"Character" is the soul of the article, but in the student's work in the common character image is often one of a thousand people, neither personality, but also not vivid, the whole article seems dry and boring, lack of infectious force. Carefully read these works, you will find such a **** the same problem: often just a pursuit of something to write a complete, but ignored the vivid and specific, meticulous detail description.
Detailed description of the scope is very broad, its role is also multifaceted, but the main characterization, characterization. An evocative details, like cells on the human body, without it, people have lost their lives; article less details, the character image has lost flesh and blood and charm. Writer Li Jun said: "a detail in the role of revealing the character traits of the character, sometimes and a plot, a play shoulder with the same role." As the common saying goes, "See the spirit in the smallest detail.
Literary masters of the creation of the details of the portrayal of great importance. Lu Xun's "Q" there is a paragraph of Q before the sentence of drawing the details of the description: "to draw a circle, the hand cupped the pen just shaking, so that person will be the paper spread on the ground, Q ambush down, so that all the force of life to draw a circle. He was afraid of being laughed at, determined to draw a circle, but the damn pen is not only very heavy, and disobedient, just shaking and shaking almost together, but then shrugged outward, into a melon mold." This behavioral details, specific, image, vividly reflect the character traits of Q - until death still adhere to the self-deception of the "spiritual victory law". When people read this detailed description, who can not feel Q's ridiculous, sad, pitiful? And how can we not "mourn its misfortune, angry at its not fight", and then think y about the national inferiority?
Not only Chinese writers, but also foreign writers. The first is that the first is a "new" one, and the second is that the second is a "new" one. Grandet" wrote Grandet before his death, when the priest sent the gilded cross to his lips to let him kiss the image of Christ, "but he made an appalling gesture trying to grasp the cross in his hands, this last effort to send his life," only this fine detail on the living picture of the miser's greed, the ugly image of the same until death. It is the details of the description, so that the characters have flesh and blood, distinctive character, vivid image; with vivid characters, the whole article is full of vitality because of it, resulting in a strong infectious force.
Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, not as long as the writing "fine" can be. Good detail description must be useful, true, typical. It must show the spirit of the characters and deepen the theme of the article service, it must be in line with the character traits, in line with the reality of life, should be able to highlight the character's personality traits. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, details in the colorful life. Do a life of the people, always pay attention to observe the people and things around you, especially their own description of the object. On the streets of Shaoxing, in the Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun observed the short-clothed gangs and the long-shirted customers, and only then did he "draw out the souls of the silent nation". Dublin's gloomy coffee room, Joyce coldly surveyed the wandering ***, crooks, psychopaths, beggars and rich people, brewing the world-shaking "Ulysses". Throughout history, great writers, always lifelong heart to capture those who make the soul trembling people and things, melting into a chapter that has been passed down through the ages. Capture the details, use the details, so that this golden key for you to use, so that your article exudes glitter!
2. Describe the details of people's actions
1. Detailed description: childhood past When I was a child, I was obsessed with watermelon, and now that I've grown up, I sometimes miss the feeling of being cold.
Street stalls or screen images of the melon into the eyes, the moment of childhood eating melon in front of us again: summer, the rest of the sun's light sank into the corner of the sky, the heat is gradually fading. In the evening breeze, people's spirit is particularly comfortable.
The scent of watermelon filled the street, sometimes strong, sometimes weak, if not. I (about five or six years old) hands clasped knees, like a cat catching a rat, squatting on a small bench, black eyes glancing at the watermelon in the water up and down.
Through the surface of the water, the sweat on the face has long been dried up, one by one, like a waterfall hanging far away "Qianchuan". Mosquitoes in the ear, "swimming", the heart does not care.
A bright smile, there is an expectant heart waiting - melon capsule sweet silk. To the watermelon cut into pieces: only to see the watermelon seeds such as black pearls inlaid in the red melon flesh; and melon flesh through a little cool; melon juice along the mirror-like melon surface flow down, a drop, two drops; melon surface texture is like colored porcelain surface brush fine lines ...... The happiest moments: chilled watermelon in the hand, the whole body seems to have A cold stream drifting back and forth.
2. sweet soil Huang Fei Northwest wind whistling, snow on the road rolled. Although it is already spring, the day is still very cold.
She, leaning against a poplar tree in front of the school, motionless, like a snow sculpture. A ringing of the electric bell.
A fervent light shot out of her dull eyes. A group of singing children, across the school gate, without her son; another group of laughing and joking children, stepped on the road, also without her son ...... silhouette sparse, fragmented, no more.
