I. Teaching objectives:
1, with the help of a variety of methods to fully feel and understand the affection.
2, learn to use typical details of life to show affection.
Second, the focus of teaching: affectionate composition writing method guidance.
Three, teaching tools: multimedia
Four, the teaching process:
(a) Introduction: students must like to listen to the song, today the teacher let the students to listen to a song.
(2) listen to a listen: play Han Hong's "dawn", while the screen shows the lyrics:
It was an autumn wind so lingering reminds me of their pair of helpless eyes in the beautiful scenery accompanied by the place where I heard a loud bang shook the valley is that autumn and then can not see his father's face, he used his shoulders to lift the beginning of my rebirth of darkness tears stained with both eyes don't leave! Don't hurt me to see my mom and dad so far away leaving me in this strange world don't know what the future will still be risky I want to hold on to his hand mom told me that hope will still be there to see the sun come out mom smiled at the dawn of the day
Introduction of the story background: this is in last year's 3-15 evening party to play the Han Hong's "Dawn of the Day", which has touched hundreds of millions of TV viewers, but students know that this is the first time that I have ever been in the world. Behind the moving song, there is also a real, tearful story...? ......1October 3, 1999, in Guizhou Ma Ling scenic area, was running the cable car suddenly crashed, 36 passengers in 14 were killed. And just at the moment when the cable car slid down and was about to fall to the ground, a young couple, with their hands, lifted up their two-and-a-half-year-old son. In the end, the son Pan Zihao was saved, but the young parents lost their lives. In the moment of life and death, parents out of instinct, their first thought is not their own, to leave the hope of life to the child, this is the love of parents.
Love is mutual, there is such a love, will naturally make the child call "mother love me again"
(C) look at the "mother love me again" movie clip
(D) say a word: (This link encourages students to speak freely)
Listened to Han Hong's "Daybreak", watched the "mother love me again" movie clip, so that you think of a A part of your own experience: happy, sad, grateful, guilty ...... Maybe this person makes you unforgettable, maybe this thing makes you engraved in your heart, tell everyone to listen, okay?
(1) Ask the students to answer.
(2) Teacher summary: listening to your love story, the teacher is very touched. Teacher here also has a touching article to let the students read.
Wonderful clips to enjoy.
Walking across the street holding his mother
Fang Ge
...... to the vegetable market need to walk a section of the sidewalk, and then cross a road. It was the end of the day, and the street was crowded with cars and people hurrying along. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm not sure how much I'm going to be able to do this, but I'm sure I'm going to be able to do it," he said.
Crossing the street, it is the vegetable market. Mother suddenly stopped, she put the basket in the arm, free right hand, to me to reach ......
In a flash, my heart trembled. This is a how familiar action ah!
When I was in elementary school, I had to cross a road every day to get to school. My mother was worried about me, so she sent me across the street every day before turning back to work. When crossing the street, she always held my little hand in her palm, holding walking to the opposite side of the road, over and over again urged: "There is a car to do not cross the street", "cross the street to follow others together ...... "
More than twenty years have passed, the former small hand has grown into a pair of man's hands, the former young mother has wrinkles all over the face, thin fingers, but her hand holding action is still so skillful.
I did not hand over the hand, but stretched out a hand from the bend of her arm to take down the basket, carry in the hand, the other hand gently hold her hand, said to her: "When I was a child, every time I crossed the street, are you holding me, today crossing the street, let me hold you! The mother's eyes flashed with surprise, the smile rippled open, like an old farmer facing the harvest farmland, like a fisherman carrying a heavy fishing net ......
"Holding Mother Walking Across the Road" is very touching, right? Can the students analyze the reasons for the touching?
(E) discuss.
How to make the composition vivid and infectious?
Table discussion:
1, write a true story, personal experience.
