Hahahahaha, weekly weekly exams, monthly monthly exams, and every time we take a language test we are always asked to write a six hundred words! Positive! Sincerely moving! The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on a new one, and you'll be able to do that!
But middle schoolers really don't have stories! They're young and inexperienced, and they've been running around from home to school since they were little, so how can they have so many touching stories to tell?
So then - everyone began a variety of pretentious, pretentious, embarrassing and elegant artistry ......
FamilyEvery word that mom said was simple, but thought-provoking!
"Be careful with every stitch." --Footwork and excellence.
"Put the oil before the vegetables." -To do things with a plan, sequential and unruly is a mess.
Mom always likes to eat the chaff and leave the good food for us.
Always see mom hide to eat leftovers, or clip the meat to our bowl after full of loving light.
Truth be told, the mothers of the post-nineties and post-zero-zeroes are not so miserable ......
Every time I went to the hospital with a high fever, the heavens always like to have a torrential downpour or a heavy snowfall ......
Dads or moms must have been I'm not sure if you're going to be able to get a good look at this, but I'm sure you're going to be able to get a good look at this, but I'm sure you're going to want to see this. Humph?
and mom quarreled away from home, mom was anxious to find me everywhere, I went home with a guilty conscience, mom saw me overjoyed, and said to me: "child, mom is wrong, mom understands you"
In fact, "you dare to come back? Just beat you so what?"
I will personally return home from work for the tired mom and dad to do "Full House"
In fact, I will only make noodles okay ......
Inadvertently see the crow's feet of the corners of the eyes of the mother, a silver hair, the rough palms can make me feel a long time
I will also see the mother's eyes, a silver hair, the rough palms can make me feel a lot of emotion.
I can make me feel emotional for a long time
Mom is old, I should grow up!
Mom washed clothes and dishes every day, and paid too much for this family!
Mom: You know better than that!
Dad either took me to climb the mountain or took me to ride a bike, and made sure to take the opportunity to educate me on "perseverance" and "independence.
Climbing the mountain must be very tiring, and dad will not hold you, but only taunt you in the front. Riding a bike is all about saying yes to holding on and then quietly letting go ......
Dad: I've done something so unethical?
Teachers worry about their students
Always inadvertently see the teacher late at night to correct a large number of assignments
Always inadvertently hear the teacher for a naughty classmates worried
This and the teacher's relationship with the classmates so good, must be the class representative it!
The school's security uncle and the hostess aunts get up the earliest and go to bed the latest, selfless dedication and obscurity
Tribute to the security uncle, the hostess aunts, the meal aunt, the sweeper!
You make my essay more small and shiny typical ......
The exam is always a little wrong, but fortunately the students in time to help
So-and-so students, although the general appearance, but his warm-heartedness y touched me. The beauty of a person must be the beauty of the heart!
"Grass in the cracks" and "broken into two sections of the earthworm will not die" is my never-ending light of hope
often encountered to pick up the things will be in the same place to stay honest little brother and open is the golden sentence of the old grandpa scavenger!
I'm not sure if I'm picking up garbage, but I'm actually very good at reasoning.
Every day there are beggar brothers looking for you to chat, is it that you are "bone amazing, is a hundred years of rare once in a while to practice martial arts wizards"?
Doing good things must have been tangled again and again, and then morality prevailed bravely
Being found must be "proud" and "shy", you may just turn off a faucet, but your inner play is very rich.
I must have realized more than three truths and made up my mind to change my ways
I understand all the truths, but ......
Selecting novel topics is the magic weapon to win the essay. The pretentious and stale topics can only make the correction teacher shake his head and laugh bitterly. If you do not move to write the school when it rains, mother to send umbrellas, mother's love; night writing homework mother to a cup of hot milk, also show mother's love; father had a car accident, mother remarried, write their own strong; due to a misunderstanding, the friendship of the boat overturned, they go to apologize when people have moved, write the precious friendship; write to learn how to ride a bicycle, must write the father behind the loose hand, he fell; write a sick, must write the father in the rain back to the hospital. I run to the hospital in the rain, the family has a car is not used; write inspired, must write snails climbing the wall, broken wings of the butterfly trying to fly, the corner of that one by the wind and rain ravaged the grass tenacity and so on. These are memorized essays on the selection, the lack of novelty, not to mention profound, the composition will not score high marks. Such a topic, but also false outrageous, completely self-defeating. Such content, not pragmatic, very pretentious, looking at it to laugh. Promote pragmatic and novel topics, can be a new form of new, can be new content, can be old content renovation, can also pursue the "fetishism", to bring others for my use, and so on. Junior high school students do not listen to the world, focusing on reading the book of the examination. Not a wide range of knowledge, life experience and less, on their own a smaller circle of life and learning, to write a novel content, it is not easy. But mastered the method, find a good point of entry, or can write a novel work. For example, you can renovate the content. Look at the "tortoise and the hare race", the first time the hare was proud, sleepy, the tortoise won. Renovation: the second race, the rabbit dared not be careless, the tortoise fell far behind. When approaching the finish line, the hare returned, letting the tortoise climb on top of him, the hare trotted all the way, and the hare and tortoise reached the finish line together - a win-win situation! It embodies the character of the hare that is indifferent to fame and fortune and the spirit of cooperation and mutual assistance, *** creating a harmonious society. How original! How flavorful!
