This test question is an essay question with a lot of writing space and openness, suitable for different regions, different backgrounds and different levels of candidates. Whether in the bustling city, or quiet rural, remote mountainous areas; whether the family is poor, no cultural background, or family affluent, the family of the book; whether the degree of learning is good, or learning is poorer ...... The proposition of "here", for every Candidates are equal and fair, there is not much obstacle to examine the question, all candidates can be on a fair basis, on the same starting line, to show their writing talent.
First of all, to determine their own composition in the "here" specifically refers to what, is the motherland, is the hometown of the native land, is the school, is the classroom, is the community, is the street, is the village, is the field, is the family, is the house, is the book, is the language, is the dream, is the ideal, is the heart! ...... The specific place "here" refers to limits the material for your essay. You can choose a big place or a small one. Of course, some essays may not specify what "here" is, but the reader can still feel the actual "here". As long as you can show exactly "here", write "here" content, fit the theme on the line.
Secondly, to determine the "here" of the specific reference, the key is still to choose the content of the writing, writing "here" things, people, things, etc., the material of the test question gives us a very good tip: "Here. Leaping vivid life; here, interpretation of the moving story; here, showing a colorful life ...... "This is the examination of the candidates, the selection of materials has a very favorable help, the original, "here" this topic, you can write "vivid life", can write "moving story", can write "colorful life" and so on, as long as the candidates can write these contents on the "The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty.
Third, the angle of intention can be freely determined. Because the proposition essay has a huge writing space, so the angle of intention should be multi-faceted. Can eulogize "here" living life, can recount "here" moving story, can describe "here" colorful life; can praise the "Here" of the beautiful, can be scorned "here" of the ugly, can satirize the "here" of the false; can express "in here can express the thoughts and feelings of "here", can express the emotional attitude of "here", can show the beautiful memories of "here"; can portray the people of "here", and can record the memories of "here". people, can record "here" things, can record "here" things ...... according to "here" The specific references and the content of the writing to the intention, the angle of the intention to try to small, specific, so that the composition will be written out more full of some, more rich, more vivid some.
Fourth, the careful conceptualization of their own composition. The examination room essay time is limited, to have a bright spot, careful conceptualization is the key. Many high-scoring essay is because of clever ideas, novelty, and therefore touched the readers, only to get a high score. For example, focus on structural integrity, in front of the title, the middle of the content is rich and rich, followed by an epilogue, making the article structure is very complete; in order to show a more complex and grandiose or a longer time span of events, often only in the sea of the whole event to pick up a few exquisite small waves, through different angles or different levels to show the whole of the event, which is often used in the form of a subheading, through a few parallel The purpose of the paragraphs, making the structure neat and beautiful; there are also flashbacks, double line and other methods of structuring the article, the same is the structure of the article seems original.
Fifth, in the style, the candidates can also be based on their own specialties, written as a narrative, prose, and even novels, poems, etc. can be, the test questions on the style is not too much to ask, and is conducive to the full play of the student's specialties. But no matter what style of writing, must be familiar with their own, good at, can grasp the style, do not for the so-called "innovation", write their own not good at the style. Furthermore, the characteristics of the genre should be prominent, can not be written as a narrative unlike narrative, argumentative unlike argumentative, prose does not want to prose "four unlike" genre, narrative essay highlights the elements of the narrative essay, prose highlights the characteristics of the prose, argumentative essay highlights the requirements of argumentative essays, no matter what genre is written in line with the requirements of this genre, highlighting the characteristics of the genre. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty.
Sixth, in the expression, to achieve fluent, vivid and accurate language, good expression. The first thing I want to do is to make sure that I have a good understanding of what I'm talking about. And then new ideas, and then clever ideas, and then good material, if the language is bland and tasteless, or dragged and cumbersome, the line lacks elegance, there is no good language to express, it can not become a good composition. Any composition that can get a high score in the examination room is always a composition with good language expression. Therefore, the language must be accurate, vivid, image, sentence should be fluent, to appropriate use of some rhetorical devices to enhance the image of the language, so that the expression of rich literary.