Multimedia display of relevant quotations:
① "The first thing that touches people's hearts is their feelings" - Bai Juyi
② "If your feelings are a little bit unreal, the reader will read them out at once. I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do that. So be true to yourself, write out your true feelings." --Bing Xin
③The truth of the feelings, the language is not carved and crafted from the work. --Shen Deqian
2, grasp the emotional point, by the small things to see the true feelings.
3, through a variety of descriptions to show the characters
(6) Practice: use the descriptive techniques to reproduce a fragment of affection in your memory.
Students writing in the classroom, draw a few exchanges.
Teachers also with the classroom writing, and read their own composition.
Summary:
Sense
Home - loved ones Kindred spirits 1, write real people, personal experience.
2, grasp the moving point, by the small things to see the true feelings.
3, through a variety of descriptions to show the characters.
(VII) homework:
A mood, cohesion of a story; a feeling, engraved with a life experience. Through the above listening, watching, discussing, reading touching article, coupled with the students' heart perception, we must have been a thousand words in the heart of up, eager to use the words to express their feelings, then, please put your deep in the heart of the touching story poured into the tip of the pen, so that we can work together from the "story of love" in the understanding of the true meaning of the composition it. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty.
Requirements:
1, recall their own life, who accompanied you all the way.
2 "true love story" advocates "I hand write my heart", write true love.
3, the title of their own, not less than 700 words.
Here we end today's class with "Candlelight Mom"
Mom I want to say to you, the words to the mouth and swallowed, mom I want to smile at you, but the eyes are a little bit of tears. Oh mother, mother in the candlelight, your black hair is frosted, oh mother, mother in the candlelight, your cheeks are printed with this much worry. Oh mother, mother in the candlelight, your waist is so tired that it is no longer straight, mother, mother in the candlelight, why have your eyes lost their brilliance, mother, my daughter has grown up,
not willing to hold your lapel
walking through the spring, autumn, winter and summer, oh mother, believe me, my daughter will have her own daughter's repayment.
In the music the teacher recited with deep emotion: affection, is the warm sunshine that illuminates the world; is the tough bond between the mind and the heart of the maintenance ...... If you can fully enjoy the perfect affection in your life, then you can call yourself the happiest person in the world. I hope that the students will feel the affection and true love with their hearts. In addition, we also ask students to do something for their loved ones while enjoying their affection.
Expert Comment: The design of this lesson plan for the teaching process is relatively reasonable, the six links are quite compact, and most of the selected materials are suitable for the theme. The use of multimedia means of teaching can effectively regulate the classroom atmosphere and implement the teacher's teaching ideas. This lesson plan reflects a good integrity.
Inadequate: the presentation of the movie "Mama Love Me Again" is more controversial among the audience, and excessive exaggeration and rendering may cause students' resentment, making it difficult to achieve the effect of ****ing. Therefore, the selection of this clip is slightly inappropriate.
To "affection" as the topic of composition material
1, in the most helpless life, affection is the most lasting power, give us selfless help and rely on; in the loneliest emotional road, affection is the most sincere companion, so that we feel incomparable warmth and comfort; in the most helpless crossroads In the most helpless crossroads, affection is the clearest signpost, guiding us to successfully reach our goal.
2, simple, affection is just a small nest built by a few branches. But I'm even smaller, I can lightly drill into it at once, there is a bowl of water, cool, sweet, moisturize my thirsty soul; there is a bag of bulging, fragrant, fill my endless desire; there is a bed, soft, warm, soothe my inexplicable sadness; there is a pot of flowers, a picture, a poem, embellished with some exhortations, embedded in some entrusted... ...This is affection, a little nest that keeps me growing up.
3, affection, is a slant back guitar, the more to the depths of love, the more you can strum your heartstrings; affection, is a hanging vine, no matter where you are, it is always tightly holding your hand; affection, is a string of keys hanging in the neck, open a fan of melancholy doors and windows. Affection, in the eyebrow look between, shallow smile, in my a lyrical song.
4, affection, is Mulan for the father of the story; affection, is the mother of the three moves of the story; affection, is Bing two springs reflecting the melody of the moon.
