(Principle: can not change the sentence willingly. Can change not delete. Can add not remove.)
Several common types:
1. Sentences of the type of component mutilation: in the classroom, are listening attentively.
2. Sentences of the improper collocation type: I saw his mind.
3、用词不当类型的病句： He dragged his heavy feet swiftly forward.
4. Repetitive and verbose type of sentence: He often thought back to the past.
5. Inverted word order: The Museum of History has on display a large collection of newly unearthed artifacts from two thousand years ago.
6, self-contradictory type of sentence: The square was full of colorful red flags.
7. The sentence is not clear: When Li Bing and Wang Gang were walking between classes, he said to him, "Pay full attention to the lectures.
(a) improper use of words;
1, along the street is full of lettuce, leeks, chickens and ducks and agricultural products.
and farm produce removed
2. Today is the first day of school, and he is wearing all new clothes.
Today is the first day of school
3. The teacher watched us with a kind tone of voice and kind eyes.
The teacher looked at us with a kindly gaze
4. The question aroused indulgence.
Intoxication changed to discussion
5. I laughed uncontrollably at the story.
Incoherently changed to uncontrollably
6. After the story was read, everyone applauded hilariously.
Lively changed to enthusiastically
7. Our standard of living is improving.
Improvement was changed to enhancement
8. We have to pay attention to playing up our strengths and correcting our weaknesses.
To play up the advantages
9, Jiuzhaigou Scenic Area in the fall is a beautiful season.
The autumn and Jiuzhaigou Scenic Area switched
10, he developed a good habit of waking up early to exercise very early.
Good habits change into good habits
(ii) Repetition of meaning;
1. He often recalls past events.
Past events changed into events
2. I can't help but applaud Wang Min's wonderful performance.
Can't help but applaud
3. Xiao Ming concentrated on the teacher's lecture.
Concentration went out of the way
4. Father maintained his often customary grim attitude.
Often go away
5. This semester, Wang Jia's composition level has greatly advanced and improved.
Advance and remove
6. It is a very, very beautiful painting.
Very go away
7. We have to make up our minds to change our bad bad habits.
Bad go away
8. He was so sad that he shed tears of sadness when he didn't do well in the exam this time.
Sad to go
9. He is always the first to speak first in group meetings.
First to go
(3) Reversal of word order;
1. We have to use and understand the words we have learned.
Use and understand swapping
2. We discussed and listened to the principal's report.
Discussed and listened to the exchange
3. Natural science interests me.
I am interested in natural science
4. The sunset was reddened by the sky.
The sky is reddened by the sunset
5. This is a very interesting book for me.
A book and my exchange
6. The old farmer swung his hoe and killed the wolf in his pocket with it.
The old farmer swung his hoe and beat the wolf to death with the hoe in his pocket
7. The Museum of History displayed a large collection of newly unearthed artifacts from over two thousand years ago.
The newly unearthed ones were switched with those from more than two thousand years ago
(d) Lack of composition;
1. Discrepancy between words and deeds is an extremely bad.
Style of work
2. On October 13, finally put on a red scarf.
Finally with a me in front of it
3, We must be conscious of our habits.
Must be followed by a price to adopt
4. The light and warmth on the ball are sent.
The light and warmth on the earth are sent by the sun
5, watched the drama and was y impressed.
I loaded to see the front
6. Reading the text "My Comrade Qiu Shaoyun", I couldn't help shedding tears.
I read
7, General Secretary Hu's concern for the masses will always remain in the people's memory.
The quality of caring for the masses
8. The party performed a wonderful program.
I performed
9, Spring has arrived, a flower.
A flower bloomed
(5) inconsistency;
1. When everyone is hygienic, health and disease are guaranteed.
Guarantee
2. There are many artistic treasures in China, and the exquisite murals in the Mogao Grottoes are one of the only ones.
Only one is replaced by one of them
3. The square is full of colorful red flags.
Colorful flags
4. I've done all my homework, and there are only two math problems left to do.
All done and gone
5. I finished fourth grade, and I still have a year left to graduate.
Not removed
6. The Great Wall of China, the Forbidden City Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are monuments that Chinese and foreign tourists aspire to.
and Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge go off
7. It rained all day at noon today.
A day's go away
8. Her grades are comparatively the best in the class.
The comparison goes away
9, The trees were covered with a thin layer of snow that bent the branches.
Thin changed to thick
10, He was always hesitant to do anything, not at all arbitrary.
Arbitrary changed to decisive
11, Gunpowder is one of the four great inventions of ancient China.
One of the four great inventions
(6) Improper collocation (including associated words)
1. At the gala, the students sang many beautiful songs and dances.
At the gala, the students sang many beautiful songs and danced
2. All students should establish good habits of caring for public **** property.
Establish to change to adopt
3. Despite the bad weather, we always arrive at school on time.
Always change into still
4. Xiao Ming not only studies hard, but also gets good grades.
Because so
5. Xiaogang likes playing soccer and table tennis.
and playing ping-pong
6. Xiao Ming gets good grades because he studies hard
just change it to so
7.
This article is rich in content,
8, I always help my mother do some housework on Sundays.
Always go off
9. Even though this movie is well made, it can't win any prizes.
Although but
10, he finally corrected the good habit of studying seriously
the good habit of changing his attitude