This evening, I went to eat hot pot with my uncles and aunts from my mom's office.
We were eating vigorously when suddenly an aunt pushed the door and walked in. Auntie was holding a sheet in her hand, saying that she could participate in the lucky draw.
The aunts sent me to be the representative. I hurriedly put down the dishes and followed the aunt to the lucky draw table, my heart was in a state of suspense, I do not know how my luck in the end?
I jumped for joy. The second round of draws began, my mood even more excited, I closed my eyes and quickly touched a ball out.
I didn't dare to look at it, and the aunt next to me told me, "Kid, you've won again." I sweated for myself, this time it was 50 dollars.
All of a sudden, the stage of a burst of applause, my heart is popping out, holding the red bag like the Olympic champion flew to the mother in front. The room aunts are excited for me.
2. Unforgettable close-ups essay 200 wordsUnforgettable that steely gaze On May 22, I saw you on TV, the picture appeared on the screen is you between a piece of rubble, concrete slabs and broken beams weighing down your thin body, the only thing you can see is a close-up of your steely gaze.
You were buried under heavy concrete slabs and broken beams, and for several days you held on, believing that someone would come to save you, believing that someone would hand you a bottle of mineral water to drink with both hands. You wait for a long time, but still no one comes to your rescue, let alone a drop of water to drink.
But you didn't give up, you didn't fall asleep, but you reminded yourself: keep a clear head, perseverance is victory. Time passed day by day, you waited 24 hours, 48 hours, 72 hours ...... still no one came to save you, and no one walked through this place, but you said you will never give up, even if only the last breath left, will not give up, but also to continue to insist.
Finally, someone came, you put your hand out of the gap, took a small stone and threw it outside. "There was a thud, and you were overjoyed because you knew someone had come to save you.
You were pumped up, expecting to be rescued quickly. The look of determination in your eyes is unforgettable! The presenter said that it was difficult for the rescue uncle to get you out because there were too many slabs pressing on you, no heavy machines to help, and the aftershocks were constantly occurring at your place.
Time passed minute by minute, the rescue uncle still could not save you out. At that time, you had already held on for more than 113 hours, and you still didn't give up, still holding on, still looking forward.
You even said to those rescue uncles, "Uncle, you take your time, no need to rush, I can still hold on." Rescue uncles were touched by your resolute gaze, inspired by your touching words, what reason not to save you out, what difficulties can prevent the action to save you.
Their unremitting efforts finally slowly rescued you and immediately put you in the ambulance. Now, although I don't know whether you have recovered or not, your resolute gaze under the rubble has been y imprinted in my mind, and I believe that good people live in peace.
Because I saw in your gaze the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation, saw the strength of the Chinese nation to endure pain, and saw the hope of the Chinese nation to prosper day by day.
3. Unforgettable close-ups essay 350 wordsStill holding on, but still no one came to save you, and will not give up, you were so happy, inspired by your touching words, you have been holding on for more than 113 hours.
Now, but always remind themselves, so rescue uncle is difficult to save you out, 72 hours ...... still no one to save you. "Thud" sounded, no heavy machinery to help, someone came, I believe there will be someone to save you, and immediately put you in the ambulance.
You waited a long time, no need to rush. You are buried under heavy concrete slabs and broken beams, and the only thing you can see is a close-up of your steely gaze.
But you did not give up: keep a clear head, but finally slowly saved you out, the rescue uncle still can not save you out, you waited 24 hours, even if only the last breath, persistence is victory, thrown to the outside. They worked tirelessly, I can still hold on.
Time passed day by day, a few days you have been insisting: "Uncle. Time passed minute by minute, I believe someone handed you a bottle of mineral water to drink with both hands, because you know someone came to your rescue."
The rescue uncle was touched by your resolute gaze. At that time, what difficulties can stop the action to save you, and no one has walked through this place, saw the strength of the Chinese nation to endure the pain, but your resolute gaze under the rubble.
You even still said to those rescue uncles, looking forward to quickly save you out, much less a drop of water to drink. Finally, still looking forward to.
You beat the spirit, you put your hand out of the gap, you still did not give up, took a small stone, but also to continue to insist that there is no slumber! The host preaches, plus you have another aftershock going on there. Because I saw the indomitable spirit of the Chinese nation in your gaze.
