2. Attach the original text:
Iris ①
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Threshold chrysanthemum sorrow smoke blue tears dew (2)
The curtains are light and cold.
Swallows fly in pairs.
The moon doesn't know how to leave sorrow and hate suffering,
The morning light slanted on Zhu Hu. ④
Last night, the west wind withered the green trees,
Alone in a tall building,
Look at the end of the world.
I want to send colorful stationery and rulers.
The mountains are long and there is a lot of water.
Translation:
In the morning, the chrysanthemums outside the railing were covered with a layer of sad smoke, and orchids seemed to be crying tears. There is a light cold between the curtains, and the swallows fly away. The bright moon doesn't understand the pain of parting, and the oblique Yin Hui penetrates the Red Gate until dawn.
Last night, the west wind was fierce and dried up the green trees. I climbed the tall building alone and looked at the end of the world. I want to send a letter to my sweetheart, but I don't know where my sweetheart is.
Difficult points to note:
① Yan Shu (99 1- 1055) was born in Linchuan (now Jiangxi). At the age of seven, he could write, and at the age of fourteen, he was recruited as a prodigy, which gave him a background in learning. When Song Renzong was an official, he was also an envoy of the Tang Dynasty. Fan Zhongyan, Han Qi, Ouyang Xiu and other famous ministers all came from his family. Give your life to yuan. He lived a rich and carefree life, and many poems and songs were sung in dance pavilions, in front of flowers and under the moon. However, his leisurely and graceful writing, profound theory, harmonious rhythm and elegant dictionary made him a poet at that time. And "Zhu Yu's Ci".
② Window sill: railing.
(3) Luo curtain: the curtain of the silo is used by wealthy people.
4 households: Jude said that the door refers to the big family.
⑤ Size elements: pronouns of letters. The ancients wrote letters with plain silk, which was generally about a foot long, so it was called ruler element. An ancient poem said, "Come from afar and leave me a pair of carp. Tell the children to cook carp, and there is a book in it. "
Appreciate:
This word is written from the pain of hating lovesickness, with a blend of scenes, nuanced and touching. The last movie is mainly about scenery, which contains feelings, and all the scenery words are emotional words. In the poet's eyes, the chrysanthemum seems to be shrouded in sadness and smoke, and the dew on the orchid seems to be the tears when it cries. This close-up is really unreal and extremely sad, which is a portrayal of the sad, confused and lonely mentality of the lyric hero. The sentence "It's cold at dusk" turns the brush strokes from the garden back to the room. It seems that the swallow left because of the light cold at the curtain, but in fact the author's body feeling is also the author's heart feeling. "Swallow Qi Fei" is not only a scene with distinctive seasonal characteristics, but also the "Qi Fei" of the swallow highlights people's loneliness. It's not hard to imagine what kind of loneliness the author felt when he watched Shuang Yan whispering around the beam and chasing him through the curtain and left with him! The phrase "the bright moon is ignorant" further contrasts and sets off the bright moon. From another angle, the author accuses "the bright moon doesn't know how to leave sorrow and hate suffering"-the full moon is not round, so it is reasonable for the author to be extremely jealous and slightly picky about the bright moon.
The next movie is about going upstairs and overlooking. The phrase "west wind last night" adds a bit of desolation to the already sad and desolate atmosphere. West wind Fang Lie, green trees withered; How can people be inferior when the wood is like this! "Looking to the end" not only shows its far-reaching vision, but also shows its long-term vision, which expands the realm of ci from both time and space. But "look at the end of the world", I can't see the end of the world. In that case, we can only send one book. "The mountains are long and the waters are wide, so we can know where to go", ending with a helpless question, giving people a feeling of long-lasting love and hatred. Wang Guowei compared the word "west wind last night" with the words of Ouyang Xiu and Xin Qiji as the first of the three realms of textual research, which shows the name of this word.
That is, the first realm is: last night, the west wind withered the green trees, and I went up to the tall building alone and looked at the horizon.
The second realm is that the belt is getting wider and wider, with no regrets, which makes people haggard for Iraq.
The third realm is: looking for him in the crowd, suddenly looking back, the man is in the dim light.