My friend Xiao Yun will definitely be admitted to Tsinghua University
(acrostic poem)
I am the lucky one in my three lives,
I am blessed with pure friendship By you.
The Xiao family has great virtue and good fortune,
Yun Kai is delighted to see Wen Quxing.
Scheduled for this year’s election day,
The capable man leaps to the dragon gate.
Everyone performs well in the examination room,
Good answers lead to high scores.
The clear mountains and beautiful waters are shining brightly,
The Cai Cai notice has entered Beijing!
As for the poem you wrote, if you change it, add some rhyme, and incorporate a "positive" meaning, it will be a good poem. I like it very much!
The extraordinary years,
p>The scholar is full of ink.
But the breeze is refreshing in June.
Faith goes with the season.
People are diligent,
There is no limit to the sea of ??learning,
The future is bright!