Your resolute gaze is really unforgettable to me ah, 48 hours, you said you will never give up, has been y imprinted in my mind, I believe that the good people will live in peace: due to the pressure on the body of the excessive number of slabs of stone on your body unforgettable that resolute gaze May 22, the picture appeared to be you in a piece of rubble between the I saw you on TV, saw the hope of the Chinese nation's growing prosperity, concrete slabs and Broken beams weighing down your thin body, what reason not to save you out, you guys take your time, although I do not know whether you have recovered.
4. A moving picture essaySome people say that people go through many, many moments in their lives, but most of them fade away with the passage of time. And I say, wonderful moment, no matter how short it itself, bring people are eternal memories, permanent attachment. 12 seconds 91 can not help but say that it is a short moment in the long river of history, but it was Liu Xiang fixed in which, become eternal. Because in 12 seconds 91, Liu Xiang created a miracle, rewrite a myth.
A long time ago, the Chinese people were bullied, called "the sick man of East Asia", because the Chinese people are economically backward, the national strength is not strong, the body of a single thin, weak, can be bullied. The world's attention of the Olympic Games rarely see the shadow of the Chinese, let alone into the final, the ranking. However, in the 28th Athens Olympic Games, a little-known young man achieved the men's 110 for the hurdles championship, it is not the unbeatable white race, not untamed black race, it comes from Asia, from China, is China's Liu Xiang!
In many people's minds, perhaps also "stored" such a picture: Liu Xiang quickly and agilely across one after another hurdles, with an absolute advantage over the finish line ...... At that moment, the Olympic stadium boiled, China boiled, the world boiled. The world is boiling. Liu Xiang proved his strength to the whole world with his wonderful performance, proving the strength of the whole China! He flew up, just like his name, on the track and field runway, flying up, all the way to the winner's podium, played the Chinese people **** and the national anthem. When watching the five-star red flag rising in the Olympic Games, 1.3 billion Chinese people are proud and proud.
12 seconds 91, which seems to be a very common number, how many 12 seconds 91 in 1 hour, how many 12 seconds 91 in 1 day, and this small number but at that moment appeared to be extraordinarily great, it allows the world to remember the people of Liu Xiang, remembered China, feel the China is the Olympic "higher, faster, stronger! "12 seconds 91, what a short number, for this day, countless Chinese people look forward to decades, hundreds of years, it is a myth, because produced in that piece of land full of myths, it is also a history, because of the record of the splendor of China's sports, it is more of a kind of spirit, on behalf of the people of China's self-strengthening, indomitable!
Who said that?
Who says history will always be diluted, who says the wonderful is only a moment. China's Liu Xiang for China's glory in the spirit of the Olympic Games, invigorated the morale of the Chinese people, this spirit and morale will inspire generation after generation of Chinese people, across one after another "bar", again and again, the first to cross the finish line!
5. Unforgettable picture essay 600 wordsThe air is cool and comfortable, precipitated by the unbearable heat outside the window, the frozen memories suddenly jumped out here, slowly and quietly, in my mind spread out.
The age-old recliner looks a little bleak, not caused by the accumulation of dust, but a lonely atmosphere around its silent face. It remembers a long, long time ago, when the old man liked to lounge against him; the man always whistled a low, slow whistle, and the mellifluous tones that surrounded him were distant and reassuring.
A single stroke of colorful memory conjures up the image of a silent grandfather looking at a newspaper through his old glasses. It was a serene image, and that kind of image used to give me peace of mind. But now he has awakened my long-silent grief, breaking down my self-righteous defenses, and looking down on me as if he were a victor, as if he were laughing at my naiveté.
I don't want to admit my own vulnerability, I don't want to remember the face of my grandfather lying in a white hospital bed twisted by the pain of the disease, I don't want to leave a cold teardrop, in order to let my grandfather go in peace. The relatives whispered in my ear, "I may not be able to make it through the night".
Countless memory fragments like snowflakes flew through my mind, and finally, it was fixed in that tearful image.
Could it be that this is a trial given by God to make people realize the impermanence of life and the pain in the heart?
