1. Composition on "Climbing that Mountain"
Over the mountain, the mountain turned into a plain with bright sunshine. -inscription
Looking at the towering peaks in front of me, I can't help but think of two words-frustration. I remembered Gide's words: there is a whole life between a person and his ideal.
In this long life, frustration seems to be fate, doomed fate. So I saw-Lu You sitting alone in her skirt, sighing the sorrow of the times alone, sighing that "the heart is in Tianshan, and the old is in Cangzhou"; Li Bai strolled through the mountains and sang the helplessness of "I am willing to cross the Yellow River, and the ice-choked ferry will climb the snow-capped mountains"; Qu Yuan wandered by the river, looking up at the sky, singing the feeling that "the road is long, but it's Xiu Yuan, so I'll go up and down".
Setbacks are inevitable, and mountains will always appear inadvertently. At this moment, we should reduce the pain and climb the mountain. I heard that optimists see half a doughnut, while pessimists only see the hole in the doughnut. Enlarge the frustration and sesame becomes a black hole.
God always likes to play tricks on people. What a joke he played with Hawking and put him in a wheelchair. But he didn't flinch in front of this mountain, knocking with his hands: "I can still smile, I can still think, I still have two fingers to move, and I still have people I love and people who love me." Life has been sublimated at this moment.
It turns out that for those who are not afraid of setbacks, it is not that they have any unique heart, but that they accept setbacks modestly and shrink back. For them, the mountain of "setbacks" is just a grain of dust.
The mountains on the road of life are always irresistible. Maybe you choose to bypass the mountain, but when the fire of life is about to go out, you find that your bag is empty, with only a string of illusory footprints behind you. Open the photo album of life, leaving a cold face and a string of tears of regret. And narrowing the pain, facing the mountains and advancing despite difficulties, can "have a bright future."
Over the mountain, the mountain turned into a plain with bright sunshine. All the way to plain clothes, setbacks are gone, and mountains are gone, leaving a pure and dust-free heart. -endnotes
You can see the sea as long as you cross that mountain.
Teenagers hit the road early in the morning. The mountain road is covered with steaming grass and moisture. The boy's face and back are covered with sweat. He is out of breath because he has been walking.
You can see the sea as long as you cross that mountain.
When a teenager was young, when his grandmother put him to sleep, she often said to him like singing a lullaby, "Son, you can see the sea as long as you climb over a mountain behind our house!"
Among them, the phrase "a big mountain" is really remembered by teenagers. Actually, this sentence is obviously exaggerated. Because now I have climbed two or three hills like this, I still can't see the sea.
Despite this, the teenager still recited his grandmother's words in his heart like a spell and continued to climb.
You can see the sea as long as you cross that mountain.
Only a few steps away from the top of the mountain, the teenager began to run fast. However, standing on the top of the mountain and looking down, there is still a long mountain road ahead, ups and downs like waves, with no end.
The teenager stood firm with trembling legs and gathered strength again.
You can see the sea as long as you cross that mountain.
Nowadays, teenagers are bent on seeing the sea. The reason for this is a long story. One thing, however, is that whenever countless burdens are on their shoulders, teenagers will immediately think of the sea as a magnetic needle pointing to the north. "Move your feet to see the sea! I want to prove it. Can you really see the sea as long as you climb over a mountain? "
You can see the sea as long as you cross that mountain.
But there is still no sea. The boy almost climbed up the front of the mountain road with his hands and feet, still as before, an endless rolling mountain.
Forget it!
The teenager suddenly sat on the side of the road, thinking painfully. What did you get by climbing up and down the mountain road so hard? Continue to climb several other mountains. Can you really walk to the seaside? Who can tell me all this?
Regardless of the sweat dripping from his forehead, the teenager sat on the grass and was blown by the passing mountain wind, with mixed feelings. Slowly, a burst of fatigue swept over the whole body.
The sun rises gradually. The boy sighed heavily at the thought of the long journey home. At that moment, he suddenly seemed to hear the voice of a creature.
The sound comes from above. Looking back, a light flashed overhead.
A big white bird with long wings is flapping its wings slowly and flying over the hill ahead like a guide.
-It's a seagull!
The boy stood up suddenly.
