I don't know how long it has been since I went to see her. There's just that blur of childhood, her face with what looks like shiny silver threads, with the years settling in.
"Jingle bells", a phone ringing in the morning woke me up from my sleep, and the moment I hung up the phone, I froze. It felt like the world was drowning me in an instant - my grandmother had been in a car accident. When I rushed to the hospital, she was already lying in the intensive care center. Tears welled up in a flash. With my grandfather's instructions, I went back home to get a change of clothes.
It was the same old house, laden with the flavors and memories of my childhood. Hesitantly, I walked up to the attic. Walking into the bedroom, the smell of memories came out in a rush, it was her smell. Glancing over, I saw several large calendars on the desk, torn messily into one by one. The front of the calendars were ordinary, with ordinary dates, while the words on the back froze me in my tracks: "February 2003, Nui Nui went home with her parents today." "May 2003, Nui Nui called today to tell me to put on more clothes." "July 2004, Nui Nui had her promotion exam today." "February 2005, I looked at my daughter's picture today." "March 2005, my daughter hasn't come back for three months." "February 2006, my daughter hasn't called me for a long time." I flipped through all the torn calendars like crazy. There were details of the days and events that had happened between me and her, the hours and minutes. I couldn't believe it, but it was heartbreaking to remember how, in front of the dim light, she had written this little bit at her desk with her old glasses. How long have you not been back, how long have you not made a phone call, is it the busyness of school, or is it the estrangement and indifference of growing up? And how does she put her hopes on this calendar, looking forward to my return to being the pampered little girl of my childhood?
I packed up this calendar, which was full of her hopes, and returned to the hospital. Looking at the hospital bed in front of her head wrapped in white gauze is still in a coma, tears once again out of the dike. I held her hand tightly and silently pleaded with God not to take her away from me.
The face on the bed is still the same face that loved me and loved me when I was a child, with its shiny silver threads and the calmness between its brows. I quietly put the last calendar paper, which was full of my heart's desire, into her hand, and murmured: "Grandma, you quickly wake up, the inamorata is coming to see you, the inamorata won't let you count the calendar any more, wake up ......
Floral Love Tears
I'm a little plant, from the earth I am a little grass, sucking milk from the poor mother of the earth, slowly walking through my childhood, out of my dreams, longing for hope. One day I put down to labor to find the true meaning of life and enter the network to the text to tell the growing pains and that forehead on the gully of the brilliant, see
Those joyful and joyful flowers and grasses as if intoxicated in the online weaving a variety of sadness and joy and sadness, dashingly watched as they stirred up the stage of the misty flashing lights and sang,. Look at those pale grass of the dignified and quiet, strong grass tenacity and tenacity, see them for a tenderness, a kind of entanglement and put down the reality of the false mask to the stamen to tell the love and feeling of infatuation. Look at those charming all kinds of small flowers in different ways to show the sadness and splendor of life.
Until one day, there was a lily she floated to me with fragrance, let me go to stop her naivety. She said there is a kind of confusing bright light on my head, and she wanted me to share it with her, so that the warm wind smoked me to the point of being lost, and extended the roots to her to gently touch the dream of living a perfect life of confusion. I was mesmerized to froth and bathe into that transmission of the mind, a gentle flow. Late one day, I suddenly found the distance between the flowers and grass, found that the intersection of the brilliant transient. I was afraid, my heart seems to fall into the ice cellar. I climbed and climbed with difficulty, hoping to get myself out of that kind of indulgence in the divine. But instead, I recalled the fragrance of that former day. I cried out to the long sky, but the beings were indifferent and the white clouds flowed. Only the lonely me was there with a heartbreaking regret. The happy and exuberant lily is finally tired, so tired that she stints on emitting her fragrance. But her beautiful heart but care about the gentle flow of the past, worried about leaving and will make the grass sad, always over there barely revitalize the petals. Inside has been empty grass a blank, phantom lost to ponder where is the other side of the soul. The withering grass is always in the dream to go to God, quietly escape in the side to watch, indifferently dedication to the blessing of the soul and in the daylight to absorb the little light. But the flowers and grass on the difference between different attitudes to life, that time and space distance of regret, that youth is no longer helpless and sadness, is still suffering from time to time with the toughness of the thin bladder of the grass, bursts of pain and worry about the depression so that he wandered painfully between the network and the reality.
