In the class, I'm a master of drawing small animals Oh, children every time to rush to me, desperately screaming: "Give me a picture, give me a picture!" I was so busy that I felt endless happiness and sense of accomplishment from the painting.
Painting makes my after-school life full of fun, so that I experience infinite happiness every day! I love painting.
2, third grade essay - my after-school life
Do you know my after-school life? Tell you what, I like to play soccer.
When I was in preschool, my teacher allowed us to bring a soccer ball and play with it after class. That's when I fell in love with soccer. During the World Cup, when I learned that Cristiano Ronaldo was a world star, I envied him so much that I wanted to be a world star too, and I loved soccer even more. I played soccer every night during that time, and my mother had to buy me a soccer ball!
Whenever I finished my homework, I held the soccer ball in my arms and went to find my friends to play soccer. We put on a shooting posture and kicked up, every time I played a lot of sweat, sweat beads keep flowing down from the head. Once I even forgot to eat.
On one occasion, the ball came to my feet, and I assumed a shooting stance and slammed a shot that went in! I was so happy when I heard my partners clapping and cheering.
As long as I play soccer, all my worries and fatigue are left behind.
Soccer brings infinite fun to my after-school life.
3. Third Grade Essay--My After-School Life
In addition to going to school and doing my homework, I have a lot of interesting after-school life. Painting, playing games, playing chess with my father, reading books my favorite painting.
Painting can stimulate one's imagination, calm the mind and make one beautiful. When my father and mother let me learn to paint, they said that painting can make people slowly calm down, and I didn't expect that I would like it so much after only a few times of learning. I used my hands to draw the beautiful and kind Snow White, the proud and arrogant lion, the cunning fox, the witty white rabbit ---- watching these lifelike images leap to the paper, I have unspeakable joy.
Drawing tired when I will pick up the book to see. My mother said that you should first choose the books you like to read and the books you can understand, and that you should be able to laugh when you are happy, cry when you are sad, and get angry when you are angry, so that you can read the books thoroughly and get acquainted with them. It's really like this, don't believe me, try it too.
Rich after-school life will make your life more beautiful.
4, third grade essay - my after-school life
As the saying goes: green vegetables and carrots, each to his own. Some people like ball activities, some people like graceful dance, some like the development of intellectual production, some like to cultivate the sentiment of stamp collecting, and some like ...... As for me, I have to read extracurricular books are obsessed with.
I call myself a "little bookworm", and that's no exaggeration! For me, reading books is an indispensable pleasure in life.
By the time I was five years old, I already knew a lot of words, and that's no lie. I was five years old literacy, which is inseparable from reading extracurricular books. At that time, my mother took a book, I snuggled in my mother's warm embrace, listening to her with a sweet voice to tell ...... later, it became me that the book read to my mother to listen to. Mom also specially I went to Lishui to buy a pile of books, I was so happy to dance!
Now, I read extracurricular books every day, but also from extracurricular books know the beauty and ugliness, know the good and evil ...... remember one time, I read the book at home, was attracted by the storyline inside, until even my mother called me to eat did not hear. Mom had no choice but to call for dinner first. At this time, I saw the main character was going to jump off the cliff, I was in the moment, shouted, "Do not, you are still saved, you can not give up your life like this, you should try to live, there is still hope for everything!" At that moment, my mom broke down the door and asked in surprise, "What's wrong? Who's going to commit suicide?" I came back to the real world and embarrassedly said, "Hey, too involved!" Mom grinned.
Books can purify one's mind, so: love books, they are a source of knowledge!
5, third grade essay - my after-school life
Our after-school life is rich and colorful, some children like to read extracurricular books, there are also some children like to climb mountains, skating, traveling ...... But my favorite is to play shuttlecock.