Seventh, to get high grades in the examination, writing some extraordinary breakthroughs can also be your composition to gain favor. These extraordinary breakthroughs, that is, in a particular aspect of the composition to be particularly prominent, because of this particularly prominent features and get high marks. It can be the angle of intention novel special, like the "here" position for the "heart of the secret garden" "language hall", etc.; it can be the structure is very clever and outstanding, such as the structure of the subheadings Form; can be the content material is very special, such as writing the ancient Xiang Yu, Yu Bo Ya and Zhong Ziqi, etc.; can be the language is very wonderful, rich in artistic infectivity, etc.; can also be a very special style, such as novels, poems and so on. A breakthrough in a particular aspect, often can win the high score of the exam essay.
In short, like "here" such a more open essay question, to write it, you need to carefully review the topic, clever ideas, careful selection of materials, accurate expression, only then, to write a high-quality essay.
2. to "here areaffection, like a signpost in the confusion, for you to guide the road ahead; affection, like a lamp, illuminating your life should go; affection, like a cup of tea, can warm your heart. Where is affection?
My mother is an ordinary woman, but in her ordinary life, I saw her extraordinary side.
I remember when I was in first grade, I was playing with my classmates on the playground. Suddenly, I seemed to be pushed back by a force, and my chin hit a stone. My classmates sent me to the infirmary, and the teacher said I had to go to the hospital for stitches.
When my mother learned the news, she put down her chores and rushed to the hospital at the speed of light.
In the hospital bed, I was very scared. I saw the doctor fiddling with a needle, and all of a sudden, the fear turned into countless tears gushing out of my eyes.
At this moment, my mother ran into the hospital room, held my hand, and kept comforting me, saying: "Don't be afraid, it will be fine! Mom is by your side, I will always be with you!" I stopped crying and turned my head to look at my mother's eyes. For the first time, I realized that my mother's eyes were so big, so bright and so charming. Gradually, I went into dreamland.
I only vaguely remember that I was lying on a warm, firm back. It was rocking gently, like a cradle, without waking me up.
Wake up is, I have been lying in the soft bed at home. At this time, I will never forget, who put a small spoonful of manna into my mouth, who with caring eyes to dissolve the pain of my wounds. It was her - my most beloved mother.
Though she asked me many questions, I did not answer. I didn't want my talking to break the silence of the moment. I was thinking, if time can stay, let it stay in this moment.
Outside the window, the stars were watching with open eyes, and the moon was pouring its brightest moonlight into this cozy hut. They are quiet and don't seem to want to break the silence.
Affection, old like a honey, give you a sweet taste; affection, like a spring in the desert, can help you in your difficulties; affection, like a ship, carrying you to set sail.
The first thing you need to know is how to get the best out of your life, and how to get the best out of your life!
Kindred spirits are here!
3. 600-word essay "Here areHere are the growth of the eye, yesterday is still a bright spring, green infinite school season, today but to become a cold wind, wind and snow in the end of the period. I feel that time is so fast, I am sitting here blossoming and falling, looking at the clouds, to be subjected to the joy of growing up. In the past, I was still a pretend independence, think grow up little girl; Today, I have become really independent, indeed has grown up big girl. Middle school life has left me too much. In the past, I often let my own nature to. What to wear on what, clothes to stretch hands and food to open mouth of the "noble princess" often in the mother's patience to do the game to challenge the limit. And now? I always pay attention to my mom's joys and sorrows, listen to her, and don't make her angry. This is the result of training in junior high school: wear a school uniform every day, wear a school badge, and always abide by the rules and regulations of the school. Mom said: my daughter has grown up. In elementary school, from not knowing what is revision and near the end of the period but play a big fool often in the teacher's painstakingly jumped around to tune, play east to play west. Now? In junior high school has developed a set of panacea for review, learn to rationalize the scientific arrangement of review time, but also know to take the initiative to see the previous never touched and dusty masterpieces, independent study pacesetter awards often take home. Teachers