①This table tennis hall is well-equipped to provide table tennis players with different grades of tables, bats, jerseys, shoes and other table tennis equipment. (Jiangxi Volume)
②This fund, is a special fund to give some subsidies to the public welfare forest managers to incur expenses such as management, nurturing, protection and creation. (Anhui Volume)
③Theoretically and policy-wise, the article provides detailed regulations and insightful explanations on the issues of adjusting wages, granting bonuses, and improving the welfare benefits of employees, which are of strong guiding significance and actionable. (Hubei Volume)
④It is very important to improve the quality of breakfast, breakfast nutrition should provide two-thirds of the total amount of vitamins and minerals that the human body needs every day, so we must not be sloppy in treating the breakfast (Sichuan Volume)
⑤The ability to obtain information has become a prerequisite for students to learn on their own, and is an important symbol in determining and measuring the ability of the students to learn and the level of their ability to learn. (Tianjin Volume)
Briefly analyzing ① ② is a logical error and a mutilation of the language marking with a dun sign, respectively, "jerseys and shoes" do not belong to "table tennis equipments", and ② should be "expenses on ...... expenses"; ③ to ⑤ are improper order, ambiguity and collocation with "and" as language markers; ③ puts "profound explanation" in "detailed explanation"; ④ puts "detailed explanation" in "detailed explanation". "measure"
The second look at the negative word: its language mark is the negative word "not", "otherwise", "eradicate ", etc. The conjunction of negative adverbs and their use with rhetorical questions, verbs and adjectives with negative meanings are prone to logical errors or redundancy.
6 AIDS has three major ways of spreading: sexual transmission, blood transmission, and mother-to-child transmission, and we need to take urgent action to stop it from spreading, or else it will spread rapidly and pose a great threat to human health if we don't take urgent action. (Hubei Volume)
Simple analysis⑥"是否" means "如果不这样"，which is repetitive with the following, delete "不采取紧急行动"
三看 Quantity phrases: its language markers are "hundred and eighty", "nearly" and other words that indicate the number or range, the number of table to reduce the misuse of multiples and the number of phrases and the number of adverbs and pronouns that indicate the range, easy to cause collocation, inconsistency or redundancy, and so on. (Beijing Volume)
8 factory after the implementation of the production responsibility system, the efficiency of a significant improvement in the monthly scrap from the original one thousand down to one hundred, the scrap rate fell nine times. (Guangdong Volume)
Simple analysis of ⑦ is to determine the number of words used in conjunction with the set of nouns with improper; the table can only be used to reduce the number of fractions, so ⑧ will be "nine times" changed to "90%".
Four look at the two sides of the word: its language mark is "success or failure", "key" and so on, resulting in one side and the two sides of the improper collocation.
9 Tiananmen Square and other seven red tourist attractions whether to charge admission, the National Tourism Administration spokesman has denied at a press conference. (National Volume Ⅰ)
Simply analyze ⑨ is to "whether" as a linguistic sign of the two sides and one side of the collocation is inappropriate, remove the "whether".
Five look at the false words or prepositional phrases: its language mark is the preposition "to", adverb "no", the conjunction "although ...... but " and so on, its misuse, mixing, abuse, misplaced easy to cause improper collocation, improper order, mutilation and redundancy.
⑩Scientists need to be open-minded, that is, they should be frank and sincere with their peers who do not share the same academic views. (浙江卷)
(11) Since the right temperature helps the rate of chemical reaction, the work will be carried out in May and June when the temperature is higher. (Chongqing Volume)
(12) It is believed that the key factor in team effectiveness is not just the simple addition of individual contributions, but the teamwork skills that enable team members to act in unison and cooperate with each other. (湖南卷)
简析(10) Misuse of the conjunction "and", replaced by the preposition "to"; (11) Misuse of prepositions resulting in subject mutilation, delete "due to"; (12) Is used in pairs of The correlative words do not echo each other, replace "but" with "and including".
Sixth look at the special sentence: "put" sentence, passive sentence, "is" sentence and other special sentence in the use, collocation is prone to improper order, collocation, mutilation, etc.
(13) these accidents to the people's lives and property caused major losses. The main reason is that some competent leaders and management departments have not attached great importance to safety. (Chongqing Volume)
(14) This long-established food factory is not large, but from the selection of materials to the processing and production are very careful, the production of food has always been new and old customers rely on. (National Volume Ⅰ)
Simple Analysis Simple Analysis (13) is a mishmash of two separate sets of verb-object constructions, deleting "cause". (14) misuse of the passive sentence, it is the product is highly trusted, and can not be said that the customer is highly trusted, to "food has been highly trusted by new and old customers.