Don't look down on the shuttlecock, playing can learn a lot! Look, it has a round white ball, just like our little head, and it is full of colorful feathers, I can love it. Every Sunday off, I did my homework, and my sister and I went downstairs to the little park to play shuttlecock. My sister was so good at playing shuttlecock! The shuttlecock danced around my sister like a bird flying around. I watched in awe, and soon I followed my sister's example, throwing up the shuttlecock, kicking it with my left foot and my right foot. Before long, my shuttlecock was flying around like a dancing butterfly. We are playing vigorously, hey, I do not know who a foot, the shuttlecock involuntarily flew to the branch, what can we do? Looking at the branch of the shuttlecock, we were anxious. Suddenly, I had an idea, brought a tree pole, the shuttlecock to poke down, the shuttlecock obediently back to our side, I was very excited!
A little shuttlecock has enriched my after-school life and brought me immense happiness!
6, my after-school life
My after-school life is like a colorful bridge, colorful, playing backgammon, playing badminton, playing computers, playing the accordion ...... there is no one is I do not like, but I still like to read books.
Every Sunday, my mother has to take me to Xinhua Book Let to read books, where there are really many people reading books ah! There are standing and sitting. I went there to see, ah, and no position, alas! Can only stand to see again. I went to the bookshelf and took a fairy tale book, read with great interest. The Wizard of Oz in the book made me feel as if I were the hero of the woman in the story. After a long time of reading and building up, I got a lot out of it. I read a wide range of books, including diaries, fairy tales, fables short stories, and essay selections. Books let me grow a lot of knowledge, books make me y fascinated, books bring me endless fun, books also make my after-school life more fulfilling.
Besides reading books, I insist on playing the piano every day. I remember when I was four years old, my mother let me go to learn the accordion, the teacher said I was too small to learn, but I finally insisted. I felt very simple when I learned the small organ, so I finished it very smoothly. When I first switched to the big organ, I was a little bit uncomfortable, and the tunes became more and more difficult. I was a little bit tempted to give up, but my mom said to me, "If you want to do something well, you must persevere to the end, and never give up so easily, and perseverance is victory." Encouraged by my mom, I persisted. This year, I successfully passed the examination of accordion grade three. I was so happy in my heart.
This is my after-school life, how about it, my after-school life is rich enough, right?
7. My after-school life
Some people will throw a softball in their after-school time, do operation. Watching TV, and I will read books in my after-school life, you may be impatient to say: "What's so good about books!" But for me, reading a book is a happy thing, it can let me throw my worries to the clouds, let me forget the time,
On one occasion, on a double holiday, I finished the writing class to come home, to the bookshelf in front of a stop, looking for the book I want to read, my eyes focused on the masterpiece "Little Women", I can not help but to the feelings of reaching out to pull out the book, sitting on his butt on the bed with great pleasure to look at.
The content of the book was so wonderful that I felt like I was in the middle of the scene in the book. I was happy for the little heroine when she received her Christmas present, and I was happy for her when the little heroine's little canary died. I was happy for her, and I was sad for her when the little canary died.
Time passed by, but I didn't realize it, until my mother came to call me later, I put down the book reluctantly, I walked out of the study, but my heart was still there, still in the plot of the story!
Books are my good friends, I can not leave it, sometimes, for a book, I will give up the opportunity to play need.
Once, the bookstore new book, called "Anne of Green Gables" I very much want to get this book, and that day, just mother unit organization fishing, I do not hesitate, do not go fishing, to go to the bookstore to buy a book, buy a book home, I stroked its smooth cover, long breath, as if the completion of a major event.
This is my after-school life. What's your after-school life like? Come and tell me, will you?
8, third grade essay: my after-school life
One day, my father and I went to the market to shop. I saw a fish for sale and stopped, yikes! The little fish is so beautiful! Big eyes, colorful tails they swim around in the water, my father saw me like fish so much to buy me a few home to raise, we also bought a beautiful fish tank. From this time on I love fish. Once home, I first filled the tank with water, and then put some stones and water plants into the tank, and finally took out the small fish from the bag full of water and put them into the tank. The little fish came to their new home and all swam happily.
Every morning, I would come to the fish tank right after breakfast to look at the little fish, ha! One little fish is still sleeping! Other small fish are swimming happily, looking at when I suddenly remembered that I have to write homework! I couldn't say goodbye to the little fish, and looked at them for a while, and they seemed to recognize my feelings and wagged their tails as they said goodbye to me! After I finished my homework, I changed the water and fed the fish, and they came out of the water plants as if they were cooperating with me. At night, I came to see the little fish, they seem to be playing hide-and-seek, some hide in the water grass, some hide behind the stones, tired of playing with me into the dreamland.
