The spring fun of the Red Mansion was adapted into a composition

1. "Spring Fun in Red Mansions" was adapted into a textbook play

Reading the original text of "Spring Fun in Red Mansions" (edited version for fifth grade)

"A Dream of Red Mansions" Many stories in it are widely circulated in our country. This text tells the story of Baoyu, Daiyu and others flying kites in the Grand View Garden. Read the text and it’s enough if you can roughly understand it. Communicate with classmates after reading: Which character impressed you the most?

At the end of the sentence, there was a sound on the bamboo outside the window, just like the window drawer falling down, and everyone was startled. When the maids went out to take a look, the maid outside the curtain shouted: "There is a big butterfly kite hanging on the top of the bamboo." The maids laughed and said: "What a neat kite. I don't know who it belongs to. The rope is broken. Take it down." "

When Baoyu heard this and came out to see it, Baoyu smiled and said, "I recognize this kite. It was flown by the red girl in the eldest gentleman's courtyard. Just take it and send it to him." Zicuckoo laughed and said, "Isn't it true that there is no such thing as this kite? I don't care, I'll just pick it up." I'm not afraid of the taboos for those who are missing now." Daiyu said with a smile, "But if you know who is causing bad luck, just take it out and let's do the same." Zijuan listened. Now, I ordered the little girls to send the kite out to the woman on duty at the garden gate. If anyone comes looking for it, I can go with them.

The little girls here were eager to hear a kite flying, and they were all busy taking out a beautiful kite. Some were moving high stools, tying up scissors, and pulling strings. Son's. Baochai and others stood in front of the courtyard gate and ordered the girls to put them down in the open outside the courtyard. Bao Qin said with a smile: "This one of yours is not very good-looking. It is not as good as the big soft-winged wind phoenix of the third sister." Baochai said with a smile: "Sure enough." Yin turned back to Cuimo and smiled: "Go and get yours." Come and let it go." Cui Mo smiled and took it as expected. Baoyu became excited again, and also sent a little girl to his house, saying, "Bring the big fish that Aunt Lai gave me yesterday." The little girl went for a long time, came back empty-handed, and said with a smile, "Miss Qing, yesterday Let it go." Baoyu said, "I haven't let it go yet." Tanchun said with a smile, "It's just to bring bad luck to you." Baoyu said, "Just bring that big crab." The girl went, and she and several other people brought a beauty and a pig back, and said, "Miss Xi said that she gave the crabs to the third master yesterday. This one was sent by Aunt Lin, so let this one go." Baoyu took a closer look and saw that the beauty was very delicate. He was so happy that he ordered him to let go.

At this time, the spring explorers also brought it, and Cuimo and a few little girls had already put it on the hillside over there. Baoqin also ordered someone to fetch one of his big red bats. Baochai was also happy and took one, but it was seven wild geese in a row, all released. The beauty with the precious jade cannot let go. Baoyu said that the girls would not let it go, so he let it go for a long time, only rising to the height of the room, and then it fell down. The anxious Baoyu sweated on his head, and everyone laughed again. Baoyu threw it to the ground in hatred, pointed at the kite and said, "If it weren't for this beauty, I would stomp it to pieces." Daiyu smiled and said, "That's because the top string is not good. Take it out and have someone else hit the top string." That's good." Baoyu asked people to take the top thread and took another one to put it on. Everyone looked up at the sky. The kites were all flying in the air.

After a while, the maids brought many different kinds of food delivery devices and played with them. Zicuckoo laughed and said, "It's very powerful this time. Let's let it go, girl." When Daiyu heard about it, she padded her hands with a handkerchief and paused. Sure enough, the wind was strong; she took the string and followed the wind of the kite. As soon as the rope was about to loosen, there was a burst of thorns and the sound of thorns was heard, and the rope was completely gone. Daiyu asked everyone to release her. Everyone laughed and said, "Everyone has something, so please go ahead." Daiyu smiled and said, "Although it's fun to fly a kite, I just can't bear it." Li Wan said, "Flying a kite is for fun, so it's said that flying a kite is bad luck. You should give it more and get rid of all the root causes of your disease." Zijuan said with a smile: "Our girl has become more and more petty. She didn't give it up that year, and she suddenly feels bad again. , wait for me to let go." After saying that, he took a pair of small silver scissors from Xue Yan's hand, leaving no trace of the hair under the hair, and snapped it with a click, saying with a smile: "This will remove the root of the disease. But I took them all with me." The kite fluttered and just moved back. It was only the size of an egg for a while, and only a little black star remained when I opened my eyes, and then it disappeared when I opened my eyes again.

Everyone looked up and said, "Interesting, interesting.

