1. Appreciation of Comments on Classical Chinese Writings
Appreciation of Comments:
1. The dialogue between teachers and students is a consistent technique in The Analects of Confucius, but the scene in this article is very specific and vivid . The expressions and states of mind of teachers and students are clearly visible, like a miniature narrative:
Characters: Confucius and his four disciples. Event: A disciple sat down to discuss his ideals with his teacher. Details: 1. Expression and demeanor: Zilu leads you, Master slaps him; 2. Actions: sitting, playing the harp, playing the harp, etc.; 3. The language is abbreviated.
2. The characters have outstanding personalities. Confucius's gentle words and gentle words allowed his disciples to express their own aspirations and encouraged them to speak actively without being restricted by their age and status. When a disciple speaks, even if he disagrees with it, he will never embarrass himself in public. For example, when Zi Lu spoke rashly, the master just "snapped" him. The "snapped" here does not mean to ridicule, but at most he smiles generously. Later, when the disciple spoke, he did not comment, listened patiently, and asked the next question. After hearing Zeng Xi's speech, he couldn't help but admire: I am the same as Dian Ye! It can be seen that Confucius sincerely praised the realm mentioned by Zeng Xi, and made no secret of his own tendencies. He was both tolerant and conciliatory, and the image of a wise elder emerged vividly on the page.
The three disciples have the most outstanding personalities, Zi Lu is rash and unyielding, Ran You and Gong Xihua are more humble than the other, and Zeng Xi is cool and unrestrained... The most outstanding ones are Zi Lu and Zeng Xi, " Zilu's bravery and straightforwardness were mentioned several times in "The Analects of Confucius". This time he was the first to speak, without any humility, and only used the word "shuer" in his description, which shows his impulsive character. Zeng Xi seemed to be playing the drums all the time. On the one hand, he created a relaxed atmosphere for the teacher-student dialogue. On the other hand, it also showed his free and easy personality. He was like a background musician on a talk show, with a very artistic temperament. He is also very good at expressing himself, and the situations he describes are harmonious, beautiful, and fascinating. Even if he shows it to us modern people, we still appreciate that kind of life situation: spring clothes are ready, making friends, taking a bath in Yishui, dancing on the altar Blow the wind and come back singing. If this is regarded as the highest state of governance, it is commendable. It conforms to Confucius' highest ideal of governing the country with ritual and music, and can be praised by Confucius. Even if there is another possibility: Zeng Xi is an idle scholar who does not want to participate in the governance of the world and only wants to cultivate himself. For example, Taoism's rule of inaction is not inconsistent with Confucius' thoughts, so it can also be echoed by Confucius. Perhaps in Confucius's heart, he was a little tired of the lobbying that he knew was impossible but did not do it. This is A subtle understanding of the teacher's indescribable state of mind, so it was also a different point for Confucius. Finally, Confucius' other comments on the three disciples all adhered to his consistent views: serve the country with courtesy and have a humble personality.
3. The writing is compact, closely focused on the "statement of ambition", the scale is exciting, vivid and twists and turns, and the main purpose is demonstrated. Needless to say, this point can be understood through the previous analysis. 2. Final comments on ancient high school essays
"You are gifted with extraordinary talents and have the appearance of great achievements. Your classmates look up to you with your talents and talents. However, you are sleepy all day long and cannot focus on your studies. The teacher knows this and is afraid that you will miss your studies." A hundred skills can cure it, but the misery remains the same? The work is accomplished by hard work, and the failure is accomplished by thinking. May you wake up from your dream, cheer up, and be a sleeping lion, and dominate the world for one day! You wake up from your dream and cheer up."
"I appreciate you very much."
You have the demeanor of a talented woman, a generous mind, wisdom and intelligence, and an intelligent heart. The beauty of a king lies in his talent, his character, and the flower of wisdom blooming deep in his heart. A person's character and learning are not born innately, but are the result of acquired efforts. I hope you will take the good qualities you already have, pursue your future talents and learning, and become an extraordinary self.
On the stage, he is impassioned and has the air of a general; in class, he is eloquent and demonstrates his skill in memorizing and reciting; during recess, he is naughty and cute, with laughter and laughter from time to time. Occasionally chatting in class, but still unable to focus on anything else. "A horse leaps but it cannot take ten steps; a horse rides ten times, but the merit lies in perseverance." The most important thing in learning is specialization, which requires perseverance.
