General: the central idea. The overall idea is to show the relationship between the general narrative and the sub-narrative structure. General is a way of analyzing the structure of an essay in the process of reading and writing. In the beginning, the thesis is put forward (open door to the mountain), in the middle, a number of sub-theses, and in the end, the thesis is summarized (or reiterated, or summarized), and several sub-theses can be juxtaposed, hierarchical, comparative, and so on, but can not be included or intersecting relationships. The total division is always a common structure of the argumentative essay, and there are several variations of this structure, such as total division, total division, total division and so on.
Summary
First, a short beginning, or the cause of the following sub-content, or the following sub-content of the general statement, usually expressed in general terms. The next is the sub-division, sub-division of two cases, one is the juxtaposition of the sub-division of the juxtaposition of each other, there is no obvious traces of the passage of time, such as a person's several different aspects of an event several aspects of the same center of a number of different things. The second is the coherent sub-telling, in which there is a clear passage of time between them, e.g., different stages in the development of a matter, different things on consecutive days, and so on. Either way, they are made up of short, concise fragments that are independent of each other and follow the same main line. Between the several fragments of a narrative, subheadings can be used, spaces can be used, or it can be like a normal paragraph, but with more obvious jumps. The end of the essay, which is also a general statement, can be an echo of the beginning or a summary conclusion. The totalizing approach exists not only in the relationship between sentences, but also in the relationship between paragraphs. There are three basic forms of totalization and division. Let's start with a passage from Flying Kites (Book 5): There were more and more kites in the sky, and the sky was full of activity. The golden-yellow "little bees" with their green wings seemed to be flying around among the flowers. The bright red "big goldfish" with its tail wagging seems to be swimming in the water. And the delicate "small satellite", glittering with golden light, seemed to be flying in the universe. ...... The first sentence of this paragraph summarizes the fact that there are more and more kites, which is very "lively". The first sentence of this passage is a general description of "more and more kites" and "lively", and then the second, third and fourth sentences are about three kinds of kites flying, which obviously form a relationship of generalization and then division. Then there is the following passage: "Squirrel meat can be eaten, the hair on its tail can be used to make paintbrushes, and its skin can be used to make clothes. Squirrels are really cute and useful little animals." This is a relationship of division followed by totalization. There is also another way of summarizing, then dividing and then summarizing, such as the last paragraph of The Sun.
Classification
There are three types of totalization and division: juxtaposition, contrast, and cascade. (Take strong as an example.) A. Juxtaposition: There are 4 kinds: (1) strong is ** (2) strong can ** (3) we are strong because ** (4) to be strong, we should ** B. Comparison: Positive and then negative. First, what are the advantages of being strong, then the middle transition (however ......), then what are the disadvantages of not being strong, and finally summarize C Layer (this is more pleasing to the eye, both have words to write, but also appear to be more in-depth thinking): What is strong - why be strong
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2. write a composition in the form of a general division of the best thing to write about, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent.In my five years of elementary school life, there are many people who have left an impression on me, there are classmates, father, mother, etc., but the most impressive to me or my good friend --- Tang Suhua, she is not only good at learning, but also love to help people. She is not tall, that melon face embedded in a pair of big watery eyes, eyes with a pair of small mouth that can talk to the cherry. I remember one day in the second semester of the fourth grade, the sky suddenly dark clouds, a torrential downpour, I did not bring an umbrella, so I had to wait for my mother to pick me up. But my mom had to go to work and my dad was on a business trip to Wenzhou, so what should I do? At this very anxious moment, I suddenly saw a familiar figure approaching me, it was Tang Suhua. She stopped and said to me, "Xiong Yafang, you don't have rain gear, I'll send you home, okay?" I was so happy to hear that, I thanked her. After that, we walked into the rain curtain with our umbrellas, and the rain seemed to be against us, getting bigger and bigger. The rain hit the umbrella, like a naughty child, drilled into my sleeve, jumped into my collar, into my pants leg. I found that she put a large part of the cover to my side, her clothes were wet by the bean-sized raindrops, I said: "Tang Suhua, you also cover some umbrellas, or you will not catch a cold." But she smiled and said, "It's okay, just go back and change your clothes. Anyway, we've already wet one person, let's not wet two more, it's not good for everyone." Unconsciously, I returned home, she did not sit down, did not drink a mouthful of tea, left, I asked her to sit down for a while, but she said: "No, I still have to do my homework. Besides, if I go back late, my mom will be anxious." Then she went out into the rain with her umbrella. I looked at the rain like a broken string of pearls, fell on her, looking at her far away back , I thought of her sincere and kind heart. Tang Suhua's spirit of helping others is worth learning, she is a good classmate, a good group leader, but also a good friend. Her helpful qualities will always echo in the sea of my memory, she left a very deep impression on me .
