The full text has 30 natural paragraphs, mostly using short sentences to express the content. For example, "A group of flourishing yo
The full text has 30 natural paragraphs, mostly using short sentences to express the content. For example, "A group of flourishing young people" succinctly expresses the enthusiasm and unrestrainedness of young life; "Forgetting love and dying" effectively expresses the scene of boiling life and the unstoppable surge of power; others such as "The setting sun shines on the banner" and " All I heard was rumbling, rumbling, rumbling" and "the more you beat, the harder it gets" and other sentences, all of which were sonorous and exciting.
This article uses a lot of parallelism. There are parallelisms within sentences, between sentences, and between paragraphs. They not only appear staggered, but also occur in succession, such as "reminds people of..." and "the more they beat, the harder they beat." , all using three parallel sentences in a row, like a river flowing thousands of miles, unstoppable. Many parallelisms are neat and neat, such as "Sudden rain is the rapid drumbeat; whirlwind is the flying tassels; frogs are the jumping footsteps; sparks are the flashing pupils; tiger fighting is the strong grace." One section is high-spirited; there are also parallels that progress layer by layer, such as "break free, break through, knock away", "shock you, burn you, intimidate you", etc., which are overwhelming and breathtaking.
The text maintains a fast pace from beginning to end. One parallel after another, one climax after another, leaving no room for breathing. The fast pace makes the content more enthusiastic and exciting, fully expressing the charm of life and power gushing out.
Problem Research
1. What does this article want to express?
There are many opinions on the purpose of this article:
To celebrate the power of life. This power is expressed by the passionate and unrestrained waist drum of the northwest men;
It expresses the strong desire to break through the constraints and obstacles. The barren yellow land and sleepy life make the people living here feel too much material and spiritual oppression and fetters. Ansai waist drum expresses the power of breaking away, breaking through, and pushing away all the burdens of tradition;
Praise to the beauty of masculinity. "A group of young people" who are "as simple as that piece of sorghum", they "release such majestic and majestic energy", showing a unique beauty;
People should Live and behave happily like this. "All the clutter is left behind", breaking through the layers of hard shells on people's bodies. There is no need to care about fame and fortune, no need to worry about gains and losses, no need to be pale and haggard.
2. The northwest seems to have become synonymous with poverty and backwardness. Why does the author praise the men of the northwest in this way?
The northwest is the main birthplace of the Chinese nation. It once had the prosperity of the Qin, Han and Tang Dynasties, and has a glorious civilization that dominates the world. Today, with its dignified land and poor life, the northwest seems to be out of date. Why does the author praise this land so affectionately? What to sing about? ──"The body digesting red beans, old pumpkins" has not lost hope because of the poverty and isolation of life. The resurrected life energy is rushing inside this heavy body, and one day it will erupt. There is hope for the people here and there is hope for the land here.
Being behind is temporary. As long as life is still looking forward to "fighting", the day of rebirth is not far away. Corresponding questions can be discussed around this topic.
Read and write after class
Dance like crazy, dance like crazy.
Flash and shine; radiate, shine out.
Fire is fierce, which generally means blazing and enthusiastic.
Splash in all directions; shoot in all directions.
Hyper, very excited.
Dark and dim, not bright.
Bond ① Tangled and unable to escape; bondage: breaking free ~ breaking through the power of old habits ~.
②The connection between feelings and feelings, the inner relationship between people (things). (Usually referring to family, friendship, or love)
③In some modern entertainment works, online novels, light novels, comics, animations, and TV series, this word is often used to express some kind of strong connection between two people. , as if connected by clues, similar to "fate", it may not necessarily be family affection, friendship, love, etc., it may be hatred, interdependence, rivalry, etc. It can be explained as cause and effect.
Suddenly; suddenly; inadvertently.
Complicated and complicated. /Complex, lacking unity and coordination, and noisy.
Struggle, impact, struggle.
To burn, to burn (human skin and flesh), to cause injury.
