Editing the original text of "Lights"
I love to walk around Tiananmen Square, especially at night. The millions of lights in the square quietly shine on the magnificent buildings around Tiananmen Square, making one's heart feel bright and warm. One evening before the Qingming Festival, I was strolling in the square again, when suddenly an exclamation came from behind me, "How wonderful!" My heart was slightly shaken: when was it that I had heard these words? Oh yes, it was a long time ago. So I sank into a deep memory. In the early fall of 1947, I was a war correspondent at that time. Our troops advancing into the plains of Henan, Anhui and Suzhou had surrounded the 57th Division of the Kuomintang Army tightly in a village called Shatuji. A fierce siege was about to begin. When it was dark, I touched into a dense sand willow forest, found the assault company in a hastily dug transportation ditch, and came to the side of Hao, the deputy battalion commander. Deputy Battalion Commander Hao is a famous war hero, although only 22 years old, has already fought many battles. Tonight it was up to him to lead the assault company to break through the wall of the enemy defenders and open the way for the whole army to annihilate the enemy. About all the preparations were completed, and at this moment he was sitting leaning against the breastwork of the traffic ditch, holding a homemade cigarette in one hand, holding a matchbox, and gently striking a match with one hand. He did not light his cigarette, but looked by the faintly bright light at a tattered book that lay on his knees. The book had an illustration of a hanging electric lamp under which a child was intently reading. He gazed at the picture and mused silently. "How nice!" He was talking to himself. Suddenly, he came up to my ear and asked gently, "Reporter, have you ever seen an electric light?" I couldn't help but stare, shook my head, and said, "Never seen one." What I said was true. I grew up living in the countryside and really had never seen an electric light. "I heard that once you press the button, the thing will light up, very bright, very bright ......" He struck another match, lit a cigarette, and glanced at the picture, and said fondly, "In time for tomorrow's victory, we can also use electric lights, so that the children are under that bright light. "How wonderful it will be if we can use electric lights tomorrow, so that our children can study under such bright lights." He leaned his head against the chest wall and looked at the dark night sky, completely plunged into the vision of the future. Half an hour later, I had just returned to the regimental command post when the battle started. Three green flares rose into the sky, followed by earth-shattering explosions of dynamite packets. A gap was blown in the enemy's wall, and the assault company immediately rushed in. Unexpectedly, the follow-on troops were met with heavy enemy artillery fire and could not find a breakthrough in the darkness, and lost contact with the assault company. The entire regiment's command post anxiously burrowed out of the bunker and looked at the dark fence. Suddenly, a star of fire appeared in the darkness, flickering and flickering. The firelight, faint as it was, was bright enough for the troops searching for a breakthrough. Soldiers relied on this weak light to rush into the wall, and a shouting and killing sound rang out at once. It was only later that I learned that in the nick of time, it was Hao, the deputy battalion commander, who struck a match and lit the book, holding it up high to light the way for the following troops to advance. However, the light of the fire exposed him and he was hit by an enemy machine gun. In this battle, we annihilated an entire division of the enemy. After the battle, we cut Hao, the deputy battalion commander, loose in the dense salal bushes. This young comrade risked his life so that the children could study under the electric light, but he himself never got to see it. A long time has passed since then. Under the bright lights in front of Tiananmen Square, I thought of this dear comrade again.
Editing this paragraph Author's Profile
Wang Wanguijian (born in 1929) is a contemporary writer. A native of Zhucheng, Shandong Province. He studied in his hometown at an early age, and in July 1944 he went to the anti-Japanese base area to participate in the revolutionary work. in January 1945 he joined the Eighth Route Army and worked as a propagandist in the army. He joined the Eighth Route Army in January 1945 and worked as a propagandist in the army. During the Liberation War, he served as a sub-captain of the army's literary troupe, and then as a newspaper editor and reporter. During this period, he wrote a number of small plays, singing materials and newsletters. 1947, he joined the Communist Party of China (CPC). 1952, he became the editor of PLA Literature and Art. In 1952, he became the editor of Literature and Art of the PLA. In the following year, when he went to Dongshan Island in Fujian Province, he visited the old revolutionary bases, met some old Red Army soldiers, old guerrillas and underground workers who persisted in the struggle under the White Terror, and heard a lot of magnificent and touching stories, which inspired his passion for creativity. Wang Wanguijian is a writer who grew up after the liberation. Although he did not personally experience the struggles of the Second Domestic Revolutionary War, he came into contact with the old generation of revolutionaries while working as a reporter and editor, and visited the old revolutionary base in Jiangxi Province in 1953, interviewing the Red Army on its Long March. This made it possible for him to express the epic life during the Second Domestic Revolutionary War. From 1954 onwards, he began to publish his works, with short story collections: Party Fee, Descendants, Loved Ones, Precious Souvenirs and so on. On the 10th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, he published an anthology: Ordinary Laborers. Wang's works are mostly based on the struggles of the Red Army and the people in the old revolutionary bases during the Second Domestic Revolutionary War. They are well conceived, with clear themes, rich in storytelling, and good at seizing typical details and capturing the glittering things in the characters' personalities to express the noble spirit of the heroes and characters, and they are written in a truly touching manner. During the liberation war, he worked as an editor and reporter in the newspaper of a column of the East China Field Army, joined the party in 1947, and was transferred to the editor of the PLA Literature and Art in 1952. from 1956 to 1966, he participated in the editing of the revolutionary memoir Star Fire Prairie Fire, and interviewed on the Long March twice in 1972 and 1975. His major works include the short stories "Party Fee", "The Story of Grain", "Seven Matches", "The Ordinary Laborer", "Footprints", "Signposts", and the movie literary script "The Shining Red Star" (co-written with Lu Zhuguo).
