The teacher comments on the composition 1 Every time I hand out the test paper, the first thing I want to read is the teacher's comments. The handwriting embedded in the eye-catching corner of the score may be a little scrawled, and occasionally I will see different shades of handwriting after adding water, but I feel very warm and full-it was written by the teacher himself, and I will naturally cherish it. Looking at the comments and savoring them carefully, you will always be intoxicated, just like enjoying a small poem. Look at the elegant handwriting in the comments, how beautiful it is! Especially the language of praise appears on my test paper, how rare it is!
Look at those changeable words, sometimes serious, sometimes humorous and cheerful, sometimes approachable and sometimes thought-provoking. Whether it is easy to understand or profound twists and turns, it makes my heart beat like a drum. Sometimes we don't criticize or praise directly, but leave a short and enlightening sentence for ourselves to experience. ...
Success and failure coexist, not every exam can be smooth sailing.
It may be that I got carried away because I did better in the previous exam, or maybe I was addicted to surfing the Internet the night before the exam and did surprisingly poorly in the math exam. Until now, the pain of falling out with Sun Shan is still deeply imprinted on my mind. I am no longer eager to hand out test papers, to see comments written by teachers, or even to be afraid of reading them. I know that my behavior has failed the trust of the teacher, and I am ashamed of the comments on the test paper that contain the teacher's painstaking efforts.
The test papers are still being handed out, and I clearly see the students who handed them out smiling contemptuously at me. Facing the test paper, I dare not even read the comments below the score. I don't want to see the cold and critical comments on the test paper, and I don't want to know that the teacher has given up hope on me. I glanced at the test paper helplessly, and what I saw actually relaxed my mood a lot: "No matter how smart a person is, he sometimes thinks long and sometimes loses." Not to mention you? Don't lose hope, the teacher expects your next good grades. "A few short words touched me very much. The teacher didn't despise me because of a slip of the tongue. The teacher understands me.
Because of this lesson and the teacher's profound comments, I got rid of my rashness, arrogance and impetuousness, and I remembered every knowledge. In the next exam, I answered questions with ease and got good grades.
The mood of reading teachers' comments has also become relaxed. Reading the connotation of comments always brings me thinking and reverie. "Where there is a will, there is a way." "Ninety-nine percent of genius depends on hard work", which looks very kind, encouraging and meaningful.
For these reasons, I prefer teachers' comments. Whether it is praise, encouragement, criticism or persuasion, I will carefully understand and keep it in mind, and I will continue to learn and grow from teachers' comments. ...
Teacher's Comments on Composition 2 In a blink of an eye, the annual Teacher's Day is coming. When I think back to the teachers who taught well and imperceptibly, my heart can't help but be filled with gratitude. Among them, my Chinese teacher-Mr. Wu's concern and love for me moved me the most.
I remember one morning this spring, when I was concentrating on my homework, I suddenly found many little red dot. I immediately told Mr. Wu, the temporary class teacher, and Mr. Wu was not sure if this was a popular rubella. Dare not neglect, then take me to the school hospital to see the experienced school doctor. The school doctor knows a lot, and a closer look can confirm that it is viral rubella. God, I almost fainted when I heard the diagnosis. Now everyone is busy reviewing, and the nervous breath tells me that the mid-term exam is not far away. Sure enough, on the way back to the classroom, Mr. Wu told me that there are still ten days before the mid-term exam! Oh, what a pity! This damn rubella came neither early nor late. It's really annoying to come at this time! This is a Chinese class. After the teacher brought me all the information, he arranged everything in the class and sent me home. The teacher advised me not to read books to protect my eyes. My parents were moved by the teacher's concern for me.
At that time, the most sad thing for me was that I couldn't take the mid-term exam and participate in the selection of young reporters of Care for the Next Generation Weekly, but this time there was nothing I could do, and I felt very sorry.
Unexpectedly, unexpectedly, Mr. Wu explained the reason to the person in charge of the small reporter selection activity of Care for the Next Generation Weekly and recommended me to be a small reporter. The recommendation was successful! Because the teacher couldn't leave, she specially asked Yang Xiaohui, the vice monitor, to send the form to my home. When I received the form, I was full of gratitude to Mr. Wu. After all, I became a glorious little reporter after filling out the form and handing it in!
