern city; reform and opening up, civilization, the ancient country new vitality, one country, two systems, two "sons" returned to the motherland.
(Excerpted from Wuhan's "Cool")
I guess you probably still need the format, so I'll give it to you.
To give your essay "beauty"
The examination essay is like marrying a girl, the girl's head is not combed, the face is not washed, even if the work is good, the in-laws will not be too happy, who would like to marry a scruffy daughter-in-law? The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty. Judge the teacher to read the essay, he also has a daughter-in-law mentality, and then his eyes "to be married to the girl" a lot, not not you do not marry ah! This is not good, the next one, the next one is not good, and then the next ...... in-laws choose daughter-in-law sometimes due to the young man is big, to the time of marriage, there will be the possibility of looking at the composition of the adjudication of the teacher does not care about this set of things, he can not be will be you, he is not in a hurry to marry a daughter-in-law, and secondly, he is out of sight looking for trouble. So it seems, we are in the composition, but also really have to "beauty", at least to let themselves "at first glance, really beautiful", even if a little "small hemp", but also to let him carefully scrutinize the end. The first thing you need to do is to make sure that you have a good understanding of what you are doing. If you can make the examiner spend more time on you, it is probably not a bad thing. So how do you do this? I think that consciously embellishing your essays is key.
Consciously beautifying the essay can start from the following aspects:
1, pay attention to writing Writing is the face of the essay, yes. The hot weather (because the mid-summer exam is in the middle of the summer), the spirit of the original is not very concentrated, and then look at the "spider crawling like" messy ink, how can stimulate people's excitement? On the contrary, the neat and tidy layout of the essay is soothing to look at, and may feel like drinking ice-cold mineral water! See, aren't they two different things? Furthermore, the marking score is very relative; it has a frame of reference. Who is the reference? The ones in front of your paper. If those copies of the "very beautiful", you do not become the opposite, not to receive a letter of repudiation in advance is strange.
2, pay attention to the title, people often say: "good half of the title." This is not unreasonable. Horizontal view of the previous excellent composition, most of the title is very well thought out. So, how can we improve the ability to formulate the title? The following combination of recent years, some of the students in the examination, to provide candidates with some easy to learn and operate methods:
Juxtaposition method: related or unrelated juxtaposition of words to do the title: "moon - people" (2000 midterm excellent essay), "integrity - life" (2001 midterm excellent essay), "blue chrysalis - golden butterfly" (2003 midterm excellent essay)
Quotation method: direct quotation or indirect alteration of ready-made poems, songs, movie and TV commercials, etc., in order to cause ****sing: "Love, How Is It Made? (2000 midterm excellent composition), "cross look into the mountains" (2000 midterm excellent composition), gain and loss of an inch of heart know (2002 midterm excellent composition), "Temperance to brighten the mind, serenity to the distance" (2000 midterm excellent composition), "feeling the time flowers splash tears" (2003 midterm excellent composition).
Rhetorical method: use metaphor, personification, pun, substitution, hyperbole, questioning and other rhetorical methods to make the title: "What Cars "Eat"" (2000 midterm excellent composition), "Soul's beauty and ugliness of the touchstone" (2002 midterm excellent composition), "Life as a Flower" (2002 midterm excellent composition), "The White Crane of Flying Inspiration" (2002 midterm excellent composition), "The White Crane of Flying Inspiration" (2000 midterm excellent composition), "The White Crane of Flying Inspiration" (2003 midterm excellent composition). Releasing the White Crane of Inspiration" (2002 Outstanding Essay for the Chinese Middle School Examination), "Which Shell to Pick Up" (2002 Outstanding Essay for the Chinese Middle School Examination), "Being a Stone Not Rounded" (2002 Outstanding Essay for the Chinese Middle School Examination), and "Giving a Ruler to Feelings" (2003 Outstanding Essay for the Chinese Middle School Examination).
Opinion method: directly with the point of view of the article as the title: "Integrity, never lose" (2001 midterm excellent essay), "Integrity - the basis of the establishment" (2001 midterm excellent essay).
Formula method: borrowing formulas such as math: "XX + XX = Happy" (2000 midterm excellent essay), "The Revelation of 1:6" (2001 midterm excellent essay).
In general, the proposed topic should be accurate, concise, eye-catching, novel and poetic from the specific content and genre of the essay.
4, pay attention to the end of the As the saying goes, the basket to do the basket in the mouth, writing essays is also the same. How can I write a good ending? I think it's crucial to make a good ending consciously. After the essay is written, at least think, I want to use what "trick" ending. Here are a few common ways to end: ① echo the beginning. Some of the article to speak as a whole, there is no end, the reader is not welcome. ② thesis for the end. Good argumentative ending, not only can deepen the theme, but also can inspire the reader, infected readers. ③ implicit performance. Implicit ending will often give people "aftertaste curling", "aftertaste" feeling. Readers feel the charm of the language in the meaning of the words, outside the voice. Mr. Lu Xun's "a small thing" ends with: "Only this small thing, but always floating in front of my eyes, sometimes more distinct, teach me to be ashamed, urge me to renew myself, and grow my courage and hope." If this is written: "his kind of disregard for their own, stand up, the noble qualities, is always my example of learning," that would be greatly discounted, because that is too straight to the point, too "straight" too "exposed ", the flavor is rather thin