Hao Ye is also a master of mathematics. He is outgoing and generous, deeply loved by his classmates and widely praised by his teachers. However, your liberal arts skills still need to be strengthened, so you must not favor one over the other. I hope to find suitable strategies and achieve impressive progress. I am very much looking forward to it as a teacher. Your volume is too loud, it is disturbing the public, please remember to control it.
Jade is as warm as fat. It comes from stone and is precious in stone. To obtain jade, you must carefully study and ponder it carefully, and go through tens of thousands of toils before you can make it.
And the same goes for learning! If you don’t have independent thinking and hard work, even if you have arrogant talents, you will eventually become Zhongyong! If you can calm down and temper your mind, you can achieve great success.
The sea of ??knowledge, the mountain of learning, meet you happily in the beautiful trees and forests. I appreciate the diligence in studying, rejoice at the talent and intelligence, praise the excellence of my studies, and marvel at the agility of painting. I regret the low efficiency and worry about the lack of sleep. To study, to be calm and focused; to play, to be as indulgent as you want, why not be happy?
My classmates are full of praise for her gentleness and graceful writing. However, I am good at liberal arts but weak at math and science, so I am very worried about being a teacher. Fortunately, recent efforts have been made to make up for it, and there has been great improvement. Where there is a will, things come true, and one hundred and two Qin passes will eventually belong to Chu: people and nature will not be disappointed with their hard work, and three thousand Yue Jia can swallow up Wu. I hope you work harder and you will be most grateful at this time. 3. Comments on Ye Liangchen’s classical Chinese works
However, I am Ye Liangchen. However, what he did in Tieba was really too much to deceive others. If you act recklessly, you will be with me until the end. Alas, I will make it clear, and I will never make empty remarks in good times. If you don't meet, just like in my village, I have hundreds of ways to get rid of you and other desperate situations, but you can only live in a state of helplessness. Alas, I love those who kill themselves by attacking them. You guys, please just remember that I am Ye Liangchen. It doesn't matter, you can invite your friends to accompany you, and you have nothing to fear. If I win, you will leave as soon as possible, and don't bully others too much. Of course. If you stop here, it will be a great time to thank you, and I will definitely thank you again someday.
Let me tell you about the two.
Li Wenji is not a son who can afford to be offended.
I can count them in twenty-one weeks while living in Sheli. Therefore, I hope you will think twice about your daily schedule.
I don’t like to talk to others
If you know that you are not strong enough to play with me,
I don’t mind staying with me until the end of time
Haha, I will make it clear to you that I am not lying.
Alas, no one made me go to your school to look for you.
I am from the soil, but I have hundreds of species but you cannot keep them.
My dear, there is nothing you can do.
It is a mistake. You should speak up and I will not contradict you.
If, on the contrary, the one who has the best time is called the one with talent.
How do you know about it?
You can go your own way, but your life is no longer comfortable.
Haha, please remember, my name is Ye Liangchen.
If you don’t mind, you can summon all the men you know to accompany you.
If I win, you can leave me alone.
Don’t bully me.
Follow you, and your affairs will be kept clean and tidy.
If it is unintentional, Shang Qing will let me talk to you, but I don’t mean to do it with you.
How much is left? May I ask the principal Zhang Jing?
I have been here for a long time, but occasionally,
Therefore, whoever is wrong can tell at first sight.
Thank you for the good times. Sometimes, you will have to thank me very much
It is a good thing if you live under the public. It is easy for you to say it
People want to do things well
Don’t say it’s just a matter of time
If you have a good time, you will be grateful.
Thank you for the good time. I will arrange it until Saturday. 4. A one-sentence review of Chinese literature
Original text:
To the east of the city of Linchuan, there is land hidden but high, facing the stream, called the new city. On top of the new city, there is a pool that is hollow but becomes longer. It is called Wang Xizhi's Mochi, as Xun Bozi's "Linchuan Ji" says. Xi Zhi admired Zhang Zhi and came to the pond to study calligraphy. The water in the pond was completely black. This is a trace of his past. How can you believe it is wrong? Fang Xizhi could not force himself to be an official, but he tasted the extreme east and went out to the sea to amuse his mind among the mountains and rivers. How could he wander around as much as he wanted and then try to rest in this way? Xizhi's writings were late and good, but what he could do was accomplished by his own energy, which is not natural. There is no one in the next generation who can reach it, so how can it be that his learning is not as good as that of others? How can there be less learning? Is it evil to want to learn more about morality?