Mr. Wu also took time to come to see me, help me review my lessons and do ideological work for me ... For ten days, Mr. Wu's concern and care for me was as cool as the summer breeze. Another example is the sunshine in winter, which warms my heart. The day before the exam, Mr. Wu said to me meaningfully: "Although the exam is a tool to measure your grades, as long as you master the knowledge at this stage, you are the best!" After listening to Mr. Wu, I was deeply encouraged. I didn't feel sad and sad because I missed the mid-term exam, but my confidence increased greatly.
On the third day, that is, the morning after the exam, Mr. Wu brought the test paper. Because my eyes can't be too tired, let me answer the question in the form of a question and answer. Great! I answered all the questions in one breath, and Teacher Wu applauded me happily.
Before Teacher's Day comes, I want to say "Happy holidays, teacher" to Mr. Wu and teachers all over the world with a grateful heart!
Teacher's comment: This is an emotional exercise. The author carefully portrayed the image of "my Chinese teacher-Mr. Wu" and expressed my gratitude. The title is novel and unique, full of emotion. The plot promotes nature, the characters are prominent, and the emotional description is delicate and vivid.
Teacher's comments on composition 3 1. Although the article is short, the description is vivid and delicate, with a strong flavor of life. Words and sentences are accurate and vivid. Finally, the article reveals the central sentence, which is a clear pen and a summative language. It is short and pithy. Through careful observation, it is vividly described in appropriate language. The article is short but not monotonous, and the language is popular but not boring.
2. A detailed description of the characters' language, manners and movements. This is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
3. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language, fantastic imagination, so beautiful!
5. "Reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.
6. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, and hit the floor's reading is exciting and exciting.
7. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, and the emotion is rich and true. Read with relish, it uses a lot of spoken English in life, making the article more natural. The end of the article is clear, implicit and meaningful. This composition is novel in material, brilliant in conception and vivid in language, and reveals a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
8. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
9. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.
10, with clear context, strong sense of hierarchy and orderly narration.
1 1, with appropriate details, clear focus and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.
12, the narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.
13, setting off the characters' emotions with the environment, blending scenes, feeling in the scene, and scenery in the scene.
14, rich in imagination, strange in conception and not divorced from the truth of life, binds the association of life, broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel lively and interesting.
15, the scenery description is vivid, the words and sentences are appropriate, and the scenes are in harmony with each other, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.
The teacher's comment essay 4 finally reveals the central sentence, which is clear, summative, short and powerful.
Through careful observation, this article vividly describes ... The article is short but not monotonous, and the language is popular but interesting.
Describing characters' language, manner and movements is a major feature. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm.
The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
Music is beautiful, but so is our language. Poetic language, fantastic imagination, so beautiful!
The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related, and the action is described with examples, which is touching at the beginning and has real feelings.
The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full text is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.
Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion, true and credible, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is …, implicit and meaningful.
This composition is novel in materials, wonderful in conception, lively in language, and reveals fresh life breath and children's interest between the lines.
According to the sequence of events, the article describes that … the language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.
The article is full of respect and gratitude for … from beginning to end, which is deeply touching, and this is also the shocking power.
The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is thought-provoking. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
The examples are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their own identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.
The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which can be called a relatively successful work.
The full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching, and the beginning is extraordinary.
The article is realistic, stereoscopic, readable and interesting. Fairy tales, with keen social insight, reflect the dark side of reality and vivid language, depict a series of greedy existence, which is profound.
Teacher's comment on composition 5 Please ask the player who won the first prize to take the stage to receive the prize. In the majestic March of the athletes and warm applause, I happily boarded the podium and proudly received the golden trophy and the red certificate from the judges and teachers. Ah, I finally won the first place in our county-level speech contest. Looking at the trophy in front of me, I couldn't help crying and remembered the past. I want to thank my teacher. His comments inspired me to stand on the platform and regain my confidence and passion for life.
Cicadas sing in dense trees, green and fat, red and thin. I remember I took part in the school speech contest for the first time last summer. At that time, I carefully prepared to practice hard and confidently went to the podium to show my skills. However, after all, it is the first time for me to attend a speech by so many people. I can't help being flustered under the eyes of the public. I was so sweaty that I forgot my speech. As you can imagine, I entered the competition with confidence, but failed. My self-confidence suddenly dropped to freezing point, and I became depressed and even listless in class. The teacher seemed to see my difference, so he arranged a weekly diary for us to write down our recent unhappiness.
So I expressed my resentment in my weekly diary. Unexpectedly, the day after Zhou Ji was handed in, the teacher called me to the office and said, I see you are absent-minded recently. You really said it in Zhou Ji. The failure of the game affected your mood. Today, I want to tell you cautiously that there will be another speech contest at school next year, and I have decided to recommend you to participate again. I hope you can remember my comments and don't let me down.
