From "Foben" to "Montenegro", the dream machine slowly comprehends and grows in the process of writing books. A spirit is slowly brewing in his heart. As he himself said, "the dream machine has been seeking innovation, change and breakthrough." The dream of "Montenegro" is very painful. He doesn't want to be as complacent as Tang San's dance. He repeated his words over and over again. He wants to ask his true nature, just like in Yang Shen, to see his heart clearly and to pursue his real life situation.
During the year of writing Montenegro, I visited many Boxers and talked with them about martial arts. This is also a kind of training for my mind, and I gradually have my own way in my mind. In "Yang Shen", I dreamed that Taoism can only be used if there is reason and skill in my heart, that is, means. In addition to seeking the truth, dream machine also pays attention to writing skills. For example, he himself said, "I will pay attention to the characterization of the new book." Obviously, in writing, dreaming is also constant thinking and hard work.
The book Romance of the Dragon and Snake is the result of a dream. This book is not about martial arts, but about martial arts that suddenly rose from fighting to the realm of cultural civilization. After watching martial arts, you may feel very enjoyable. You have an impulse to go out and chop people, but after watching Dragon Snake, you may go back and settle down to learn martial arts. At that time, I couldn't catch up with "Dragon Snake", but one buddy was so fascinated that he joined the martial arts club of the school and went out to play Tai Chi early every weekend.
I only glanced at "Dragon Snake", and one plot was very impressive. At that time, Wang Chao was looking for a breakthrough and met an old man, the old Red Army (lhj) who had walked through the Long March. The dynasty asked him how to practice dark energy. The old man took out the suona and blew out a song "Ten Send to the Red Army". "In the passionate era of the last century, such people, such spirit, and many people like old people gathered together. In this way, the spirit of Qian Qian will unite, and what else can be defeated. " It was on the Long March that the old talents achieved great success in boxing. Wang Chao said, "I know your touch and your fist. It is indeed an invincible force. " After that, Wang Chao detached himself from the world, took the inspirational route again, walked through the snowy mountains and grasslands, and paid tribute to the feelings of that year. In the end, he learned that "the heart is like a child, and the meaning is like steel", which was a great success.
This kind of touch is undoubtedly shocking, and no one has such sincerity from the beginning.
After the tempering of the Romance of the Dragon and the Snake, the dream machine really has its own system. At this time, he is very graceful. Yang Shen was born, no one can be.
The opening of "Yang Shen" is very meaningful, and a feeling of atmosphere comes to my face. This kind of floor beating is exquisite in one go. For the last time, I realized that I had to say that the book "Wild foxes under the trees looking for gods" was Jin Yong's work. Works first exist in the author's mind. From the moment the author began to write the first word, the whole work was vivid and had its own charm. This is no longer a story made up by ordinary writers, but a real book.
Generally speaking, the beginning of Yaya's prose is to enter the play first, and then start telling stories. When crossing the text, we should first talk about crossing, and then talk about the basic situation of the other party; The same is true of rebirth, and online games are the same. From queuing for helmets to going out with sticks to kill chickens, every novel has to repeat this routine tirelessly before it can start writing its own content. A book has no charm at all, it's just a routine. These can only be called storytelling, which is far from real books.
Writing has the spirit of God, and already has the bearing of writing books.
Compared with Su Ji Shen's splendor and Jin Yong's composure, Yang Shen's longing is even more remarkable, which is a kind of literati's tolerance. In the first chapter, a son, Hongyi, first explained the dynasty, place and background of the characters, and wrote about Hongyi's youth. "God sees himself and others, and God listens to people." I read the notes of the thatched cottage written by Li Yan, a former great scholar, and told a story about worshipping God. Although Hongyi is young, he has a bright mind, does not read dead books, and knows that human feelings are the article. Chapter ii a villain like a ghost. Hiroichi is weak, but honest. He said a word about evil slaves, and then when it comes to treating ghosts, scholars have righteousness in their hearts, and ghosts and gods can't get close. Later, Hongyi was reading at night in a ruined temple in the wild, and he met King Fox. He didn't panic. "My generation of scholars, full of righteousness, know ghosts and gods, is the most important thing."