Baoyu said: "It's a pity that I don't know where it fell." If it falls in a populated place, it would be better if a child catches it; if it falls in an uninhabited place in the wilderness, I will be lonely for him. I thought about it, let me go too, and teach him two to keep me company. So he also cut it with scissors and put the photo first. Tanchun was about to cut his own phoenix when he saw a phoenix in the sky, so he said, "I don't know whose family this belongs to." Everyone laughed and said, "Don't cut your hair, it looks like he is going to hang you." "As he said that, he saw the phoenix approaching gradually, and then he was entangled with the phoenix. Everyone was about to close the line down, and the other family also wanted to close the line. Just as they were about to cross the line, they saw another exquisite happy word as big as the door leaf. With a whip, which sounded like a bell for a long time, they also came closer. Everyone laughed and said, "This one is also here to hang." Don't worry, it would be fun to have the three of them hanging together. "As he said that, the word "happy" was really intertwined with the two phoenixes. After three times, the strings were all broken, and the three kites flew away. Everyone clapped their hands and laughed loudly, saying : “That’s interesting! But I don’t know whose family the happy character belongs to, it’s too narrow. Daiyu said: "My kite has also been flown, I am tired, and I want to take a rest." Baochai said, "Wait until we let him go so that everyone can disperse." "Said, seeing that all the sisters had let go, everyone dispersed. 2. Write a composition on kite flying based on the spring fun in the Red Mansion

Spring has really arrived. On weekends, the grass in the square is full of people flying kites. There are children, couples, fathers and mothers, those who are also pulling strings in the air but don’t know where the kite is, those who have already succeeded, and most of those who are still struggling after repeated failures, pulling the kite and running around in circles looking for the wind.

After two days of trying, the kite was still crawling on the ground, with no desire to take off.

Aunt Yang clearly remembered that when she was a child, the class organized everyone to form a small team. Kite-making competition, and the place where Aunt Yang flew kites at that time was on the alpine grassland by the sea. The wind was very strong at that time, and the kites flew very high, but now Aunt Yang has forgotten how to fly kites and is helpless with kites. .

Chapter 2: Flying kites in spring

Spring is the best season to fly kites. I like flying kites at this time best.

On the grass. , I am running with the string.

In the sky, the kite is flying in the warm spring breeze.

You see, my kite is like a beautiful little swallow. When I grow up, I want to become a swallow and fly in the vast blue sky.

Look, some of the kites in the sky are airplanes, some are beautiful butterflies, and some are eagles. Some are a vole, some are Santa Claus... They are dancing in the air. Two children are playing the game of eagle and shrimp vole. As they run and chase, the eagle and vole kites in their hands are sometimes distant and sometimes close. , really comparable. I looked at it, and the kite in my hand was entangled with other people's kites. I had to take up the line, and it took a lot of effort to untie the line. Only then did I know how to fly. Kites also require knowledge, and even the basics of winding up and flying must be practiced well. Diary

Our kites are getting higher and higher in the sky, flying farther and farther.

Kite is a meaningful activity, which can not only exercise the body, but also enhance the physical fitness. 3. How to divide the paragraphs and paragraphs in the essay "Spring Fun in the Red Mansion"

Lin Daiyu is one of the four great figures in our country. A protagonist in one of the famous works "A Dream of Red Mansions" lived in Jia's family after his father Lin Ruhai passed away, and then had a poignant love story with Jia Baoyu.

I believe many people know that in the family. In "A Dream of Red Mansions", Lin Daiyu's appearance and figure are not as beautiful and dignified as the extremely wealthy Xue Baochai. Lin Daiyu only likes to cry secretly and sigh to the sky, but I personally feel that Lin Daiyu is fresh and refined. Her unique temperament is more attractive and attracts me more.

First of all, Lin Daiyu can attract Jia Baoyu, which means that Lin Daiyu who can make Jia Baoyu, who spends all day with girls, fall in love with her is different from ordinary girls. Different unique temperament and charm. Secondly, Lin Daiyu has profound attainments in literature. At a crab banquet hosted by Shi Xiangyun, "Xiaoxiang Concubine" Lin Daiyu proposed three chrysanthemum chants. Ask Ju. Jumeng won the top three respectively, which was very memorable and unforgettable. Therefore, Lin Daiyu is also a literary talent that few others can match.

Lin Daiyu didn’t like talking to others very much. Perhaps living under someone else’s roof aroused her deepest inferiority complex. She expressed her sentimentality in her poems. She had a melancholic temperament. In late spring, she felt sorry for the fallen flowers. She collected them and buried them in the soil. She called it the "Flower Tomb" and wrote "Flower Burial Poems".