First, pretentious low-level material: false, big, empty
(1) Specific analysis: false
No emotional basis derived from reality: for example, the beggar's poetry of the world.
(2) Specific analysis: big
No real flavor: singing praises and shouting slogans: such as, large-scale festivals of what they think.
(3) specific analysis: empty
No detail description of specific events: such as the whole piece is hard to tell a story, describing the details of the description of the picture.
Second, pretentious in the level of material: old, the same, cold
(1) Specific analysis: the old
All the stale material: such as, the bus to give up their seats, I was sick when my parents sent to the hospital in the rain, the test is not ideal teacher or mother's encouragement.
(2) Specific analysis: the same
All the same material: especially after the essay counseling, if there is a sharing of examples, then there must be several written in the essay are guided by the material.
(3) specific analysis: cold
All hat material: the general student that, as long as the first and last paragraphs to the topic of the hat, even if it meets the requirements of the review of the topic, which is the most indifferent understanding of the composition of the creation.
Third, pretentious high-level material: poetry, history, books
(1) Specific analysis: poetry
The creation of a large number of piles of verses, show literary style, in fact, not necessarily move the heart, in turn, some of the false feelings.
(2) Specific analysis: history
The creation of the story of historical figures, instead of around the real thing, real experience, which belongs to the lack of "real me" of the set.
(3) Specific analysis: the book
The creation of the book excerpts from the story of the characters, instead of the "real me" of the life trajectory, only shallow thinking, lack of emotional life support.
More than 10 years ago, I taught the graduating class, there was a student in the class. The first three years of each mock exam, he wrote an essay, I really admire him, he can render his family situation almost miserable, the experience of their own learning rendered into a very inspirational. Fooled me every time is to give him the highest score, every time I thought he wrote the essay are true feelings reproduced, every time for such a small teenager, actually shoulder so much family pressure to strive to study, excellent results. This child then went to a university in the northeast with excellent grades.
Later I realized that I had been cheated. What's even more funny is that I'm in a village with this kid and I actually know very little about their family's situation.
He said his mother was chronically ill for years and needed to drink medicine to maintain a normal life. But then I realized that his mother's age is not much older than mine. In his essay, he said that his father was a worker who had been laid off for many years and had no formal occupation. The family lived in a dilapidated house given to them by his grandparents when his mom and dad got married. The truth was that the family had a large four-room house that had just been renovated and was said to have cost nearly 300,000 dollars. And his father relies on his skill at winding motors to earn at least 100,000 a year.
After learning the truth, I was very moved to read his essay and feel ashamed, I train students how so inconsistent, do people and essay two layers of skin? He was able to write about his solid family situation in such a miserable way, and repeatedly used it in his essay material, constantly trying to deceive the teacher's sympathy. By the way, because of his excellent grades that year, the school even applied for him to be a poor student.
When I was in elementary school, I took the final exam, and the essay question - my ideal, I wrote: I want to be an angel, traveling around every day, and I don't have to study. What a true ideal, but this essay got a very low score.
My mother helped me to analyze the reason, the reason why the score is low, because the central idea is not positive enough, your ideal can be an angel, but after the angel, you should go to help the people who need help, alone is not as good as all the fun.
So to the middle school, my composition has always been a clear intention, noble character.
At any time the composition must have emotion, emotion is the life of the composition. But the composition needs to be emotional, never to be pretentious, this is a taboo composition.
As for the middle school essay can be pretentious to what extent? I can only say that there can be more emotion, not even a little bit of pretense. Because pretense is not true, is a kind of artifice, more to give people a kind of emotionally false perception, so the composition must put an end to pretense, and the need for authors to put more emotion, to make the language more touching, more vitality.
Yes, many of our current students not only lack the vision of beauty, but also lack the ability to discover and perceive the awareness of emotion, and always feel that the composition has no feelings, because the composition itself does not move themselves, and how to move others? Therefore, students in writing, must mobilize their own emotional world, with a grateful heart to be grateful for everything, with the continuous enrichment of their own emotions, with the heart to experience and feel everything in the world, take the initiative to melt in the society and its life, everything in the world is sentimental, depending on whether we have the ability to catch the emotions of the keen emotion and the expression of emotion!
