Selection of flowers for composition evaluation.
1. The full-text language is concise and the structure is natural. ? The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
2. What does the article describe? Fresh and lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
Although the article is short, it is very vivid. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and sentences.
4. The central sentence revealed at the end of the article is a clear pen and summary, short and powerful.
Through careful observation, the campus spring is vividly described in beautiful language. Although the article is short but not monotonous, the language is popular but interesting.
6. Detailed description of the characters' language, demeanor and movements is a major feature of this paper. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
7. The article will? Careful writing reveals sunshine-like warmth between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
8. The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful!
9. The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.
10. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. End with ... Point to the best, implicit and meaningful, meaningful.
1 1. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
12. Is the article described in the order of things? Things, the language is fluent, the level is clear, and it seems very happy from beginning to end.
13. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
14. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
15. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
16. Can lead a reasonable imagination and embody a meaningful philosophy? The writing is fluent and concise, giving full play to the imagination. This is a good composition.
17. There are many excellent sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
18. This article may not be particularly attractive in the plot, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the image of the role well, and on the other hand, the language life is vivid and rich, which has a good effect of expressing ideas.
19. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
20. Juanxiu's handwriting structure is clear and neat, which can't help but give people a refreshing feeling. Teachers should really learn from you.
The recommendation of composition evaluation on flowers.
1. Your article is as simple and open-minded as you are. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term training. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles in the future study process.
I think this article reflects your thoughts. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
3. The language is clear. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
Caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. Through the article "Accident", we can see that your heart is not only full of innocence and books, schools, but also full of concern for society. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
5. the language is decent and romantic, the context is smooth, and the confidant is expressed? Bookworm? Images and? Me? With what? Confidante? what's up Confidante? Love is smart and elegant.
We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life, which can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the field, walk in the forest, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.
7. the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
8. The atmosphere of the article is fully and appropriately rendered. What is the focus of the article? Made a delicate and vivid portrayal.
9.？ It is practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, and is exciting and moving to read.
10. This article is full of passion. Read between the lines, can you understand the rights of small authors? Love. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
1 1. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is similar to the previous metaphor? Come down in one continuous line. Finally, the author showed his rights in a few words. Feeling, moved.
12. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, of course, from the profound and fresh conception of your article. So-called? Mountaineering is full of emotion, but watching the sea is full of meaning. You are a person who has a pure heart for life. You touched others with your true feelings, which is the greatest success of your composition.
13. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Slow and steady writing is the direction of your future writing efforts.
14. Careful thinking and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to go. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
15. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.
16. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion, authentic and interesting to read.
17. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.
18. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
19. Is the article described in the order of things? Things, the language is fluent, the level is clear, and it seems very happy from beginning to end.
20. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always humorous. Reading is interesting.
Evaluation of composition describing flowers
1. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
2. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
3. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
4. The full text quotes some proverbs just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
Your article is very creative, and your ideas are completed in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!
6. the author? Scattered and gathered? Strong ground control ability, the whole article is written in one go, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling like running water!
7. As a casual feeling, your article is agile and willing. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form your own scenery!
Although writing doesn't appeal to you much, you keep writing like a snail at every step, and never stop. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.