14. Read the following poems and complete the appreciation according to the prompts. (7 points)
On a dark day in March
Qin Guan
Festivals promote each other's new ideas, and spoony children keep spring.
Why don't you like wheatgrass? Xia Mu is cute.
Dianjiangchun
Yuan Haowen
Drunk in the spring, the green window still sings and stays in the spring. In Wen Chun, the flowers fall and the warblers are silent.
I'm pregnant. I'm in the middle of a tree. At dusk in the West Building, there is a curtain of drizzle, and I am looking for spring in my dream.
(1) Ci is full of interest, and Song poetry is full of interest. Please analyze how to express the interest of reason and meta-poetry from the perspective of the attitude towards the death of spring in your works. (5 points)
The rational interest of Qin poetry
The interest of yuan poetry
The beginning and end of the word "Dianjiang Lip" are quite artistic. The first sentence "Drunk in Spring" is profound and elegant, which shows that the author is infatuated with spring scenery, while "Spring Return" clearly points out the helplessness of "Spring Going" and lays the tone of the whole word. I want to find spring in my dream. (2 points)
analyse
(1) questions examine the comparison of poetic styles; (2) The topic examines the analysis of poetry expression. The answer is: style+examples+analysis. Examples are the best keywords, and you don't have to quote them completely. (1) We should grasp the difference between "reason" and "emotion" and combine specific poems; (2) generally echoing from beginning to end; Point at the end. Poetry pays attention to the characteristics of implication, combining two sentences to analyze.
Reference answer
⑴ The interest of Qin poetry: The author expounds that the change of scenery in the four seasons is natural, and thinks that spring is beautiful, and the spoony children who "stay in spring" don't have to regret the passing of spring, and the shade in summer is pleasant enough.
The interest of Yuan poetry: The author deliberately used words such as "Green Window Singing", "Falling Flowers", "Yingyu", "Dusk", "Rain" and "Dream" to create the atmosphere of the passing of spring, and used words such as "Stay in Spring", "Wen Chun" and "Seeking Spring" to convey his disappointment with the passing of spring.
⑵ The ending sentence "Looking for spring in my dream" is light and sentimental, which shows that the author can't bear to look for spring in his dream, indicating that spring is irreversible (in the real world), and the ending sentence highlights the characteristics of this word.
Make an appreciative comment
Qin Guan's Dark Days in March
Qin Guan's "The Dark Sun in March" is full of philosophy and contains "rational interest". "March is a dark day", that is, the last day of March in late spring. After this day, it means that the season has entered summer. The sadness of spring is self-evident to people with keen feelings. But this poem, however, does the opposite and writes new ideas. "Promoting economy" is a natural law, which is beyond human power. Because metabolism is the law of iron that runs naturally! And those "spoony children" want to "keep spring" and don't want to let it go. In this way, people's frustration when spring is about to pass away is vividly written. For the last two sentences of the poem, I turned out new ideas and made full preparations.
The last two sentences are shocking, such as the sudden peak, which makes people wake up. What is there to miss when spring is gone? "Summer Wood" of "Yin Yin" is also "cute"! The poet's optimism, boldness and open-mindedness are vividly on the paper!
Yuan Haowen's poem "Dianjiang Lip"
There is no intention to render the scenery in late spring between the lines, but to put pen to paper and take beauty from the side. The sentence "Spring in the Sand" seems straightforward, but it is actually a picture outside the text. Why do you say that spring comes back? Yangliuqing has spring first, and the end of willow is spring; In late spring, spring scenery seems to float away with running water and catkins. Therefore, chanting the word "spring back to the battlefield" is a feeling of ulterior motives between the lines, leaving a blank picture.
The second sentence, "Green window still sings in spring", is wonderful in the poem. Don't say that you miss and hate spring, but that others don't know that you are infatuated with spring. The man in the green window or a geisha. Perhaps there is no such person singing, but it is a realm set by the author to express her love for spring through the singing of the girl in the green window. This is a subtle turning point of ci style, which the author successfully mastered and applied.
The sentence "Where is Wen Chun, the flowers fall and the birds sing" melts the image in the previous sentence and turns it into a layer. Ouyang Xiu's "Butterfly Loves Flowers": "Tears ask flowers for silence, and red flies over the swing." Wang Anguo's Qingpingle: "I can't stay in spring. I have tried my best to speak English." Huang Tingjian's Qing Ping Le: "Who knows that there is no trace of spring, unless you ask an oriole. No one can understand the signs of a hundred months, because the wind flies over the roses. " The above works, whether asking flowers or birds, whether falling flowers or singing birds, always have a little shadow of spring. In this word, it is not only an unanswered question, but also an unexplored one. "Flowers fall and warblers sound silent", and spring grows old, and there is no sound at all.
The poet's deep attachment to spring is a futile pursuit in his poems. There is no doubt that the first sentence said "Spring Return", but it also said "Wen Chun". Asking without answering is followed by overlooking and searching. The image of "trees in the desert smoke" seems to come from Xie Tiao's "trees are far and warm, and smoke is endless and desert". Li Bai's "flat forest as woven" is a tall building overlooking, which seems to be the materialized form of "singing" Looking around, there is no breath of spring. Go back to the building at dusk to shelter from the rain, so as to have a good dream and look for it in the dream.
The phrase "spring in a dream" is light and affectionate. The real spring has indeed passed, and the poet did not think of despair and depression, but still pursued it in his dream. This persistent pursuit of beautiful things also reflects the poet's young and healthy psychological mood.
This word represents the traditional theme of hurting spring. But not heavy sadness, but faint disappointment. The poet is young, healthy and persistent.
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