Bad Sentences
The so-called sick sentences are sentences with defects. Any sentence that violates the rules of grammatical structure or objective truth is a faulty sentence. The former is called a grammatical error, and the latter is called a logical error.
Bad sentences - incomplete or redundant components
1. Incomplete components
(1) Abuse of prepositions resulting in incomplete subject
(2 ) Predicate is incomplete
(3) Object is incomplete
(4) Necessary modifier is incomplete
(5) Related words are incomplete
2. Redundant components
(1) Redundant subject
(2) Redundant predicate
(3) Redundant object
(4 ) Attributives are redundant
(5) Adverbials are redundant
(6) Complements are redundant
(7) Dispensable
(8) ) Misuse of "of"
1. Incomplete components
(1) Abuse of prepositions resulting in incomplete subject
☆Through this study, my level has improved Great improvement. Remove "pass" and let "study" be the subject; remove "make" and let "level" be the subject
☆From the above-mentioned eye-catching facts, it is proved that the party's principles and policies are From the masses. Remove "from..."
(2) Incomplete predicate
☆ Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched, in which it is necessary to establish and strengthen technical management systems, etc. A series of jobs. Add "complete" before "establish"
☆In the old society, working people lived without enough food and clothing. Add "live" before "eat", or remove "life" and use "not enough to eat or not warm to wear" as a predicate
☆Inspired by Lei Feng's spirit, all the teachers and students in the school are good people and good deeds. Sprung up like mushrooms after a rain. Add "strive to the top" after "encouraged by Lei Feng's spirit"
(3) Incomplete object
☆The school party committee discussed mobilizing all teachers and students to carry out a patriotic health campaign. Add "problem" after "movement"
☆ We must do everything we can to mechanize and collectivize our country's agriculture. Add "the road" after "collectivization"
(4) Necessary modifiers are incomplete
☆If you want to achieve excellent results, you must work hard. Add "hard and effective" before "labor"
☆In this school table tennis singles competition, Zhang Qiang and Li Li won the men's and women's championships. Add "separate" before "capture"
(5) Related words are incomplete
☆The stick insect in Singapore not only has a body color that is almost the same as that of bamboo, but also has a completely different body shape when it is quiet. Like a branch. Add "and" before "body shape"
☆This academic conference did not last long, but I gained a lot. Add "Although...but..."
☆No matter how well you speak, we will not listen.
☆(Even if) your family is big and your business is big, you should save unnecessary expenses and waste.
2. Redundant components
(1) Redundant subject
☆Lao She’s writing style always shares the joys and sorrows with the people. Remove "style"
(2) Redundant predicate
☆The handouts borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class. Remove "progress"
☆Ten players on the basketball court are playing fiercely. Remove "beat"
(3) The object is redundant
☆ Sima Qian, the famous Chinese historian, devoted his life to the compilation of "Historical Records". Remove "editing"
☆ Today, I went to Slender West Lake in Yangzhou and visited scenic spots such as the White Tower, Diaoyutai and Wuting Bridge.
Remove "place"
(4) Attributive redundancy
☆ Comprehensive implementation of quality education is the top priority of current education. Remove "current"
(5) Adverbials are redundant
☆Xuelian brand shirts are among the best in the country in terms of style, quality, and packaging. Remove "yes"
☆I sincerely thank these people from the bottom of my heart. Remove "in my heart"
☆There are fruits everywhere in the mountains and plains: pears, apples, persimmons... Remove "everywhere"
(6) Redundant complements
☆In order to reduce the number of words, I had to make some slight modifications. Get rid of "some"
☆We must consciously resist bad habits mentally. Remove "in thought; remove "bad"
(7) Dispensable
☆Unconsciously, I walked a distance of about ten miles. Remove "distance"
☆It has been exactly nine years since my father passed away.
(8) Misuse of the word "的"
☆Unexpectedly. , in March this year, the price dropped, and then gradually stabilized. Remove the "of" and change it to "price dropped"
☆Due to the turmoil in the past dynasties and the humid climate, almost all paintings at that time were damaged. Destruction. Add "of" and change it to "turmoil in the past"; remove "of" and change it to "humid climate"
Wrong sentence - improper collocation
Inappropriate collocation:
1. Improper collocation of subject and predicate
2. Improper collocation of verb and object
3. Improper collocation of modifier and central language
4. Improper collocation of one side and two sides
5. Improper collocation of related words
1. Improper collocation of subject and predicate
The main manifestation is that the predicate cannot state the subject, and sometimes the subject or predicate It is composed of parallel phrases, some of which are not matched.
☆In addition to being supplied to Hangzhou, its annual power generation is also transported to Shanghai, Nanjing and other places.
Author: Poison. Xiaoyao 2006-1-10 16:06 Reply to this statement
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2 The wrong sentence "the amount of electricity generated" is changed to "the amount of electricity generated"
☆ What a beautiful picture the rustling waves and the silvery sea surface make. Remove the "rustling". "The sound of waves"
☆Young students (period) are a critical period for growing up physically, growing knowledge, and forming their outlook on life and world view. Therefore, we must fully care for them and have strict requirements. Add "student" after "student" Go to "period"
☆The task before translators is how to improve the quality of translation. Get rid of the "problem"
☆Autumn in Beijing is the most beautiful season. . Change "Autumn in Beijing" to "Autumn in Beijing"
☆Japanese Film Week (released) held in Harbin and Shenyang, as well as five Japanese films released in other provinces and cities in my country. , is a work with unique style and national characteristics among Japanese films in recent years. Add "released" after "movie week"
2. Improper combination of verb and object
Verbs and. Objects must match in meaning and grammar. A common mistake is: when a verb takes more than two objects, the following object does not match the verb.