Between a few lines of text, the tolerance of readers is exposed. This tolerance is remarkable, and it is the accumulation of countless literati in China for thousands of years. The protagonist is the embodiment of the author's thoughts. From Hongyi to dreaming, dreaming obviously really has the bearing of reading and learning. "Yang Shen" is like "Notes on the Cottage" in the book, which is about Machamp's confusion, but there is a truth in it, the university asked.
Dream into dream, he wrote, "Hongyi's study is not a dead study, but a study of the author's thoughts and even his life experiences. More importantly, it is necessary to find out the writing time of a book and investigate what kind of environment, state and mentality it is writing, so as to read a book thoroughly and communicate with the author. " Understanding books by trying to figure out people and promoting the author's inner world through books all mean this. At the beginning, some writers ran out to write books, and their inner filth and evil thoughts were suddenly exposed in the book, but they didn't know it.
Yang Shen wrote a section on the Imperial Examination. /kloc-Xie, a 0/03-year-old literary master, described it this way: "When his eyes flashed, generate shone with profound brilliance, as if there was an artistic conception in his eyes that penetrated time and space." Although such people do not practice Taoism, their artistic conception and cultivation in truth are better than ghosts and gods. From a distance, they knew that Hongyi was unfathomable. After the imperial examination, imperial officials ran out to look at the air. For example, on the prodigy of a seven-year-old scholar, there is a cloud, like a splendid group, with splendid articles written.
Of course, it is absurd to look at the air in reality, but people who study and study are not only reading, but also studying things, observing people and seeing the world. A real master is like a dream machine, "there is an artistic conception that penetrates time and space." When a man walks in front of his master, he can see his heart. When an old man stands in front of the master, the master may be shocked to see that the past few decades have piled up heavily on the old man. Xu Gongzi, who wrote fugue, ghost stocks, human desire and Lingshan, has such a scholar's skill. He wrote in "Human Desire" that a young man possessed a disciple of a rich family after his death and cheated his relatives around him, but when he was seen by a living immortal and a master of metaphysics, he knew something was wrong and told the truth that this man was not himself. Not only writing, but also other creative work and art have this artistic conception. Art masters have such skills of observing people and the world. Just like Van Gogh's paintings, most people can't see anything, but when they first see a real person or a close friend, they may be shocked.
A few days ago, I told people that Ji Shen captured the appearance of a China myth, while Yang Shen had the connotation and charm of China culture. Just like the practice of Ssangyong and Sou Shen in Tang Dynasty, longevity tactic, light-returning tactic, water spin, fire spin, anchor bead, whirlwind turns in the body, turning physical strength, and what centrifugal force turns into centripetal force. Finding the gods or immortals in Xian Xia's novels and absorbing the vitality of heaven and earth are essentially the accumulation of energy. Show 230 million photos of the tester in the Dragon Ball one by one, and you will see the difference immediately. These books are all borrowed from a fairy, but they have nothing to do with China's civilization and culture, but materialistic western philosophy. The immortal in Yang Shen is the embodiment of China's humanistic philosophy. According to Yang Shen, the world is a sea of suffering, just like a person falling from a ship and drowning. If you want to travel around the world, you must cultivate and strengthen your mind. At first, Hongyi practiced the Tommy Sutra and cultivated his mind by observing his thoughts. Later, Hongyi became a ghost fairy and got into a fight with the door owners. The main entrance is to imagine stupa and wishful thinking through the truth and cognition of one's own door, which contains supreme avenue and great magical power. In the Wulin, Hongyi holds a magic sword under the big millet, which represents the country. The power of the knife is almost immortal, from which he realizes the weight of the country, so that the god of war in his imagination also holds a magic knife under the big millet, and the knife is almost like the breath of an ancient holy emperor and the sword of an emperor. At the beginning of the imperial examination, Hongyi's article conformed to the principle of a hundred schools of thought contending, which caused a hundred saints to sing in unison. His own thoughts were also washed by the will of the hundred saints, giving birth to a thousand mans, which was almost equivalent to a thunder robbery. It can be said that Yang Shen's Taoism is idealistic, rooted in China culture, and truly has cultural charm. Among them, the manifestation of Taoist cultivation is not staple food, then Yuan Ying, but infatuation and thought. The chaotic thoughts in the souls of ordinary people are polluted and covered with dust by the world's red dust, while monks wash their hearts and their thoughts are as bright as diamonds. The idea of the second lightning robbery gave birth to a milli-awn. After four or five lightning robberies, it reached the point of thinking about one world at a time. After nine lightning robberies, Yang Shen was made, with hundreds of millions of ideas.
