Modifying a sick sentence is to modify words and phrases with obvious speech defects without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so as to make the statement smooth, correct and more perfect. What are the common types of sick sentence errors? The following is my compilation of common sick sentence error types, welcome to enjoy
Common sick sentence error types 11 component mutilation: for example: ? For the sake of the class as a whole, did a lot of good things.? Who did a lot of good things is not clear.
(2) Inappropriate use of words: for example: ? He did things calmly and arbitrarily.? Arbitrary? is a pejorative word, used improperly, should be changed to ? decisive?
⑶ words with improper: for example: ? At the gala, we heard pleasant singing and beautiful dancing.? Hear? and? beautiful dance? Obviously can not match, should be changed to? At the gala, we heard pleasant singing and saw beautiful dancing.
(4) reversal of word order: for example: ? The language is very interesting to me.? Language? and? I? are reversed and should be changed to ? I am interested in languages.
(5) Inconsistency: e.g. ? I reckon he must have done this question wrong.? The first half of the sentence is not enough to estimate the meaning of certainty, and the second half of the sentence is sure that he is wrong, then there is a contradiction, in the end, how is the situation? It is not clear. It can be changed to ? I think he did this question wrong. or? I concluded that he did this question wrong.
(6) Repeatedly verbose: For example: ? He ran into the classroom with great gusto and announced the good news that he would go on a spring trip tomorrow.? In the sentence? The word "giddy" in the sentence ? and? and "cheerfully" are both used to indicate that he was happy. are both indicative of how happy he was, one of which can be deleted.
(7) illogical and irrational: For example: ? When the rice was ripe, the fields were green and a harvest scene.? The rice was a golden color when it ripened, while the sentence describes a turquoise color, which is illogical.
(8) unclear concepts: such as ? The Great Wall of China, the Forbidden City Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are monuments to which Chinese and foreign tourists aspire.? Here? Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge? does not belong to? monuments? The concept of attribution is unclear and should be changed to ? The Great Wall of China, the Palace Museum is the Chinese and foreign tourists aspire to monuments.
(9) the reference is not clear: such as? Huang Hong and Zhao Yan went to climb Xianlou Mountain together, she climbed faster than her, she first climbed to the top of Xianlou Mountain.? In the sentence ? She? There are two, in the end is Huang Hong climbed fast, or Zhao Yan climbed fast? The reference is not clear. It should read She paralyzed Hui Yan to climb faster, and she climbed to the top of Xianlou Mountain first. Or Huang Hong climbed faster than her, and Huang Hong climbed to the top of Xianlou Mountain first.
(10) the misuse of related words such as ? Not only is Mount Huangshan a scenic place, but I would love to visit it.? This sentence does not constitute a progressive relationship but a cause and effect relationship. Therefore, it is important to put the correlative word ? not only? and should be changed to? Because? So; Another example is? You can get good grades only if you study hard and seriously. In the sentence ? Only? should be changed to ? Only? only.
Common Sentence Error Type 21 ( )
A. An excellent basketball coach of the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience came.
B. In the cause of the construction of new China, play their infinite embedded power.
C. There are all kinds of things Lenin used in the past on display inside.
D. Whether this kind of seed should be changed or not has aroused extensive discussion among the leaders and the masses.
2 ( )
A. We came to this world-famous museum and saw a wide range of art treasures, which made us feel proud.
B. The strong and fast rhythm of rock and roll music and the mesmerizing and flashing lighting effects dazzle people.
C. If the ideas in a piece of writing are questionable, then the words, even if they are good, are not to be used.
D. Unless confrontational training is strengthened, Chinese soccer can go global, otherwise it can't even break out of Asia.
3 ( )
A. The production of cotton in China could not be self-sufficient in the past.
B. I think the reply, and the investigation and handling of the issue, show an irresponsible attitude.
C. Before liberation, the money earned by my father and brother was not enough to support the family.
D. We do not entirely deny that the poem does not reveal hope, but rather that the hope is very slim.
4 ( )
A. On October 11, with the idea of learning from the aviation department, our blackboard newspaper was published.
B. Members' family members must have a family member's badge in addition to the ticket issued, and they cannot be admitted without one of the two.
C. This shows how weak the attitude of concern and responsibility for the working class is.
D. Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched, in which a series of tasks such as the establishment and strengthening of the technical management system are to be accomplished.
5 ( )
A. Nowadays, the fishermen themselves have elected the head of the administrative group, who is responsible for controlling the life and production of the fishermen.
B. It has been ten years since Lao Zhang died.
C. The People's Republic of China has been established, the ****same program has been promulgated, and women are equal in law.