Therefore, let this quiet and sad picture, delicately engraved in the eternal past; perhaps, the future of my sudden stop, look back, still see the white foggy memory of the depths of the old man sitting on the chaise longue, will raise the face of the years stopped, kind and gentle gazing at the head into the future me, and then, quietly smile.
6. Unforgettable close-ups essay 330When it comes to swimming, I'm very proud, because I can be considered a "master swimmer"!
The first time I swam was the most unforgettable. It was the summer vacation of the fourth grade, because many children will swim, I am not willing to be weak, to learn to swim!
Changed into a swimsuit, I stood next to the pool, the water is very clear, but also shallow. But for me as a beginner to say, or a little deep. Often over there, 1.8 meters deep water ah! I'm only 1.4 meters tall.
A moment later, a coach came, he began to teach me the basic movements of swimming. Lying in the water, I was very nervous, stiffly according to the coach taught the action practice. The legs were separated, stretched upward, formed a right angle with the body, and then closed again. This repeated a few times, I finally relaxed, but also do more fluent.
The coach saw me doing much better, and took me to the pool where the water was 0.6 meters deep. The water was over my thighs. Coach and field to teach me to dial water: hands together, stretching forward, and then slowly open, legs and hands with each other, you can swim forward.
At this point, I was not so nervous, and my heart was quiet.
I'm like a new goal into the ......
The first time I swam, I was very excited, I can swim!
7. Unforgettable close-up essayWith the crisp "click" sound, a beautiful scene was taken into the lens, colorful life is condensed in a square inch.
Photography is my hobby after school. On Sundays, I stroll down the street with my camera.
The old man, the young girl, the innocent and lively children ...... all constitute a harmonious and beautiful picture. I take some pictures of what? The majestic building, bright flowers, indeed beautiful, but the idea is not new.
Ah! There it is, "click" sound. Guess what I photographed? Hands, the countless pairs of hands holding books, holding books, holding up books in front of the technology bookcase in the new bookstore.
Slender, stout, ***, bronzed by the sun ...... When this scene came to life, I felt a force pushing me. Were these hands merely holding a book? No, they are picking the golden key that opens the treasure house of knowledge.
How moving! Seeing these countless hands, you can naturally associate the owner of the hands of the face with a smile, that is how pleasant smile. "Ka-ching", and photographed what? Feet, waiting for the library in front of the door of the many pairs of feet.
Wearing sneakers, wearing shoes, wearing shoes, wearing sandals, and crutches and crutches ...... look at them, my blood boiled! This is not in the hesitation in the wandering feet, but in the running in the climbing feet, in the history of mankind's progress has left a solid imprint of the feet. How exhilarating! When you see them, you can associate them with the faces of its masters that contain a humble smile.
That smile, too, must have contained the intoxicating satisfaction of the strivers. "Click", this time to take down a smiling face.
The next shift workers comfortable smile, reception of friends sincere smile, see the results of the gratifying smile, parents close smile, teachers kind smile ...... shot this set of photos, I am also satisfied with the smile. How beautiful life is! My work, the implied smile, the smile that shows, the smile that can be seen everywhere, motivate me at times, inspire me: I see a vast and beautiful world, it is full of love for life, full of vision for the future, full of the pursuit of beautiful things.
Do you want to see these wonderful shots? You have them all around you.
8. Unforgettable close-up shots of the essayUnforgettable close-up shots of life is colorful and five flavors, like five kinds of seasoning, each flavor has its own characteristics: there are many small shots in life that you have not noticed.
He can make you feel a touch of unique flavor, savor, but also make you have endless aftertaste. Early in the winter, as always, on the way to school, one after another has been a common sight once again into the eyes.
On the street, the car and the horse flow unceasingly, from blocking the road from time to time came a burst of sirens. In the wind echoed for a long time, it seems that a different car with a different sound, in the opening of a unique recital.
And the birds in the sky are singing seems to comment, seems to be more beautiful. For this recital added a touch of flavor.
In the field, the farmers in the insertion of seedlings fertilizer watering, looking at their face that big beads of sweat, and immediately realized that "the day of the harvest when the afternoon, sweat drops under the soil. Who knows what's on the plate, all the grains are hard work."
Always make people regret the waste of food.
Looking at the bucket-sized beads of sweat on their faces, one feels that getting is far happier than paying. I don't know the joy and happiness after harvesting, which is also counted as their own dry ***.