3. Write my school with the form of general and generalOur school is a beautiful and rich sea of knowledge, but also a happy and warm family.
I am a member of this big family. Every day when I come to school, I hear the etiquette team respectfully shouting: "Good day, teacher", which sounds very refreshing.
Into the school gate, far from seeing a cluster of red petunias in front of my eyes, exuding fragrance. The fence on both sides of the school gate is covered with red creepers, lined with a strong sense of autumn.
Behind the petunias is the five-star red flag flying in the wind. Every Monday when the flag is raised, only to see a few senior big brother stepped in an orderly step neatly, standing under the brightly colored five-star red flag, the national flag up.
Flagpole on both sides of the elm trees, a sturdy elm tree is like a flower umbrella, both rain, and can shade, but also beautify our campus, it is really comprehensive. Further inside is our teaching building, because just painted, the color looks extra bright, orange and blue, so that the teaching building a new look.
It's like giving the building a new outfit. The roof of the building is inserted with colorful flags, like a beautiful crown to the building.
Into the school building, the ears are far from filled with students reading, really mesmerizing! After visiting the school building, and then go east to our happy happy playground - playground. Here is wide, a circle is four hundred meters.
Every time to the June 1 Games, in this wide playground waved how many students hard and sweat, no matter how big the playground, they insisted on running down, for the class to win the honor. The middle of the playground is a soccer field, every recess activities, here is the most lively place, students have a rope skipping, some high jump, some in the shuttlecock, and some in the cut and whisper, talk to each other.
Think about it, there are students' cheers and sighs, which all represent how colorful the students' lives are! Our campus is not only beautiful scenery, but also a colorful life, a comfortable and quiet learning environment, but also a hard-working gardener to cultivate us. I am proud that I live in such a happy and joyful family.
4. Write about 300 words of essay on puppies in the form of total divisionI love dogs, and I love my little white dog even more.
The little white dog is very cute. Its body is snow-white and snow-white, its tiny head is embedded with black and black beads that shine in the light, its tiny nose is black and black, its two triangular ears are drooping, its four short feet are thick, and a thin tail is sticking upwards. I picked up the little white dog and touched its body, slippery, chubby, fleshy, warm and lovely!
The little white dog is not only cute, but also flexible. In the morning, the day just dawned, the little white dog in the small field jumping around, in the morning exercise it. Seeing me walk out of the house, it will be four hooves flying, straight to me to run, around my feet around and around, the small tail kept wagging, from time to time gently bite my feet. I bent down, touch its head, the white more happy, head straight upward, the whole body almost upright, while I do not pay attention to, small mouth in my face kissed. I can't help but pick it up, to a close contact, this can be good, the little white dog kept licking my hand, but also licked my little face.