The big iron gate of Zee Yee Yee, locked the silent campus. She was so dizzy that she could hardly stand, and stumbled over to it, grasping the iron bars with both hands and shaking them vigorously.
"What for?" The old man from the communication room walked out with a sulky face. "Ryo! My Ryo!" Like a gasp and a cry.
"School's all out." "Knowing ...... that ......" she murmured in a dull-eyed whisper, hung her head feebly, slowly loosened her hands, and from the pocket of her large lapel cotton jacket, pulled out a tightly wrapped, still with body heat The sugar: "Uncle, trouble ...... to the child."
"What is it called?" "Wang Xiaoliang." "How many grades how many classes?" "Today, just passed, eight birthday."
"I am asking what grade and class." The old man was getting a little impatient.
"Oh ...... probably ......" She shook her head again fearfully. The old man surveyed the nervous woman strangely, "What the hell are you?" Answering him were the tears that came to his eyes and the back that staggered away.
The old man sighed in confusion and seemed to understand something. In the afternoon, the packet of candy finally reached Wang Xiaoliang in the second grade, second class.
The child was pleasantly surprised; it had been a long time since this favorite milk candy had been tasted. His small hands rubbed back and forth on his clothes, thought slightly, and smiled as he handed out one to each child, two to his close companions, and five respectfully to his teacher.
"Eat!" He shouted and jumped so fast that he even shook off the broken shoe that had opened his mouth. Classmates in the cheeky laughter and he shared the joy, only the teacher quietly turned his back ...... School is over, Xiao Liang is still immersed in the joy, jumping and jumping towards home.
Suddenly, he stood still, touching the pocket is still left in the shedding of sugar, a sense of fear struck his heart. It was as if he saw it again: his mom now raising a thin eyebrow and muttering something in his dad's ear, and his dad grabbing a wood stick and coming at him aggressively.
He froze, not knowing what to do. He patted his pockets hard, but no, they were bulging.
He lowered his head, sucked his finger, thought for a long time, looked around no one, quickly buried the sugar in the snow pile on the side of the road, but also specially inserted a small stick.
He dreamed that his mother used to come back with a smile on her face, and now she left with her head hanging down, so happy. The next day, Xiao Liang got up especially early.
As usual, he emptied the family's bedpan and cleaned it, then washed the rice, added water, poked the fire, and sat on the pot before he put on his backpack and took a piece of cold bread to quietly sneak out the door. The first thing I want to do is to get my hands on some of the most popular products in the world.
I don't want to, the ground temperature rose overnight, the ice melted, the syrup and snow mixed together, seeped into the earth. On the wet ground, there are a few crumpled pieces of candy paper and a small stick as a marker.
Ryo blinked his eyes and couldn't help but roll down his tears. He crouched sadly on the ground and stared blankly.
A moment later, and can not help but stretch out the frozen little fingers, pick up a little dirt on the tip of the tongue - he, again, smiled: the dirt, sweet. Summarize the common several kinds of detail description: (1) portrait detail description, that is, the character portrait detail description.
For example, in Daddy's Keeper, the portrait of the patient is a detail. It is this detail that drives the plot.
(2) language detail description, that is, the character of a typical language carefully described. For example, "Lu Tijuan beat Zhen Guanxi" in which he swindled to death after Luda killed Zhen Guanxi is a linguistic detail that illustrates Luda's character traits of roughness with finesse and bravery and resourcefulness.
(3) action details, that is, the typical action of the character in-depth description. For example, still in the "Lu Tijuan boxing Zhen Guanxi" in the passage about Luda borrowing silver to help the old man's father and daughter, in the use of the verb on the vivid performance of the three different character traits.
(4) the details of psychological activities, that is, the character's psychological activities are described in detail. For example, in the article "Dad's caretaker", the description of the psychological activities of the teenager Cicillo after seeing his "dad" is very sick, it is very good to show that the teenager is considerate and caring about his parents' good qualities.
(5) the expression of change in detail, that is, the process of change in the character's expression of a detailed description. In the article "Seven Matches", the description of the change of expression after the unnamed warrior handed over the matches to Lu Jinyong is a detail worth savoring.
(6) clothing details, that is, the character's clothing carefully described. To see through the clothing description of the person's occupational characteristics, at the same time, but also to see in the occupational characteristics of the personality characteristics, which is a good description of the details of the dress.