The martial arts in Yang Shen are inherited from Dragon and Snake, and they practice meat, bone and skin. There is a kind of masculinity, which is inaccessible to Shen Yin, demons and ghosts, rather than the internal force qi and dog blood qi fabricated in martial arts novels. The essence of the peak warrior is like smoke, the blood around him is like fire, and the ghost fairy will be burned to death at close range. This setting is unheard of, unprecedented, and there is a seamless atmosphere. After reading it, the whole person's spirit will be improved by three points. In contrast, kung fu in martial arts is really a firefly against the bright moon, not on the table.
In fact, this kind of creation has always existed, but it is mostly the author's epiphany and lost in the ordinary. -Ghost Rain's Taoist and Confucian immortals are somewhat different. The protagonist came from a scholarly family and followed Confucianism into Taoism. In the book, there are great scholars who ask questions from universities and have insightful opinions. They all have an essence that can be seen for hundreds of miles, which attracts demons to spy and has nowhere to hide. Later, several great scholars worked together to come up with a method of refining qi, which transformed the great merits of Confucianism into self-cultivation. At that time, there were two things in the Fairy God's Mud Pill Palace, namely, Tao Xin and Buddha Yuan, which were both cultivation and the currency of the celestial world. Later, the protagonist became a saint, refining the ruler of Shan Xin, which has condensed the merits of countless generations of great Confucianism, into an artifact, adding Confucianism to the heavens and standing shoulder to shoulder with the Taoist Buddha. This kind of creation has some flavor.
Four years ago, when I was a sophomore, I had an idea. At that time, the protagonists in the rivers and lakes all had adventures of jumping off cliffs, and all kinds of beautiful women threw themselves at each other, which was infinitely wonderful. I'm tired of this kind of excitement and want to write a novel from a different angle, from the perspective of a person around this hero with a leading role aura. Of course, this idea is just a page, and it has never been realized. Two years ago, when I was a freshman, I was reading all Yaya's novels. Suddenly, I was angry from my heart, saying that there was no hero, which made Vertical Son famous. It's really annoying that the rotten people in these novels can dominate as long as they get some inexplicable inheritance or power. I set up a huge American organization in the devil to monitor and hunt down these lucky people. Later, with the maturity of the devil's thought, this setting was removed.
The dream machine did the same to Yang Shen. Hong in Yang Shen was also an arrogant person when he was young. He made great achievements in martial arts at a young age, and abandoned martial arts as an official in high school. He not only married the children of such a big family as Mrs. Zhao, but also had a relationship with the heads or daughters of several doors such as Luopai Yaochi School. More importantly, ice cloud, the best in the world, is committed to getting married. Readers all know who he is. He is the stallion brother in the martial arts fantasy novel. Such a person became a villain in Yang Shen. Later, it was pointed out that ice cloud's dream of marrying him was to trap Hong for himself, which made him stagnate in the martial arts realm for twenty years and could not become an immortal.
