I think its plot is well set, but the choice of words and sentences is not so good. Some words are wrong. I forget which word it is. It can be seen that the author's pen power is insufficient. Moreover, it has a problem that many novels have, that is, there are no outstanding people except the protagonist and several important supporting roles, and the character setting is very problematic. After reading the whole article, some authors are trying to express their sad feelings while adding new words, but none of them have a normal life experience or love. Everyone has experienced something bad, big or small, which makes the novel lose some luster.
There are still many characters who are extremely faceless, which I feel is a pity. The author should write better. Most people in this book are either good people or bad people. Many people don't have their own ideas, and the characters are too thin. How can there be only a few sober people in the world?
The foreshadowing is not good, or there is no foreshadowing, just like writing wherever you want. Although there is no departure from the previous settings, it always makes people feel inexplicable and some are unfounded. Lost the foundation, a little less thought.
Burning ink is actually a butterfly bone beauty pad, without much foreshadowing. Just once, there is a special kind of butterfly bone beauty pad, which has no characteristics of butterfly bone beauty pad. As for whether this beauty pad helped me at that time, I forgot. Think of it as paving the way. Many of its settings only appeared when the plot had to go like this at that stage, and they were not set at the beginning, which made people less guessing.
Mohan was a murderous fairy in his last life, but he was reborn without murderous look. Although it was later explained that it was because of a long hatred for flowers, even so, the change was too fast. However, this is also a problem that most rebirth novels will make. A person who is not excellent at first, after being reborn, wants to be cool crazily. Forget it, it's impossible. You are a twin, and it's not that easy to change. Those authors ignored this point. There is also a dying Chu Ning, an immortal figure. How can he have a soft spot for ink? It's not even in the book. Also, attack and suffer, were they blind in their previous lives? It's so easy to misunderstand, so much has been done in the middle, can't the other party see it? Okay, it's not that serious. We pretend they can't see. After all, what if people really can't see it, right? However, in the part where they are interested in each other but don't know each other's thoughts, it is really fatal. Why can't they see all kinds of blushes? Don't you have to listen to all directions and look around every day? If you don't have this ability, how can you hang the world? Doesn't it become a living target? Isn't it easy to ambush him?
I don't know why the author wrote those ugly human nature, but if he writes well, the book will be brilliant, but the author didn't and didn't convey his thoughts to others.
These are some of my feelings about reading this book. In short, it's a pity. However, the popularity of this book also has its reasons. It can really touch people's hearts, and it does write about the pain of some people in it. I like it very much and I will go to see it once in a while. I feel very distressed when the ink burns 0.5. After he became a living dead man, he lived alone in another empty world for a long time, and he couldn't eat or drink, so he later had a morbid desire for what Chu Ning did. He will eat jiaozi cooked by Chuning for several days, because he wants to transform it into a thoroughly remoulded burning ink.
It would be better if this book could be written better.