(7) things in detail, that is, the development of a thing in the process of change is described in detail. For example.
3. How to write an essay on how to write a person's subtle movementsDetailed description is the focus of the essay to write a good
Detailed description can be the demeanor of the action description
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A drop of water can reflect the sun's light, a dead leaf can be shown to kill the autumn, a glimpse of a spot and see the "panorama! "
A drop of water can reflect the light of the sun. The sound of horses' hooves, my heart is long. The bird must be comforting me, looking at the palace in the twilight, I actually found it a little decay, some nasty. I clearly remember that in the palace, I spent every night alone on the cold jade pillow, every day is spent in suspicion and jealousy, after the brocade clothes and jade food, silk and bamboo pipes and strings, I faced the greed and exploitation of Mao Yanshou people, and the lonely tears of my sisters. I had hoped that the emperor would favor me, but how could I bend my head to Mao Yanshou! "Old Bolt also looked that way, but only saw a group of people's backs, necks all stretched out long, as if many ducks, pinched by invisible hands, were lifted upward." (Q) to draw a circle, the hand cupped the pen just shaking, so the man spread the paper on the ground, Q crouch down, make all the strength in his life to draw a circle. He was afraid of being laughed at, and was determined to draw a circle, but the damnable pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient, and when it had just shaken and almost closed, it shrugged outward and became like a melon." An Appointment with a Guest (Zhao Shixiu) l It rains in every house during the yellow plum season, and there are frogs everywhere in the green grass pond. If you have an appointment and don't come over halfway through the night, you can knock on the chess pieces and drop the lamps. Material 2: The Reddish-red Lips of Li Qingzhao Cuju Strikes the Autumn Swing, and Rises to Laosely Integrate the Slender Hands. The dew is thick and the flowers are thin, and the sweat is light. When I see a guest coming in, my socks are covered with a gold hairpin. And shy away, leaning on the door to look back, but the plum sniffing. 1, autumn tree withered yellow leaves slowly want to fall posture is stopping, it is always before the landing, make the last struggle, to less and then do an elegant backflip or turn a circle, and then willingly become people's feet that a sound is not meant to be crunching. 2, the sky that a bend of the crescent moon issued a faint light, quietly sprinkled on the balcony. Under the hazy moonlight, those beautiful flowers in the daytime, verdant leaves, all seem much darker. At this time, a few freshly blossomed blossoms are ice-clear, emitting a wisp of fragrance, refreshing the heart. Ah! There is also a bud that is budding, will it open? I scrutinized for a while, suddenly, the bud moved a little ...... Finally, the tip of the bud unconsciously cracked a small hole, and then, the small hole slowly opened, and then the petals piece by piece gradually stretch out. That piece of petal like a crystal carved, even a flower vein can be seen clearly; flower heart white and tender, the edge of the flower through a layer of goose yellow." 1. Taoist Wang got up early every day and liked to go around the cave, like an old farmer, to look at his mansion. He was a little dissatisfied with the cave murals, dark, looking a little blurred. How good it is to be a little brighter, he found two helpers, carrying a bucket of lime. Grass tie brush loaded with a long handle, in the lime bucket dip a dip, began his painting. The first lime brush is too thin, the colorful is still hidden, the farmers work on a serious, he fine brush on the second time. The air here is dry, a moment of lime has dried. There is nothing, the Tang Dynasty smile, the Song Dynasty clothes, the cave became a pure white. Taoist wiped a handful of sweat naive smile, by the way, inquired about the market price of lime. He counted and counted, think for the time being there is no need to put the cave brush white, just brush these a few it, he put down the brush handle optimistically. 2, he sat on the ground, eyes stagnant, two eyes, everything can not be undone. Everything is still in front of their eyes, the executioner's knife up and down, he lost his dignity as a human being, he thought of death. The white diamond has been hung, he combed the scattered hair, washed his face, he wants to come clean, clean to go. After everything was finished, he slowly stepped on the stool, put his head into the white diamonds pulled into the circle, just when he was about to stomp over the stool, he thought of the "History", thought of his ideal. Yes, I can't be so light, so sorry for life. So he stepped off the stool, straightened his coat, and began to live again.
4. Observe a person to your nuances of language action demeanor writing essay, speedy no less than 500 words,Hello at first glance, she is quite tall, the figure is very good, not fat or thin, is a piece of material for dancing.