D, Mr. spoke eloquently, his voice and smile, although there is no change, but the wrinkles at the corners of the eyes seem to suggest the hardship and unhappiness of these years.
6 ( )
A. Only through close contact with the society and the masses can we offer insightful opinions on the safety and security of the country and the worries and happiness of the people.
B. The saying that "if you know the 300 Tang poems well, you can recite them even if you don't know how" applies to those who write poems as well as those who write texts.
C, on the scientific issue of right and wrong, should not be taken to pressure the way, especially can not engage in a kind of prison of words, the history of all did so, not once have a good result.
D. When he drove by, he found a sign written in red on one side, and the handwriting didn't look very clear.
7 ( )
A. The Medical Practitioners Act specifies that in many countries and regions of the world registered medical practitioners must join the local medical practitioners' association.
B. Studying the Internet with the theories and methods of social sciences is a new topic for social scientists.
C, the plaque is vulgar and grotesque, certainly not elegant; foreign pandering, with colonial cultural colors, but also for the people of the country is not ashamed.
D, China's national debt issuance scale of more than nineteen hundred and fifty-two billion dollars this year.
8 ( )
A, the Transportation Research Institute developed a filter that can purify low-grade diesel exhaust, contributing to environmental protection.
B. In order to implement the Teachers' Law, Wanshou County has reimbursed all outstanding teachers' medical expenses on the eve of the 8th March.
C. The director of the wood processing plant reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the plant's equipment, and mobilized the staff to learn how to use the new equipment, thus launching a series of new products.
D. The store openly sells pirated software, and we must crack down on this kind of behavior that tramples on the publishing law.
9 ( )
A. Since the Chinese people accepted Marxism, the Chinese revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.
B. We have to reform and improve the new system of science and technology that conforms to the objective law of scientific and technological development and is compatible with the socialist market economy.
C, in September this year, "Westlake Dali" has two young people less than 30 years old pushed to the knitting branch and the executive vice president of the clothing branch of the important position, which means that "Westlake Dali" began to carry out in the cultivation of human resources on the awareness of the fast half beat.
D. One hundred years ago, a fifty-seven-year-old stubborn single man who could still hear the thunder but could no longer hear the large orchestra playing its own music, raised his fist to the roaring sky for the last time, and then died.
10 ( )
A. Congressmen who talk about "human rights" ask what kind of "human rights" are being practiced by white policemen against blacks in the United States.
B. The Austrian mountaineering club is a nationwide organization. They have 250,000 members, who pay a membership fee based on their annual financial income.
C. The most fundamental problem facing the Chinese economy is still the lack of demand. From such a macroeconomic status quo, it is still necessary to continue to implement a proactive fiscal policy to promote economic restructuring and accelerate infrastructure development, including the promotion of western development.
D. During the decade, the annual publication of books has more than doubled in variety, while the total number of print runs has basically remained flat, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.
11 ( )
A. In the last three years, the total grain output of this county has been making great strides forward with an average annual increment of twenty percent.
B. In addition to groundwater and other sources of river water, rainwater is also one of its sources.
C, Huaisu's exuberance, Bada Shanren's bones is the pride of the Han Chinese people, but Van Gogh's passion, Matisse's rhythms have long been for the Chinese people.
D, the national general college enrollment of student planning work conference recently held in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, this year, the central department of the general colleges and universities for the western and ethnic minority areas of the student source plan will increase, the national provinces, autonomous regions and municipalities directly under the Central Government's college entrance examination acceptance rate will be more than 30%.
12 ( )
A. This is a heroic mother, a mother with an open heart.
B. The article analyzes the characteristics of the strategies adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.
C. Smuggling of cigarettes is so rampant that China's Customs has made the fight against cigarette smuggling a priority.
D. The limitations of the author's own time and class cannot but be reflected in his works, which is something we must pay attention to in evaluating ancient literary works.
13 ( )
A. The temptation of surfing the Internet is too much for modern people to resist, but the expensive online consumption makes Internet fans heartbroken.
B. A few days ago, it was confirmed by the relevant departments that the high school freshmen in China, who were enrolled in September 2000, will no longer use the existing high school language textbooks, which have been in use for 20 years. Local high schools may, according to their own situation, decide on their own to choose one of the two new textbooks, the Experimental High School Language Textbook and the Experimental High School Language Textbook, prepared by the People's Education Publishing House.
C. It is necessary to overcome the tendency to focus only on the development of tourism without paying attention to the protection of tourism resources, and to take practical measures to do a good job of protecting the river embankment.
D, according to statistics: Henan Province carries at least two hundred million plants of paulownia, agricultural tung intercropping area increased to more than ten million mu.
