1. My teacher’s composition should be written as a narrative and should be written in a structure of one point and one summary. It should be 600 words.
"Do it" is the most appropriate description of the hard-working gardener-teacher of the motherland, and it is also the most true portrayal of Teacher Xu.
——Inscription Teacher Xu, my junior high school teacher, is a kind, careful and responsible person. She treats her students with all her heart and treats each student as her own relative; she treats her work with enthusiasm and passion.
I remember when I first entered junior high school, the school held a welcome meeting for new students. After the meeting, the students dispersed in an orderly manner. But due to long periods of inactivity, my legs were numb. I tried hard to stand up, but failed.
Just as I was about to have a close contact with the earth, Teacher Xu caught me firmly. She helped me with vaginal discharge and dredged the blood, while comforting me and making me feel at ease.
The sun shone behind her, and I seemed to see a smiling angel. From then on, I remembered a teacher who was as kind as a sister.
When I was in the second grade of junior high school, I finally got the opportunity to go to Fangzi for social practice. But unfortunately I caught a cold, and even my voice became hoarse.
When Teacher Xu found out, he bought a big watermelon for me and sent it to my dormitory, and told me to drink more water, eat more, and rest more. From then on, I remembered another teacher who was as caring as a mother.
More than a month before the high school entrance examination, my academic performance plummeted. Teacher Xu saw it and was anxious. She talked to me many times and often asked about my study situation. My history is not very good, so Teacher Xu often asks me to answer questions in history class. If I can't answer, I will be punished.
From then on, I remembered a teacher as strict as a father. During military training, she would wipe the sweat from my forehead; when it rained, she would remind me to bring rain gear; when the temperature dropped, she would remind me to wear more clothes; in the cold winter, she would give me hot eggs to warm my hands. ; When I slack off in my studies, she will urge me; when I feel confused, she will guide me in the right direction.
Her love for me is like a rain in spring, giving me the strength to break out of the soil; like a bright light in the dark night, guiding me in the direction; like a ray of sunshine in the cold winter. , brings me warmth. 2. An essay (300 words) describing the overall structure of a scene (spring, summer, autumn, and winter)
I love the campus, and the green grass even more.
In spring, the grass is covered with buds. After being nourished by the spring girl, the grass becomes greener.
After being cared for by Father Sun, the grass looks even more beautiful. In summer, the green grass has become our game world.
Everyone was tired after a day of study, so they went to play on the grass: some were jumping rubber bands, some were playing football, some were catching people, and some were making up stories. flower basket. On this green grass, everyone can relieve the fatigue of the day.
In autumn, the green grass turns golden. In the morning, fog rose from the valley, and a thin layer of frost formed on the grass.
The leaves on the trees fell to the grass, as if it was raining leaves! In winter, it snowed heavily, and there was a thick layer of snow on the grass. The snow stopped, and the teacher led everyone to have snowball fights, roll snowballs, and make snow dolls on the grass. Not to mention how happy I was! This grassland is so gorgeous all year round. It brings me endless joy and gives me a beautiful memory that I will always remember in my heart.
3. Write an essay based on the text "Given". The essay requirements: use a total, one point, one total structure?
What grade are you in?
OK?
Giving
Giving is truly more joyful than receiving! That day, I deeply understood this truth!
That is a story that makes people happy and laugh when they think of it. It is a story that witnesses a beautiful friendship!
In the first half of the fifth grade, it was our turn to be on duty. My best friend Tian Jiayao and I were assigned to a group. The group leader Yang Runzeng arranged for us to go outdoors, my God! That was winter! We were extremely reluctant, but in the end we agreed.
We spent the first day peacefully. (It should be me to be precise!) That day, I was lucky enough to avoid the bad guy. The broomstick method, but isn’t this just the rainbow before the storm? ! As the saying goes, you can avoid the first day of the new year, but you can't avoid the fifteenth day. No, the storm is coming! !
The next day, Tian Jiayao and I went on duty as usual. "Sweep it clean." "Which class did the cleaning here?" Wait, Tian Jiayao and I said this no less than 5 times, and just like that, the morning was spent safely!