A closer look, she kept a short ear, her head is always a left and a right clip with two hairpins, the hair tightly gathered behind the ears, showing a smooth white face. Her eyes are not big, thin and long, but very bright, a smile becomes two slits.
Her nose is slightly upturned, giving her a playful feeling and making her look very cute. Her usual favorite thing to wear is a dress with white flowers on a blue background, with a wide and big hemline.
When she ran, the dress flew up like a flower butterfly.1. He was about thirteen or fourteen years old.
A sharp nose was embedded in his dark, chubby face. Long hair, long time not cut.
Thick eyebrows under a pair of big eyes, black eyeballs quite divine turn around. 2, the bushes were set aside, a child's head drilled in, this is a boy, about twelve, three years old, black and thin face, full of dust, hair about more than two inches long, messy, live like a magpie's nest.
3, Cuile is here in the mountains near and far the famous handsome girl, days of rain and sunshine, is not withered, not black, face plate white and clean, eyes clear and bright. A smile, mouth like a quiet moon, speak, sound like a yellow warbler playing hoof.
4, a garden door, there is a boy stuck on me. He was about eleven or twelve years old, wearing a red undershirt and blue shorts, with a drooping belt; he was covered with dirt, like a little landlord.
The hairy little flat head, set against a fair little round face, reminded me of a dandelion. He swung around in front of me and behind me like a moth to a flame, craning his neck to see my magenta.
5, this came, but scared I jumped, tilted his head to see, a twelve, three-year-old girl, sitting high on a tree branch, holding a harmonica, is ready to blow miles. She was wearing a fire-red flannel coat, set a short skirt of bean green.
The two small feet wearing Lux shoes hanging in the air and pulling, strange comfortable. Her head with pigtails leaning on the right shoulder, watery eyes to me winking playfully, nose slightly up, showing a naughty face.
As long as you see her, will like her from the heart eyes. 6, Xiao Ju to this year has been fourteen years old, but her body grows tall, arm is still so small, cheekbones as usual, ten fingers like a bunch of withered bamboo branches, as if a folding will break; because she is very skinny, so it looks like her body is light and fluffy.
7, Jianhua students have an even figure, not fat and not thin, black hair combed into two thin braids, rosy melon face, round big eyes, cheeks have two deep dimples, look lively and lovely. 8, our yard came to two countryside children.
One is a sister, combing pigtails, wearing a small flower coat. One is a younger brother, the hair left on the head, like a snap of a teapot lid.
9, small Maraha (Mongolians), eyebrows clear, red lips and teeth, round face, high nose, a head of black curly hair, quite handsome. Just long long ears, really ugly, but the old people said, that is "Buddha face", blessed.
10, that is a ten-year-old thin bones of the child he is 7 years old, not high, thin, but looks very spiritual. He kept very short hair, handsome face with a pair of black and bright eyes, high nose, like a small carrot.
People who have been to his house say he has good features and is a good-looking boy. My sister is very cute looking and she is 3 months old.
A few days ago was my sister's 100-day anniversary, and my mom drove my baby sister to Love Your Baby to take some pictures. My sister has small, sparkling eyes, a bulging face and a small mouth.
She has a pair of cute ears and a pair of small hands that are clenched in fists and wiggling from time to time. You see! The little feet that are fleshy like little buns are adorable! I love my sister.
In our class my favorite student is the little handsome Geng Hao, you see! He is not tall, but he is very solid, his arms and legs are really like ripe corn cobs. He likes to wear his jacket unbuttoned, listen to him say, "That will look more imposing."
Geng Hao's head is long and round, his red face is round, and coincidentally, his dark, shining eyes are also round. My favorite thing about him is that he smiles, and when he smiles his dark eyes turn into two curved crescents.
His red mouth loves to tell jokes, and his jokes always make him laugh before we laugh out loud, and then the curved crescent moon appears again. My father was a first mate on a merchant ship in an ocean-going company.
He is tall, yellowish hair naturally curly, white square face embedded in a pair of eyes full of wisdom, high nose under the bridge, a pair of nostrils look particularly large. When I was young, I often looked at his nostrils and asked, "Dad, why are your nostrils so big?" He always smiled and answered, "I don't know. He always smiled and answered; "Choose a horse to choose a horse with big nostrils, because a horse with big nostrils runs fast.
Dad was a sprint champion in school when he was young, ask mom if you don't believe me." At this point, my mom and I would look at his big nostrils and laugh.
