02. The mission given to me by the company commander has been successfully carried out.
03. After education, the victims of "FxG" sharpened their eyes and increased their awareness.
04, students must abide by the rules of the road to prevent do not have an accident.
05, during the class, Xiaohua's eyes do not turn to stare at the teacher.
06, I bought a pen, ruler, eraser and stationery and rushed home.
07, Although you study even better, there is no reason to be proud.
08, Martha was wearing a blue windbreaker and a yellow hat.
09, Tonight the sky is as full as a mirror with a full moon and stars, what a beautiful night scene!
10. The square was crowded with many, many, many people.
11、After treatment, Xiao Ming's illness has been restored to health.
12. Since the reform and opening up, there have been great changes in China.
13, It's very educated to hear what the teacher said.
14, I have visited most of all the spots in the Summer Palace.
15, in the deep mountains of the Northeast, earth coal kilns are sparsely scattered everywhere.
16、He sat attentively, listening intently to the teacher.
17、After the essay is written, we have to learn to correct the incorrect typos.
18, In labor, our hands get dirty with mud.
19, I whispered when I heard the news.
20, Only about seventy-two people showed up for the meeting this time.
21, One of his hands was almost completely frozen.
22, The campus is planted with many trees such as moonflower, begonia, sycamore, pine and cypress.
23, There are so many toys in the children's store, including blocks, cloth dolls, electric trains, soccer balls and so on.
24、Sunday, the students brought bread, eggs, apples, bananas, cooking utensils and food to the picnic.
25, She wore a bright red scarf and a snow-white shirt.
26, I read all day this morning.
27, This lack of love for food and wilful waste is shameful.
28、The number of goods on the market is now much higher.
29, The students said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day.
Answers
1. change "regardless of" to in spite of
2. change "practiced" to complete
3 ." What about "letting" the victim
4. "Prevent" conflicts with "don't", so remove one
5. "Not averting one's eyes" is "gazing", so remove one.
6. "and" is changed to "etc.
7. "Although..." is changed to "but". But" is changed to "Even if...".
8. "and" changed to "wearing"
9. "starry sky" changed to "moonlight",hollister france.
10. "Many, many" and "countless" to go to a
11. "of the disease" and "health" to go to a
12. "in" to go to a
13. "very educated" before the person, such as: students
14. "All" and "most" conflict, any to go to a
15." Sparsely" and "sparsely" go in the same order
16. "Intently" and "intently" go in the same order
17. "Incorrectly" goes in the same order
18. "Our hands" and "dirt" go in the same order
19. "I" and "I" talk to whom? Change "I" to "we"
20. "72" is so precise, but still "around"? Leave "around"
21. Leave "almost" and "completely"
22. Change "trees" to "plants"
23. A soccer ball is not a child's toy, so get rid of it.
24. "and food" removed
25. "and" changed to "wearing"
26. "morning" removed
27. "Wasteful" followed by "phenomenon"
28. "Quantity" changed to "quality"
29. "of the activities" and "of the day" to remove a
1. happy, pleasant, joyful class meeting. The teacher suddenly slowed down the pace of the class. Modify: remove "gradually" or "suddenly"
3. After this outing, the investigation was very inspiring to all of us. Modify: remove "after"
4. Copernicus dared to criticize and had the courage to doubt the authoritative doctrines that were not in line with reality but had been regarded as inviolable. Modify: will "dare to criticize" and "have the courage to doubt":
5, in order to avoid similar accidents in the future, we must improve the safety system as soon as possible.
Modify: remove "avoid" or "no longer"
6. His kind words+ and kind face surfaced in my eyes at times.
Edit: Add "ringing in my ears" after "words":
7. Increasing quality is an imperative of language teaching reform.
Modify: "increase" to "improve"
8, the winners and losers of this ball game is not only related to the team's reputation, but to the honor of the school.
Edit: "rather" was changed to "and"
9. Watching this exhibition made me have a lot of feelings. 修改：去掉 "使"
10、Only socialism can save China. 修改："就 "改为 "才"
11、After the incident, the class teacher studied with the class committee and decided to have an education on the issue.