There are seagulls here, which is undoubtedly close to the sea! In this way, the sky above that mountain road is really light blue and connected with the sea.
Can you really see the sea this time?
Nevertheless, he hesitated a little, still staring at the front with wide eyes. Suddenly, a white thing floated slowly before his eyes like a butterfly. The boy put his hands together and caught it. It turned out to be a snowflake-like feather.
This is the seagull's!
Although it is only a feather, it instantly turns into a huge wing in the hearts of teenagers.
You can see the sea as long as you cross that mountain.
Once again, the teenager gathered all his strength and sang softly.
However, it doesn't matter if it's not like this. Now, even if I have to climb three or four mountains ahead, I can definitely walk to the seaside and show you there!
The young man crawled slowly along the mountain road with a small feather in his hand. In his ears-perhaps in his heart-he has begun to gently echo the sound of the sea.
In our life journey, we often encounter mountains that hinder our progress. They will constantly block our way forward and make us lose our way. At this time, we must learn to climb, learn to climb, and be strong in life.
In primary school, I was diagnosed with a tumor in my body. The illness came so suddenly that I was sent to a difficult and nightmare climbing adventure before I was ready. I carried my backpack and walked hopefully on the road to the top of the mountain, leaving a row of lonely footprints on the snow-covered mountain road.
The white ward is monotonous and cold. I lay quietly in the hospital bed, upturned my head and silently counted the bubbles in the drip tube. The disease is eating away at my perseverance and physical strength bit by bit. My body feels hollowed out and time seems to have stopped. I stood on the mountain road and looked back down. Below me is the abyss. There is no bottom in the darkness. If I slip, I'm sure I'll break into pieces. My feet began to tremble, and cold sweat slowly oozed from my forehead and palms. I looked up timidly, but I couldn't see the steep mountain top and winding mountain road. But suddenly I saw a small black spot not far away. I got carried away with excitement and ran away. It turned out to be a girl and a climber. As if I had caught the savior, my eyes lit up again.
She is my patient, Xiao A. We are in the same ward, suffering from the same disease. It can be said that "brother and sister are in love, and they are in the same boat through thick and thin." She and I were both tortured by illness, destroyed by chemotherapy, and our faces were tired. Sometimes, two people "appreciate" each other's bald head and have fun in the bitter. On the mountainside, a snowstorm raged. Little boy and I, our weak bodies trembled slightly in the snow, and we struggled. Our sight is blocked by the snow, and I don't know where the top of the mountain is. I am desperate to climb this mountain, and my heart is full of pain. I can't hold on. ...
I was lying in a hospital bed, crying secretly, and I didn't have the courage to support it anymore. At this time, Xiao Ya pushed her wheelchair to the bed and sat quietly. I turned over and looked at her with tears on my face. She gently wiped away my tears and comforted me: "Over that mountain, you are the strongest one in life. Don't compromise with the disease and let it take away your young life. " I nodded, and she clenched her fist again and said, "Come on!" His eyes sparkled with hope. I also cheered up, clenched my fist and said, "Come on!" The two of us snuggled together, encouraged each other and sprinted to the top.
Her illness is getting worse and worse. When climbing a mountain, she often falls to the ground and looks pale, but she never mumbles or complains about the injustice of fate. She just gritted her teeth and persisted. I saw the courage and perseverance of the climber in her.
But that day, I cried. I will never forget the snow-white sheets covering her like snow. Why can't she climb to the top with me and watch the beautiful sunset, but she is forced to sleep in the snow? My tears are spinning in my eyes. When she left us, her eyes were wide open, perhaps because she failed to realize her long-cherished wish, or perhaps she hoped that I would continue to forge ahead! I am speechless, and her courage and persistence push me forward.
I climbed to the top of the mountain with her blessing, and the original ferocious and huge mountain of disease was climbed by me. I cheered proudly, and the beautiful sunset glow and sunset glow dyed the whole valley red, which was the blazing fire ignited by the persistent and brave heart of Xiao.
I will climb the mountains and obstacles in my life with perseverance and courage taught by my childhood until the end of my life. ...
Comments:
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Instructor: Xu
2. write a composition over that mountain.
Finally over the mountain.
