Close? Keys? Words: 350 words in the sixth grade of primary school
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This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.
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This composition is a 350-word composition about the sixth grade of primary school. The title is "Treading on the Waves". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. On that day, my family went to Zhujiajian Island Island to play. When I face the sea, the waves pounce on me with their mouths open, but when they reach my heels, they turn into white ribbons and float back to the sea. I boldly rolled up my trouser legs and ran to the fierce waves again and again. But my mother always pulls me back, and I won't give up. I dare to go alone. The waves are coming again. My feet jump and I want to jump over them. I didn't expect to sit in the sea and my whole body was broken, so I ran back quickly. I was a little scared at that time and thought, "I wish I could swim now!" "
Teacher's comment: The author described the experience of playing by the sea. Facing the sea, the little author was not afraid, but rushed forward against the waves. As a result, he sat in the sea and got his clothes wet. Although the article is short, it is very vivid, showing readers a picture of frolicking by the sea. The language of the article is vivid and full of childlike interest. That wave is like a big whale opening its jaws and pouncing on me. I wish I could swim now. (Xue Le China Special Teacher: Teacher Gao Dandan) August 26th, 2009, 23: 22: 00.