The first language "climb Yueyang Tower" lesson plan

1. Jiangnan which three famous buildings?

Tengwangge in Nanchang, Jiangxi, Wuhan, Hubei, Yellow Crane Tower, Hunan, Yueyang Tower, known as the "Jiangnan three buildings". (and "Penglai Pavilion in Shandong" and into the "Four Great Buildings") which has been known as the "Dongting world water, Yueyang world building" reputation of Yueyang Tower, with its majestic momentum and lofty magnificent style, throughout the ages has attracted many writers and artists to the building.

2. How many sentences can you recite to describe Dongting Lake?

① Qu Yuan: "Curling up the autumn wind, Dongting wave Ruoxi wooden leaves."

② Liu Changqing: "The waves are floating, and the sun is not in the middle of the stream."

③ Xu Tang: "There is no place to look around, but there are mountains in the middle of the stream."

④ Meng Haoran: "The air is vaporizing Yunmengze, and the waves are shaking Yueyang City. The waves shake Yueyang City."

⑤ Du Fu: "Wu and Chu in the southeast, and the universe floats day and night."

⑥ Liu Yuxi: "Looking at the emerald waters of Dongting Mountain, a green snail in a silver dish."

⑦ The poet monk Ke Ming: "The water connotes the broad shadow of the sky, and the mountain rises high above the terrain"

3. How many famous couplets about Yueyang Tower do you remember?

① What is so strange about a building? The first is that the first time I saw the movie, the second is that I had to go to the theater, and the third is that I had to go to the theater, and the fourth is that I had to go to the theater, and I had to go to the theater, and I had to go to the theater, and I had to go to the theater. The first is the one that is not. The first time I saw this, it was a very good time for me to be a member of the team. Immortal? The first time I did not see all the people, so I was not able to see them!

You try to see: Dongting Lake south pole Xiaoxiang, Yangzi River north through the Witch's Gorge, Baling Mountain West to the cool air, Yuezhou City, east of the road to the rocky frontier: the retention of those who flow, the standoff, the town, there is a true meaning, ask who can understand it?

② after the music first worry, Fan Xiwen a few know; heard in the past on, Du ShaoLing can say poetry.

③The cave is eight hundred miles to the west; Huaihai south of the first floor.

④ The four sides of the river and mountains to the bottom of the eye; all the family's sorrow and happiness to the heart.

⑤ Why do you want to drink wine in the building if you can't let go of the dry world under your eyes; why do you want to recite poems to the immortals if you can swallow all the clouds and dreams in your chest?

Review of the author and his works

Du Fu (712 - 770 AD), known as Zimei (子美), Du Gongbu (杜工部), was a great realist poet of the Tang Dynasty in China. He is known as the "Sage of Poetry", and his poems are known as the "History of Poetry".

Poetry: "Three Officials" - "Stone Trench Officials", "Tongguan Officials", "Xin'an Officials"

"Three Farewells" - "Farewell to a Newlywed", "Farewell to a Newlywed", "Farewell to a Newlywed", "Farewell to a Newlywed". - "Farewell to the Newlyweds", "Farewell to the Homeless", "Farewell to the Aged"

"Spring Hope", "Spring Nights in the Joyful Rain", "Thatched Houses Broken by the Autumn Winds", and so on

Three, knowing the world, the background

After three years of the Tang Dynasty's Dali (768), Dufu went out of the gorges drifting across the two lakes, and the poem was The poet climbed Yueyang Tower and looked at his hometown, touching the scene of the work of feelings. The poet was fifty-seven years old in 769, only two years before the end of his life. At that time, the poet was in a difficult situation, miserable, old and frail, suffering from lung disease and wind paralysis, left arm paralyzed, right ear has been deaf, poor and sick, plus no hope of returning to the north, the whole family living in a small boat, along the Dongting Lake to the south drifting.

Four, recite and write the poem

This poem is extremely rich in content, feelings are also very deep, to read deep and slow.

The first line: from "heard" to "now on" up to several decades, contains the feelings of the vicissitudes of the world, read fast means different.

Junction: write Yueyang Tower scenery, read must have a long view of the intention, "day and night floating" three words should be read slowly - seems to say "how many days and nights so past! ". This is for the following momentum.

Neck couplet: said personal, there are infinite sorrows, the tone is lower for good.

The final couplet: said the country, there is full of grief and anger, the tone slightly rising - this is the climax of the poem.

V. Appreciation of poetry

1. The first line: in the past, I heard of the Dongting water, now on the Yueyang Tower.

① Translation: In the past, I have heard of the vastness of Dongting Lake, famous in the sea, today I have the honor to climb the lake Yueyang Tower, overlooking the river and mountains.

② question: "heard in the past", "today on" expresses the poet's mood?

Early heard of the fame of the dongting, as long as there is a desire to enjoy a tour of the long-cherished, but helpless, frequent wars, the world drifted, to the twilight of the realization of the desire to see the famous lake, the surface of the first look at the Yueyang Tower of joy, in fact, the intention is to express the aspirations of the early years have not been able to realize the feelings. With the "former heard" for the "today on the" momentum, ultimately for the description of the Dongting Lake brewing atmosphere.

③ generalized brief analysis: the first focus on writing the vast surface of the Dongting Lake, oceanic hectares.