Above the Mochi is now the state school building. Professor Wang Junsheng was afraid that it would be inaccurate, so he wrote the six characters "Mochi of the King of Jin Youjun" between the couplets to reveal it, and told Gong: "I hope there will be a record of it." To abolish it, but because of its evil deeds? Does he also want to push his story to encourage his scholars to do evil? Madam, she is so capable that future generations will still be like this. How can the legacy of the benevolent Zhuangshi be relegated to the next life?
On September 12, the eighth year of the Qingli calendar, Zeng Gong was recorded.
Translation:
To the east of Linchuan County, there is a raised highland with a stream below, called Xincheng. Above the new city, there is a low-lying rectangular pool called Wang Xizhi Mochi. This was described by Xun Bozi, a native of the Song Dynasty in the Southern Dynasties, in "Linchuan Ji". Wang Xizhi once admired Zhang Zhi, a calligrapher of the Eastern Han Dynasty, and practiced calligraphy by this pool. The water turned black because of it. This is his legacy. Is this really what happened? When Wang Xizhi did not want to be forced to become an official, he traveled all over the East and boated on the East China Sea, taking pleasure in the mountains and waters. Could it be that when he traveled freely and enjoyed his sights, did he ever rest here? Wang Xizhi's calligraphy gradually improved in his later years. It seems that the reason why he has such profound attainments is the result of his hard work, not the result of genius. But no one in later generations could match Wang Xizhi, maybe because they didn’t study as hard as Wang Xizhi, right? It seems like the time spent on studying can be reduced! What's more, what about people who want to achieve high moral achievements?
Next to the Mochi is now the school building of Fuzhou Prefecture School. Professor Wang Jun was deeply afraid that Mochi's deeds would be forgotten, so he wrote the six characters "Mochi of the Right Army of Jin Dynasty" and hung them between the two pillars in front of the door to mark it. He also said to me: "I hope there will be a narrative article." "I speculate that the king's intention is that he likes the strengths of others and refuses to let them be buried even if they are skills, so he also pays attention to his relics? Or do you want to promote Wang Xizhi’s hard study in the pond to encourage students here? A person's skills can be respected to such an extent by future generations, not to mention how the customs and virtues left by benevolent gentlemen will affect future generations!
On September 12, the eighth year of Qingli, Zeng Gong made a note.
<<Memory of Mochi>> Zeng Gong was invited by Wang Jun, a friend of Fuzhou Prefecture School, to write a diary of Wang Xizhi’s Mochi. The language of the article is simple, the description is concise, the purpose is clear, and the intention is lofty. 5. Comment: Classical Chinese text "A Young Man with High Aspirations"
If a person has no ambition, he will have no goal. Without a goal, cultivating the body and mind will become water without a source. Therefore, if you want to cultivate your body and mind, you must first establish your ambition. If you have high aspirations, your heart will naturally be pure.
Attached is the full text
Once upon a time there was a young man whose family was very poor. He cut firewood to feed himself and watched the moon reflected at night. There is a rich man in a neighboring village, he wears rich clothes and eats meat, and he always shows off to the public. One day, the rich man went hunting, holding a bow on his left and right, followed by eagles and dogs. He met the young man on the way. The rich people humiliated him and said, "You are so poor, you are not as good as my eagles and dogs." The young man should not do this. The rich man replied: "Follow me and chase foxes and rabbits with eagles and dogs. The first one to get it will reward you." The young man said with a smile, "Although my family lives on a wall, my ambitions are lofty and lofty, and they are not comparable to those of rats!" They wanted to beat him, but the young man scolded him angrily: "You are also a hawk and a dog!" He ignored him and left.
Attached translation
Once upon a time there was a young man whose family was very poor. He supported himself by chopping firewood and read by moonlight at night. There was a rich man in a neighboring village who wore brocade clothes, ate meat, and often showed off in front of everyone. One day the rich man went hunting. His entourage on the left and right held bows and arrows, and the eagles and hounds followed him. They met the young man on the way. The rich man insulted him in front of a group of people and said, "If you are so poor, you are worse than my eagle and hound." The young man did not answer him. The rich man added, "Follow me and chase foxes and rabbits with my eagles and hounds. Whoever catches them first will be rewarded!" The young man changed his expression and said, "Although my home only has four walls, However, the ambition is very high and lofty, which cannot be compared with that of you rats!" The followers wanted to hit him, but the young man opened his eyes and scolded them: "You people are also (other people's) eagles and hounds!" (The young man) didn't even look up. He returned and left.