From the Garden of Hundred Clovers to the House of Three Flavors
Original: Zhai Xiuling
Classical reminiscence
There is no need to talk about the turquoise beds of vegetables, smooth stone wells and bars, the tall soapberry trees, and the purple and red mulberries; nor is there any need to say that the cicadas chanted in the leaves of the trees, that fat wasps crouched in the cauliflowers, and that the light and swift caller of the sky (lark) suddenly scurried straight up from the grass to the clouds. Lark) suddenly from the grass straight to the clouds. Just the short mud wall around the root of the area, there are infinite interesting. The lacewing sings here and the crickets play the piano. If you turn over the broken bricks, you will sometimes meet a centipede; there is also a spotted paper, which, if you press its spine with your finger, will emit a puff of smoke from its back nostrils with a snap. The He Shou Wu vine and the wood lily vine are entwined, the wood lily has the fruit of the lotus house, and the He Shou Wu has a bloated root. Some people say, He Shouwu root is there like a human form, eat it can become immortal, so I often pull it up, implicated and pulled up, and have also broken the mud wall because of it, but never saw a piece of the root like a human form. If one is not afraid of thorns. You can also pick raspberries, like small coral beads saved into small balls, and sour and sweet, color and taste are far better than mulberry.
Scenic Appreciation
This paragraph is a wonderful writing scene, the level of well-organized, well-organized, focused. Both seize the characteristics of things, but also in line with the children's psychology, write all the "paradise" of the interest of the Hundred Grass Garden. It is a model for students to learn from, I tried to take the children from several aspects of the imitation writing, as follows:
1. Imitation of the sentence. "Needless to say ... and needless to say ... alone ..." from the whole to the local, emphasizing the content of the "alone", the first "needless to say", "needless to say". The first "needless to say" goes from low to high for still life, and the second "needless to say" goes from high to low for animals. Overall from plants to animals, local from animals to plants, writing colorful and orderly.
2. Imitation angle. Shape, sound, color, taste, spring, summer and autumn scenery are all ready. "Green", "purple" and other colors, "fat", "tall", "swollen" and other forms of writing. swollen" and so on to write the shape, from the visual to write; "long chanting" "playing the piano" and so on to write the sound, from the auditory to write; "sour and sweet" from the sense of taste to write. Different perspectives depict the spring, summer and autumn scenery of the Hundred Grass Garden.
3. Imitation of rhetoric. The clever use of metaphor, personification rhetorical devices, vivid language. "The lacewing sings low here, and the crickets play the piano here." The use of similes, vividly and imaginatively written lacewings and crickets wonderful and beautiful chirping, revealing the author's favorite feelings. "If one is not afraid of thorns. You can also pick raspberries, like little coral beads saved into little balls, sour and sweet, far better in color and flavor than mulberries." The use of metaphor, vividly depicting the shape of raspberries, exudes the author's favorite feelings.
Student imitation
Imitation 1: our paradise - classroom
Needless to say that the bright windows, neat desks, such as the mountain of books, a wealth of book corners; do not have to say that the students of the reading sound, the sound of singing, the teacher's passionate voice of the lecture; a single classroom in front of the small whiteboard a piece of infinite interest. Language teacher writing a wonderful words and phrases, people think a thousand; math teacher interpretation of a fun topic, let a person enlightened; English teacher linked a string of English vocabulary, so that people convinced; art teacher depicted a beautiful picture, let a person pleasing to the eye; history teacher recalled a major event, let a person recall ... ... ...the classroom is the greatest paradise for us to grow up! (Class 7(3)?
Imitation 2: The square is the most paradise
Needless to say, the tender green grass, bright lotus, windy willows, standing osmanthus; and do not have to say that the children in the happy skateboarding, the old people sitting around on the stone benches to talk about family life, the love of beauty of the aunts in the square of the elegant dance. The fountain area under the statue of Han Wang alone is breathtaking to the tourists. Stone bridge lying here to listen, tiles clean and bright dazzling beauty, ancient Chinese characters written Fu Manchu wall, spotlights just waiting for the music to wake them up, the water flow here on standby, the song sounded, suddenly high and low water columns, a moment to form a flower, a moment to change into a circle, a moment to jet into a rainbow, a moment to the clouds, a moment to dance in mid-air, a moment in the lower part of the euphony. Look at the water droplets splashing silver chain strings, listen to the music ringing song tantalizing, touching the water sprinkling cool bursts, smell the air wind clip flower scent wisps. Simply a heavenly feast, pleasing to the eye, so that people are cozy and comfortable. (Seven (3) class? (Zhu Zhang Aidi)
Imitation 3: Happy in the sea of books
Needless to say, the dim lamp, beautiful wallpaper, arrogant air conditioning, warm nest; do not have to say that the square on the fixed point of loud and clear singing and dancing sound, the window of the pedestrian whispering at night, the room clock tireless ticking ticking sound. The books in the bookcase alone make me love them. They attract me, tempt me, here are astronomy and geography, ancient and modern Chinese and foreign; here are literature and science, painting and dance; here are sadness and joy, ideals and beliefs. Every time I open a new chapter, it is like the morning sunrise shining brightly, bringing me light and hope. Follow the footsteps of the protagonist, into a brand new world, and they swim together, struggle together, happy together, sad together ...... read their life, but also clear their own life to go. (Seven (3) class? Wu Yuven)