5, affection is the rain, take away the boredom, leaving a light cool; affection is the wind, blowing away the sorrow, leaving a pleasant; affection is the sun, taking away the darkness, leaving the light. Affection is the greatest, no matter you are happy, frustrated, pain, uncertainty, it will always walk gently on your way, quietly accompanied by your life.
6, there is no "white head and death of mandarin ducks Pu" of the sensational, but also make the "sunset speechless for the move"; not "in the sky would like to be a bird, in the ground would like to be a branch" of the oath, but also to make the "sunset speechless for the move". There is no "in the sky wishing to be birds with wings, on earth wishing to be branches with branches", but also "the sky is long and the earth is long and the blood is connected without an expiration date" of the ancient eternity; there is no "like the double willows in front of the door, the branches and leaves do not leave each other" of the long time to keep each other, but there is "but I wish the people to be long, thousands of miles of **** Chan Juan" of the silence. Canyon" silent wish ...... falling snowflakes can not take away the frozen memories, through the space-time gravity into the years will not grow old, the buds like silent waiting, the setting sun like a reluctant to give up, in the heart of the vision, in the depths of the soul refracted two words --- "affection", "the heart of the world", "the heart of the world", "the heart of the world", "the heart of the world", "the heart of the world", "the heart of the world", "the heart of the world".
7, affection is a tree, everyone is a root, so that it absorbs nutrients forever; affection is a river, everyone is a tributary, so that it never dries up surging forward; affection is a fire, everyone is a firewood, so that it will never go out to warm the four sides.
8, in the face of failure and frustration, affection is a good medicine to fill your lost heart, and then regroup, which is a kind of courage; in the face of misunderstanding and hatred, affection is a cup of cool water, douse the fire in your heart, and then openly face, which is a kind of optimism; in the face of praise and flattery, affection is an awl, piercing your vain dreams, and then continue to forge ahead, which is a kind of warning; in the face of troubles and sorrows, affection is a burst of fire. and sadness, affection is a breeze, blowing away your messy thoughts, and then calm and relieved this is a realm.
9, affection such as water, so that the complexity of the filter to become pure; affection like fire, so that the bland through the calcination of the day to show the angle; affection is a poem, so that the tedium through the modification to achieve a mood. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on some of the most popular products and services in the world.
10, affection is like a river cut spring water, flow is the heart of the eternal thoughts of the traveler; affection is like a mound of fine sand, precipitation is the long years of accumulation of attachment; affection is like the night sky that the Big Dipper, guiding the direction of the lost lamb home.
11, what is affection? Is the sweet milk, feeding our growth; is the bright eyes, guiding us forward; is the gentle words, care for our hearts; is the harsh punishment, urge us to correct our mistakes. We can not be separated from affection, as high as the kite can not break free of the slender rope; we rely on affection, as the vines of the melon and beans entangled in the bamboo joints or fences; we have affection, as the cold wheat covered with a white snow quilt, warm as spring, happy as honey.
12, when the first horn of life blowing, affection is that swing in the mother's eyes in the tears, is that bloom in the face of the father's smile marks; when the boat of life began to ferry, affection is that the paddles that plucked the water to promote the boat forward, is that the waiting in the air for the boat to navigate the beacon; when the boat of life is about to dock, affection is that quiet harbor, is that embraces you in that silence! I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do that.
13, affection is the father's raised palms, trembling lips and hatred of steel anger; affection is the mother's burning tears, tender call, and warm and comfortable embrace; affection is the children's certainty of the eyes, respect for the language, and a small gift. The ship of affection should be leaning on the harbor of love, the building of affection should be built on the cornerstone of love; the spring of affection should flow in the earth of love, the star of affection should be bright in the dome of love, and the flower of affection should bloom in the garden of love.