14 ( )
A, Tsinghua University used the network test, so that candidates online and professors "talk", and then voted by a number of professors to recommend, and finally the school decided whether to accept.
B. China's accession to the WTO and its participation in international competition require the protection of intellectual property rights and the enforcement of trademark law.
C. The creation of the Zhengzhou Huayuankou breach directly flooded more than 6.19 million people in 13 counties in the provinces of Henan and Anhui.
D. Lu Xun attaches great importance to the literary and artistic creation of children and young people, he pointed out: the fate of children is the fate of the future.
15 ( )
A. The director of the National Safety Production Committee will broadcast a televised speech on safety production at noon today.
B. His parents are both middle school teachers, and his mother teaches at his alma mater, Xixiang No. 1 Middle School, and has traveled a long way to Beijing as a representative of the school.
C. The magazine is aimed at secondary school language teachers and other language workers.
D. Looking along with the sound of the flute, I saw a young man sitting by the lake and playing the flute, which sounded so mournful and miserable.
16 ( )
A. Who can deny that the qualities of a hero are gradually cultivated in this day by day hard study?
B. At the beginning of the Gulf War, Iraq confused the aircraft of the multinational force and the reconnaissance effect of the reconnaissance satellites by setting up a large number of false targets, and eventually kept some of the aircraft.
C. He failed to give the date of the match to the other side as decided by the student union, which led to a misunderstanding.
D. I remember when I met him, he was just a small child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.
17 ( )
A, Macau drifted away from the motherland for 400 years, can you deny that the return of Macau to the motherland is not the *** with the desire of every Yanhuang children?
B. Farmers along the river have consciously expanded the area of green manure in order to improve the strength of the land and ensure an increase in food production in the coming year.
C. Since last fall, banning and publicizing the cutting and trafficking of forest trees in the forestry areas of the upper Yangtze River has been very effective.
D. Beijing Health Messenger and 10 hospitals **** built \ "medical green channel \", is a new mechanism for quick access to medical care.
18 ( )
A. I don't think anyone can deny that the play has a certain negative impact.
B, Zhang Xiangdong father and son are both teaching, he said, "It was my father's spirit of joyful teaching and dedication that inspired me to take the podium."
C. He found that he bought a "water goods" shirt, very angry, so he called a cab back.
D. He didn't listen to his tutor's advice to change the ideas in his paper, which affected the standard of the paper.
19 ( )
A. After the reorganization, the order inside and outside the arena improved significantly, and the spectators no longer crowded each other in and out of the arena.
B. The economic loss caused by this accident is serious, according to the conservative estimate of the people concerned, the direct loss is at least sixty million dollars.
C. The Chinese swimming team that participated in the Asian Games was composed of twelve outstanding players selected from twenty training members.
D. If the U.S. government does not fulfill its obligations under the China-U.S. Trade Agreement, the Multi-Fiber Agreement, and the Textile Agreement, it would be difficult for anyone to predict that there would not be a reversal of trade between China and the United States.
20 ( )
A. NATO's indiscriminate bombing of the FRY set a precedent in the history of international relations for digging one's own grave.
B. Throughout history, all those who have accomplished something and made a difference to mankind have been the result of down-to-earth and hard work.
C. It is not easy to collect historical materials, and it is even less easy to identify and utilize them, and most of the historians in China in the past used their main strength in this regard.
D. China's unearthed Western Han Dynasty King Liu Sheng of Zhongshan Jing's \"golden wisps of jade coat\", the New Year in the Palace Museum public exhibition.
21 ( )
A, in this tournament, Sichuan men's volleyball team in order to win the championship, put all the main players on the field.
B. The big cherries planted by Mr. Zhao were basically snapped up just after they were picked.
C. I looked at the smiling face sitting under the fluorescent lights, and a warm feeling suddenly came to my heart.
D. They strolled between the nineteen pagodas of the Bird's Nest under the guidance of the tour guide lady with a lot of emotions.
22 ( )
A. The fierce competition in the market economy will inevitably put some products in an embarrassing situation and make them unable to make ends meet.
B. It was said that his defeat had something to do with personal grudges, but he countered by denying with great certainty that it was not related to personal grudges.
C. During the high jump test, Xiao Chen darted forward and jumped with one foot? Oops, what a pity, almost missed the jump.
D, Emei Mountain is one of the four great Buddhist mountains in China, where the pines and cypresses, springs and waterfalls, beautiful scenery, majestic, known as "Emei world show".
23 ( )
A, before and after the Qingming Festival, the army sent more than 800 people to participate in suburban tree-planting labor.
B, a good metaphor, either for the form of similarity, or for the God, or for the form of God and similarity, is always inseparable from the fundamental characteristic of similarity.