Beauty is not important. Perhaps, I like Lin Daiyu because I like her. Perhaps Lin Daiyu is not as shrewd as Wang Xifeng, as beautiful as Xue Baochai, and astonishingly considerate, but her talent and straightforward nature highlight her unique temperament and charm. This is why I like Lin Daiyu.

I have read the first thirty chapters of "A Dream of Red Mansions" in the past few days, and there are so many characters in it! Many characters have distinct personalities and are lifelike. For example, the fierce and arrogant Wang Xifeng, the beautiful and thoughtful Xue Baochai... But the one who impressed me the most was Lin Daiyu.

One of Lin Daiyu’s biggest characteristics is a bit like me, that is, she loves to shed tears. She always gets angry and sheds tears when encountering trivial things; sometimes she cries with just a word; sometimes when no one messes with her, and she thinks of something, she will secretly feel sad and shed tears. For example, the flowers were blooming and falling in the garden. It was such a beautiful scene that everyone would feel happy after seeing it. But Daiyu actually picked up the petals and buried them there with tears. Compared with her, my tears of love really can’t be regarded as tears of love.

Lin Daiyu also has another characteristic that I really admire, that is, she is very talented and is especially good at composing poetry. During Jia Yuanchun's wedding, he asked the sisters to compose a five-character poem each, and Daiyu was appreciated by Yuanchun. There is also Chapter 24 - Xiaoxiangzi won the first prize for his chrysanthemum poem. Everyone wrote poems on chrysanthemums in the Grand View Garden. Among the twelve topics, Lin Daiyu wrote three: Ode to Chrysanthemums, Ask about Chrysanthemums and Dream of Chrysanthemums. The rhythm is neat and the concept is new. It is recognized by everyone as the best. I don’t know how she could write so many poems. Even if I think big, I can’t write so many good poems. I really need to study hard.

Lin Daiyu was as beautiful as a fairy and very talented, but she was plagued by illness and loved to cry and be sad. In the end, she died at a young age, which is really sad. I will never dare to shed tears like Lin Daiyu again. It is really harmful to my body. But I want to learn from her writing, accumulate more knowledge, and improve my writing skills.

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The campus sentence "full" The absurd words and the bitter tears make the author crazy, who can understand the meaning? "It expresses the author's hard work and sadness, and also expresses the helplessness and depression of being unable to find a close friend." And one of my favorite books to read is "A Dream of Red Mansions" written by Mr. Cao Xueqin.

"A Dream of Red Mansions" is a tragedy. It is not only a true portrayal of Mr. Cao Xueqin, but also a true portrayal of the society at that time, which caused a prosperous Rongguo Mansion to decline. Mr. Cao Xueqin took ten years to complete this work, using delicate and ingenious writing to describe a prosperous Rongguo Mansion.

When I finished reading "Dream of Red Mansions", I felt extremely sad. I even resented the author for making the ending of "Dream of Red Mansions" so tragic. , The prosperous scene is not consistent at all. But then I gradually understood that the society at that time was so dark, and this was just the evolution of society.

The one who touched me the most was Lin Daiyu. Although many people disliked her suspicious and sentimental character, I seemed to understand her difficulties. Her parents died when she was young, and she was dependent on others. She felt how lonely her world was. In order to protect herself, she could only use a mean tone to treat others. This was also the factor that caused her to develop a naturally suspicious emotion. Lin Daiyu was in desolation. After she died, only a maid serving her was silently crying for her. At this time, I also thought of her tragic life that was predicted.

Jia Baoyu, a boy who looks weak and a little innocent on the outside, actually has a strong and masculine side. Maybe in the end no one thought that he would become a monk because he saw through the world of mortals. He is A person who longs for freedom gradually matures when his sisters complain about things in life after they get married. What's more, in this era of "marriage with the fingertips", it is even more of a kind for him. The water is in dire straits.

At the same time, he is also an infatuated person, and he is willing to do anything for Lin Daiyu. From this, we can also see how much Lin Daiyu's death has affected him. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Jia Baoyu, whose beautiful youth was ruined in this way.

Almost all the characters in "Dream of Red Mansions" have tragic fates, from Wang Xifeng's "One follow, two orders and three breaks" to Xue Baochai's "Sadly suspended virtue, gold hairpin buried in the snow" to Lin Daiyu's "It's pity that Yong Xucai has a jade belt hanging from it." It can all be reflected. Mr. Cao Xueqin once wrote miserably: "In these helpless days, sad days, and lonely times, I try to punish the foolish and loyal, so I staged this "Dream of Red Mansions" in which I cherish gold and mourn jade.