14, affection is the snow on the top of Changbai Mountain, simple but eternal; affection is the Tigris River water, gentle but long; affection is the Sicilian round of the sunset, lingering but gorgeous; affection is the Mesopotamian plains of the inscription, fuzzy but timeless. Affection, affection! Affection ...... transcends time and space, weaving the most beautiful rainbow of life.
15, affection, like a drop of spring manna, always in the pathos of the years, live nostalgia that wind-dried memories; affection is like a summer shade, always in the hot sun, hold up the blue sky of the confused; affection, like a ray of sunshine in the fall, always in the depression in the wind and rain, the warmth of the heart of those who have lost; affection is like a winter snow, always in the dirty It is like a winter snow, always in the dirty journey, clean up the trekker's dust. It is this way, no impurities, no distance, and no hypocrisy, just the bloodline is connected to each other silently care for each other.
16, affection is a trickling stream, to the heart of the sweet moisturizing; affection is a ray of soft sunshine, so that the frozen heart of the silent melting; affection is a quiet harbor, so that the voyage of exhaustion dissipated. Affection is the increase of white hair on the forehead of parents, is the infinite care and hope in the eyes of parents, affection is a beam of light in the darkness, to give you the irreplaceable feeling of home and warmth. Yes, the world's most beautiful feelings is the human affection
17, affection, is your sick visit and care, she makes you feel the warmth of the sun in the darkness, enhance your determination to overcome the disease; affection, is your frustration when the encouragement and support, she makes you feel in despair in the selfless bosom, inspire you to continue to move forward with confidence; affection, is the stick of the drink when you are proud of yourself, she makes you feel stern when the arrogance is unbearable. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty.
18, affection is a scoop sprinkled in the spring rain, so that the lonely lonely people moisturize the dryness of the soul; affection is a Miluo flow in the summer night of the spring, so that the hot and restless people to appreciate the poetic serenity; affection is a small umbrella held up in the rainy night, so that the people wandering in a foreign land to the love of the shelter; affection is a rainbow flying frame in the sky, so that the eyes of the people feel the world's cozy haze.
19, affection, is a lamp, to the prodigal son back to light up the road; affection, is a haven, to the wandering wanderer a calm harbor; affection, is a bowl of chicken soup, to the wounded heart a care; affection, is a sword, to unrepentant people a move to split Huashan. Affection is the deepest part of the human heart, indelible imprint, is the most pure, the most sincere, the most passionate feelings of human sublimation.
20, affection is the cradle of growth, in her nurture, you can grow up in good health; affection is the source of strength, in her watering, you can thrive; affection is the soul of the sacred fire, in her shine, you can be successful; affection is the cure for injuries of the elixir, in her soothing, you can be all pain. Birds need the blue sky to show the majestic, spiders need to weave a net across the world, and people need affection to maintain a life.
21, she is an indestructible lamp, permanently illuminated in the darkness of my life; she is a flat boat that does not rest, permanently ferrying in the ferry port of my life; she is a forever colorful flowers, permanently open in the garden of my life, I'm willing to use the world's most beautiful and warmest vocabulary to praise you - affection!
22. Affection is sometimes the weakness that is discarded by those who are fighting for power in the royal family, sometimes it is the capital that is utilized by those who are stingy with money, and sometimes it is the rope that is climbed by those who are worshippers of the earth. Righteousness is the triumph of good over evil, and harboring connivance is the substitution of emotion for reason. Use your affection, because she is also a double-edged sword, get it wrong both harmed loved ones, but also harm themselves.
23, affection is invisible, no one can say clearly what he is like; affection is gratuitous, no one will let you pay for this money; affection is priceless, there is nothing in the world than the price of her; affection is selfless, there is nothing in the world more than her sacrifice; affection is endless, your life all the time not to experience his existence.
24, when you are a baby, affection is the milk that feeds your growth; when you are a teenager, affection is your harbor of refuge; when you are old, affection is a touch of comfort at sunset. This is a kind of bloodline love, this is a kind of love that never goes away.