9. has prizes for the topic of writing an essayShenzhen 2010 midterm essay "prizes" of the review of ideas and N writing 1, general narrative: This is the simplest way to write.
Give an account of their past (now) to get a "prize" such as a notebook, a pencil case, a gadget, etc. After the account of the time, place and character thing cause and effect of the six elements of the narrative. Score will not be high; 2, narrative + sense of class: A - in the first narrative based on a few sentences of argument, a little stronger, but depends on where the landing point.
B-everyone has a proud memory, if you use the "memory" style, the first narrative to obtain this "prize" process, and then sublimation of the process, point out that in the process of obtaining a spiritual style of the "prize". The "reminiscence" style first describes the process of obtaining the "prize" and then sublimates the process by pointing out a spiritual "prize" or a life revelation gained in the process. Will be sensible "material prizes", sublimation of the abstract "spiritual prizes"; score will certainly be higher than the first type; C - to a small to see the big, write their own hours to participate in a certain activity, a prize, so as to reveal the process of the spirit of their own later honor, social responsibility and so on.
3, while talking about the class to "prize" as a clue, write their own in the process of realizing some kind of ideal or goal, their own life, life, and even the world view of the important knowledge and understanding of the spiritual level of excavation, ingenuity under the mind, may be able to have a breakthrough, can be written in a rich, deeper. Such an article will certainly gain the favor of the marking teacher, the score will be high.1. Prizes I sat on the chair, quietly listening to the teacher, but the heart has long been optimistic about a prize - thermos.
Dad loves to smoke, and grandpa has to cough as soon as he smells smoke, which makes him suffer from asthma. I got on my bike and went to cram, it was the last class, and the teacher said she was going to give out prizes to us.
Mr. Song handed out a notepad to each of us and went on to talk about what the other prizes were for. I sat on the chair, quietly listening to the teacher, but the heart has long been optimistic about a prize - insulation cup.
The teacher said that this cup can keep warm for about 7 to 10 hours. I remembered my grandfather, his glass cup insulation effect is not good, not long after, the water in the cup is cold.
"Who is number 8?" As soon as the delivery teacher's words fell, Dong Lingwei took the prize he wanted. "Number 9."
Mr. Song continued. A few bright-eyed ones called out, "Tang Ruolan already took it, she already took it, Mr. Song."
They rushed to speak, as if they couldn't wait to get their hands on the prize. Took it? When did I ...... I buried my head to look, it turned out that I looked at the toothpaste dispenser (very cute), and forgot to put it back, so my classmates mistakenly thought that I had already picked it out, I put my hand up and tried to put it back.
As a result, Mr. Song thought that I had really picked it out. Just nodded and said nothing more.
Alas, it is really hard to argue. I also had to go along with the strange nature, did not say anything.
Not long after, I have want that cup, want to go to change. But who knows, Yang Mei has already taken it away.
At that moment, I saw two identical cups next to Mr. Song's TV set, and thought: "After class, I'm going to go and change it with Mr. Song. After class, I ran to Mr. Song and said, "Mr. Song, can you give me a cup?" I pointed to the cup next to the TV and said to Mr. Song.
"Why?" Mr. Song asked. "My grandfather he has asthma, I want to ......" Before I finished my sentence, Mr. Song agreed, Mr. Song said, "Tang Ruolan is very filial, you can give her this cup."
Teacher Song also asked me what color my grandfather likes, I shook my head and said, "Whatever. It doesn't matter.
It's all the same." Some don't understand also rolled their eyes at me and said, "Fake very much."
I just sighed, my nose was a little sour, tears wrapped in my eyes, my vision blurred.2. I. The best reward Guangdong Shenzhen a candidate "Ah, it's the second brother ah!" "We all live quite well ...... Alas, you do not work yourself, the children are all hearted ...... well, then you will quickly rest, come when a phone call, I will help you ... ..." No need to guess, just listen to dad that tone, quasi is the dear second uncle to bring delicious.
This is not, Dad came over.
It also said that the best score points the best pear. Put some effort into it, so you can comfort this little glutton!" "Yes!" I nodded vigorously, and then turned to the sea of questions to go ...... The duck pear brought by the second uncle is really great, although the skin is thicker, but the pear meat inside *** juicy, let a person "drunkenness forget to die".