The network ah, you shorten the time and space, the distance of the heart, you also killed those for the pursuit of the perfect life of the tribe and carefully woven dream passionate wanderlust.
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I desire to return to innocence
Is the world really that complicated? Ever since I learned, it seems that everyone and everything is teaching me two words: lie and cheat. How I long to return to innocence, so that at least living will not feel so tired. Sometimes, I really feel tired of living in this world, and there are always impermeable walls and invisible lines between you and others. I would like to return to innocence. I envy children very much, they can do whatever they want and say whatever they want. The friendship between children is also the most sincere, all the feelings are engraved in the eyebrows, all the heart can be spit out. But why can't they do that when they grow up? It was when my family was about to move, one day, mom and dad were not at home, the aunty who collects the water bill came, I told her that mom and dad were not at home, then, I could not contain the excitement, said to her, "My family is about to move." Unexpectedly, she was furious when she heard that, "What, you want to not pay the water bill just because you're moving? No way." After that, she closed the door with a bang. I was so puzzled and aggravated, I didn't mean it. Mom came back, I cried loudly, mom asked me why, I told the story. My mom said, "Son, you're so stupid. Why did you tell her we were moving? You're making a fool of yourself." I couldn't understand for the millionth time, I just wanted to express my excitement, what was wrong with that? Once, I borrowed a bike from a classmate to go home to pick up my books, and she said she didn't have a bike today, so I thought, "Forget it, let's just walk back. But after school, I saw this classmate stepping on her bike and flying past me. I was really angry. If you don't want to borrow it, why don't you just say so and come up with a set of lies. Maybe some people do, sets of lies in the pocket, the time to use, casually pull out a to get rid of other people, how many layers of fog wrapped themselves, and others are bound to be the same when interacting with others. One night, someone called for my dad, who was sitting on the couch looking at the phone, and said to me, "Just tell them I'm not home." I said that, and the person on the phone asked, "Where did he go?" I said, "I don't know." The phone hung up, but my dad got mad at me, "Why are you so stupid? Why don't you just make up a place to go?" Yes, I'm too stupid to know how to lie and cheat and how to cope with the world. Is the world really that complicated? Ever since I learned, it seems that everyone and everything has been teaching me two words: lie and cheat. How I long to return to innocence, so that at least living will not feel so tired.
The Test of Responsibility
Every year, every month, every day, thousands of things come at people. In their busy lives, people are overwhelmed and exhausted. In spite of all this hardship, they always persevere. Because there is a heavy chain relentlessly on our body - responsibility.
In school, we study hard, which is the responsibility. At home, we help our parents to do some housework, this is the responsibility. Go out and do something for the society, this is the responsibility. In the world, the grass has a responsibility, the flower has a responsibility, the tree has a responsibility. No matter what kind of life, all have their own unshirkable responsibility.
Paying responsibility to oneself is also paying responsibility to others. In the country every year there are thousands of traffic accidents, occurring for various reasons, but after all, it is not the lack of responsibility? If the car driver has the mentality of being responsible for themselves and others, according to the rules of the system, then there will still be so many people lost their lives for nothing?
Responsibility is a commitment that weighs as much as Mount Tai. It promotes generation after generation of people diligently in their respective positions to dedicate. In this year, the country suffered a "SARS" attack, six million health care workers bravely rushed to the front line. They are valiant and fearless. In the battle with SARS, no one was afraid, no one retreated. No matter how terrible SARS was, it could not swallow the strong sense of responsibility of the medical staff. Patients came, everyone day and night, careful care; some health care workers fell, immediately someone to add up. In this no smoke and mirrors but more dangerous than the rain of bullets in the battle they did not live up to the country and the people put their high hopes. In the end, the "SARS" was restrained, which is with the dedication of health care workers day and night and that a strong sense of responsibility in exchange for. If they don't have a strong sense of responsibility, then I don't know how much longer this storm is going to blow, and how many more innocent lives are going to be taken.
The ancient Greeks said that people walk with a burden. The baggage contains family, career, friendship, children ...... through thick and thin, but can not discard any of them. Because it is written with two words: responsibility. In life, there are tests of responsibility everywhere. Unconsciously pick up a piece of waste paper is the responsibility to protect the environment; help the frail and sickly old people and children, is the responsibility to respect the old and love the young; for others to solve the problem, is the responsibility to help people. Responsibility is the foundation of society. Without it, a skyscraper will be easily shaken in the breeze. Pay responsibility to oneself, responsibility is strict instructor; Pay responsibility to others, responsibility is the guarantee of life and property safety; Pay responsibility to the country, that is the condition of social progress. Abandon it, feel the station temporary ease, but lost a lifetime of luster. Responsibility, is not to be discarded mission, it shoulders in people's body. Let each of us are rich in responsibility, to overcome with a sudden test that put!