"Dream of Red Mansions" This book makes me deeply moved. It is a true portrayal of Jia Baoyu's life. Time passes and the rings of life keep turning, but who can understand Cao Xueqin's tears in the dream 5. Spring Fun in Red Mansions. 200-word essay on which character do you like

Lin Daiyu is a protagonist in "A Dream of Red Mansions", one of the four famous works in my country. She lived in the Jia family after the death of her father Lin Ruhai, and then had a relationship with Jia Baoyu. A poignant love story.

I believe many people know that in "A Dream of Red Mansions", Lin Daiyu's appearance and figure are not as beautiful and dignified as Xue Baochai.

Bing Jiyu. Lin Daiyu only likes a person to cry secretly and sigh to the sky, but I personally feel that Lin Daiyu's fresh and refined unique temperament is more attractive and attracts me. First of all, Lin Daiyu can attract Jia Baoyu, which means that she can attract the whole person. Jia Baoyu, who spends his days with girls, falls in love with Lin Daiyu, who has a unique temperament and charm that is different from ordinary girls.

Secondly, Lin Daiyu has profound attainments in literature. At the banquet, "Xiaoxiang Concubine" Lin Daiyu's three poems about chrysanthemums and "Ju Meng" won the top three, which was very memorable and unforgettable. , Lin Daiyu is also a literary talent that few people can match. Lin Daiyu doesn't like talking to others. Maybe it's because being under someone else's side arouses her deepest inferiority. She expresses her sentimentality in her poems.

She had a melancholic temperament. In late spring, she felt sorry for the fallen flowers. She collected them and buried them in the soil. She called it the "Flower Tomb" and wrote "Beauty is not important. Perhaps, I like Lin Daiyu because I like her." .

Perhaps Lin Daiyu is not as smart as Wang Xifeng, as beautiful as Xue Baochai, and astonishingly considerate, but her talent and straightforward nature highlight her unique temperament and charm. This is what I like about Lin Daiyu. Reason. I have read the first thirty chapters of "A Dream of Red Mansions" in the past few days, and there are so many characters in it!

For example, the fierce and arrogant Wang Xifeng, the beautiful and thoughtful Xue Baochai... ...But the one who impressed me the most was Lin Daiyu. One of Lin Daiyu’s biggest characteristics is a bit like me, that is, she loves to cry.

She always gets angry and sheds tears when encountering the smallest things; sometimes it’s just a sentence. She cried when no one provoked her; sometimes when she thought of something, she would secretly feel sad and shed tears. For example, the flowers blooming and falling in the garden, what a beautiful scenery, everyone would feel happy when they saw it, but Daiyu actually put it in her eyes. The petals were gathered together, and I was burying them there with tears.

Compared with her, my love for tears cannot be regarded as love for tears. Lin Daiyu has another characteristic that I really admire. That is, she is very talented, especially good at composing poems.

When Jia Yuanchun was visiting the family, he asked all the sisters to write a five-character poem, and Daiyu was appreciated by Yuanchun. Also in Chapter 24 - Xiaoxiangzi won the first prize for his chrysanthemum poem.

Everyone wrote poems on chrysanthemums in the Grand View Garden. Among the twelve topics, Lin Daiyu wrote three: Ode to Chrysanthemums, Ask about Chrysanthemums and Dream of Chrysanthemums. The rhythm is neat and the concept is new. It is recognized by everyone as the best.

I don’t know how she could write so many poems. Even if I think big, I can’t write so many good poems. I really need to study hard. Lin Daiyu was as beautiful as a fairy and very talented, but she was plagued by illness and loved to cry and be sad. In the end, she died at a young age, which is really sad.

I will never dare to shed tears like Lin Daiyu again. It’s really harmful to my health. But I want to learn from her writing, accumulate more knowledge, and improve my writing skills.

This article only represents the author’s views and does not represent Baidu’s position. No reproduction is allowed without permission.

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This article "Spring Fun in Red Mansions" describes how Jia Baoyu and the sisters and girls flew kites in the Grand View Garden.

It highlights their freedom and happiness when flying kites and shows their love for the beautiful life in Grand View Garden. This article is written in the order of the development of things. First, I will write about the reasons for flying kites. Because everyone found the big butterfly kite flown by Miss Yanhong in the old man’s courtyard, they also wanted to fly kites.

Then write the scene of everyone flying kites in confusion. The girls took out various kite-flying tools. Baoqin flew a big bat kite, Baochai flew a kite of seven wild geese in a row, Baoyu's beauty kite couldn't fly, and she was anxious and annoyed. Daiyu flew a kite. , everyone said it can take away the root cause of the disease.

Finally, everyone flew the kite. The origin and outcome of the story are very clear, showing the lively scene of young men and women flying kites in the Grand View Garden.