25, hazy feel the father's care, the wind ruffled the window screen; vaguely heard the mother's instructions, the soft rain climbed on the windowsill. When I was depressed, affection gave me comfort; when I hesitated, affection gave me encouragement; when I was happy, affection gave me blessing.
26, if you are a green leaf, affection is that for you a steady stream of nutrients of the branches; if you are a sail, affection is that push you to move forward until the other side of the victory of the sea breeze; if you are a night walker, affection is that according to you to look for the direction of the North Dipper; if you are a seed, affection is that make you leave the darkness to the light of the land; if you are a bird, affection is that let you fly the broad If you are a bird, affection is the vast sky where you can fly. Yes, no matter what you are, affection must be your dependence, your attachment and your expectation.
27, father is a mine, wind and rain, fatigue of the back in the morning sun in the shortened and was lengthened by the setting sun; mother is a torch, in the darkness, soft voice in the ballad, hoarse and repeated in the middle of the night; I am a small embryo, under the sunny skies, tender arms in the fertile field of the groundbreaking and in the light of the fire to stand up.
28, affection is a shore embankment, in your mind fragile, for you to build a strong confidence; affection is a rainbow, in your experience of wind and rain, for you to paint a beautiful splendor; affection is a bit of cloud, in your lonesome, for you to embroider a beautiful flower. Affection is a distant watch, waiting for your return; affection is permanent thoughts, miss you all; affection is the endless sorrow after parting, mourning your far away back; affection is the reunion of unlimited joy, happy with your peace and return.
29, there is a kind of love, late can not come back; there is a kind of love, go away can not be traced, it is affection! From the initial birth, to understand, to adulthood, it, has always been with us; from small injuries, to frustration, to failure, it, has never left us. When I was a child, I thought that sending a bottle of my father's favorite beer was affection; when I was young, I thought that getting good grades to show my mother was affection; when I grew up, I realized that the original affection had to be that when we say we want to take care of them for the rest of our lives, they are still hardened and say, "Who cares? Not rare? I don't care! This is just as we are y grateful to them - this is the affection.
30, if you are a seed, affection is the soil, to provide you with the growth of the necessary nutrients; if you are a small plant, affection is the tree, for you to open the wind and rain long arm; if you are a boat in the ocean, affection is the lighthouse, for you to guide the return voyage; if you are a small river, affection is the sea, for you to always open up that tolerant bosom. Affection is the March rain, moisturize your heart; North love is the heat of the summer sun, lit is your heart lamp; affection is the autumn fruit, comfort is your joy of harvest; affection is the harsh winter months of sunshine, the warmth is your eternal hope.
31, affection is the sunshine, brushing you such as brushing the first warm and cold when the wind in the petals; affection is the lamp, in your solo night road to give you a little warmth of the light; affection is the wind, is in your confusion when you push you forward the momentum. Affection is your heart that a living fire, shining you on the road of never-ending progress; affection is the silk spit, not line not root, no matter how bumpy the road, and then treacherous, it is always always around you companion. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on a new one, and you'll be able to do that.
32, you with the calm of the lake, smoothing the high and low ups and downs of my mind; you with the eyes of love, see me lonely voyage; you with a strong arm, embrace my feelings of wandering through the years. You are affection, affection is you! You are an important hub, heaven and earth, all things on earth, are meticulously maintained by you; you are a destined destiny, from morning to night, from near to far, from life to death, accompanied by each other forever; you are a silent song of the heart, the sunshine is your prelude, the moonlight is your melody, and the candlelight is your note; you are affection, affection is you. You look on but are affectionate, you have mixed feelings but are the same as always, you are everywhere but are touching the sky and the earth. You are affection, affection is you. You are the willow, you are the lotus leaf, you are the lotus flower ...... affection, so you have a name!