Watchfulness
Poet Haizi once said, I want to have a house, facing the sea, flowers bloom in the spring, which will be a kind of what kind of quiet and peaceful ah, I was touched. < AN lang=EN-US> I remember when I was a child, I would raise my face when I walked through the shade of a tree and count the sun that fell in my eyes. But now my neck aches when I tilt my head up, and I feel like the sun is so harsh. If there is a villa now, facing the sea, spring flowers, I guess my field of vision can only be black and white papers. So Haizi, I can't reach your realm for the time being. Some people say that only the realm of all kinds of frosty sky appears to be free, and only the mentality of thick virtue can endure for a long time. Yes, why don't I want to be free, why don't I want to be long-lasting? Still clearly remember, standing in front of the threshold of 18 years old that a real pain. I thought I would always be the one in the campus rampage, cheek to cheek, thought I would always be the one holding the basketball sweaty teenager ...... but when I face the empty court, let it in my heart stepped out of a burst of the same empty after the pain, I know I was wrong. I didn't dare stay too long, didn't dare borrow anything in order to hurt my feelings, because waiting for me, there was a test at 6:30 pm. The somber days ran over my thin youth, crushing the sadness that couldn't weather the storm. Until someone spoke to me of the philosophy of the reef, the sun and moon through the sky, the river traveling on the ground, proud of the wind and waves, unwavering. When the tide goes out, only to show the true color of my true self. What kind of realm is this, I carefully experienced. I saw a street lamp, she tenaciously tore a corner of the night, coldly and proudly looking around. The night, by the side of the lamp slipped away with a low brow. The thin figure, the dim light, the high head, the disdainful look, she was waiting for something, was waiting for the coming dawn. My heart seemed to be torn apart as well. Watching for the dawn's street lamp, thank you for telling me the realm I should reach. I will stand firm and watch for the brilliant dawn, stalwartly.
Watch for happiness
As a father, in the face of his daughter's 18th birthday, I thought of such a day and such a night ......
Early winter, the warm sun boiled red the trees by the West Lake that had been green for a year. Whenever this colorful season comes, I feel the sluggish cold wind not only blew down the scorched yellow sycamore leaves, at the same time, also blew up a green leaf in my heart - my daughter's birthday is approaching. This year is even more special because it is her 18th birthday.
As a father, in the face of his daughter's 18th birthday, I think back to a daytime ......
April 26, 1975, when I also just turned 18 years old. Alone in Beijing. How do you spend your birthday? What with cakes, wishes and birthday presents, none of which were fashionable at the time. And my thoughts on this unusual birthday, just like the candlelight curling up and rising spiritual glory like flickering and flashing. After all, it is the 18th birthday, there are always some ideas. So I went to a photo studio in Wangfujing and took a two-inch photo
"Raise your head, lift your chest, open your eyes a little wider, and smile." Simple and mechanical instructions from an artistic photographer. I completed a mechanical smile in front of an emotionless camera.
Flat head, lapel shirt made of khaki, lined with a face with deliberately wide open eyes. I scrutinized the photo, my mind comparing it to another image - me inside the mirror above the faucet in the water closet - the mirror I looked into from time to time when I was alone, mobilizing all the nerves in my face until I was satisfied. Soon after, my mother looked at the picture and said, "It looks quite like Zhuang Zedong."
And so it was that the owner of the photo, with a two-inch black-and-white photograph, commemorated his 18th spring. At the same time, also said goodbye to the turbulent childhood and teenage years, with a handsome "Zhuang Zedong" face, began his adult life course ......
As a father, in the face of his daughter's 18th birthday, I think back to this night ......
Eighteen years ago today, I escorted my wife to the door of the delivery room. We looked into each other's eyes, and our gazes were full of affection. She turned and moved forward - knowing that behind her there were fiery blessings as she went to bring a little life into our home and into a new world.
After three anxious hours, a "white angel" flashed past with a baby in her arms. "It must be him/her, my baby!" I was confident at the moment.