Edit: "this problem" was changed to "classmates"
Part II
1. The uncle of the People's Liberation Army shot down five enemy planes and three warships.
2. Complacency is a hindrance to learning.
3. These are artifacts unearthed in the Tang Dynasty.
4, All of them were impressed by watching the drama.
5. The park has two new rides built with British aid.
6. I reckon he must have got this question wrong.
7, He ran into the classroom with great gusto and announced the good news that he was going on a spring trip tomorrow.
8.Listening to the report made us know a lot of things.
9. In winter, the cold wind whistled and shivered.
10, even if you are a genius, but the same can not be separated from the teacher's training and education.
11, the author of "Grassland" was written by Lao She.
12, adhere to the diary, the writing ability will be rapidly improved and expanded.
13, This kind of unloving labor and arbitrary waste is shameful.
14, we need to enhance the confidence and methods to overcome difficulties.
15、The cock of dawn is the signal to get up.
16. We have to correct our shortcomings and mistakes seriously.
17、More good books can enrich and improve our knowledge.
18, Language Learning for Primary School Students and China Youth Daily are my favorite newspapers to read.
19, young pioneers should love the motherland and public **** property.
20. No difficulties of any kind can frighten young pioneers with strong wills.tu
21. Listening to the report, I was educated.
22．The early rice is ripe, and the fields look like a green carpet.
23．I couldn't help laughing.
24．I often see Xiao Ming working out in the morning sometimes.
25．The pioneers have to fulfill the revolutionary tradition.
26．Because Lao She loves flowers and keeps many of them.
27．Summer in Xiaoxinganling is a beautiful place.
28．I saw the movie "Shining Red Star" yesterday.
Answers:
1．The uncle of the People's Liberation Army shot down five enemy planes.
2. Complacency is an obstacle to learning.
3. These are artifacts from the Tang Dynasty.
4, This TV series, left a deep impression on me.
5. There are two new rides in the park.
6. I reckon he got this question wrong.
7, He ran into the classroom and cheerfully announced the good news that he was going on a spring trip tomorrow.
8, This report has taught us a lot of things.
9. In winter, the cold wind blows and shivers.
10, Even if you are a genius, you can't be separated from your teacher's training and education all the same.
11. The author of "Grassland" is Lao She.
12. If you keep a diary, your writing ability will improve rapidly.
13, This kind of behavior of not cherishing the fruits of labor and wasting it arbitrarily is shameful.
14, we need to enhance the confidence to overcome difficulties.
15、The rooster's dawn is a signal to get up.
16. We have to correct our shortcomings and mistakes seriously.
17、More good books can enrich our knowledge.
18、My favorite newspapers to read are Language Learning for Primary School Students and China Youth Daily.
19, young pioneers should love the motherland and care for public **** property.
20, no difficulty can frighten the strong-willed young pioneers.
21. Listening to the report, was educated.
22．The early rice is ripe, and the fields look like a golden carpet.
23．I couldn't help laughing.
24．I often see Xiao Ming exercising in the morning.
25．The pioneers have to fulfill the revolutionary tradition.
26．Because Lao She loves flowers, she keeps many flowers.
27．The Xiaoxinganling is a beautiful place in summer.
28．I watched the movie "The Shining Red Star" yesterday.
Modifying Sentences
(Principle: You can't change the sentence willingly. Can change not delete. Can add not remove.)
Several common types:
1. Component mutilation type of sick sentences: in the classroom, are listening carefully.
2. Sentences of the improper collocation type: I saw his mind.
3、用词不当类型的病句： He dragged his heavy feet swiftly forward.
4. Repetitive and verbose type of sentence: He often thought back to the past.
5. Inverted word order: The Museum of History has on display a large collection of newly unearthed artifacts from two thousand years ago.
6, self-contradictory type of sentence: The square was full of colorful red flags.
7. The sentence is not clear: When Li Bing and Wang Gang were walking between classes, he said to him, "Pay full attention to the lectures.
(a) improper use of words;
1, along the street is full of lettuce, leeks, chickens and ducks and agricultural products.
and farm produce removed
2. Today is the first day of school, and he is wearing all new clothes.
Today is the first day of school
3. The teacher watched us with a kind tone of voice and kind eyes.
The teacher looked at us with a kindly gaze
4. The question aroused indulgence.
Intoxication changed to discussion
5. I laughed uncontrollably at the story.
Incoherently changed to uncontrollably
6. After the story was read, everyone applauded hilariously.
Lively changed to enthusiastically
7. Our standard of living is improving.
Improvement was changed to enhancement
8. We have to pay attention to playing up our strengths and correcting our weaknesses.
To play up the advantages
9, Jiuzhaigou Scenic Area in the fall is a beautiful season.