Day by day, the little fish and I gradually became best friends.
What a joy it is to raise fish! Voila! This is my after-school life.
9, my after-school life
My after-school life is like a colorful picture, my after-school time like sports, I like to play scooter.
The scooter was a birthday gift from my uncle on my birthday. At first, I couldn't skate, I could only push the scooter slowly and couldn't get the balance right. Later, I was able to put one foot on the scooter and pedal forward with the other. After a period of practice, I could slide forward with both feet on the car, and I could slide very far. I also learned to brake sharply and turn in place.
Every holiday, I have to go to the Century Square to play scooter, where the scenery is very beautiful, I stepped on the scooter, skating around the fountain, a wind blowing, tiny water droplets sprinkled on the face of the very cool, a moment of stepping on the car to chase pigeons, a moment of competition with the little friends who skate fast, the heart is very happy.
Scooter to my after-school life has brought happiness, so that I exercise the body, increase knowledge, cultivate a brave will, enrich my after-school life.
10, my after-school life
My after-school life is very rich, reading books, doing games, but my favorite is to help my mother do housework.
I remember one time, my grandmother gave us to do fishing noodles to eat. I thought how delicious it would be to eat noodles with some smashed garlic! I picked up a head of garlic, peeled it into a clove by clove, and then peeled off the skin, looking at the bowl of white fat garlic cloves, I was very happy. I turned on the faucet, rinsed the garlic cloves and put them in the garlic scoop. I picked up the pestle and mortar and smashed it. But those fat garlic cloves seem to deliberately play tricks on me, keep jumping out. I thought to myself, "What a naughty garlic clove, let's see where you're going to run this time. I aimed at it, a pestle down, ah! Now it jumped up. What should I do? I remembered my mother smashing garlic, first gently use the pestle and mortar to flatten the garlic cloves, and then smashed hard, until smashed into garlic until. I followed my mother's example and smashed up, finally smashed the garlic into mud, poured vinegar and sesame oil, a fragrant smell came out. I was so happy. Eat noodles, pour a little bit of their own smashed garlic puree, think this noodle is delicious.
Doing housework brings endless fun to my after-school life. It makes me grow my knowledge and exercise my ability.
11, my after-school life
My after-school life is colorful. I like painting, dancing, playing the piano, practicing calligraphy, but my favorite is still skating. (Highlighting the key points as if it were a dragon's eye)
I remember when I first learned to skate, my feet were as heavy as boulders, and as if there were suction stones on my feet, firmly sucked on the ice. And then look at the people learning to figure skate, those beautiful dance moves of theirs are really enviable! Plus they put their hands straight, ah! Just like a little swallow flying in the air as beautiful, generous. I tried to take my heavy footsteps, before I skated out of a step, "pop" sound, I fell a "dog gnawing ice"! Oh, it hurts, it hurts me, I have the idea of giving up! (Suggested paragraph) At this time, my mother came over and said to me seriously: "Xiao Jue, as long as you now try hard, do not give up, you will be like them to skate as well as they are as long as you are serious, hard work to practice, maybe ...... a month will be able to learn the fancy oh. " I remembered my mom's words in my heart with all my heart, like carving words into stone.
Since then, I have practiced skating tirelessly, (How? You can write briefly.) I skated until the ice rink closed. I am now a little swallow flying in the sky.
How about that, are you envious too? As long as you do something seriously, you will surely be rewarded!
Red color is the well-written words and phrases, blue is the teacher's comments, and purple is the teacher's revisions.
Children's text comments:
From the beginning it is not difficult to see that you are a wide range of hobbies, after-school life colorful little girl. More importantly, you learned to skate through the matter told the importance of persistence, after all, have to pay to have a return! Your mom played a very important role in this, she was the one who guided you from learning to skate to feeling heavy as a rock to being as light as a swallow.
