Dear Catherine:
In your letter, you asked me how to keep healthy. Now I want to give you some advice.
As you know, our teenagers grow up very fast, so we need a lot of nutritious food, such as fish, meat and beans, especially fresh vegetables and fruits. You'd better not eat too many sweets. Besides, you should exercise every day instead of studying in the classroom all day. For example, you can run, swim or play table tennis after school. More importantly, adequate sleep is very important. So I suggest you sleep at least eight hours every day, and don't stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep healthy.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Test analysis: This composition is an outline composition, and the selected content is related to our life, and it is also a familiar letter format for candidates. Candidates only need to state the key points one by one, give full play to them, do not translate sentence by sentence, and pay attention to using some transitional sentences or transitional words to make the sentences read smoothly. But pay attention to the correct tense, because this letter is to give some advice to the other party, and pay attention to the polite and modest tone when writing.
Comments: A good composition should closely follow the theme of the article, follow a specific stylistic format, reasonably organize the structure of the article, have appropriate language, unified and coherent content, correct grammar, spelling and punctuation, and use appropriate words. In order to avoid too many spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes, don't pile up some words that you are not sure about in order to pursue the splendor of the text, and don't deliberately pursue long sentences, and write long sentences with multiple clauses that don't know right or wrong. You'd better choose the words, phrases and sentence patterns that you are most sure of during the exam.