First Year English Composition "Going to the Park with My Brother

One day of I and the younger brother go to the park, the park am very attractive, have the interesting thing, we make the game in the park, plays is very

One day of I and the younger brother go to the park, the park am very attractive, have the interesting thing, we make the game in the park, plays is very happy, when we played have been tired, has been hungry, then went to the nearby supermarket to go shopping. I and the younger brother play very much happily, therefore we decided that will probably next time also come.

I think this will definitely work, I have wasted a lot of effort for this, don't worry, it will definitely work~~