In the afternoon, I said to Tian Jiayao: "Children have no sense of time anyway, let's play for a while first!" Tian Jiayao also agreed. So --- we played with other fitness equipment for a while, and after a while, we went to play with the single-plank bridge. As soon as I stepped onto a higher one, I heard a scream of "Pa, ah!" I fell down, and the steel bar kissed my thigh and ***, which hurt me terribly! "Hey, Tian Jiayao, help me quickly! If you don't help me, you won't be able to see me again!" When she saw her, she quickly helped me up and asked, "What's wrong? Are you okay? Does it hurt a lot?" I also "Yes, yes" was the answer, so Tian Jiayao supported me while walking and told me: "You rub it, and then don't think it won't hurt anymore!" Then she continued. She told me a joke again, and I cried in pain, laughing and crying at the same time, but then it didn’t hurt so much anymore. Tian Jiayao also laughed when she saw me crying and laughing at the same time! Finally, before class, my pain gradually diminished, and we returned home happily!
But when I got home, the two wounds began to hurt again, and my tears came down. But as I cried, I thought of what Tian Jiayao said to me and encouraged me, and I began to Overcoming the pain, in the end, I won!
Giving is a language; giving is a way; giving is a kind of love; giving is the whole world!
Giving is truly more joyful than receiving! 4. The most interesting thing in the composition "The most interesting thing" has one point and one general structure
The most interesting thing
In everyone's life, there will be many "stories", happy and sad. Angry...a "story" from my childhood that I still find interesting when I think about it.
I remember that when I was five years old, I had just learned to ride a bicycle (a four-wheeled bicycle). In order to show off to my friends, I often rode it "swaggering through the streets" in the community. Today, the weather is clear and crisp, and I really want to ride a bicycle. So, I took it out and called my father, mother and grandma to show them my "real skills". Because grandma felt very sorry for me and wanted me to ride slower, she smiled and made a little joke with me, "**, be careful on the road, don't ride too fast, we will not be responsible for any injuries if you fall!"
After hearing this, I kept my grandma’s words in mind. After saying goodbye to my father, mother and grandma, I rode towards the small garden. I ride faster and faster, like a happy bird. As I rode, I thought to myself: Look, how fast and well this girl rides. She will break the world record soon.
But something unexpected happened. Just when I was feeling very proud, my car was hit by a pebble on the road, and it started to shake and dance "disco", and I also started to shake. I got up, and all of a sudden, I was on my back... I looked at the bleeding wound sadly, and really wanted to run home and ask my grandma to bandage it for me, but when I thought about grandma saying that it hurt from the fall, they were irresponsible, so I had to give it up. idea. Dejectedly, I took out a napkin from my pocket, wiped the blood from the wound, and then pushed my bicycle, like a defeated rooster, and limped home.
When I got home, my family saw the injury on my leg and asked me anxiously what happened. I told them everything.
Grandma smiled and nodded my head: "What a little fool! I was just joking with you, why did you take it seriously? Come on, I'll help you bandage." After that, she took me to the small room to bandage. Wounded. 5. One paragraph of a composition is divided into general structure.
The rain was falling heavily, moisturizing the earth.
Quietly, the rain stopped, and the earth appeared full of vitality. A rainbow spanned the sky, like a colorful bridge. The clouds floated slowly and leisurely. The sun broke through the white barrier and jumped out. The warm sunshine shone on the earth.
Birds dust the water droplets from their feathers, fly in mid-air, or fly to the wires to sing, just like the notes in the staff. The songs are crisp and graceful, very beautiful and beautiful. There are crystal clear pearls gathered on the grass blades, reflecting the sunlight and shining dazzlingly. When they fall, they make a "tick-tock-tock" sound, as if they are playing a cheerful piece of music.
The beetle musician strutted out from the cave, preparing to hold a concert. He stood in the center of the stage and sang loudly, vibrating his wings with all his concentration. The beetles behind him accompanied him, and the butterflies danced gracefully. .
The little flowers and the grass were also intoxicated. The little flowers bloomed with smiles and danced excitedly, and the grass kept swaying. After the rain, it is so full of life and vitality. 6. Elementary school composition Our campus (written according to the structure of one point, one point, spring, summer, autumn and winter)
When the colorful spring comes, the jasmine flowers on the campus are the first to bloom, and they are golden. Some are still flower bones, some have fully bloomed and exposed the heart of the flower, and some only unfold two or three petals. The tender yellow petals are even more beautiful under the sunlight! As long as you lower your body, a burst of fragrant fragrance will blow in your face, even bees and butterflies will be attracted by it! Whenever a breeze blows, the flowers sway gently, as if dancing gracefully, as if they are saying hello to me. The yellow flowers, set off by the green leaves, are more vibrant and adorable!