C. The development of science and technology in a country is based on its economy, culture and education.
D. This new drug, which is very easy to use and has a long effect, can be maintained in the body for 12 hours.
24 ( )
A. In the office the teacher had a sincere exchange of views with him yesterday.
B. This year's Examination Instructions have made some new adjustments to the content and requirements of the language subject.
C. I felt very encouraged when I entered the laboratory building of the new teacher training school and wanted to come here to study.
D. After the fact of education, all the medical personnel on the correct inheritance of the motherland's medical heritage on the issue of raising awareness.
25 ( )
A. The "Review Table", which was jointly issued by the State Language Commission and the State Education Commission in 1985, stipulates that "yin" is pronounced as y?n.
B. The origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival is the story of "Chang'e's journey to the moon", which is one of the reasons for the Mid-Autumn Festival.
C. When the students are infected by external things emotional, I will capture this time, guide students to write their own mental activities and feelings.
D. Many parents are too spoiled for their children, and it is very harmful to their children's growth to be fed and clothed.
Answers
1, A (B "hidden" moved to the front of the "infinite". C "Lenin used in the past" moved to the front of the "various kinds of". D "caused" moved to the front of the "extensive".)
2, D (A "all make people" is not consistent with the subject of the previous sentence. B "rhythm" "make people look" subject-verb mismatch. C "words" after "even".)
3, B (A can not "self-sufficiency" is "cotton" rather than "cotton production". C "feed" "life" verb-object mismatch. D negative inappropriate.)
4, B (A subject inconsistency, the second half of the sentence changed to "we also set up a blackboard newspaper" C subject subject does not match, changed to "?
The subject does not match, "strengthen" changed to "improve".)
5, D (A go "master" B go "away from the present" C
"women are equal in law" is unclear, whether "women themselves are equal" or "women and men are equal in law" is not clear).
6, B (A "insight" and "opinion" semantic repetition. C remove "a class of things". D "put one on the side" ambiguous.)
7, B (A "to join" the subject is not clear. C improper use of words, "shame" to "teeth". D expression is not standardized, "more than 100 million" to "more than 100 million".)
8, D (A subject inconsistency, "developed" changed to "developed" B "all" to "teachers" after. C
"report" lack of object, can be added in the original sentence after "the practice of").
9, D (A) "since" to the beginning of the sentence. B. The word "reform" should be changed to "establish", and C. "young people" should be followed by "be".)
10, C (A "those" to the beginning of the sentence . B "pay" to "collect". D "double" to "half".)
11, D (A "production" "development" subject-verb collocation is not appropriate . B go to "and so on". C "correctly carry out -" and "a deep understanding of" to switch the order. )
12. D(A "a heroic mother" is ambiguous. B "and" is a preposition or a conjunction is ambiguous. C Add "the work of" after the original sentence.)
13, B (A improper use of words, "online" to "online". C "overcome" and "tend to" verb-object mismatch. D "at least" and "around" contradiction.)
14, A (B improper use of words, "good management" to "work well". C "flooding the population" verb-object mismatch. D the first half of the sentence is ambiguous.)
15, A (B "thousands of miles" after "also". C remove "facing". D subject inconsistency, remove "the sound of the flute".)
16. A(B "confused" and "effect" do not go well together. C "the decision of the student council" is ambiguous. D The subject of "still only" is unclear and ambiguous.)
17, D (A more negative words, remove "not". B "expanding the seed" and "area" is not appropriate with the verb-object collocation. C
"and publicity" to "the publicity", and put after "forest").
18, A (B "he" is unclear and ambiguous . C "called a cab back" is ambiguous . D "mentor's advice" is what is unclear and ambiguous .)
19, D (A remove "each other". B remove "above". C add "from" after "by".)
20, D (A "pioneering" "precedent" collocation inappropriate, go "create". B sentence mix, go "results". C "this aspect" ambiguous.)
21, D (A "all" and "all" repeated. B "basically" contradicts "all". C "feeling" can not be modified by "a".)
22. D(A "its" is changed to "the enterprise". B remove "not". C remove "didn't".)
23. B(A "person-times" can not "participate" in "labor", and the subject-verb collocation is inappropriate. C. The word "it" should be replaced by "a country" after the word "to". D
"The effect is very long" is inappropriate.)
24. B(A) "In the office" is put after "yesterday". C
Inappropriate order, the first clause should be changed to "into the new laboratory building of the Normal School". D improper use of words, "to" to "in".)
25, C (A "in" before adding "──". B can be changed to "folk since ancient times widely circulated 'Chang'e to the moon' story, is the origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival, a statement". D remove the "too".)