To dash forward; to run; to rush; to rush; to move forward.
Flying ①Flying up and down: A group of butterflies are in the flowers~◇Thoughts~.
②Flip or flutter from top to bottom: snowflake~. Exchange positions up and down or inside and outside
③Flying, fluttering.
Daqe Dawu describes complete awakening.
Exercise instructions
1. This article uses a large number of short sentences to create an exciting atmosphere. Read the full text repeatedly, pay attention to the connections between sentences and paragraphs, and read out the momentum of the article.
This question is intended to allow students to understand the unity of content and form in the article. When reading aloud, you should pay attention to the parallelism in the article (sentence to sentence, paragraph to paragraph), and be emotionally passionate.
2. Contact the context, taste the sentences, and answer the questions in brackets.
1. There is no room for restraint, no fetters, and no blockage. It was such a force that broke free, broke through, and knocked away!
(What does "such a force" want to "break away", "break through" and "bump away"? What "restrains", "fetters" and "blocks" "such a force"?)
2. It makes you amazed that the body wrapped in peasant clothes, that body digesting red beans, old pumpkins, can actually release such majestic energy!
(Where do farmers living in poverty get such powerful power?)
3. The watery Jiangnan is like fragile glass, and there is no such thing as a waist drum there.
(Why can't "watery Jiangnan" play such a waist drum?)
4. There was a distant cock crow in my ears.
(Why do you hear such a "rooster crow"?)
This question is intended to cultivate students' sensitivity and insight into language.
1. "Such a force" will break through the layers of hard shells on people's bodies, let life vent between heaven and earth, make people "leave behind all the clutter", "live the mountains and rivers, and flourish their imagination", making people understand why people are human , the reason why life is life.
2. They have a natural and healthy life, which is a complete life that is original, not artificially carved, without any pollution, and without any impurities. This is the source of their strength.
3. Jiangnan flowing water expresses more of a feminine style, while Ansai waist drum needs the "thick soil" to carry such primitive and rough life force.
4. When the drums stopped, people were still immersed in passion, just like the silence after the heat. At this time, the "rooster crow" was used to contrast the silence (this can also be considered as a realistic painting).
3. This article uses a lot of rhetorical methods of parallelism and repetition. The language is full of momentum, the rhythm is clear, and the emotions are strong. Paralleling is to arrange a group of sentences or words with the same or similar structure, consistent tone, and closely related meaning to enhance the momentum and deepen the emotion. For example, "Pain and joy, life and dreams, escape and pursuit, are all intertwined in this dance and drumbeat! Rotate! Condensate! Rush! Radiate! Fly! Sublimate!" Repeating is to highlight a certain meaning and emphasize a certain Emotion, the deliberate repetition of a word or sentence. In this article, it is often used in conjunction with parallelism. For example, "There is no room for restraint, no room for fetters, and no room for occlusion." Try to find a piece of text that uses parallelism alone and a piece of text that uses parallelism and repetition comprehensively, and carefully appreciate their expression effects.
This question is intended to allow students to understand some language knowledge and be able to use it. You can first teach students about the rhetorical methods of parallelism and repetition, and then let students find examples in the text.
Teaching Suggestions
1. The main theme of the text is about life and power, which may be difficult for students to understand. Don't ask too much of students in this regard, just guide them to read the article with momentum.
2. The author said that "the watery Jiangnan is like fragile glass" and "cannot beat such a waist drum". He is not making a judgment on Jiangnan and Northwest. Jiangnan has the style of Jiangnan, and the northwest has the characteristics of the northwest. Don't make unnecessary arguments here.
3. If possible, use visual materials about Ansai waist drum to assist teaching, so that students can deepen their understanding.
4. If you are interested, you can expand your learning from two perspectives: history and reality. History can be extended to reality from the historical process and development of the northwest region starting from the Zhou Dynasty; reality can be compared with economically developed areas such as coastal areas in various aspects. Guide students to explore the Loess Plateau from these two aspects