But it would have been better if the ending had echoed the theme of "after-school life," or else the rest of the essay, except for the beginning, would have felt more like learning to skate. (Comments: Mr. Peng)
12, my after-school life
This period of time, the streets and alleys are full of children playing skateboarding, I see others gliding easily and freely, like a cat scratching in the heart, coveted. As soon as the summer vacation was over, I pestered my aunt to buy me a scooter with glowing wheels, which was very beautiful.
Evening, I was eager to do the whole family mobilization, let them take me to Galaxy Plaza to learn skateboarding. My cheerleaders can be huge, there are grandpa, grandma, dad, mom, aunt and uncle. To the square to see, there are many skateboarding masters, their feet on the skateboard, light and fast in the crowd shuttle, like a wing flying swallows. I looked envious, and thought I must be like them to be a skateboarder.
Starting out, my father helped me to stand on the skateboard, so that I could keep my balance, and then use my left foot to step on the end of the skateboard to swing up and down. But the board didn't listen to me. I tried to move forward, but it ran away from my feet, causing my dad to almost fall. I was a little discouraged and said, "Skateboarding is so hard to learn!" Dad encouraged me and said, "There is nothing difficult in the world. How can you learn it all in one go?" Listening to my dad's words, I decided to try again and practiced on the skateboard, but I couldn't keep my balance and fell down. Dad is not as tight as before to grasp my hands, but stretch out an arm for me to hold, Dad gently pushed me, through the thrust, haha! Slide up. "Pop." Fell again. I put up with the pain, strong up, and stood on the skateboard skating a circle, suddenly there is a boy to me face to face skating, "Boom", we collided together, I quickly grabbed the side of the railing, barely stand firm. I quickly grabbed the railing beside me and managed to stay on my feet. The boy was so skilled that he swerved out of the way. I shouted angrily, "Why don't you watch where you're going?" The boy made a face at me and flew away.
It was getting dark, and I was able to skate alone for a little while, but was it weird? I can only skate forward, will not turn, left and right practice or not, I really disappointed, it seems, do a skateboarding expert is really not easy ah. Other people are like a little swallow flying freely in the blue sky, while I am like a stupid chicken that can't fly without full wings. The next day, the third day ...... through their own hard training, I finally spread wings to fly!
Through this incident I realized that no matter what you do as long as you persist and do not give up, you will always succeed!
My after-school life
My after-school life is rich and colorful, sometimes I draw, sometimes I dance, sometimes I read extracurricular books ...... However, what I like the most is riding a bicycle.
When I didn't know how to ride a bicycle before, I saw that other students could ride, and I envied them. So I begged my dad to buy me a bike, and on my birthday my dad finally bought me a bike. (It would be better if I could introduce the bike!) At that time, I was so happy that I jumped three feet high!
I was anxious to get on the bike, and my dad laughed and said, "Baby, you haven't learned yet, you'll fall, let me help you! (In order to make the sentence more complete, it is suggested to read: let me help you hold the bike!)" At first, I couldn't grasp the direction, and I rode sideways and upside down. Later, the more I rode, the better I got, and I thought to myself, "Riding a bicycle is so easy, it's really "child's play"! I thought to myself, "Riding a bike is so easy, it's a piece of cake!" I said anxiously, "Dad, Dad, let go of me!" Dad said, "That's what you said." I eagerly (read: confidently) said, "Yes, come on!" Dad let go and I couldn't wait to put my feet on the pedals, when suddenly, Dad yelled and said (yelling means saying, suggest deleting), "Be careful!" I just rode two times, I almost fell, I gritted my teeth and held on, continue to practice, after four days of practice I finally learned to ride a bike.
I'm super fast on a bike now, I can go wherever I want, and I can go down a very high hill! It turns out that if you persevere and work hard you will succeed.
Red colors are well-written words and phrases, blue is the teacher's comments, and purple is the teacher's revisions.
Children's text comments:
Rich after-school life can spice up our life and study, although rich, but you did not generalize, chose the most impressive bike riding to write, very skillful.
The conversation while learning to ride a bike was realistic and also portrayed your willingness to persevere in a very specific way, ultimately congratulating you on your success.
It would have been nice to describe the difficulties encountered while learning to ride a bike and your own psychology.