What you see after passing through the corridor is a small winding pond. The water in the pond flows slowly, and the fallen leaves in autumn are already ants' boats, small fish's hats, and small islands. The flowers are all blooming, some are red, some are yellow, some are white and other colors, it is really a breath of spring.
The willow trees on both sides and three sides of the pond have also sprouted buds. They must have sucked the spring rain and dew and kept drilling out before they came out. A breeze blew, and Miss Liu swayed her hair, and made a whirring sound as if she was playing hide-and-seek with the bird.
On the campus in spring, asparagus is sprouting new branches, flowers are blooming, and birds are blooming. The children are singing and we are playing games happily. The campus in spring is so beautiful! 7. How to write a composition of total one point and one total 1. The so-called total-point-. -The overall structure, as the name suggests, is that the composition is roughly composed of three parts: introduction, analysis and summary, to plan the layout of the article.
2. Then, the composition enters the "division". "Discussion" part is divided into several parts to discuss the phenomenon, problem or viewpoint mentioned in the general part from different levels and angles, put forward the sub-arguments of each part, and then find arguments for argumentation and discussion respectively. And in There is generally an internal logical relationship between the various sub-themes, which are step by step and continue to deepen, obeying and serving the core topic of the composition.
3. After that, it comes to the summary part. , its purpose is to echo the summary at the beginning of the essay, summarize and summarize the sub-arguments formed in the sub-thesis part, and present the research conclusion; from a formal point of view, the summary can either list a title to summarize, It can also be just one or two paragraphs. Then the composition will end.
This is from the perspective of the entire composition, and it is about the overall structure of the composition. "Inside the "part, in fact, each branch may also show multiple organizational structures.
Extended information:
The meaning of the composition of the total score and total structure: the "summary" at the beginning " Either raise a topic or put forward an argument; the "sum" at the end is usually to reiterate the point of view or deepen the argument. The more complicated part is the middle part: it can be a juxtaposition of sub-arguments, it can be a juxtaposition of arguments from different angles, it can be a comparative juxtaposition, It can be a progressive extension, etc.
8. The composition describing the big rooster is written according to the structure of one point and one point.
The rooster has a cluster of combs on its head, like a burning flame, and a pair of combs on its small face. Bright little eyes, and a sharp and small mouth.
Its feathers are colorful, as if it is wearing a gorgeous dress, so beautiful! Sometimes the rooster walks with its chest puffed out and its colorful tail flicking, like a mighty general, very impressive! When the sun rises, the rooster urges people to get up and work with the cry of "oh oh oh". The enthusiastic owner sprinkles rice on the ground. The rooster immediately runs forward and starts pecking the rice one by one on the ground. If If any other hen wants to compete with it, it immediately fights with that hen, but it always returns victorious. How proud it is! The rooster is really a hard-working and majestic little animal.
Composition describing the rooster. The rooster crows in the morning and wakes us up. There is a bright red comb on the rooster's head, like a little red hat.
There is a pair of small eyes on its head, like a pair of crystal black pearls. There are two pieces of light red crown pith hanging under the pointed mouth.
The feathers on the neck are yellow, like wearing a yellow tie. The feathers on its body are smooth and translucent, especially its tail, which is gorgeous and dazzling. There is also a pair of thin legs hidden under its tall body.
The rooster crows, and the sound is "oooooh". In some places, when the rooster crows, it means that it is time for people to get up.
Let me tell you a few secrets: In the evening, the chicks will crawl under the belly of the rooster; the meat of the rooster is more delicious than that of the hen. My grandma’s house used to keep a few roosters, but now because of bird flu, those roosters have been slaughtered.
I really hope that next time I go to grandma’s house, I can see live roosters and listen to them crow like before. 9. Summary - Composition with sub-structure
Racing in Wonderland
1. Traveling to Wonderland, Talking about Feelings
After visiting Tianshan Tianchi, it seems that the human world The beauty of wonderland. People say Xinjiang is good, people say Xinjiang is wonderful, it is better to come and see it in person. The reason why Tianshan Tianchi is wonderful is not only the intoxicating scenery, but also the long-standing legendary stories.