Imitation 4: Labyrinth amusement
Needless to say the horror of the haunted house, exciting jumpers, thrilling bungee jumping, horrifying pirate ship; do not have to say that the dream of the flower house, the romantic merry-go-round, the picturesque Ferris wheel. Simply the "Zhuge Labyrinth", enough to make people forget. Yellowish wooden fence cut off the line of sight, deep green barbed wire blocked the way, any how you left and right, panting, but also not the slightest sympathy, can only be anxious to turn around in place, and so you are fast frantic discouragement, but also in a desperate attempt to give you the illusion of revealing a passageway, calling you to go exploring. So the labyrinth vaguely revealed many figures, look closely, young faces some distressed, some pleased, some pondering, some smiling. As the children whizzed by, the vegetation shook their heads as if to remind them, "That's right! This is the path." Suddenly, figures return and chaos ensues. A simple fence meandering around can actually trap you in a square inch. Although you are not willing, but there is nothing you can do; although it is hard to run around, but enjoy it. (Seven (3) class? Li Yizhou)
Imitation 5: Happy Spring Festival Gala
Needless to say, the Spring Festival Gala gorgeous stage, dazzling lights, a huge lineup of performers, exquisite makeup; do not have to say that the host of the passionate blessings, singers wonderful melodious singing, the actors and actresses of the delicate and colorful dance. Just one skit full of joy, there is infinite fun. Joy, anger, sadness and happiness are all in a flash, sadness and joy are all in the choreography. From "Learning to Drive" to "Real and Fake Teachers", from "Going Home" to "Advice", from "At Your Service" to "Rejoicing and Having Fun Together". There is the father's kindness and filial piety at home, the rain and sunshine of children's growth, the blood kinship of compatriots on both sides of the Taiwan Straits, the truthfulness and pragmatism of the unit's work, and the **** enjoyment of the times. The city streets, there is the "Belt and Road" of China-Africa friendship. Good intention, full of laughs. After the funny, let you realize life, feel the great changes of the times, thankful to get, joy and happiness! (Class 7(3)?
Imitation 6: The joy of fish and water
There is no need to say that the foggy mountains, the yellow leaves of the woods, green and neat vegetable fields; there is no need to say that the air fluttering butterflies, the ground jumping frogs, earthworms wriggling in the earth. The river on the side of the mountain in my hometown alone is infinitely interesting. The water is crystal clear, the stones are smooth and rounded, the weeds dance at will, the leaves as a flat boat, the petals drift with it. Look at the countless fish playing back and forth in the water, I am not fish, but I know they are so happy. Look, they are so free and easy, a moment to show the surface, a moment to dive into the cracks, let want to catch a few of my jumping up and down, at my wit's end. If you are lucky, you can also meet the "warrior in red", it is wearing armor, waving both pincers, tentacles swinging freely, like a provocation, but have no intention to watch it valiantly away. (Seven (3) class? (Chen Xinru)
Teacher's Comment
Recently, I taught Mr. Lu Xun's From the Hundred-Clover Garden to the House of Three Flavors, and led the children to read the text carefully, to learn the wonderful scenery, and to feel the infinite fun of the Hundred-Clover Garden, and the joyful "school life" of the House of Three Flavors. At that time, although the hundred grass garden is deserted, but really is a paradise, then the private school facilities, although simple, the teaching content is boring, but really let a person feel the joy of the children, the freedom of learning life. And happened to read the recent successive articles by Mr. Li Zhenxi "school, please give students a wild space", "education, please give teachers a "wild" space", it is very emotional.
So in the arrangement of imitation writing, although the skills and methods are clear, but I am worried for the children sad. The original ecological garden disappeared, close to the nature of the game is gone, not allowed to chase between classes, teachers and students are bound, now their "paradise" where? Is the site of the narrow playground, is the elaborate artificial park, is a variety of toy stores, is a rare bookstore, or the Internet cafes of the pandemonium? I don't know. With the heart of the immortal obsession, still issued a fragment of imitation writing task.
The next day, the homework was neatly submitted, and after reading it one by one, I couldn't help but feel happy. The world of children has never lacked joy, perhaps we are too compassionate. Crowded classrooms with small blackboards are a paradise for them to learn knowledge; well-equipped stadiums are a paradise for them to play games; musical fountains with changing shadows are a paradise for them to appreciate the beauty of modern art; and colorful books are a paradise for them to broaden their horizons and increase their knowledge. The various amusement programs in the amusement park, of course, can be fun; a wide variety of television programs, you can get the extreme enjoyment of audio-visual; the changing seasons of the beautiful scenery, how can not make the mind of the sensitive children to enjoy the play.
The fragment of the imitation writing, the children not only show a strong level of language expression, but also write endless joy and their extensive knowledge, as a teacher more happy and happy. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do this, but I'm sure I'll be able to!