I have always believed that "beyond the mountain is the sea!" Because as long as you pay, you get nothing. I have been pursuing my dream and never give up. "When I climbed to the top of the mountain that tempted me," I gave up halfway because of temporary laziness.
I was in grade three at that time. At that time, my writing was not very good, but there were many good students in my class. I am not convinced. I am determined to surpass them and become the best student in my class! I chased my mother to take a calligraphy class all day, but my mother couldn't beat me, so I had to sign up for a calligraphy class. I am dancing with joy.
Start class! I picked up a pen and studied with the teacher stroke by stroke. The good times are really short. In the blink of an eye, a class was finished. I left the classroom reluctantly because I wanted to continue my study. I don't want to leave like this. In this way, I had one class, two classes, three classes ... slowly, I began to get tired of it. I don't want to stay there because it's too boring. I don't want to stay there for a minute. I don't even want to have a look. My mother seems to see what I'm thinking. My mother pretended not to understand and said to me, "How are you studying?" ? You seem to really want to learn well! Do you want your mother to see your hands? Mom is looking forward to it! I want to see how my lovely daughter is getting on with her studies. I think my daughter is so smart, and she is learning well, right? "When you brush, your face turns red. I am ashamed because I didn't study hard. I replied in a low voice, "Well, I study well, but …" "But what?" Mother pretended to ask questions again.
"Aren't you interested? This can't be done. As long as you make up your mind, you must never give up halfway. No matter what difficulties you encounter, you should try your best to overcome them, instead of flinching when you see them. Would you like to be a little turtle? " My mother's words completely woke me up. I must accomplish my goal, because only by giving can I get something. If you don't pay at all, where can you gain? I tried to enjoy practicing calligraphy. Gradually, calligraphy became an indispensable part of my life. Through my unremitting efforts, I participated in the national competition and won the second prize. I am already the best student in my class. I am proud of this decision, and I also want to thank my mother for her education. Without these words, I wouldn't have achieved so much!
I finally know that "after climbing countless mountains and overcoming disappointment again and again, you will eventually climb to the top of this mountain, and on the other side of this mountain is the sea, a brand-new world that instantly lights up your eyes ..."!
3. Go over that mountain
The journey of life is like climbing a mountain. The peaks are always covered with snow and smell cold.
Life in junior high school is so beautiful and full of so many challenges.
It turns out that in my carefree life, I am so lively and cheerful, just like a teenager chasing the wind, so free.
But soon, someone came into my life and took root in my mind. I fell in love with a girl. But at the same time, it became so horrible. On the court, my friends gradually left me, and my eyes became dull, no longer full of fantasy and vitality. ......
Maybe this is just the beginning of a nightmare. ......
My grades have plummeted, and the voices of my classmates often ring in my ears. When I looked up, I saw their white eyes were like dead fish. After that, I dare not look into their eyes again.
Darkness and loneliness surrounded me. The world that originally belonged to me became a mess because of the intervention of a girl. My beloved things disappeared before my eyes, and even my sister who loved me the most ignored me. Finally, she and I were left sitting in the corner, accompanied by only the cold and the slender shadow ..... Everything changed.
If I'm climbing a mountain, the mountain is too high to see the end forever. If it is the next rain, it has been raining too hard for too long. ......
Therefore, I want to let go of all my likes and agreements for her. Although I know it is difficult, I want to erase this darkness. Forget it. Perhaps, only in this way will my soul be liberated.
I began to seek the help of teachers and the understanding of parents, because I was wrong. Therefore, teachers and parents began to guide me carefully, helping me step by step out of the deep valley and taking me to see the long-lost sunshine. ......
Thank you.-Thank you for your understanding and your love.
The rain finally stopped, the dark clouds began to disperse, and the sun shone all over the earth again, on my face and washed away the dust that had accumulated on my face for a long time. The sunshine is always so warm and comfortable, and the arctic ice in my heart begins to melt and become a small river, washing away the dirt in my heart.
Happiness and sunshine came back to me. This feeling is very good. ......
Now, I have stood on the top of the mountain and experienced that "once I climb to the top of the mountain and have a look, I will see that other mountains are short under the sky." . Let bygones be bygones, and the glory of life will bloom again here!