say: students will learn. A long, long time ago, I always think that learning is a pressure, is a burden, Chinese education is how bad, how bad. Now? In junior high school, I turn pressure into motivation, take the initiative to pick up the burden of pressure, raise the sail of diligence, ride the waves in the sea of knowledge, and painstakingly search for the other shore. I see this as a responsibility that should be borne by growth, and this, too, is learned here. Choosing to face pressure is a sign of growth, and I think I have indeed grown a lot. If I compare this school to a cliff, I am the tree at the top of the cliff. The wind has shaken, thunder has bombarded, snow has pressed, frost has bullied; Zigang stroked, the rainbow has embraced, the moon has kissed, the flow of Xia has kissed, I am calm and relaxed, flattered. Dissolving wind, light moon, idly watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court; go and stay unintentionally, roaming with the clouds outside the sky, the continuation of the joy of learning, singing long (zhang) of the song ...... There is joy here My home is a family full of joy and harmony, where there is laughter everywhere. Tolstoy said, "Happy families are all alike." I think the happiness and joy in my family is different. Dad, mom and I*** together form a cozy family. Whenever anyone has a happy event, such as my exam tops, Dad's self-study exam and passed one or two subjects, Mom made a single insurance, etc., we are overjoyed, joy overflowing in everyone's face. Whenever anyone encounters difficulties, we will smile and encourage each other to share the hardship and let the joy pass. My family is a study-oriented harmonious and joyful family. In our free time, our whole family gathers together to guess riddles, pair of hiatus, idioms solitaire, etc., learning and enjoying in learning. For example, there is a idiom solitaire, I first said a "unique", my father intentionally took a "two springs reflecting the moon", which made my mother and I laugh. Mom and I said in unison, "That's not an idiom!" "Why not? I'll believe you when you tell me why." Dad said wryly. I rushed to the idiom dictionary and triumphantly said, "It's not! Just not!!!" Dad said slyly, "How can it not be? Get the idiom dictionary and show me." "Wait a minute! Don't fall for this old fox. Let him take another one." Mom said provocatively. Dad was momentarily speechless, so Mom and I ate and laughed. Dad suddenly came to his senses and said, "Two dragons playing with pearls, two full and three even." Mom immediately said, "The pearl is in harmony." I followed with "Harmonious wind and fine rain." Dad shook his head in the opera's cadence and said, "The words are heavy - heart - long, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, thump ......." Amused mom and I laughed, straight cover the belly of the pain of laughter. Mom laughed after a while actually also speechless. Dad raised his hand, made a horse riding forward movement for mom to see. Sharp-eyed me took a look and hurriedly said, "No hints! No cheating!" Mom stopped laughing, still reacting, and said, "Long drive." I then said, "Mom and Dad, you really have a heart to heart!" "Hahaha ......" All three let out a heartfelt laugh. There was also constant joy between my mom and me. My mom loves classical poetry, and she and I often have "poetry pairs", that is, we each memorize one line of a poem or word. One time, mom couldn't recall the poem "Qiang Di Why Complain about the Willow", so I told her a story about Ji Xiaolan's skillful omission of the words, but it still didn't refresh her memory. I made a gesture of playing the flute again, and mom realized it. Our family was immersed in the joy of learning, which is true to what Confucius said, "Isn't it fun to learn?" My home also has the joy of entertainment. After tea and dinner, our family would play all kinds of chess, such as Xiangqi, Weiqi, checkers, etc., so the so-called "chess" happy, happy in the "chess" ah! When I win, I am happy and my parents laugh with me; when I lose, my parents encourage me to keep up the good work. When I lose, my parents encourage me to keep up the good work. From this, I not only get happy, but also know the principle of "not to be proud of victory, not to be discouraged by defeat". My home is like an amusement park where there is a lot of joy and happiness. May the sunny warmth of joy enter everyone's heart and fill every family with joy. There is joy here, but may all the families of the world be filled with harmony and joy.
4. To here there isHere there is spring
Spring came, the swallow returned from the south, it is a black shiny feathers, a pair of handsome light wings, in the sky pecking at the branches of the tree ready to go home to rebuild the nest. I seemed to hear it say, "I can move to a new home again, I'm so happy!"
