Philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I walk close to the ground and do not dance in the clouds." This famous quote expresses image and profound meaning, it will trigger different associations or feelings in us.
In connection with this famous saying, choose your own angle, set your own intention, make your own topic, choose your own style (except poetry), and write an essay of no less than 800 words. (北京海淀区07年高三第二学期期末考试作文题)
审题指导
这是一道名言警句类材料作文。 Philosopher Wittgenstein's famous saying "I stick to the ground and walk, not dance in the clouds", in which "ground" and "clouds", "walking" and "dancing". "I walk on the ground" and "dance on the clouds", "walk" and "dance", "stick on" and "not on", three sets of words contrast, one against the other, a very clear attitude.
The poetic meaning of the famous lines is conducive to the emotion of the candidates, the philosophy contained in the candidates to stimulate rational thinking, the metaphorical expression can produce different understandings, so it makes sense that the intention of this question presents a diversified trend.
Seizing the words "stick", "ground", "walking", you can talk about down-to-earth do people do things to do learning, or perseverance, day after day to achieve the dream.
Seize the word "clouds", to discover its characteristics, can be analogous to things with similar points, such as "clouds" far and high, can be analogous to the lofty pursuit and ideals; "clouds", "colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, colorful, and colorful. "colorful, analogous to the beautiful thoughts and spirit;" "clouds" varied, analogous to the vagaries of attitude; "clouds" vague, analogous to the unstable foundation and so on.
The question asks for "self-definition", which means that one can agree with the philosopher Wittgenstein's point of view, or one can analyze it critically and refute it by pushing it to one-sidedness and extremes. The establishment of a point of view depends on the understanding of the metaphorical meaning of the philosopher's quotation. For example, if "dancing on the clouds" is understood to mean stretching freely, this state of life can be praised and advocated; if "dancing on the clouds" is understood to mean galloping across the world, it can be used to illustrate a wide-ranging posture of life, or an uninhibited state of mind. On the other hand, if "dancing on the clouds" is interpreted as boastfulness, it can be used to attack vague, mysterious and useless remarks; if "dancing on the clouds" is interpreted as complacency and forgetfulness, it can be used to criticize the undesirable phenomenon of looking down on everything and having no one in mind; if "dancing on the clouds" is interpreted as a state of life, it can be used to explain the life posture or the uninhibited spiritual realm. The "dancing in the clouds" can be interpreted as longing for illusion, which can analyze the idea of unrealistically fantasizing about the result of getting the attention of millions of people.
Better ideas: down-to-earth can go to success; dancing in the clouds, failure is beautiful; dancing in the clouds as a heresy, is the excuse for mediocrity and lethargy; no dancing in the clouds of the ambition, which has the courage to get out of the ground; feet in the earth, the heart of the clouds; walking is not as good as dancing; dancing in the clouds of the brilliant life. First, the original title
Western philosopher Wittgenstein once said: "I stick to the ground walking, not dancing in the clouds." This quote is a poetic image, a profound meaning, it will trigger the reader many associations or feelings.
Please combine this famous quote, choose a perspective, set your own intention, make your own topic, choose your own style, write an article of not less than 800 words.
Second, the intention of the proposition
2007 Sichuan college entrance examination essay has been settled, the college entrance examination of the first line of language teachers and will be going to the examination of the students have a lot of places worth to reflect, there are a lot of propositional direction is worth to grasp, there are a lot of review strategy is worth to implement.
Through the marking, insight into the candidates' composition is not as satisfactory as people think. The line of old-fashioned, old-fashioned ideas, long description of the example, language stagnation, confusion, and even worse, not even the examination of the topic pass, off-topic off-topic people abound. In fact, this year's Sichuan essay from the composition of the word, "a step and a lifetime" is? United? Group, on the surface of the "step" and "lifetime" position can be replaced with each other, in fact, not. However, some candidates made a mistake in this aspect, they simply dealt with the topic, mistakenly thinking that "one step" + "one life" = "one life" + "one step". One step". In the line of the "life" and "one step" two parts of the talk on the end, without the slightest regard for the inner connection between the two. Unbeknownst to the reader, there is an implied relationship between this apparent juxtaposition of words and phrases, one of condition and result. "One step is the condition, and a lifetime is the result. How to choose how to take the first "step" in life, will directly determine your harvest very different "life".