For my duck pear fight bottom! It was hard to get to this day, the second uncle panting to move to three boxes of duck pear. Smilingly divided the duck pear to the brother, sister.
This pear is really big, they all cheered. Now there is only the small box left.
The small ones are not all the essence of it, this time I made great progress, the best pear is not mine! As expected, the second uncle greatly praised me a few words, and solemnly sent the pear to my hands. I can not wait, quickly taste fresh ...... Unpacked, I was dumbfounded, how ...... how all small and broken pears it! Pick up a try, sour really can not praise.
Not good is the best pear? After the loss of more still do not understand. "This pear sour? Haha, teeth are soft right!" Second uncle is still gloating, really angry with me.
Said, the second uncle took the pear in my hands, took a big bite, said: "Sweet is certainly delicious, but how much can people remember? Sour pear meat, bring people a long time can not forget the sour. Only those who have tasted the sour, know the preciousness of the sweet.
Think about it!" Finished, cunningly twisted my ear. I suddenly realized: the second uncle is to let me remember the success of the hard-won, hard work and sweat to build a tall building can not be easily destroyed ah! Although the second uncle is not much culture, but the orchard is still a colorful, I think this is his trick.
Yes, sweet to eat, sour to eat! But this pear ...... is also too sour! The pear is sour, but it is the best reward! Comment: This is a successful narrative essay. The article opens in the form of a dialog, novel and unique.
The use of psychological, language, action and other descriptive techniques to portray characters, highlighting the theme.
In addition, this article successfully used the contrasting techniques to point out the main idea, clever design. The ending with the most concise language to point out the title, constitute a perfect feeling.
3. (a) Late happiness .
The most beautiful picture
In life, there are too many moments, the moment of turning back, the moment of bending down to pick up the confetti on the ground, the moment of helping an old man cross the street, the moment of obeying the traffic rules and waiting for the red light, and the moment of accepting the help and saying "thank you". The moment you say "thank you" after receiving help. It is just that we are too busy in real life, we ignore these beautiful moments. Just focus on their own business.
Time will not fade the essence of the book, the yellow sand can not hide the pearl's splendor. On that afternoon, I saw a beautiful moment.
In the crowded bus, people are thinking of going home quickly, after a day of work so that you can rest at home for a while. At that moment, an old man came up. His movements were slow, and it took him half a day to find a place for himself to stand. At that moment, the driver's voice came from the bus: "Comrades, please step back a little. Please give this old man a seat." However, there was no response from the car. Everyone's face was expressionless, seemingly still, as if they hadn't heard it at all.
The old man stood next to a man. The man looked poised, like a successful man. I thought to myself, "He will give up his seat for this old man." But it was not to my liking, not only did he not give up his seat to the old man, but he also tried to put his body as close to the window as possible. It is self-evident that he was afraid of the old man dirtying his clothes, affecting his so-called "decency".
The driver shouted again: "Comrades, please give this old man a seat". But still nothing, no one responded.
Finally, a little girl with crutches stood up and said: "Grandpa, you sit here. You see this car is so crowded, you will be uncomfortable to stand. At the moment the little girl gave up her seat, I clearly saw the old man's eyes filled with tears.
After the little girl gave up her seat. The whole car bowed their heads. They were feeling guilty and ashamed of their silence, their indifference.
Yes, it was a beautiful moment. In that moment, its protagonist - the little girl with the crutches - was one of the most beautiful people.
She did not have the beauty of a flower, the graceful figure of a dancer, or even the crutches, it is impossible to dance, but her heart is the most beautiful.
In that one beautiful moment, it was as if she got rid of the misfortune brought by her disability and became the most beautiful and happy person in the world.
That one beautiful moment when the little girl gave up her seat touched too many people. I want to do: "All people will be this beautiful moment treasured in the heart, treasured in the heart that has not been polluted by the world on the one side of the clean land.
Life is composed of a moment, a fragment. A beautiful moment, constituting a beautiful landscape painting, in the easel shining with their own glory.
Let us always treasure this beautiful moment in the heart of the album, nothing to take out to turn over. I believe that we will be touched and inspired by it.