Willow spit out new green buds I came to the creek, saw the embankment, full of life and vitality, in the summer, people will be able to rely on it to cool off, it is how happy ah! I heard the brook "ding dong ding dong" singing a happy song, I asked: "brook, brook, where are you going?" The brook said, "I want to flow into the river, and on the way I can moisturize the fields, wet the land... I can make a contribution to the people I am very happy!"
I came to a garden, thousands of red flowers, pink like the sun, white as snow, red like fire, can be really beautiful ah! People praised the beautiful, brightly colored flowers. Flowers listen to the words of praise, happy.
I came to the field, the sky fell a drizzle of spring rain, which wet the grass, so that the grass is more green, wet the earth, so that the earth is softer ... Farmers uncle showed a sweet smile, they sowed pumpkin seeds, corn seeds ...... they also sowed hope at the same time. hope for a good harvest in the coming fall. They seem to see the eggplant put on a purple robe, winter melon put on a white veil, sorghum raised a torch ...... they have a happy smile.
I came to the river bank again, I saw the children are running on the road of the diffuse beach, flying colorful kites, looking at their sweet smile, I also have a happy smile.
Spring is so beautiful, so sweet, so colorful! I love spring because she makes everything in the world so happy!
5. Write an essay on "There is happiness here" (600 words) Junior high school levelLike the desire for the charm of the color and shadow of the flower and the moon, and the charm of the sound of the song and the dance, people are looking forward to happiness. And most people are complaining that the God of happiness has not embraced their own green heed.
In the past, I also often thought: "Happiness, why you never patronize me, always cold. "I remember the first time I participated in the performance, the heart panic and fear, want to let my mother to accompany me, but she just gratified the smiler pushed open the door away from home, I silently looked at my mother's back far away. I remember once because I was greedy to play fell down, begged my parents to carry me a ride, but was mercilessly rejected by parents. I finally misinterpreted my parents' care for me in a different way.
In the days when no one sends a raincoat, I will know how to face the storms of life.
In the days of no one to pick up and drop off, I will learn how to trek the rugged road of life.
In fact, happiness is not complicated, it is not esoteric. It's just that we're "in the mountains, deep in the clouds," so you'll never be able to understand the meaning of the word "happiness".
So what is happiness? It is the joy of life, the friendship of the world, and the simplicity of thought.
Happiness is in the side of each of us, after school, the warm nagging parents, a table on the dining room table, a fragrant meal; away from home, parents, a word of advice, are not all happy?
As long as the attention, you will find that happiness often "silent" moisturizing body and mind.
Happiness is a very familiar word, happiness, you really experience it? The original meaning of happiness is to make people feel comfortable with the situation and life, or used to describe life, the situation is satisfactory, but this is only the meaning of the word, we experience? What is happiness? Often there are no specific criteria . What is true happiness? People's understanding is often different, so there are high and low values, and all sorts of differences. The material needs, the desire for power, the desire to have countless property fulfillment, can be considered truly happy?
In fact, as long as the quiet taste, you will find that happiness is all around you, in the morning, my mother for me to serve a hot breakfast, there is happiness; not happy when a friend's comfort a condolence, there is happiness; embarrassed and helpless, the passer-by that tolerant smile, understanding of the greetings, there is happiness - too much happiness.
Happiness is not as distant as a mirage, unattainable; happiness is often the most common, the most simple, the most unnoticeable.
As long as we usually pay more attention to a little, easy and happy to do, will find that the happiness of the time are all around us, experience it, to learn to know how to be happy, do a happy person! I hope to adopt!