Then he gave me a weekly diary. When I opened it, I wrote an exciting sentence. Bamboo shoots become bamboo when they fall, and fish become dragons when they run around. I excitedly wrote the teacher's comments on the title page of my diary, and secretly vowed that I must be on the podium.
In this way, I was moved and looked forward to another speech contest at school. In the competition, I learned the last lesson, calmly plunged into the competition, and finally won the first place in the whole school. The teacher talked to me again, and I was recommended to the county to participate in the finals. Today, I finally completed my mission and achieved success. Can I not get excited A good word, a thousand dollars is not easy. Thanks for the teacher's comments, which made me feel lifeless.
The teacher commented that there was always a paragraph in composition 6, and the deep red pen and ink swayed between the lines. The comments written by the teacher unconsciously warmed me and made me understand the meaning of love. Teacher, solving doubts in class, living, understanding, and cultivating the mind. Isn't it a fate that we meet, get to know each other and know each other here?
In this encounter, we all have a good memory. At that time, I was standing on the podium, my head was very low and my hand was very tight. In this quiet classroom, my figure is particularly silent. The eyes of the whole class are staring at me, making the sweat on my forehead converge into a stream. Seeing this, the teacher told me to go down first. Suddenly, the whole class burst into laughter. I wrote this down in the book Zhou Ji. All the grievances in the class are poured into this book, and all the words in the book are poured into this book.
But when I went to class the next day, you asked a question first, and your eyes stared at me instantly, and I buried my head lower again. I hope you won't see me. After a while, you came down from the podium and patted me on the shoulder. I timidly raised my head and slowly left the warm seat, making intermittent sounds in my mouth. But when I finished, the whole class applauded, and the admiring eyes of my classmates made me.
In an instant, I understood the meaning of that sentence. At this time, my heart is both guilty and happy, and there is a strong warm current.
I can't forget that afternoon. The air is full of thoughts. The warm sunshine in the atmosphere shines obliquely in the classroom and also in my heart. That line of words left not only words, but also love and warmth in my heart.
Young and ignorant, we have long been accustomed to the care and care in life, but we don't know that these little pieces of love have always accompanied me to grow up.
After thinking, I started writing, and the comments written by the teacher were like warm spring breeze, which awakened my numb heart.
Comments by composition teachers 7 Abstract: Comments are an important part of composition teaching. Some Chinese teachers criticized the revision carefully, and emphatically pointed out the shortcomings in the composition, which took a lot of effort and gained little. So, how can students appreciate your feelings, accept them with an open mind, and let comments play its role? The author believes that composition evaluation should be full of deep love, more guidance and less blame; More respect and less criticism; More understanding, less indifference; More expectations, less emptiness.
Keywords: comments; Encourage; Stimulation; Democracy; Character; Understand; Happiness; promote
Composition teaching determines the teaching effect of Chinese subject to a great extent; Whether a student can write a good composition depends largely on the guidance and evaluation of the composition by the Chinese teacher; The teacher's evaluation directly depends on the cultivation of students' interest in learning and the improvement of their writing ability. This situation determines that the teacher will play a "referee" role. Therefore, when writing comments, teachers must be objective and fair, judge by articles, and never judge by people with colored eyes.
Rosenthal, an American psychologist, pointed out: Teachers' expectations of students will multiply students' self-esteem and self-confidence, and generate a progressive motivation to constantly change and improve themselves. They will unconsciously study harder in action, and the result is rapid progress. Therefore, in composition evaluation, teachers should use a lot of inspiring words, that is, try to find out the bright spots in students' compositions, even if only one word is used accurately, one sentence is written vividly, and one method is used properly ... it is necessary to mark it and applaud it in order to achieve the expected effect.
1. More guidance, less blame.
"Off topic" is the result of students' habit of writing and carelessness. In fact, as long as students don't miss every word when reviewing the questions, they can think clearly about "who should I tell and what is it?" Don't worry about nothing to write.
Once, I assigned the composition "I have a dream in my heart" and asked to write a narrative of not less than 600 words. When correcting the composition, a student wrote a lyric essay. This is a mistake in principle. I was so angry that I immediately ran to the battlefield, because I couldn't see the topic clearly and rewrote it. On reflection, I'm afraid there is something wrong. I patiently gave the following instructions: this time I asked to write a narrative, and you have to explain "who?" What dream? Why do you have such a dream? Did you put it into action? Has it been realized? " Answer these questions selectively and you can do it. Later, he made up an article, which I found to be his most definite writing purpose so far. The charm of comments is so great!