Soon, the "angel" came out. I greeted her and timidly asked, "Excuse me, is it a boy or a girl?" She was busy changing her shoes, did not raise her head, only said softly: "It's a girl ......"
Ah! It was as if I heard a chime of dawn. Thank God! I had a daughter, I was a father!
It is because of this night that every day of the next 18 years has been spent in parenting, pulling, exercising, and also communicating ...... Of course, there is also happiness, joy, and good hope ......
As a father. Faced with my daughter's 18th birthday, I thought of such a day and such a night. I give them to her as a gift, may she receive them and treasure them.
18 years old, I said to myself: when I was small, I often wondered, when will I grow up? Without realizing it, I am already 18 years old. It feels a little unbelievable, a little unreal.
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Then how to review the meaning of the question? The first step in reviewing the question is to determine the style. Judgement of the genre should pay attention to the following rules:
(1) The literal nature of the narrative essay question generally involves the six elements of the narrative essay. Such as "National Day Night" involves the time, "on the way to school" involves the location, "my house guests" involves the location, characters, events, "hometown has changed" involves the development of things and the end. The title directly with "people", "things", "remember" and other words, it is more of a sign of the narrative essay.
(2) argumentative essay title will often have "discussion", "thesis", "talk", "defense" and other words. "and other words, but also by the" ...... The revelation", "from ...... thought", "from ...... Speaking of" and other phrases. Some argumentative essay titles are themselves a sentence indicating a point of view, such as "small things should not be underestimated", "do not fear difficulties", it is even easier to judge.
(3) the examination of the illustrative essay is rare, and even if there is, generally there are hints about the style. Application essay test questions, on the other hand, clearly required to write notices, announcements, letters and so on.
2. To see the requirements of the topic. General essay questions are in the "requirements" in a style, number of words, expression, etc. made clear provisions, must be "requirements" this content clearly, and strictly enforceable can not be forgotten.
3. pay attention to the implied content of the title
The requirements of the examination questions are clearly put forward at a glance, must be done without error, but some of the requirements are implied in the surface of the text behind the need for candidates to realize. For example, the sunshine in "growing up under the sun", of course, does not mean the sunshine of nature, should be understood as the party's care, the collective warmth, the affection between family and friends and so on. My footprints" question is also never to describe the real footprints, but should be written on the road to growth, progress in the process of meaningful events. Some of the material provided in the essay questions, more attention should be paid to the use of generalization, derivation, analogy and other methods, to carefully analyze and understand the title of the metaphor or symbolism.
Composition skill 2: proper intention
After the examination of the topic, it is necessary to make a proper intention according to the requirements of the topic. The so-called intention, is the center of the article, the main idea. In the narrative, "intention" is the article by writing about the central idea to express; in the argumentative essay, "intention" refers to the establishment of the central thesis of the article.
There are three main requirements for the intention:
One is to be clear. The article praises what, criticize what, advocate what, against what, should be clear, not obscure, ambiguous.
The second is to be correct. The standard rating of the composition of the examination on the intention of the requirements are: narrative essay to "healthy thoughts and feelings", argumentative essay to "correct viewpoints", which is the most basic requirement, to be practical.
The third is to strive for novelty, profound, creative. This is on the basis of the first two higher requirements. The article should strive to write a new idea, write a depth, do not repeat too much others have said many times the topic, do not talk about things, shallow. Also pay attention to the intention of the times and relevance.
Composition skills 3: writing an outline
After the center of the article to determine down, we should consider the choice of materials, how to organize materials, how to structure the whole text. An important thing to do in this thinking process is to prepare an outline. Like building a house before the drawing of good plans, writing before the article to build a shelf, the review of the topic, ideas, ideas in the implementation of the things listed in the text. So, the process of writing an outline is actually cleaning up the ideas, arrange the material, the process of organizing the structure.
The outline should really reflect their own thinking, to achieve a clear, distinct, concise, highlighting the main points of each part of the article. As for the arrangement of the fine details of the article, can be further implemented in the writing process. In the process of writing, found that the outline is inappropriate, but also can be further revised.
There is no fixed format for writing an outline. Due to the different styles of writing, the outline should be written differently. For example: narrative essays can be written in the order of time, space, or the process of the development of events; argumentative essays can generally be in accordance with the introduction, the thesis, the conclusion of the three major parts of the shelf, and reflect the relationship between the argument, the argument; illustrative essays should be to seize the characteristics of the object of the description of the spatial, or temporal, or logical order of the writing.