6. to here on the subject Write a 600-word essayBook, accompanied by my growth Since I was a child, I came into contact with countless books, from textbooks to literary novels, martial arts novels, extracurricular reference books ...... book, accompanied me to grow up. Infant age, the book for me, may be a toy, may be furnished goods, like to read the parents often use books to coax me to play, I really mean to contact the book, is in my birthday, my parents set up a bed of things for me to grab week, looking at the bed full of a variety of good things, I did not hesitate to grab the only book on the bed, my father then said: "The child has a destiny with books." Since then, books and I are inseparable. I remember when I was a child, I was often sick, a hanging water for half a day, my mother in order to hang water to distract my attention, often bring a few small picture books beforehand, tirelessly read to me. Gradually, I was able to memorize the words, and gradually, through these little picture books, I got to know a lot of Chinese characters. I remember once in kindergarten, I read the words on the blackboard stutteringly, the kindergarten aunts were surprised that I could recognize so many Chinese characters, and I was praised at the same time I was more interested in the book, while reading, literacy, and know a lot of truth. Finally, I went to school, the school textbooks let me grow my knowledge, but the extracurricular books attracted me more, through the book, I know a lot of music theory knowledge; through the book, I know how to appreciate the famous paintings of the motherland; through the book, I know a lot of strange people and strange things ...... A book passed from my hands, one after another story showed in front of my eyes, one after another reasoning into my eyes, one after another, one after another reasoning into my eyes. One reason after another is reflected in my mind, and one kind of longing after another springs out from my heart, which are all the origins brought to me by books, which are all the wonders brought to me by books. I can't leave the book, the book grows with me, the book watches me grow, the book guides me to grow. I believe that books will always be with me in my life. Good books grow with me Use your time to improve yourself with the help of other people's works, so that you can easily get what other people can only get through hard labor. --Socrates In my mind, there is always a boundless ocean of books, attracting my eyes all the time, seducing my soul, enriching my knowledge, stimulating my potential, and improving my connotation. In this sea of knowledge, I thrive. In my understanding, the so-called good book should be able to reflect the times with rich ideological connotation, novel form, style and exquisite unique technical language of the three excellent works. As Milton said: a good book is the precious blood of a master artist, a life beyond life. It is the good book that accompanies me all the way. Schopenhauer once said: in all fields of knowledge, the majority of human knowledge is presented on the pages and in books as human written records. So my mind that thirsts for knowledge can only be nourished by bathing in the ocean of books. I am in the book to interpret the hundred states of society, interpretation of the world flavor, interpretation of classical culture. Books are my spiritual food, I draw nourishment in books, without the supply of nutrition, can I still move forward on the road of life? Good books give me the wealth to succeed and the capital to grow. The history of a person's spiritual development should be his own reading history. American writer, orator, entrepreneur Baker &S226; Haggis once said: at the right time, a correct book can change your fate. In a book like the biographies of famous people, I tracked the footprints of their growth and success, and was touched by their experience and spirit, shocked by their perseverance and courage, and even more attracted by the greatness they created. That sparkle in them also seeped into my blood invisibly. In the self-improvement series, I know how to fully recognize myself, how to explore my own strengths, how to analyze myself. The Laws of Success book planted the seeds of my dreams to grow and blossom. I was touched by Napoleon Hill's Think Rich; by Dale Carnegie's Human Weakness; by Norman Vinson Ball's The Power of Positive Thinking ~~~~~~~ It is these encouraging and stimulating books that give me the sunshine to thrive, and they are my loyal friends on the road of life. Good books can help me adjust my mind and purify my soul. In the process of a person's growth, it can not always be smooth sailing, can not always *** full of hope. When my hope is lost, disheartened, I carefully select a good book to hide quietly in the corner to see. At this time the book is like one of my life coach, quietly cleaned my heart by the dirt. I try hard to find a cure for my frustration from books. Read Lao She's humorous prose, in his personalized language to appreciate the joy of life; read the book to let the "mind through the air", in the context of the beauty of taste freedom. Looking at the words that rattle my heart, kissing the blue wave of literature, the pure beauty of life, touching love unfolded in front of me. Immersed in the world of Wisdom and Life, any unhappiness, any downturn, was forgotten in the corner of my mind. I truly realized the words of Thomas `Kempis': I had looked around for happiness, but in fact happiness is reading a book alone in a corner. Books give me a good heart and a pure and beautiful soul, so that I move towards a higher life, books are my mentor and friend to thrive. The mood when reading a good book cultivates my sentiment. Sometimes the inspiration for a person's success arises from good sentiments. In the drizzly afternoon, reading Bing Xin fresh and bright, timeless and subtle, with the beauty of clouds and water, let the mind in her delicate pen gently swim, as Bandera's music played softly beside the ear; as the dewdrops in the morning light under the beautiful,
7. CompositionHere there is
Here there is love
At 14:28 on May 12, a sudden change of events, so that the original The city of Wenchuan in Sichuan, with its beautiful scenery and birdsong, has been turned into a ruin in no time. The earth is trembling, the sky in tears, people are bleeding. At this moment, countless children became orphans, countless old people lost their children, and countless able-bodied people became disabled. But I want to tell you, don't cry, be strong, and live with a smile. Because your life is our greatest comfort.