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The Text in Brief
This text glorifies the dedication of the revolutionary martyrs through the reminiscence of a past event about lights and shows that today's happy life is not easy to come by. First of all, when a siege was about to start during the Liberation War, Hao, the deputy battalion commander, was reading the illustration of a book by the weak light of a match, which showed a child reading under the electric light. The illustration plunged the battalion commander into a vision of the future; after the battle started, the follow-on troops were attacked by enemy artillery and lost contact with the assault team. Hao ignited the book and used the firelight to light the way for the following troops, and as a result, he exposed himself. The battle was won, but Deputy Battalion Commander Hao died. Electric light is an ordinary item in the life of peace time, but it is synonymous with the good life in the war time. For the liberation of the whole country, for the sake of the future generations to live a peaceful life, Hao deputy battalion commander and many revolutionary volunteers sacrificed their lives. The author writes his memories in a calm tone, but it contains deep and moving emotions. Like "Memories of Sixteen Years Ago", this article adopts the technique of flashback, writing from the lights of Tiananmen Square, recounting the past, and then returning to write about the lights at the end. The first and the last correspond to each other, the structure is compact, the text is connected, and the meaning is profound. The main part of the text is the memories of the past, the memories of the past, the author of the delicate tone of writing Hao deputy battalion commander in the fierce battle before the look and talk, and Hao deputy battalion commander in the battle of sacrificing his life for the subsequent troops to lead the way to the feat, the author is using the technique of descriptive writing, "write", the two contrasts, highlighting the revolutionary martyrs to the future of the beautiful vision, highlighting the revolutionary hero's perseverance ideal. The two contrasts highlight the revolutionary hero's vision of the future and the revolutionary hero's persistent ideals. The focus of this lesson is to help students understand the order of expression of the text, the difficulty is to help students understand the content of Hao's "longing" and the connection between his heroism.
Word and Sentence Analysis
(1) Understanding of the sentences. ① He leaned his head against the chest wall and looked into the dark night sky, completely caught up in his vision of the future. This is the demeanor of Hao's deputy battalion commander when he was yearning for a bright and happy future before the fierce battle. From this demeanor, we understand his great motivation to fight bravely and feel his beating heart for the liberation of the Chinese people and for the benefit of the people. "The dark night sky", a tangible sight, here just sets off Hao's deputy battalion commander's yearning for light. ② This young comrade in arms risked his own life so that the children could study under the electric light, but he himself did not get to see the light. This sentence is y emotional and meaningful. The words "young comrade in arms" are a deplorable tribute to Deputy Battalion Commander Hao, who died in battle at the age of 22. But he used his own blood and life, in exchange for the happiness and contentment of future generations, "children studying under the electric light" has become a symbol of "happiness and contentment of life", emphasizing that Hao's deputy battalion commander is for the ideals of the heroic sacrifice. The last sentence is not only an echo of the previous episode, but also the author's heartfelt admiration for the selflessness and greatness of the revolutionary martyrs who sacrificed their lives for their ideals. ③ It has been a long time since the incident. Under the bright lights in front of Tiananmen Square, I thought of this dear comrade again. The beginning of this article uses the technique of flashback, written by the lights of Tiananmen Square, recounting the past, and now the end is back to write the lights, and the beginning of the light, seems to be a compact structure. Of course, in addition to the significance of the writing technique, teachers can also guide students to discover the author's condolences and wishes in this sentence, that is, no matter how much time has passed, people living in happiness should not forget who created today's happy life for us, and should not forget those revolutionary martyrs. (2) Understanding of words. Yu Wan Su: Yu: short for Henan Province. Anhui: short for Anhui Province. Su: short for Jiangsu Province. Magnificent: (scale, plan, etc.) majestic and powerful. Siege and Annihilation: a battle to encircle and annihilate the enemy. Traffic ditch: a trench connecting trenches and fortifications in a position for traffic contact. Also called traffic trench. Leaning: leaning against. Chest Wall: In order to facilitate shooting and reduce the possible damage caused by enemy fire, a low wall is built up with earth at the edge of the trench. Dark: describes darkness. A Thousand Pounds: Jun: an ancient unit of weight, one jun is equal to 30 pounds. A thousand pounds means that the weight of a thousand pounds is tied to a single hair, which is a metaphor for extreme danger. Brilliant: describing the vividness of beads and jade. This lesson refers to the dazzling lights of Tiananmen Square. Chinese lanterns: the lamps with gorgeous carvings or brilliant light. This lesson refers to the lights in Tiananmen Square.