2. The third line: Wu and Chu in the southeast, Qiankun floating day and night.

① Translation: the vast expanse of the Great Lake to the southeast of Wu and Chu separated, the world like the lake in the vastness of the day and night floating and rippling.

② Question: "chap" "floating" two words well refined, good where?

"Chap", split. "Floating", floating and swirling. Vast thousands of miles of Wu, Chu two places because of the lake, all of a sudden broken into two, the momentum of how majestic; and the sun, the moon, the stars seem to be floating in the lake above, slowly traveling, the scene and how magnificent.

These two words write the vastness of Dongting Lake majestic, magnificent scenery, to the reader outlines a picture of the weather.

Cao Cao's sea "The sun and the moon, if out of which; starry night, if out of which." ("Viewing the Sea") embodies a "majestic and broad" mood, and Du Fu's couplet "air pressure for a hundred generations, for the five words of the most majestic". (Song Dynasty Liu Chenweng words) by Wang Shizhen praised as "male across the present and the past".

③ generalized brief analysis: the jaw focuses on writing the Dongting Lake momentum, swallowing the Qiankun.

3. Neck line: friends and family without a word, old and sick with a lonely boat.

① Translation: I drifted the rivers and lakes, friends and relatives do not know the old heard that there is no word sent to me; old and sick I ah, only live in a small boat.

② Question: the mood of the neck line, from broad suddenly turned into narrow, linked to the last line, try to analyze the role of this expression technique.

From the jaw line to the neck line, the mood of the poem shifts from broad to narrow, but the two lines are complementary to each other. The Qing Dynasty historian Pu Qilong said, "If it is not broad, the narrow place is not bitter, and if it can be narrow, the broad place is more empty." To the end of the couplet, the mood and turn to broad, the poem before and after each other, the mood of the poem constitutes a whole.

③ Try to analyze the thoughts and feelings expressed in the neck line.

The poet, facing the vast Dongting Lake, recalled his own political life, drifting to the ends of the earth, unrecognized talent, and could not get any spiritual and material assistance. In front of both the "old" and "sick", Yuju wooden boat, drifting Lake Hunan, is the world in danger, suffering. The bleak situation, the heart of grief, resentment, self-evident. The poet expressed a kind of sadness and hurt the world unlimited feelings of bitterness.

4. The last couplet: Rongma Guanshan North, with the Xuan sniveling.

① Translation: standing on the Yueyang Tower, looking north of the Guanshan Mountains, is still a war, the people are suffering; with the window, looking at the country, I can not help but tears run.

② question: the last link in the expression of personal feelings of grief and suffering on what changes? Embody the poet and author of what kind of emotion?

In the last line, the poet in the miserable . In the last line, the poet climbed the stairs to view the scenery, looking at the country's turbulence, their own country no door, can not help but tears, hard to stop. This feeling of sadness and sadness of the country and the world of the feelings of desolation hit the heart, the poem's mood from narrow to broad, from personal misery to think of the decline of the country. It can be seen that the poet always does not stay in the personal pain, he is always thinking of the country, reflecting the poet sympathy for the people's suffering and concern for the fate of the country (worry about the country and the people) of noble sentiments.

Sixth, explore and summarize the whole poem

1. The poet through the Dongting Lake, the vast ocean, the majestic scene depicted, touching the scene of sadness, the personal suffering, the country's distress and the natural world of the magnificent scenery up and down, showing the poet worried about the country and the people of the great heart. The mood is grand, the mood is sad, is to climb the Yueyang Tower of the ancient masterpiece.

2. Artistic Skills

① The mood is broad and far-reaching, the style is calm and heroic

② The poem contrasts strongly, and the battle is neat

③ The use of words is appropriate, and the meaning is profound.

VII. Practice

1. Read and recite the poem, and further understand the mood and feelings of the poem in reading aloud.

2. Read the following Tang poem and answer the questions.

Climbing to Yueyang Tower with Xia XII

Li Bai

The building looks at the end of Yueyang, and the river is very wide and the dongting is open.

The geese have led the sadness away, and the mountains have brought the good moon.

The goose leads the sad heart away, and the mountain brings the good moon.

The cool winds of drunkenness are blowing back the sleeves of the dancers.

[Note] In the second year of the Qianyuan era, Li Bai was pardoned on his way to exile and returned to Jiangling, where he traveled south to Yueyang and composed this poem.

① In the poem, the phrase "the geese lead the sadness to go" is written as "the geese leave the autumn river to go" in some versions. Which one do you think is better and why?

A: "The geese lead the sadness away" uses the anthropomorphism technique to write Li Bai's happy mood when he was pardoned for his exile. This sentence writes the geese intentionally for the poet to take away the heart of sorrow, the next sentence writes Junshan have feelings for the poet to the good moon, sadness to the joy, each other. "Citing sadness" is more emotional than "Don't Autumn River", and the moon is more original. (Meaning can be, such as the answer to the "geese go away from the autumn river", words can also be reasonable.)

② the third line of the "clouds even down the couch, the sky to receive the cup" used in the art of expression to do a brief analysis.

The third line of the use of hyperbole to write the Yueyang Tower towering into the clouds, while the two lines of the poem imagined magical, in the clouds even couch, in the sky, "line cup", wrote the poet as if he were in a fairyland scene. (The meaning of the right can)