A lot of candidates in the intention to appear low, generally talk about "people only cross the correct first? step, it is possible to harvest a brilliant life" or "a careless, all lose", dare to reverse the intention of the candidates are very few, the candidates can be asked: the first step out of the right, it will be able to harvest a brilliant life? Cross the wrong first step in life, doomed to a lifetime of rain? The answer is certainly negative, life is full of variables, the latter can not be ignored to make amends. But dare to boldly reflect on the slant to kill a shot of the candidates will appear to be a phoenix.
2007 Sichuan essay, the main examination of the candidates of two aspects of the ability. One, the ability to look at things dialectically; the second, the ability to correct values, life orientation.
Only the candidates have a unique perception of life and thinking, there is a real sense of life, it is possible to write a personalized composition of "feelings". This year, Sichuan's college entrance examination essay in these two aspects embodied in the best, "one step" and "life" between the existence of a dialectical relationship, only insight into the subject of the kernel, in the line of quiet interpretation of the relationship between the two, so the article is considered to be in the development of the level of The first step is to make a breakthrough, the idea of "hardness".
Third, the idea of pointing out
This essay belongs to the theme of the essay, the main set of questions? In the "I stick to the ground walking, not dancing in the clouds" this sentence, since the questioner? After the definition of this sentence is a quote, then the candidates should be in the connotation of this sentence to work hard, carefully pondered, savored. Because, some materials, especially fables and quotes, their meaning is often implicit, with a strong metaphor or symbolism. If we talk about the matter, we can only touch the skin and get a superficial understanding. If you want to penetrate the deeper meaning, you have to be good at analogies, and grasp the similarities between "things" and "meanings", and dig deeper into their connotations.
"I stick to the ground and walk" can be understood as the cause of life, to be calm and pragmatic, one step at a time. "Dancing on the clouds" can be interpreted as the cause, the life of impetuous and frivolous, seemingly nebulous, no support. The two clauses are linked together to show the philosopher's point of view. Together can see the philosopher's point of view: agree with the calm and pragmatic pursuit of life, reject the impetuous and frivolous life choices. However, this paper can also reverse the intention, see the following part of the analysis.
Fourth, the idea of examples
This article from the intention, the following four ideas are recommended: First, calm and pragmatic life is the most beautiful. Second, the vain "dance" is the most terrible. Third, there is no down-to-earth, how to succeed in life? Fourth, the "virtual" doomed to life an empty.
Then, this essay can not reverse the intention? The students have a philosophical view of the philosophers Wi? The point of view of the philosophers Wiegandstein to defend? Thinking about the reverse to seek new, along this line of thought constantly ask: why can only walk on the ground, but can not dance in the clouds? Then formulated such a title "both to walk on the ground, but also to dance in the clouds" "dance in the clouds" and so on, the author believes that such an intention is also possible, and these intentions are more novel than the positive intention, and better demonstrate the quality of the candidate's thinking. They have jumped out of the shackles of the material, but stand at a higher level to look down on the material, and then come up with this uncommon intention.
However, the following ideas are certainly not to be understood and belong to the category of off-topic. The first is to understand the given material as a choice of life, and then determine the topic as "choice", the proposed title of the "choice of mind". Secondly, to understand the given material as a "journey" of life, first walking on the ground, and then the dance in the air, to formulate the title of the "journey". Third, the "stick to the ground walking" defined as resting on the ordinary attitude of life, the "dance in the clouds" defined as the pursuit of great life goals, to develop the "ordinary and great" title.
Fifth, the best show dancing in the clouds
Philosopher Wittgenstein said: "I stick to the ground walking, not dancing in the clouds." We might as well understand this as a choice of life posture. The philosopher liked to stay on the ground, and he chose to walk, while I think that flamboyant gestures can also make life perfect - even if it lands on a cloud.
Thinking of Gilgamesh, the heroic king of ancient Greek mythology. He was destined to be proud of everything, including himself. He fought, for the sake of his country. He was bloodthirsty, for the sake of the light. The only way to end a war is still war. With such an ordinary sword, he utilized it to the utmost. As the king of kings, he was tired all his life. Never rested until he died. A frown was a low chant, a tilt of the head was silence. What was there was innate and could not be thrown away. Until the dance stops in mid-air, slightly raised lips stiffened at the corners of the mouth, the background is a long time to rule the world.
There is no trace in the sky, but the birds have flown. Gilgamesh's life could not be called a classic, but it was dazzlingly gorgeous.