The fall and Jiuzhaigou Scenic Area switched
10, he developed a good habit of waking up early to exercise very early.
Good habits change into good habits
(ii) Repetition of meaning;
1. He often recalls past events.
Past events changed into events
2. I can't help but applaud Wang Min's wonderful performance.
Can't help but applaud
3. Xiao Ming concentrated on the teacher's lecture.
Concentration went out of the way
4. Father maintained his often customary grim attitude.
Often go away
5. This semester, Wang Jia's composition level has greatly advanced and improved.
Advance and remove
6. It is a very, very beautiful painting.
Very go away
7. We have to make up our minds to change our bad bad habits.
Bad go away
8. He was so sad that he shed tears of sadness when he didn't do well in the exam this time.
Sad to go
9. He is always the first to speak first in group meetings.
First to go
(3) Reversal of word order;
1. We have to use and understand the words we have learned.
Use and understand swapping
2. We discussed and listened to the principal's report.
Discussed and listened to the exchange
3. Natural science interests me.
I am interested in natural science
4. The sunset was reddened by the sky.
The sky is reddened by the sunset
5. This is a very interesting book for me.
A book and my exchange
6. The old farmer swung his hoe and killed the wolf in his pocket with it.
The old farmer swung his hoe and beat the wolf to death with the hoe in his pocket
7. The Museum of History displayed a large collection of newly unearthed artifacts from over two thousand years ago.
The newly unearthed ones were switched with those from more than two thousand years ago
(d) Lack of composition;
1. Discrepancy between words and deeds is a very bad one.
Style of work
2. On October 13, finally put on a red scarf.
Finally with an I in front of it
3, We must be conscious of our habits.
Must be followed by a price to adopt
4. The light and warmth on the ball are sent.
The light and warmth on the earth are sent by the sun
5, watched the drama and was y impressed.
I loaded to see the front
6. Reading the text "My Comrade Qiu Shaoyun", I couldn't help shedding tears.
I read
7, General Secretary Hu's concern for the masses will always remain in the people's memory.
The quality of caring for the masses
8. The party performed a wonderful program.
I performed
9, Spring has arrived, a flower.
A flower bloomed
(5) inconsistency;
1. When everyone is hygienic, health and disease are guaranteed.
Guarantee
2. There are many artistic treasures in China, and the exquisite murals in the Mogao Grottoes are one of the only ones.
Only one is replaced by one of them
3. The square is full of colorful red flags.
Colorful flags
4. I've done all my homework, and there are only two math problems left to do.
All done and gone
5. I finished fourth grade, and I still have a year left to graduate.
Not removed
6. The Great Wall of China, the Forbidden City Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are monuments that Chinese and foreign tourists aspire to.
and Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge go off
7. It rained all day at noon today.
A day's go away
8. Her grades are comparatively the best in the class.
The comparison goes away
9, The trees were covered with a thin layer of snow that bent the branches.
Thin changed to thick
10, He was always hesitant to do anything, not at all arbitrary.
Arbitrary changed to decisive
11, Gunpowder is one of the four great inventions of ancient China.
One of the four great inventions
(6) Improper collocation (including associated words)
1. At the gala, the students sang many beautiful songs and dances.
The students sang many beautiful songs and danced at the gala
2. All students should establish the good habit of caring for public **** property.
Establish to change to adopt
3. Despite the bad weather, we always arrive at school on time.
Always change into still
4. Xiao Ming not only studies hard, but also gets good grades.
Because so
5. Xiaogang likes playing soccer and table tennis.
and playing ping-pong
6. Xiao Ming gets good grades because he studies hard
just change it to so
7.
This article is rich in content,
8, I always help my mother do some housework on Sundays.
Always go off
9. Even though this movie is well made, it can't win any prizes.
Although but
10, he finally corrected the good habit of studying seriously
the good habit of changing his attitude