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Teaching Objectives
1. Read the text aloud correctly, fluently and emotionally. 2. Read the text, understand the revolutionary martyrs' vision of the future and the sacrifices they made for it, and understand that today's happy life is hard to come by.
The teaching process
I. Reveal the subject, introduce the new lesson 1. 2. Teachers ask: ① you have seen what lights? What is their shape? Used in what places? ② What is the main role of these lights? If there is no such lights, how would life be? How would life be with these lights? (The students have a concrete understanding of the "brightness" and "warmth" that I felt when I walked through Tiananmen Square in the process of talking about the actual situation.) Second, clarify the vein of the text. 1. Read the text, clarify the relationship between the characters. ("I" and Hao deputy battalion commander, although the nature of work is different, but the purpose is one, that is, to eliminate the Kuomintang reactionaries, the liberation of China.) 2. Read the text, fill in the blanks to clarify the relationship between fire and light. (1) Between battles, Hao, the deputy battalion commander, paddled ______ and borrowed ______ to read a book with illustrations drawn on it. He was full of ______ hope for the future. (2) The wall of the defending enemy was blown open a ______, the assault company immediately ______, the following troops in the darkness ______, in this ______ moment, Hao, deputy battalion commander, scratched a match, lit the ______, ______ for the following troops to light the way forward. (3) The battle was won, and now the children were able to ______ study, but he did not have time to see ______ them. (Guide students to analyze in depth, so that students appreciate the weak matches bright light so that Hao deputy battalion commander of the light is full of infinite yearning, in order to realize their own ideals, he used to light that book's weak fire to light the road to victory, but also lit up the most glorious moments of his life.) 3. Read the text and find out the three "how wonderful" sentences in the text and experience them. (1) One evening before the Qingming Festival, I was strolling in the square again, when suddenly an exclamation came from behind me: "How wonderful!" (The admiration for the "lights" of Tiananmen Square aroused "my" memories.) (2) "How wonderful!" He was talking to himself. (After looking at the illustration in the book, Hao was y envious of the children in the picture who could read under the light. (The one who said this is still Hao, the deputy battalion commander, whose heart is full of yearning and longing for a better life in the future.) Third, guide reading aloud (pointing to read, read in the group, read in unison and other forms) 1. Guide students to read the recollection part (3 - 11 natural paragraph). Hao deputy battalion commander's words to read out the tone of contemplation, inquiry, memories, longing; fierce battle part to read out the "fierce", "anxious"; the end of the battle part, the speech slowed down, read out the infinite respect for comrades in arms. 2. Guide to read aloud the first and last paragraphs of the text. This part of the general tone is fluent, read out the deep nostalgia for the battle. 3. Read aloud the whole text emotionally. Fourth, extend and expand 1. Introduction to the author, encourage extracurricular reading. 2. Write the feelings after studying this article.
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The focus of this lesson is from Hao deputy battalion commander in the fierce battle before the look and talk to understand the martyrs of the broad-minded and a better vision of the future; from the Hao deputy battalion commander in the battle of sacrificing for the subsequent troops to lead the way to the feat, to learn the martyrs of the spirit of selflessness and dedication. The difficulty is to understand the author's associations arising from specific things. Instruct students to read aloud with feeling, read to understand and feel the spirit of selfless dedication of Hao deputy battalion commander. Teachers let go of students' independent learning and cooperative exploration. Through the guidance of reading aloud with feeling, stimulate students to study hard and return to society's ideological feelings.