All of the text must be emotional, and more emotional for the text. Especially when the examination, as far as possible to express their true feelings, the readers never feel that the students essay too much emotion, therefore, seize the emotion will make the composition has a better foundation! The first thing you need to do is to get a good understanding of what you are doing!
Hello, here is my answer.
First of all, I personally don't like the way you ask. I'm not sure I like the way you're asking this question, but I'm not sure I like the way you're asking the question. For example, when you talk to your friends, you may come across the word "pretentious". For example, your friend is not a certain brand of products do not use, you may say "pretentious", so I personally believe that the "pretentious" word is very sensitive, and the use of the scope is limited.
The following I say the problem of writing essays, must be the teacher in the school regulations. Students have to write an essay on a certain topic in a certain format according to the requirements of the exam, so they usually pay too much attention to the form and structure and neglect to polish the content. It is the content of the essay that is crucial. I compare writing an essay to burning a "dish", my content is like "ingredients and accessories", the so-called form and structure is only the order of the ingredients to add, which students should pay special attention to, to avoid the composition of the empty and boring and shouting slogans. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on a new pair of shoes or boots, and then you'll be able to get your hands on a new pair of shoes or boots, and then you'll be able to get your hands on a new pair of shoes or boots.
So how do middle school students write great essays?
First of all, we have to pay attention to the usual readings. The students are in the campus, the lack of social experience, the main source of experience comes from books and school family teachers parents teach, but the school and family environment is limited, more rich content also comes from the excellent literary works. Students in the enrichment of extracurricular reading at the same time, but also increased insights, for the understanding of life, your understanding of a more profound, persuasive in the article, rational, logical, more persuasive to impress people, cause **** Ming.
Contact the reality, find the beauty around. Many students in the writing of the text, will quote ancient quotations, or celebrity examples, which I personally do not oppose, is always a little bit uniform. Literature is higher than life and from life, a day is not boring and banal simple repetition, as long as the students carefully experience, every day there are little touching small things happen, coupled with the network is now developed, the students of the material is a lot. Don't borrow every time those who use the rotten street of the poem, quotations and aphorisms, biographies and so on, too common, too with the flow.
Master the connotation of the article, the theme is clear and prominent. Exam essay and write a diary is not the same, write a diary you can east a head of a stick where you want to write to where, writing an essay is a time regulation, through the extraction of the material processing and other processing, which should have a kind of ideological and spiritual connotation of the sublimation of the soul of the article. The concept of the "I'm not sure" is the same as the "I'm not sure" is the same as the "I'm not sure" is the same as the "I'm not sure".
There are many other ways, such as the subject matter, the degree of novelty of the article, the times. The first thing I want to do is to make sure that I have a good idea of what I'm talking about. The use of rhetorical devices must match the format of your article genre, for example, you write an argumentative essay, you use a very large number of metaphors, which is not very appropriate, because metaphors are difficult to persuade people. Students need to observe more, think more, experience more, summarize more, practice more, I believe it won't be long before you will form your own style of composition, your article will be refreshing, unforgettable.
The most common in our class is to write about the death of a family member
Even the teacher took this matter to flirt before, most students will be more emotional to write plus the death of their family members, the teacher said during the online class, in the composition of the most real emotions, the teacher will be able to experience out, so most of the teachers will know that it is not true
This person **** know, do not have to say it again.
But I used to dislike this phenomenon, and now I feel a little more open to it.
With our grown-up minds, exposed to more great literature, it's probably too strict to look at middle schoolers' essays.
Even high school essays are pretentious aren't they.
But we all know that the game rules it as it is. Maybe when we were kids we saw things as so pretentious too.
When we were kids, we wore red scarves, not also a sense of pride?
At that time, the emotion was real, and not so pretentious.
This is the first time I've ever seen a person with a red scarf, and I've never seen a person with a red scarf.
Then let the experience teach us to be less pretentious. When you are an elementary school student, you may want to think about elementary school students.
I don't think it's a question of pretension, which is related to their usual accumulation, if you usually pay attention to the accumulation of materials, see more essays, and then write at least not no point to write.
In fact, composition is to write more, see more, more accumulation, do not wait for the teacher to assign homework before you start to write, usually more of their own to write write, write to the teacher to take a look at the end of help you modify. This will be a great enhancement to your writing ability.
So don't say that you can't write about things you haven't experienced, you have to rely on the editor, you know.
Previously pay attention to more accumulated material , to write can be used directly.
Don't get caught in the middle of something that doesn't exist and can't be written. You write a good article, no one will go to the field to verify the truth of what you write, understand!