The champion Hou is even more amazing. With the help of King Condor, one of the eight largest demon fairy in the world, when confronted with monk Wu Sheng Jingren, he showed great heroism and wanted to appease each other. Opposite him, Hongyi found that he had a great desire to surpass the heavenly demons, as if everything in the world should be his. When he met the Silver Shark King, one of the eight demon fairy, the champion Hou also wanted to subdue him. Even the king of snakes, who ranks first in the Eight demon fairy, dares to flirt. He was hunted down by two members of Wanli, the king of snakes, but he accidentally discovered the Tianzhu messenger. There is also the peacock king's daughter, the lucky rain fairy, a real saint ... The champion Hou seems to take all the beautiful women in the world seriously. When the champion Hou invented movable type printing, the readers suddenly realized that it was crossing elder brother. He also has another symbol of crossing elder brother: when he was a child, he found a meteorite falling from the sky. When he looked carefully, it was the sword of the ancient emperor, so he confessed the Lord with blood and took it for himself.
There is a saying that this is simply a big coffee table, and it is full of tragedies. As for the champion, he is a big coffee table filled with good things. After winning the championship, Dream Machine made a naked mockery of Brother Crossing. The elixir helped Hongyi to achieve martial arts, and the celestial stone of Tianzhu was snatched away by Hongyi, which hatched into a fairy, and the goddess Leng Yue was snatched away by Hongyi and refined into the ninth hole. The future champion Hou will obviously contribute more good things to Hongyi. When the Eight Demons Fairy King was caught by Hongyi, he was still shouting: "The Duke has a sword of the emperor's creatures, which is a destiny. He will rule the world in the future and will avenge me. " Such an ironic scene made Brother Crossing lose face. When the protagonists of many books are shocked, they all have a turtle spirit. What I saw recently was the Star Butcher by Luo Badao, and in Yang Shen, Hiroichi said that "the champion Hou has been defeated by me, and there is no tortoise spirit at all." Champion Hou flew into a rage when he learned that his woman was caught by Hongyi. With the support of anger, he is about to break through the realm and become a fairy. If Brother Crossing is the protagonist, he will naturally regain his beauty and make great progress. But now Hiroichi is the protagonist, so he beat Brother Crossing back to his original shape with three fists and two feet, making him run away in a panic.
The routine of Stallion and Crossing Brother is so vulgar that old readers are tired of it, but many authors are still bound by this routine and write such stories again and again. Now when I dream, I take them out one by one, which naturally makes readers feel shocked and then great. This innovation is subversive and enlightening.
Online novels naturally make readers feel very cool and comfortable. In Dragon and Snake, Wang Chao is invincible. A novel has been played from beginning to end and has never lost a game. "Yang Shen" is even better. Not only do you not take the old road, but you also slap people in the face. In contrast, in recent chapters, Tomatoes also arranged unscrupulous villains to provoke the protagonist and provoke the reader's anger, which is really old-fashioned.
Yang Shenzhong's eight-year-old ghost fairy has the infinite dragon ring of the ancient holy emperor. Hiroichi asked him how you got it. Answer, I swept it out when I was cleaning my ancestral home. This scene is not tense and hilarious, thinking of tomato's "Panlong". The dream machine is obviously a little annoying to tomatoes.
The world in Yang Shen is very clean. It is this cleanliness that makes readers feel comfortable and bright when reading Yang Shen. In Yang Shen, it is said that the thoughts of ordinary people's souls in troubled times are messy and covered with dust. Before Hongyi became a monk, ice cloud taught him the method of reading, and cut off the mundane thoughts with the sword of wisdom, making his heart like a mirror, free from dust. The dream machine itself also has this sword of wisdom, which can get rid of vulgar thoughts. When writing a book, I have no messy thoughts in my heart. The background description, characters, images and dialogues in the book are very clear, which makes readers feel very comfortable and can enjoy reading wholeheartedly. And some authors, when writing a book, can't calm down, their minds are in a mess, they succumb to their animal instinct and greed, and their stories are full of messy images. Looking for money for a while, being bullied by my brain-dead second ancestor for a while, going to a high-class auction for no reason, and meeting a beautiful woman for a while. This is like the author pouring a tumbling chaotic world into the reader's mind at once, which makes him surprised, happy, angry and erect (... Amitabha), thinking that the whole head is messed up and swollen at once.