Dad looks thin, medium-sized, with a pair of not too big and not too small eyes, with a small flat head, and a high nose to look more spiritual. The angular lips are full of beard like steel needles.
Dad's knowledge can be a lot, often tell me a lot of magical and interesting science stories, come up with many ways to exercise me. In our class there is such a little boy, he is not tall, his body is like a small tree, and his limbs are like freshly grown twigs.
His thin body is holding up a big head, really worry about the weak body can hold up? His face white, the most striking is his pair of big watery eyes, staring round, sometimes really remind people of the Journey to the West in the Monkey King's fiery eyes. People say, "The eyes are the windows of the soul."
His big head is filled with rich knowledge to be envied. He also has a dexterous little mouth, red, he sang a very beautiful song! We all understand him, right? Do you want to know who he is? He is our classmate Wang Yuxi.
My cousin is 5 years old this year, do not look at her only 5 years old, but sometimes I can not say her, have to let her three points. My cousin is very cute, chubby face with two dimples.
Sometimes when we laugh at her, she says, "I know what you're laughing at, you're laughing at my dimples.
5. Description of the details of the action of the essay"Character" is the soul of the article, but in the student's work in the common character image is often one of a kind, neither personality, but also not vivid, the whole article looks dry and boring, lack of infectious.
A careful reading of these works, will find such a **** the same problem: often just focus on the pursuit of something to write a complete, but ignored the vivid and specific, meticulous detail description. Detailed description of the scope is very broad, its role is also multifaceted, but the main character portrayal, characterization.
An evocative details, like cells on the human body, without it, people have lost their lives; article less details, the character image has lost flesh and blood and charm. Writer Li Jun said: "A detail in the role of revealing the character traits of the character, sometimes and a plot, a play shoulder with the same role."
As the saying goes, "You can see the spirit in the smallest details". The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the depiction of details.
Lu Xun's "The True Story of Ah Q" has a detailed description of Ah Q's pre-execution drawings: "To draw the circle, the hand cupped the pen just shaking, so that person will be the paper spread on the ground, Ah Q crouched down, and made every effort to draw the circle. He was afraid of being laughed at, determined to draw a circle, but the damn pen is not only very heavy, and disobedient, just a shaking almost seam, but then shrugged outward, into a melon mold."
This behavioral details, specific, image, vividly reflect the character traits of Q - until the death still adhere to the self-deception of the "spiritual victory". When people read this detail description, who can not feel Q's ridiculous, sad, pitiful? And how can they not "mourn his misfortune and be angry with him for not fighting", and then think y about the inferiority of nationals? The first time I saw this was when I was a student at the University of California, Berkeley.
For example, Balzac's Eugénie Grandet wrote about Grandet's life in the novel "Eugénie Grandet". It is the details of the description, so that the characters have flesh and blood, distinctive character, vivid image; with vivid characters, the whole article is full of vitality because of it, resulting in a strong infectious force.
Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, not as long as the writing "fine" can be. Good detailing must be useful, true and typical.
It must show the character of the spirit and deepen the theme of the article service, it must be in line with the character traits, in line with the reality of life, should be able to highlight the character's personality traits. The details come from where? Literature comes from life, details in the colorful life.
Do a life of the people, when and where to pay attention to observe the people and things around, especially their own description of the object. In the streets of Shaoxing, at the Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun observed the short-suited gangs and the long-shirted guests, and only then did he "draw out the soul of the silent nation".
Dublin's gloomy coffee room, Joyce coldly surveyed the wandering ***, crooks, psychopaths, beggars and the rich, brewing the world-shattering Ulysses. Throughout history, great writers, always lifelong heart to capture those who make the soul trembling people and things, melting into a chapter that has been passed down through the ages.
Capture the details, use the details, so that this golden key for you to use, so that your article exudes glitter.
6. Detailed description to include action description essay paragraph junior"Character" is the soul of the article, but in the student's work in the common character image is often one of a kind, neither individuality, but also not vivid, the whole article seems dry and boring, lack of infectious force. Carefully read these works, will find such a **** the same problem: often just a pursuit of something to write a complete, but ignored the vivid and specific, meticulous detailing.
Detailed description of the scope is very broad, its role is also multifaceted, but the main characterization, characterization. An evocative details, like cells on the human body, without it, people have lost their lives; article less details, the character image has lost flesh and blood and charm. Writer Li Jun said: "a detail in the role of revealing the character traits of the character, sometimes and a plot, a play shoulder with the same role." As the common saying goes, "See the spirit in the smallest details.