Equally stunning is that ancient people, the Bohemians. This is a group of dancing souls, wandering souls, pure souls. They are hot-blooded, passionate and "dishonest". They migrate with the wind, live by the water, and settle in any part of the world. You could say they have no country - they are at home in all four corners of the world. Their dancing bodies and moving feet become a whirlwind that sweeps the world. Though neglected, mocked, and ostracized, that was all once upon a time. Nowadays the minds of all mankind find a moment's repose in the bosom of Bohemia. It was born of man's primal longing - to escape! To escape from the prison he has drawn for himself and to dance outside. To wield one's own passion with abandon. The dance of freedom winds from this mountain to that river. Snowflakes fall, and heaven and earth are pure white.
Bohemian splendor to wander as a carrier, the whole process of shocking. Its existence is the so-called eternal miracle of life.
People's life, you can choose to stick to the ground walking, down-to-earth every step. Let each footprints leave their own or efforts or joy or struggle or anger of the emotions, that their life is not in vain. But it might as well be a different way. Sheathe your sword with a wild eyebrow. The passion of debauchery is unleashed, putting life on a cloud, twisting and turning every step with power and finesse. The passion of fire and water can also present another style of life, another style.
As long as we can dance, what's the harm in standing on the clouds?
Simple evaluation: this article dares to reverse the idea, and in the beginning of the article to highlight the point of view: gorgeous gestures can also make life perfect - even if it is in the clouds, cut into the topic quickly. Then, the material chosen in the example is novel, which gives the readers a bright feeling and also shows the author's broad reading vision. Finally, the author at the end of the text again to ask questions, straight to the topic, before and after the echo, all in one. Seek down-to-earth quit fickle
Philosopher Wittgenstein said: "I stick to the ground walking, not dancing in the clouds." Ground walking, often the wind and rain, this is the wind of down-to-earth; dancing in the clouds, often fall to the face of the nose, this is the air of impatience. From the philosophers' quotes, we can see that whatever we do, we need to be down-to-earth and abstain from impatience.
A person with the style of seeking down-to-earth, abstaining from impatience, will be able to learn and learn.
The Three Kingdoms when tube Ning and Hua Xin same seat reading, tube Ning can be down-to-earth meditation study, not for the outside world disturbed, while Hua Xin is very impetuous. There is a dignitary sitting in a luxury sedan chair from the outside passing, tube Ning ignore, as usual, concentrate, while Hua Xin face envy, immediately ran out to see. Guan Ning then cut off the seat, and cut off his friendship. In the end, Guan Ning became a highly respected scholar, while Hua Xin was a loser in academics.
An army with the style of seeking down-to-earth and avoiding impatience will be invincible and invincible.
Cao Cao once led an army to beat Zhang Xiu, after the victory, Cao Cao's army complacent, to the commander in chief, down to the soldiers, all seem very impetuous. As a result, Zhang Xiu was defeated in his second campaign. On the other hand, Zhang Xiu, after the defeat, was able to build up his strength and plan for the future, so he eventually won the battle. Cao Cao and Zhang Xiu, a victory and a defeat, is not the best interpretation of the importance of seeking pragmatism and avoiding impatience?
A country with a pragmatic and impatient style can develop steadily and prosper.
In the early days of the founding of the country, the Chinese land is still in the process of development. Many people want to achieve overnight success, quick success, so there is "three years to catch up with the British, five years to surpass the United States, twelve years to realize the ****productivism" such unrealistic goal slogans; so there is a large forest, steel refining radical scenes; so there is "a radish thousand pounds, two donkeys can not be pulled! "Such absurd" fruit. The result of the impetuous "Great Leap Forward" campaign not only did not leap forward, but let the Chinese economy towards the "great regression".
Whether it is a person, or a collective, a country, only to seek down-to-earth, quit impatience, to go farther. When we every mirage for the mirage of the wonders of the pouring sigh, we have thought of the sky is actually human hands by their own in another place, brick by brick to build up?
Today's society is full of impatience, can "dance in the clouds" has become the goal of the crowd. So it costs money to publish a paper, mortgage house speculation in the stock market, the destruction of the environment in exchange for GDP data ...... and so on and so forth. I don't know the more impatient, but from the success of the farther away -- I don't see put the false name of the person to become a scandal, the game to seek wealth of the person who lost his family, the quick success of the person by the nature of the severe punishment.
The down-to-earth wind, like the top of the mountain pine, the wind does not blow, the thunder does not frighten; impatience of the air, like the wall weeds, the wind is withered, the rain is down.