Some writers write novels as an instinctive impulse, a burst of crazy code. This kind of thing is as mindless as the desire of a wild animal. Better ones can control what they write, but sometimes they can't help copying old routines, such as mercenary guild/adventurer association, auction plot, slave market plot, rogue plot and so on. When the author uses these plots impulsively, he can't help losing his mind. After two days' rest, tomatoes went out of the slave market to find fault with hooligans. Does he know what he is doing? And Li Hu is interesting, this person is actually very stable, can control the plot, and play these bridges as good cards. After about three years, the popularity is low. Broad bean describes an auction in many chapters, which plays a role in arousing readers' interest, but this method is inferior after all. Taoism is mentioned in Yang Shen, and everyone in the literary world studies truth instead of magic. In Romantic Career, the protagonist's teacher gave him a copy of Lara School, and the title page said that this can be given to art, but not to pottery. That's what it means.
Art comes from life, and good writers don't lack this feeling. They get their own morality from life and books, and then write books with their heart. It is a great achievement to integrate the spirit of China traditional literati into Yang Shen, and then compile it with wonderful plots. The combination of Taoism and art is very remarkable. Another example is the story of Wang Chao and the old Red Army mentioned earlier. The dream machine came into contact with this kind of touch in reality, keenly captured it, kept brewing in the heart, and finally wrote this paragraph, which turned into a moving force. A good writer never lacks sensitivity to life. I know what the audience wants to hear from me,' said Zhou Libo of Paiqingkou in Shanghai. He reads 14 newspaper every day, but he can read different things from it. If you really want to create something, but don't think hard, that's too bad.
Luo Badao, a writer in the same city who dreams of being fascinated by machines, stopped practicing qi in his new book Star Butcher and began to practice meat, bones and skin. It's really interesting. I don't know which book is the next one.
I really don't want to complain, but I'm not interested in the new book Painting Fairy by Wild Fox under the Tree. First the Classic of Mountains and Seas, now the Legend of the White Snake, what's next? Reach out and grab a piece of skin, and the theme of the Three Kingdoms will rot. The romance of Sui and Tang Dynasties has been written many times. Every day, the saints in the Romance of Gods make a scene, which makes them the king of bad plays. What these people say does have market value, but from an author's point of view, I can't agree. Classical new theory is like fishing with exhausted resources, which is very unfavorable to the author's own development. Moving a great god into his own works can really attract people's popularity, but the authors of these characters may not be able to control it. The conflict between stars and directors is sometimes the same. Among the powerful figures in 1994, Tomatoes just added a poem "Fairy Li Taibai" and "Song of Purple Sword", thus stiffly using the existing images and even freezing the author's thinking.
Today I wrote the story of Wukong, and Jiangnan wrote the boys here, but later they all had their own things. In Yang Shen, the dream machine has built a brand-new world with the culture, history and legends of China as the background. Another example is the dish of the ancient emperor, and the sword of the emperor's creatures in the book. Readers can immediately think of Xuanyuan sword, but it is really not Xuanyuan sword. Invisibly, Pan Huang Jian has the majesty and historical flavor of Xuanyuan Jian, and at the same time it is brand-new, which makes readers feel refreshed, and the author can also control and depict it at will. Faced with the existing images, the author may find it difficult to write.
Network literature is by no means an independent thing, nor is it as simple as yaya. While bringing pleasure to the public, the development of online literature and the author's own development also need constant exploration and innovation. In this era of runaway, fantasy, fantasy, crossing, rebirth and infinite mobility, online games, mecha, farming, these new things shining like stars, need more people who want to dream. Scarabs have been on the CCTV children's channel act young for decades, accompanied by a group of small pot friends. Don't writers like Tang Jiasan want to welcome groups of Bai Niao, send away groups of old birds and continue to live on their laurels?