I put down the little white dog and walked toward the kitchen, and the little white dog caught up with me at a fast pace and rushed ahead of me. I pushed open the door and went in, the little white immediately ran to the place of food, a look at the bowl is empty, it looked up straight at me, mouth open, as if to say: "small master, I'm hungry, give me something to eat." I hurriedly open the cupboards, saw a bit of last night's leftover broth, I picked up the empty bowl, a bit of cold rice, poured broth, slightly mixed, put the dog's mouth. The little white dog immediately went up, sniffed, "ah woo ah woo" eat up, the little tail kept wagging. I stood and watched the little white dog with breakfast, not long, the little white dog cleaned up the bowl, raised his head, two small eyes staring at me, as if to say: "Thank you, I'm full." Then stretched his back and went out to play
I love my puppy
5. Write a composition describing the landscape of the motherland in the form of a general division,300 wordsWest Lake in Hangzhou
You must have heard of the West Lake, which is located in Hangzhou, a city known as the "Paradise on Earth" in China, with its beautiful surroundings and delightful scenery.
The first day of the Fourth of July, mom and I took the plane, floating through the clouds, and soon came to Hangzhou. The streets of Hangzhou are full of green trees and flowers, and the whole way there is full of praise.
We live in the hotel on the West Lake, from the hotel restaurant to the distant view, the West Lake surrounded by mountains on three sides, one side of the city next to the West Lake is like a piece of jasper inlaid in the mountains, the three islands in the lake, the Su Causeway in front of the left front of the Leifeng Pagoda and other landscapes as far as the eye can see. Listen to my mother said, the West Lake north-south length of 3.3 kilometers, east-west width of 2.8 kilometers, the water surface area of 5.66 square kilometers.
Put down the luggage, our family walked to the West Lake, bursts of osmanthus fragrance to the face, I was like a happy bird in the willow tree shaded pathway jumping and jumping happily. Soon we rented a small boat, the boatman gently swinging the double pulp, the boat slowly rowed to the center of the lake.
We rowed towards the largest of the three islands in the lake - San Tan Yin Yue. In a short while, we saw three pools of rock more than 2 meters above the surface of the lake. Boatman is a strong uncle, he enthusiastically explained to us, said: "In ancient times, every Mid-Autumn Festival, the ancients in the pool lit a large candle, the water can reflect the 30 moon". Do you know why
It turns out that each of the three pools of the pool has five round holes, at night, the candle is lit, five holes are lit up, three pools have 15 bright spots, plus the reflection in the water, there are 30 moons, the sky and the water each one, that is, 32, plus the heart of 1, there will be 32 moons.
The boatman also told us that every Mid-Autumn Festival day, the lake boat to boat, people around the three pools of play, playing and singing, lively and extraordinary. When he said this, I can not help but think of an ancient poem: "the moon is born in the sea, the three pools everywhere bright; night boat singing and dancing place, people in the mirror."
is thinking of here, suddenly, a water heron from the sky flying down, very quickly pick up a fish, in a stone pool a little stop, then fly to the south. I quickly picked up the camera and captured this rare moment. At the same time, hundreds of swallows circled in the air in all kinds of formations.
Ah! The exquisite beauty of the West Lake landscape and the joys of nature in harmony, reflecting, it can be said that "light makeup, thick and thick is always appropriate, the ancient and modern difficult to draw is also difficult to poetry" ah!
6. Childhood fun according to the general form of writing a 400-word essayChildhood fun happy childhood like the rainbow after the rain, colorful and gorgeous, once did a lot of interesting things like a bright little star in the sky of childhood twinkle.
Occasionally myself or others mention it will lead to a burst of laughter. Here I will tell you one of the very funny things I did when I was a child.
It was just after my fifth birthday in the summer of the year, my mother gave me a big red balloon, painted with the Monkey King flying through the clouds. As long as you gently throw it to the sky, it will lightly fly to the mid-air, and then fall down, very interesting.
I always show it off in front of the kids. One day, after a heavy rain, my yard accumulated many small pools of water, I saw the rain stopped, so I ran to the yard to throw the balloon to play.
The balloons were swirling in the air, and I chased them while shouting, "It's so fun! It's so pretty!" Suddenly the balloon landed in a small pool of water. I rushed over, picked up a look, really bad luck, the balloon stained a large muddy water.
What to do! I have an idea, remember the last time I got my handkerchief dirty, mom took the handkerchief to the fireplace, why don't I also take the fire to bake it? Why don't I roast my handkerchief over the fire? But my mother roasted her handkerchief in winter, and there was no big stove in the middle of summer. I also remembered that when my mom made a fire, she always used the fire to light the paper first.