4. Go over that mountain
It worked! He did it! He climbed the mountain and the mountain of the soul.
He is a lonely little boy who grew up at the foot of the mountain. He lost his left leg because of a serious illness and was destined to spend his life in a wheelchair. Because of his experience, he became very lonely, afraid to face strangers and setbacks and difficulties.
On this day, his father took him to the foot of the mountain. He looked up and trembled all over. The towering peaks go deep into the clouds, and the Woods on the mountainside appear deeper and deeper. My father pointed to the mountain and said to him, overcome it! He shouted in panic; "No, it's impossible!" Father with a straight face, severely reprimanded him; Nothing is impossible, overcome it! But he still didn't have the courage to conquer the mountain and cried and hugged the wheelchair. His father had to push him home.
When he got home, his father called him to him and said to him earnestly; "Life will inevitably encounter some setbacks and difficulties. These difficulties stand in your way to success like mountains, but you can't be afraid or shrink back in front of these mountains, but you should face them bravely, work hard, overcome them and conquer them. In this way, you can see the light when you climb over the mountains. If you can't climb up, you can only be caught in the middle of the mountains all your life, suppressed by the mountains all your life, and live in darkness forever. " Listen to your son.
The next morning, it was still a little dark. As usual, the father got up and found his son missing. He hurried around looking for the whereabouts of his son. Just when he was in a hurry, he seemed to remember something and ran away in a hurry.
He came to the foot of the mountain, when his son had climbed halfway up the mountain and his right leg had been scratched, but he still limped up unswervingly. Finally, he climbed to the top of the mountain, and the birds in the Woods chirped as if to congratulate him.
At this time, it was dawn and the sun came out. The warm sunshine shone on him and pointed out the direction for him.
5. Composition with the title "Over that Mountain"
The road of life is hard and long, just as it is 81 difficult for Tang Priest to learn from the West. However, as long as we break through the obstacles and climb the mountain, it will surely be another new world.
The first mountain represents morality. On the road of life, it is not enough to rely on a strong body if you want to go well. Morality is the basic criterion to judge whether a person is successful or not. Perhaps this "moral mountain" is just a small mound for you, but it is not easy to climb it easily. This is the first test of life, but as long as I pass it, I believe my understanding of "morality" will change dramatically.
The second mountain represents modesty. When I passed the moral test and stood in the valley smugly, the "mountain god" of "Modest Mountain" gave me a punch without hesitation: climbing the mountain does not mean success, but it means that you are standing at the bottom of the valley and starting a new round of challenges! I woke up suddenly and broke out in a cold sweat: yes, if it weren't for the reminder of the "mountain god", I might still be standing in the valley celebrating, and the good times might have flowed away inadvertently ... I am lucky, and I thank the "humble god" for reminding me: how can I be complacent at such an important moment? So I packed my bags and embarked on a new journey.
The third mountain represents persistence. After all kinds of tests, I finally crossed the "mountain of modesty". At this time, I realized that my mind has been honed to be extremely tough and nothing can stop me. But I didn't expect that when I climbed confidently to the middle of this unknown mountain, there would always be several huge stones falling like rain, knocking me to the bottom rudely. At first, I didn't care, just as a test, but with repeated failures, I was black and blue and had no fighting spirit. After repeated failures, I finally backed down and wanted to give up ... but at this moment, out of the corner of my eye, I suddenly saw a butterfly, which was desperately trying to get rid of the pupa shell that bound its wings. It tried to spread its wings again and again, but it was stuck in the pupa shell and could not get out. Once, twice, three times ... I can't bear to watch it. I just wanted to help it, but I saw the butterfly finally fly into the blue sky with hundreds of efforts! In a flash, I understood the name of this mountain-"the mountain of persistence", even a small butterfly knows how to persist. What about me? My eyes lit up again and I walked up the hill again. ...
"The road is long, Xiu Yuan, and I will go up and down." There are still many tests waiting for me after crossing this mountain. They are mountains, floods or wildlife ... but I'm not afraid. I firmly believe that after crossing that mountain, I will stand at a new starting point; Crossing that mountain, I will have a subversive understanding of the truth I insist on; I will gain a lot if I cross that mountain. ...