Exploratory activities
Collect the stories of the revolutionary forefathers who used their blood and lives to create a new China, and hold a storytelling session "In the Footsteps of the Martyrs". (Some of the stories are provided in the extension materials.)
Central Idea of the Editorial Section
(1) This text celebrates the dedication of the revolutionary martyrs through the reminiscence of a past event about the light, explains that today's happiness is not easy to come by, and inspires us to learn our skills well, and to build a new China that our predecessors have created with their blood and lives. (2) This text celebrates the dedication of the revolutionary martyrs and explains that today's happiness is not easy to come by through the recollection of a past event about lights. (3) This article is about the author strolling in Tiananmen Square and recalling a past incident about lights by the millions of lights in the square. It shows the noble spirit of the revolutionary martyrs who sacrificed themselves for the happiness and joy of the future generations.
Editing the difficult sentences
1. "How wonderful!" This usual exclamation gave me a slight jolt in my heart. -- "The usual exclamation" refers to the plain and simple sentence "How wonderful." "It gave me a slight shock in my heart" refers to "my" reaction to this praise. The word "shook" indicates that this reaction is still relatively strong and will cause memories of the exciting past. 2. He leaned his head against the chest wall, staring into the dark night sky, completely caught up in his vision of the future. --This is the demeanor of Deputy Battalion Commander Hao, who was yearning for a bright and happy future before the fierce battle. From this demeanor, we can fully understand his noble ideals and great motivation to fight bravely, and can feel his heart beating for the liberation of the Chinese people, for the benefit of the Chinese people. The "dark night sky", is the actual scene, here just set off Hao deputy battalion commander of the yearning for light. 3. This young comrade-in-arms, in order to enable the children to study under the electric light, he himself did not have the time to see the electric light. --This sentence is y emotional and meaningful. The words "young comrade-in-arms" are an expression of deploring Deputy Battalion Commander Hao, who was killed in battle at the age of 22. The next words mean that he used his blood and life, in exchange for the happiness and well-being of future generations; his dedication to the spirit of how great, how noble his selflessness! 4. The ten million lights, hanging high in the night sky, silently illuminating the wide square and the magnificent complex, like countless eyes, looking fondly at Tiananmen Square, make the heart feel bright and warm. --This sentence describes the lights of Tiananmen Square. "Ten million" indicates the number of lights. "Quietly" illuminating the square makes one feel the peace and tranquility of the environment. The simile "like countless eyes, gazing fondly at Tiananmen Square" makes the lights seem to have life and emotion, and has a profound meaning. The text describes the lights meticulously in the opening part, which naturally leads to the following story about the lights, with deep meaning.
Editing the main idea of this paragraph
The first paragraph (the first and second natural paragraphs): one night before the Ching Ming Festival, the author was walking in Tiananmen Square, and he heard the shouts of "How wonderful", which aroused his memories of the past. The second paragraph (3rd to 11th natural paragraphs): recounts the past events about the lights. The third paragraph (the 12th natural paragraph): "I" remembered the "past", implying that we should not forget the past and should carry forward the revolutionary spirit of the martyrs.
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The beginning of this article uses the technique of flashbacks, written by the lights of Tiananmen Square, recounting the past, and the end of the writing back to the lights. The article is back and forth, compact structure.
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Near Antonyms magnificent (majestic) admired (praised) contemplative (deep in thought) silent (quiet) exposed (exposed) longing (yearning) dense (dense) leaning (leaning on) especially (especially) weak (fragile) Antonyms advancing (retreating) pitch-black (bright) silent (noisy) short (long) exposed (hidden) dense (sparse) admiring (insulting) especially (general) weak (strong) dense (sparse) wide (narrow)
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Lights ---- Dream Journey Chorus ---- There was a young girl who sent a soldier off to war, and they said goodbye in the darkness of the night, and in front of the steps, the young man saw through the mist that the lights still shone in front of the girl's window, and he was greeted by the glorious family of the front line, and everywhere he saw his friends, but he always forgot that he had no friends, and that he had no friends, but he always forgot that he had no friends. But he could never forget the familiar streets where the lovely girl and the dear light were, where the beloved girl from afar had sent her precious letters, where her maidenly love would never die, where in victory he would get everything he had hoped for, and where the golden light would always be bright, and where he would see the girl's letters and think of the girl's flowers, where the young man's heart would be happy and become stronger and fight more bravely against the hateful invaders, for the sake of the Soviet Motherland and the dear light. For the sake of the Soviet Motherland and its dear light.