So I got paper too. I took the balloon into the house, found matches, the paper lit, and then quickly put the balloon stained with mud and water near the fire, and suddenly "pop" the balloon exploded.
I was so shocked that I couldn't help but jump up. The beautiful balloon suddenly turned into pieces.
When I came to my senses, my tears could not help but flow out ...... Until now, whenever I think of this incident, I can not help but laugh out loud.
7. In general form, write a paragraph describing the flowers of China in a small composition. To have the shape, color, to be usedLilies In the plant kingdom there is a flower that represents purity and solemnity, it grows beautiful and delicate flowers, long and thin body as if a pavilion woman, petals slightly curled downward, constituting a beautiful lily. I remember that it was a Sunday, in accordance with the usual morning run in the neighborhood, I accidentally found the plant upright, leaves like bamboo lilies. I squatted down and carefully observed the white and flawless "Yunshang Xian Yu", fresh leaves with green, white flowers bloom delicate, this is the first time I so close to the gaze and appreciate a bunch of lilies. In fact, the original lily was born in China, as early as the 4th century A.D., people only the lily as medicine, used to treat the lungs to relieve coughs, tranquilize the mind, beauty, cancer prevention and anti-cancer, China's lilies to the world, but also by the people's favorite, to the 12th century, Chile also positioned the lily as the national flower, to inspire the people to fight for national independence and economic prosperity and struggle. Pure lilies also have a very mythological legend. Adam and Eve were tempted by the serpent to eat the forbidden fruit after being expelled from the Garden of Eden, Eve could not help but leave the tears of sorrow, the tears fell to the ground after the transformation of white fragrant lilies. I came back to my senses and ran downstairs to find the lilies.
Look! It bathed in the sunshine swaying with the wind, its delicate petals, beautiful form, like a bit of a closed moon shy flower nymphs in the dance, noble and elegant, graceful, and those budding flower buds are shy head down, as if it is a shy girl, cover up the face and smile. In fact, everyone's heart has a flower seed, every flower seed can grow pure lily, the heart of the land is moist and fertile, as long as the willingness to pay, sweat can always water the beautiful lily .
8. Write a four-hundred-word essay on plants in the form of a general divisionOn my balcony, there is a very inconspicuous pot of cactus.
The body of the cactus looks like a piece of emerald, and like a cute little hedgehog. It is covered with a root like a steel needle like thorns, you can not underestimate these thorns, but it is used in self-defense weapons to fight back! I was stabbed by it, and mom was also stabbed by it, it hurt a lot. Mom had to throw it away many times, but I refused, because I have a special feeling for it, I love that cactus.
Spring is here, everything wakes up, in the cactus "mom" body drilled a small cactus, small cactus looks so weak, so fragile, as if a gust of wind can be blown away like it. And its "mother" was afraid of their children by the early spring cold wind "bullying", always use their own bodies to block the cold wind, but the small cactus is always drilling upwards, finally, in the spring under the encouragement of Grandpa Thunder, in the spring rain sister's help, the small cactus overcame the difficulties and grew up. the difficulties and grew up.
In late spring and early summer, the cactus grew buds on the body, it is strange to say, the cactus flowering is very "order", always two together, like a pair of twins, like a little girl's head tied in a bow. Cactus flowers bloom white and fragrant, like a beautiful fairy wearing a white dress, while dancing on the emerald stage, while from the dress, exudes a mesmerizing aroma.
In the fall, the harvest season, the cactus grew up, it can be used for many things! You can cut into a slice and brew it into a cool and delicious tea to quench your thirst. You can also eat, it can be rich in nutrients, you can do bonsai ...... really can not say, but the most surprising thing is that it can be boiled into a potion to cure the disease.
People love the magnificent peony, peony, love a thousand forms of autumn chrysanthemum, love ten miles of fragrant osmanthus ...... I love the appearance of the cactus, not only because of its appearance, but also because of its quality.