Originally:
In the morning the sky darkened, and although it was daytime, it was dimly lit and out of reach. A flash of lightning fell from the sky, and the passers-by were so frightened that they hid under the riding floor. The sound of thunder is like a million horses galloping, rumbling and banging, like the explosion of a huge artillery shell. After the thunder immediately after the downpour, the road without an umbrella people all become "soup chicken".
Passers-by were caught off guard, grabbing their briefcases to cover up the rain, and running down the street in distress. The streets were a mess, with people fleeing and others almost slipping. The stray dogs on the street looked pitiful as they looked around helplessly for shelter from the rain. Adults from work were eager to get back to their warm homes.
Looking down from the footbridge, the umbrellas in the rain were colorful, as if they were walking flowers, very beautiful and full of poetry. Naughty children wearing raincoats and rain shoes in the rain treading water, having fun, raincoats can not cover the downpour, wet body a mess.
The rain finally stopped, the rain cleared up, let a person breathe a sigh of relief, was originally full of dusty signboards, washed by the rain a new look, the roadside street trees, sucked enough water, each and every spirited. Originally in the rain people, from all corners of the emergence, the street pedestrians are endless, come and go in a hurry, and then see the lively street scene.
Appreciation:
The article uses metaphors and similes and other rhetorical methods, fully enriched the fullness of the article, each sentence is just right to reflect the vividness and spirit of the rain scene.