Composition skills 4: composure
After a good writing outline, it is necessary to put pen to paper. In the line to pay attention to the following points:
1. Pay attention to language expression
An article with a clear center and reasonable ideas, the ultimate success or failure depends on the ability to use language. The basic requirement for language in the scoring standard of the examination is, "smooth, no sick sentences". Composition scoring standards in the language of a clear provision, the text has 1 to 3 sick sentences can still be assessed as a second category, there are 4 to 6 sick sentences belong to the third category. Therefore, the smoothness of the language is extremely important. All kinds of different styles of language requirements we have specific instructions in the previous sub-styles of guidance, and will not be repeated here. Regardless of which style, the language is accurate and concise must be done.
2. Accurate use of punctuation.
Punctuation is an essential part of the article. Inaccurate use of punctuation may lead to ambiguity in the text; the use of punctuation is not standardized, will affect the expression of the whole article. Therefore, the line should be given enough attention. The use of punctuation should pay attention to the rules, such as: a period, question mark, exclamation point, pause, comma, semicolon, colon can not be placed at the beginning of a line; quotation marks, parentheses, the first half of the book mark can not be placed at the end of a line, the second half can not be placed at the beginning of a line; dashes and ellipses should account for the two frames, a dash or an ellipsis can not be divided in two lines. The ellipsis should be full of six points and so on.
3. Writing clearly and neatly, do not write misspelled words.
The writing of the composition, directly affecting the overall impression of the marking teacher, also affects the composition results. This point, the candidates must have enough knowledge. Essay scoring standards, typos every 2 words deduct 0.5 points, up to 3 points; full text writing extremely scribbled so that it is difficult to recognize, deduct 2 points, the text of scribbling or incorrect formatting deduct 1 point. Do not underestimate this 1 point, 2 points, sometimes, this small difference in points may directly affect the final results of your higher education. Writing neatly standardized is not a day's work, should be in the usual strict requirements, conscious training.
4. Pay attention to time, limit the number of words.
Generally speaking, in the whole process of composition to pay attention to three times. Once before the start of the composition, take a look at the available composition time **** how much time, according to the total time to determine the speed of the line; once in the initial idea is completed, to see how much time is used for the formal line; the third time in the body to write down half of the time to see how much time is still available, so as to decide whether to unfold the whole plan, whether it needs to be compressed and adjusted to simplify the content.
The number of words in the essay, the topic is generally clearly defined, there are roughly three cases: one is the upper limit, such as "not more than how many words", "in how many words"; the second is the lower limit, such as "not less than how many words". These two cases must be strictly enforced to limit the number of words. Third, the upper and lower limits are stipulated, such as "around", "between", etc., the magnitude of the left and right depends on the middle figure itself: generally speaking, 100 to 200 words, should not be greater than 10 words; 300 to 500 words, should not be greater than 20 words; 600 to 800 words, should not be greater than 20 words; 600 to 800 words, should not be greater than 20 words; 600 to 800 words, should not be greater than 20 words. to 800 words, each should not be greater than 30 words (punctuation should be counted).
The number of words in the essay, in the overall layout should be in mind. Generally speaking, the main part of the proposition essay should account for 70% of the whole text, the beginning and the end of each accounted for 15%; to the material composition, the beginning to quote the material, the beginning part can be increased to 25% to 30%, the main part of the body at least to ensure that 65%, the end can be appropriately reduced.
Composition skills 5: check and revise
After the article is written, be sure to check and revise. Revision of the article, in principle, should be from the ideological content, structure, language three aspects, but the examination essay in writing after the completion of the composition is unlikely to have time to make major adjustments, changes, so the focus of the revision should be on the surface of the problem. The omission of words, misspellings, aliases, sick sentences and other faults should be corrected in a timely manner, so that they are reduced to a minimum, with a view to avoiding undue losses. A simple and feasible way to revise is to "read silently". The first thing you need to do is to read it word by word, and find the problem at any time to modify it.
The essay on the field is a limited time, but the quality of the answer depends on a long time before the examination, reflecting the candidate's usual language learning skills. Therefore, in order to achieve satisfactory results in the field answer sheet, work in the usual. If there is a "secret" of composition, it is Mr. Lu Xun said: "to see more, think more, read more, write more."