33, this is a bowl of fried rice, ordinary, but in my hunger to soothe my hungry gut; this is a Kleenex, real, but in my sadness to dry my crystal tears; this is a cup of water, tasteless, but in my dry mouth to extinguish my hot flames; this is a piece of chewing gum, from thick to light, but in the spit out, only to find that it has been accompanied by you for so long; it's a ball of marshmallows, not yet fully This is a piece of steak, the longer it is stewed, the more fragrant it is; this is a bottle of old wine, the longer it is stored, the more mellow it is. This is affection, with the steadfastness of love, the longevity of friendship, and what love and friendship don't have: the ordinariness of scrambled eggs, the truthfulness of Kleenex, the tastelessness of plain water, the longevity of chewing gum, and the gentleness of marshmallows. It's steak, it's old wine, and time is their best solidifier. Remember, one can have no love, even no friendship, but absolutely no less affection.
34. What is affection? Affection is the seed of spring, the coolness of summer, the fruit of autumn, the warmth of winter; what is affection? Affection is the peach source outside the noisy world, is the calm harbor after the raging waves, is the green state in the boundless desert, is the solace in the lonely heart; what is affection? Affection is a lighthouse when you are lost, a soft bed when you are tired, a good medicine when you are injured, a hot tea when you are thirsty; what is affection? Affection is the command of "no pen and paper when we meet right away, with the word of the king to report safety", the concern of "the trip is closely sewn, and I am afraid that I will be late to return", the thought of "leaning in front of the window in the coming day, the cold plums will come with flowers", the thought of "the rain is coming down, and the cold plums will come with flowers", and the thought of "the rain is coming down, and the cold plums will come with flowers". The most selfless thing in the world is the waiting of "yellow leaf trees in the rain, white heads under the lamp". The world's most selfless, no more than family love, the world's most extensive, no more than family love.
35, when I was a child, affection is a cozy home, living with my father, mother, sister and I, is lost rock-paper-scissors but to play the note posted on the brother's face mischievous, is the face of the mother to do the beauty of the meal but no longer hold up the regrets of the father's horrible fists when the wrong; teenagers, affection is the parents for their children to go to school in the laborious run, is the wind and frost in the face of the parents wrote days of the old age is the The eyes of the hopeful but wanting to say; adult, affection is an always valid boat ticket, is a never-ending kite's line, is a stick on the envelope will not worry about mail stamps; and then ah, affection is the "often home to see" moving.
36, affection is a warm coat, is the coat a shaking line will fall off the buttons; affection is a treasured record, is an old song on the record; affection is a tea, affection is a blackout after the flashlight, only illuminates others, do not illuminate their own; affection is a piece of flesh and blood away from the history of Spain, Egypt and Suez, the mainland and Taiwan; affection is not to give up the sentiments, is the righteousness to follow. Is the righteousness of the followers, is a strong man know-how line attachment, is the sea of farewell, is no need for words and deeds of tacit understanding ......
37, affection is the drop of manna after the rain, moisturizing the original barren soil; affection is the dawn of the sound of the rooster crowing, awakened the original sleep of the earth; affection is the boat on the ocean, saving the struggling in which the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat, the boat. Affection is the boat on the ocean, saving the people struggling in it; Affection is the lonely lamp in the dark harbor, hoping for the people returning to the sea; Affection is the post on the ancient Yangguan Road, friendly to the wanderer. Affection is like a good medicine that can heal your wounded wounds; affection is like a fine wine, the longer it lasts, the more flavorful it is; affection is like a shadow, no matter how rich or poor, no matter how noble or lowly, it always accompanies you for a whole life without any complaint or remorse.
38, disheartened, affection is that gives hope to the plum blossom, see it, a glimpse of the breakthrough; upset, affection is that a cup of wine, drink it, a drunken solution to a thousand sorrows; contentment, affection is that the horn, hear it, a vibration of a hundred miles. This is the affection, no matter when, no matter where, she will always be with you.
39, affection is a lamp, it will guide you to the right place, but sometimes will take you to the wrong way; affection is a pot of fire, it will warm your heart, but sometimes will burn your sanity; affection is a medicine, it will treat your trauma, but sometimes will aggravate your condition.