2. More respect and less criticism.
"Graffiti" has become a common problem among middle school students. In fact, this can't be entirely blamed on the students. Nowadays, students have a heavy academic burden and can't finish the exercises every day. We should really consider the problem from the perspective of students, and occasionally perfunctory once or twice. We will adopt a tolerant and understanding attitude, and our classmates will certainly appreciate you. Of course, we do this not only to please and cater to students, but also to give them sincere respect and get unexpected results.
Once, a boy who likes playing basketball put his composition book on my desk alone. It's obviously a late composition. After opening it, I found that the handwriting was scrawled and the changes were even more unsightly. I held back my anger. First of all, I wrote, "Thank you for finishing your homework on time in your busy schedule." Then he calmed down and read his composition carefully, and found that in the theme of "Memories of Love", he caught his mother's words, "Son, can I see you off?" "Don't be nervous, mom will always be waiting for you outside!" The simple two sentences show the mother's good intentions and are very delicate. So I wrote this comment in the second line: "You are strong on the outside, but you can be so delicate on the inside. You can feel your mother's love with your heart, and I believe you can also feel the teacher's mood at the moment. I look forward to your change! " After that, I also read his article as a model essay among my classmates, and greatly appreciated his "meticulous" personality.
Sure enough, this comment made the students feel a kind of respected happiness, and this patterned reading made him feel the joy of success, prompting him to change his mind and strive for perfection. He can not only hand in his homework in time, but also have a dignified font, a neat roll and a fine description.
3. Be more understanding and less indifferent.
It is easy for students to express their true feelings in their compositions, which is also the basic requirement of our writing, and it is difficult to be valuable. Now, due to exam-taking reasons and sensitive issues in adolescence, 99% of students dare not express their true emotional experiences in their compositions, but present some pessimistic, negative, world-weary and confused works. At this time, as a teacher, we must put aside the pros and cons of writing, guide students in time, and conduct "heart-to-heart evaluation."
I remember in a weekend essay without a theme, a boy boldly reviewed the plot of his affair with his girlfriend, and then mercilessly scolded him for breaking up with him. These words are really hard to read. At that time, I was surprised not only by his bold disclosure, but also by his personal attacks on people, which shows his resentment and excitement when writing this article. So I think it is necessary for me to have an in-depth heart-to-heart talk with him, as an experienced person to smooth his broken heart and let him know his own way of being a man, especially the way of being a gentleman. So I wrote: "First of all, the teacher is very grateful for your trust in me and sharing such a personal and frustrating thing with me;" Secondly, I feel sorry for your brokenhearted. After all, you used to be so happy, but love must be two of a kind to be happy for a long time. (omit some appearances here) ... and, as a man, you have to be able to afford it ... people give you up, which means you still have room for improvement. Finally, I hope you can' be lenient with others and be strict with yourself' and get out of this shadow as soon as possible. "It didn't take long for him to review his preparation energetically and enter high school.
Composition evaluation is a bridge between teachers and children.
4. More expectations, less emptiness
"Fluent sentences", "clear theme" and "complete structure" have almost become common words in composition evaluation. These adult sentences don't conform to the characteristics of children's physical and mental development at all, and they don't work.
We ask students to have individuality in their writing language and "speak in their own words", but students like imitation very much. This is also a good method. What impressed me deeply was that a girl wrote a family composition imitating the structure of Yu Guangzhong's Homesickness. The sentences are fluent, the theme is clear and the structure is complete. I wrote such a comment: "You are the successor of Yu Guangzhong's writing style. I believe that you read widely today and imitate famous people, and you will be able to stand on your own feet and achieve everyone in the future! " Indeed, these words played an unprecedented role ―― after that, the student read Xi Murong's Invitation to Life and wrote several articles about roads, time and students ... She always surprised me.
Language is an art, and personalized comments can stimulate students' writing enthusiasm, make students gush out their writing wisdom and bring us unprecedented happiness. Let's be more careful, patient and warm in comments, and be a happy teacher who makes students respect and make themselves comfortable.
refer to
[1] Democracy and Education (Li Zhenxi)
[2] "Appreciate Your Students", (edited by Meng Fanhua)
[3] "Composition Thinking", (edited by Wang Siyong)