Friends, dancing in the clouds, although delicate, but easy to fall; stick to the ground walking, although plain, but steady. Why don't we seek to be practical, quit being impatient, and walk the road of our own life?
The author agrees with the philosophers and discusses the importance and necessity of being practical and avoiding impatience from three perspectives: the individual, the collective, and the nation. The author cites positive and negative examples from the past and present, which is informative and full of content. The first is that it is not a good idea to use the same method as the second, but it is a good idea to use the same method as the third.
Expression of the "general + juxtaposition" structure is complete and clear, the positive and negative comparison is clear, the metaphor is apt, the language is elegant, accurate and fluent. Climbing to the heights
"I walk on the ground, not dance on the clouds," is a famous quote by the philosopher Wittgenstein, which seems to tell people to put themselves in a low place in order to be stable and secure. However, I think that the mentality of not daring to climb up to high places for fear of losing one's footing and falling down is very inappropriate. If everyone harbors the idea of "falling down", how can individuals make progress and how can society develop?
In terms of thinking, people should try to climb up as high as possible.
Some people say: "People should have a profound thought, otherwise it will become a hopeless well." Yes, what a terrible situation it would be for a man to be unable to ascend to the heights of thought! Even if the biggest family business is given to him, he will fail in a big way. Liu Zen, the lord of Shu, is such a person, he did not let his thoughts ascend to the high ground, so he has no great ambition, lacks of initiative, speaks rashly, rewards and punishments are not clear, and ultimately buried the kingdom Liu Bei laid down. Only when people think from a higher level of thought can they think thoroughly about problems and see farther and more accurately than others.
In terms of realm, one should try to ascend to higher places.
Wang Anshi climbed Feilai Peak and wrote, "Fear not the floating clouds, only in the highest level," Du Fu on the top of Mount Tai wrote, "When the top of the mountain, a glimpse of the mountains," these are reflected in the poets of the realm of transcendence of the mundane. People only have a higher realm, there will be Su Xun "Taishan collapse in front of the calm and not afraid", there will be Tao Qian "picking chrysanthemums under the East Fence, leisurely see the South Mountain," the transcendence, there will be Li Bai "Born to be useful, the gold is scattered, but also come back". It is only when you can see the heroism of Li Bai's "I was born to be useful, a thousand gold is still coming back" that you can see the righteousness of Tan Sitong's "death is good for you, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast, fast".
In terms of status, one should try to get to the top.
Napoleon said, "A soldier who doesn't want to be a general is not a good soldier." Yes, in social life, everyone should pursue their higher position. Imagine, a lieutenant Eisenhower absolutely can not play the role of a commander-in-chief Eisenhower. If a person is only willing to be the lowest level of society, then he can only play the role of an ordinary person. If a man wants to do something great, he must rise to a more important position.
A female teacher once told her students: I dreamed of becoming a great man when I was a child, and when I grew up, I realized that this was unlikely; so I dreamed again of becoming the wife of a great man, but now I am married to a mediocre clerk; and so I continue to dream of making myself the teacher of a great man. Perhaps in the future, this dream may not necessarily be realized. But I still feel comforted and enriched, and a round of applause rang out in the classroom. With courage and strength, in the great world to strive for a certain height, do not have to care if you are the highest, because as you press toward the finish line, your soul has reached an erect height!
A thoughtful, ambitious person will become a good person, will be a person who can "feel comfort and abundance", so we should let themselves up to the heights. Tolstoy said, "I would like to stand on high, because there I can hear the voice of God." How about you, my friend?
Point of view
The author interprets "walking on the ground" as "putting oneself in a low place in order to be stable", and associates "not dancing on the clouds" with "some people in social life". In the social life of some people "for fear of losing their footing and falling and dare not ascend to the heights of the mentality", as a starting point, rebound pipa, tit for tat from three aspects of the reasons for ascending to the heights of the insights unique and novel, in line with the theme.
Expression of the same "general + juxtaposition" structure, hierarchical. The quotes are accurate and rich in language.
Read the following text, according to the requirements of the composition.
Philosopher Wittgenstein said, "I stick to the ground and walk, not dance in the clouds." This famous quote expresses image and profound meaning, it will trigger different associations or feelings in us.
In connection with this famous saying, choose your own angle, set your own intention, make your own topic, choose your own style (except poetry), and write an essay of no less than 800 words. (北京海淀区07年高三第二学期末期考试作文题)