☆If you do not pay attention to the construction of network ethics, some moral corruption will occur. And negative and backward thoughts may affect people's physical and mental health through the Internet, violate normal social order, and harm the overall situation of reform and development.
"Violation" was changed to "interference"
☆The Soviet novel "How the Steel Was Tempered" shaped the heroic deeds of Communist Party member Paul Korchagin. "Deeds" were changed to "image"
☆The students watched and listened with reverence to the report of this brave hero. Remove "watching and"
☆ Recently, Jinan has promoted civilized service terms and service taboos, which has been welcomed by the general public. Remove "taboos about service and service"
☆You can read precious documents, books, audio recordings and video materials that you have never seen before on the Internet. Remove "recording and"
☆The People's Liberation Army has conducted numerous rescue and disaster relief operations and protected the safety of people's lives and property. Remove "the safety"
3. Improper matching of modifiers and central words
(1) Improper matching of attributives and central words
☆I am smart and capable With your hands, you can create anything. Remove "smart"
(2) Improper matching of adverbials and central words
☆We seriously studied the suggestions of employees and humbly solicited the opinions of experts. Change "serious" to "serious" or "cautious"
☆A certain factory takes technological progress as the driving force and is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes, and new materials. Remove "new technology, new technology"
(3) Improper matching of complement and central language
☆The students cleaned the classroom cleanly and neatly. Get rid of "neatly"
4. Improper matching of one side and two sides
☆ Doing a good job in production and disaster relief depends on whether the cadres' style is in-depth. Add "whether" at the beginning of the sentence, or change it to "Whether the production and disaster relief work is done well or not depends on whether the cadres can go deep into the masses."
☆Artists have always been looked down upon in the past, but now they are eagerly favored by people. Between this look and favor, they appreciate the warmth of the world. Change "warmth" to "cold and warm"
5. Improper matching of related words
☆As long as you listen to the lectures well and complete the homework well, your academic performance can be greatly improved. Change "Ji" to "TAL"
☆Imagination is not only necessary for the poet's creation, but also necessary for the reader's appreciation. Change "not only" to "not only"
☆Since you are here, it's time for me to leave. Change "ye" to "Ji"
Bad sentence - improper word order
1. Improper position of attributive
2. Improper position of adverbial
3. Improper order of multiple attributives
4. Improper order of multiple adverbials
5. Improper position of function words
6. Inversion of subject and object
7. Improper word order in a complex sentence
Improper position of attributive
1. The positions of the attributive and the central phrase are reversed
☆my country’s cotton production will not be self-sufficient for a long time. Change "cotton production" to "cotton production"
2. Put the attributive in the position of the adverbial
☆The majority of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. Adjust "incomparable" to "enthusiastic"
3. The two attributive words are in inappropriate order
☆This exhibition displays cultural relics that were unearthed thousands of years ago. Move "thousands of years ago" before "cultural relics" and add "of" after "before"
The adverbial position is inappropriate
1. Put the adverbial in the position of the attributive
☆Teachers should give full play to the role of students in class. Adjust "full" to "exploit"
2. The positions of the two adverbials were reversed
☆We successfully found the legendary divine hunter according to the sketch drawn by Old Man Gao. Swapping the positions of "smoothly" and "according to the simple diagram drawn by Old Man Gao"
☆Li Qiang ignored Zhang Zhuo.
Move "bu" before "Ba Zhang Zhuo"
Improper order of multiple attributives: range + quantity + mobility + form + nominal + center word
Multiple attributives General order:
1. Referring to attributes or time and place
2. A phrase of reference or quantity
3. Verb or verbal phrase
4. Adjective or adjective phrase
5. Noun or noun phrase
6. Phrases with "的" are placed in front of attributives without "的"
☆An excellent female basketball coach of the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience. Attribute, quantity, verb, phrase, adjective, noun
p>Improper order of multiple adverbials
General order of multiple adverbials:
1. Prepositional phrase indicating purpose or reason
2. Indicating time or location
3. Table range
4. Expression or degree
5. Prepositional phrases to express objects
☆ Many teachers // talked to him enthusiastically in the lounge yesterday Time, place, scope, modal objects
☆ The next day, major newspapers in the world Detailed reports were made on this incident that shocked the international sports world. Regarding this incident that shocked the international sports world, major newspapers around the world made detailed reports.
Improper position of function words
1. The adverb "no" is inappropriately placed
☆If we don't work hard to do a good job in our own domestic affairs, it will be difficult for us to have a say internationally. The negative adverb of the word "ba" should be placed before the word "ba"
☆If you don't check the contract farming work now, the land in front of you will not be hoeed well. Put "no" in front of "while"
2. Improper position of related words: When the subjects of the clauses in the compound sentence are consistent, the subject should be at the beginning of the whole sentence; when the subjects are inconsistent, the related words should be in front of the subject.
☆Not only does she study hard, but she also helps other students. Put "she" in front of "not only"
☆If he cannot seek truth from facts, his career will suffer. Put "if" in front of "him"
Inversion of subject and object
☆At that time, there were very few opportunities for newspapers to contact me. It should be "My contact with newspapers"
☆Mathematics is not of interest to me. "I am interested in mathematics"
About: When the preposition structure is used as an adverbial, it can only be used at the beginning of the sentence (as an attributive in the sentence);
For: The preposition structure is used as an adverbial When used as an adverbial, it can be used in the first sentence of a sentence.
Improper order in complex sentences
☆The spring breeze blows in waves, the tree branches sway, the moonlight and tree shadows sway together, making a rustling sound. "The trees were swaying, making a rustling sound, and the moonlight and tree shadows were swaying together."