The next day, we came to the grassland between mountains and rivers. The vast and boundless grassland! It makes people forget any kind of distracting thoughts and only think of pure, emotionless things. It makes people forget about worldly disturbances and become a new person. Mountains make people's will stronger; water makes people's thoughts purer; grass makes people's vision broader; what's more worth mentioning is: horses galloping on the grasslands between mountains and rivers!
2. Falling off the horse
The first time I got on a horse, it felt very uncomfortable. Riding on animals always makes me feel like I am abusing them. When they got up, the horse trainer shouted "Ouch!", and the horse straightened forward, charged forward, and "flyed" like an arrow. I have never had such an experience. I just felt that the left and right sides were uneven. I kept turning to the right. I was on the right side like the Leaning Tower of Pisa, leaning to the right and falling to the right. I tried hard to turn left, but the horse's bones couldn't turn, and it seemed to be stuck. I pulled the rope around its neck as hard as I could, and finally, it stopped. My heartbeat hadn't slowed down yet, but it dropped due to the nervousness...
It's not easy!
3. Regain your strength and defeat yourself
Get on the horse again!
This time is different from last time, I have some experience. Sitting on the horse, he seemed a little frightened.
"Ouch!"
I slapped the whip with my right hand and pulled the rope with my left hand. Enjoy the surrounding scenery on the grassland: the mountains are continuous; the water has a long history. Mountains and rivers alternate, water surrounds the mountains, horses gallop, the wind roars, the water flows, and the birds sing. The grass is blowing in the wind and the clouds are soaring. I galloped into the wind, and I couldn't help but write a poem:
The horses roared as they galloped through the mountains and rivers,
I set off with renewed strength.
My heart floats into the clouds with the wind,
The world is vast for me to roam!
The poem is called "Walking Horse and Viewing the Mountains".
The mountains are good, the water is good, the horses are good; the sky is good, the earth is good, and the people are good! Such good mountains, such good water, and such enthusiastic people make people forget everything and enjoy running on the grassland alternated with mountains and rivers. It seems like you are swimming in the painting.
4. The return journey and the unique feeling
The alternation of mountains and rivers makes people indulge in it.
Returning to Shandong, it was like being reborn and feeling worldly again. The unforgettable galloping horses, the unforgettable mountains and rivers, and the fairyland on earth have made me unforgettable for a long time and often recall them in my dreams. 10. An essay about the total score and structure. Urgent
Speaking of the campus scenery, it is not very good in the eyes of others, but in my eyes, the campus scenery is the most beautiful.
Leading from the street to the campus gate, four large gilded characters - Jiling Primary School are inlaid directly above it. Walking into this school that I have longed for, a six-story teaching building first came into view. Wow, it's so big. To get closer to the building, I walked quickly through a straight tree-lined path. There are statues of Lei Feng, Lenin, Li Shizhen, Einstein and others on both sides of the path, which made me stand in awe. There are basketball courts and six table tennis tables on both sides of the path. On the left, a few lively and cute students are sweating and chasing after a basketball. There are also several students cheering and shouting. There are teachers and students exercising on the playground on the right. The table tennis table at the edge of the playground was filled with students watching and playing. It turns out that the teaching building I saw is actually the office building of the teachers. There are two larger buildings across this building that are our teaching buildings. The sound of reading can be heard in several classrooms. On the second floor on the left One of them is my classroom. I was ecstatic to see the spacious and bright classroom.
I seem to prefer the large garden in the middle of the two floors. I walked briskly into the garden where birds were singing and flowers were fragrant. A burst of sweet-scented osmanthus fragrance came to my nostrils. The branches of the sweet-scented osmanthus tree were covered with yellow osmanthus flowers, like bright stars in the sky. Pomegranate trees grow around the garden fence, as if to welcome students who come to learn knowledge. In the dense woods, there are many unknown flowers. Because autumn is here, some flowers and leaves begin to change color, and birds are heard from time to time in the woods. song. Oh, there is also a rockery standing in the middle of the pond in the middle of the garden, like a fairy taking a bath.
The bamboo forest that kept my eyes away for a long time was the bamboo forest. It was dressed in emerald green military uniforms, looking up at the blue sky and stepping on the earth, growing continuously. I stood under the bamboo and looked up, and the lovely bamboos nodded to me again, making rustling laughter from time to time. It looks more beautiful in the sun. After visiting the campus, I realized that the entire campus is surrounded by lush evergreen trees, which is really beautiful.
Campus, beautiful campus, I love you.
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