Children, you are beautiful angels, the disaster just let your wings hurt, after a lot of people's rescue, I believe that soon you will become beautiful angels. Dear, little angels you do not cry, although you lost your parents, but millions of Chinese people are your parents. Dear little angels, don't cry, you see, Grandpa Wen went to the disaster area to send love and care for you, his kind face, let people feel so kind. Dear little angels, you do not cry because hundreds of millions of Chinese children and grandchildren for you to hold up a sky without disaster. Dear little angels, you do not cry, because as long as there is love, the disaster will be melted.
There was a teacher who saved four students with his body when the earthquake happened. When the People's Liberation Army rescued them, the teacher was dead, while the 4 students were unharmed. But because the teacher had shielded them too tightly, he had to saw off the teacher's arm in order to save the 4 students. When I read this, I was already filled with tears. Not only because I was moved by the teacher's action, but more importantly by his spirit. So, dear little angels, you must get rid of the disaster as soon as possible, as soon as possible from the sadness, with our blessing and hope to live a strong and courageous life.
The earthquakes are merciless, and there is love on earth.
When the earthquake happened, China and even the whole world practiced the virtue of "one party in trouble, eight parties to support". Countries around the world provided medical assistance, donated tents and money to the earthquake-stricken areas of Sichuan. And countries around the world sent rescue teams, they use advanced equipment to search for signs of life, even if there is only a glimmer of hope, but also to try to search.
The people of China's provinces have also taken action to help the stranded people in the disaster area by volunteering to join the volunteer army and risking their lives at any time to help the people in the disaster area.
The People's Liberation Army (PLA) and the volunteer army, journalists and newspaper staff are on the front line. They are working hard for the people in the disaster areas and they are working hard to give people a more detailed and clear understanding of the situation in the disaster areas.
Hosts from various stations and provinces, artists and actors from various provinces and cities have made donations to the disaster area to show their love. Painters and writers from various places are also helping the victims in different ways. Whether it's a gray-haired old man, a successful middle-aged man, or a student in the prime of life, they are all witnessing love with their actions, and witnessing great love with their words.
Our school is also actively responding to the call of the party, for the people in the disaster area to contribute to the love, our school students *** donated 3700 yuan, although not a lot, but that is at least a little bit of our whole school students.
Believe in yourself, believe in others, we shoulder to shoulder, *** with the fight.
Believe in yourself, people will win, the will of the people.
Believe in yourself, 1.3 billion compatriots will gather into a Great Wall.
Believe in yourself, tomorrow will rise again a brilliant sun.
Believe in yourself and you will build a better home.
Let's act together!
If I were a bird
Every time I see a bird flying freely in the sky, I am very envious of it, and how I wish I were that flying bird!
If I become a little bird. In the morning, I want to get away from this polluted concrete city, fly to the dense forest to breathe fresh air, sing a beautiful song, call the children in the branches of the swing. On holidays, when my mother nagged me to do homework, a gust of wind blew, I flapped my wings and flew away, and never heard my mother's annoying nagging in my ears again. At night, I want to fly silently to the lively, bustling supermarket, to help the rainbow sister to buy jewelry, to help the sun male to buy drinks, and then to the stars brother to buy some snacks.
If I become a bird. If I become a bird, in the summer I want to fly to the beach, walk on the soft sand, fly over the sea, if I become a bird, in the fall I want to fly into the orchard, eat those ripe and delicious fruit, if I become a bird, I want to fly to the North Pole to see, to be friends with the penguins. If I become a bird, I will fly around to see where there are floods or droughts, and then tell the information to human beings at the first time, so that people have time to prepare to defend themselves against disasters. If I become a bird 。。。。
I want to grow a pair of wings and become a bird that can fly!