Seven look at the subject of the clauses: when the subject of the clauses do not agree, easy to abuse the omission or change the subject lead to structural confusion, unclear meaning and other language
(15) ever remember, I know you when I was a teenager, innocent and flawless, full of fantasies. (Zhejiang Volume)
(16) Opening a collection of Shakespeare's plays is like opening a treasure chest, dazzling one with the sparks of wisdom and the light of art everywhere. (Tianjin Volume)
Simple analysis of (15) after the lack of the subject of the sentence caused by the lack of clarity, in the "or" before the addition of "you"; (16) after the subject of the sentence is mutilated to cause structural confusion, in the "everywhere" before the addition of "you". "before "everywhere".
Eight look at superfluous words: before and after the two words in the lexical meaning of repetition or superposition, easy to lead to repetitive verbosity.
(17) Many students are partial to food, picky eaters, resulting in low protein intake, calcium, zinc, iron and other nutrients are obviously insufficient, the nutritional situation is not optimistic. (National Volume Ⅱ)
Simply analyze "can not" has the meaning of "people", and repeated with the following.
Nine look at multiple modifiers: sentence modifiers are too long, easy to lead to collocation, improper order or component mutilation and other speech defects.
(18) It rained incessantly in those days, causing the bungalow in which his family lived to leak extensively due to age and disrepair, and there wasn't even a place to get off the ground inside the house, so his wife only wrote to him at that point to complain about one or two things. (Sichuan Volume)
(19) The central government will expand the provision of free textbooks to students from economically disadvantaged families at the compulsory education stage year by year, and local finances will also set up special funds to help students. (National Volume I)
(20) Adopting various methods to vigorously improve and cultivate the modern technical level of workers is an imminent major event in accelerating the development of the manufacturing industry. (Jiangxi Volume)
Simple analysis (18) is the structural confusion caused by sentence mash-ups, changed to "continuous overcast rain" "bungalow ...... leakage" or " continuous overcast rain" "caused ...... the bungalow ...... to leak"; (19) "expanded "lack of object, in the" textbooks "after the" add "the scope of"; (20) is a number of determinative phrase inappropriate order, changed to "a speed up the development of the manufacturing industry".
1. (09 National Volume Ⅰ) the following sentences, there is no language disease is
A. caused the world's attention to the influenza A virus is not easy to fatal, but the spread of fast, if you don't want to find a way to find the principle of its evolution, the disease is very easy to spread rapidly, to the human health brings great threat.
B. On March 5, 10,000 young volunteers in our city took to the streets to learn about Lei Feng activities, the general slogan of this activity is "carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng, participate in voluntary action, service youth entrepreneurship, construction of a harmonious city"
C. The director of the community was interviewed and said that last year, we did a lot of conditioning work. , and this year will do more to provide help to people suffering from emotional and life distress so that they will not be so distressed and overwhelmed.
D．The development forum was held in Shanghai, during which Chinese and foreign people from all walks of life expressed their views and exchanged various opinions on a wide range of topics, including environmental protection, talent training and universal education, over a two-day period.
Answer C
The test examines the ability to analyze speech defects at the D level.
Analyzing A, "the disease can easily and rapidly spread" is an improper match for the original subject of "influenza A virus", which can be found in the second clause, "Without a way to find its evolution, the disease can easily and rapidly spread". B. The lack of a predicate in item B leads to a mismatch between the words "learning" and "activities". B. The lack of a predicate makes "learning" and "activities" incompatible, which should read "to carry out activities to learn from Lei Feng". In D, the word order is confused or the sentence is mixed up, put "for two days" before "this time" as a definite article, or change "for two days to express opinions and carry out various exchanges" to "for two days to carry out various exchanges". "There was a two-day exchange of views".
Thinking analysis to identify speech defects in addition to mastering the "syllabus" in the six types of sick sentences, should also pay attention to the possible signs of the sentence: two-sided words, negative words, quantitative words, pronouns, related words and parallel phrases, etc.; candidates can use the extraction of the main method (such as B), the sense of the review of the method (such as D) to the initial discernment
2. (09 National Volume Ⅱ) the following A. According to the company's strategic development plan, it is necessary to introduce a large number of excellent talents, including clothing fitters． A．The company needs to introduce a large number of talented people, including clothing fitters． Technical director, senior design manager and a large number of grass-roots and high-level positions.
B．After a period of rescue, they shifted their focus to taking care of the survivors, and now they are busy avoiding the possible disaster of the 35 weirs formed by the earthquake landslides and can't stop for a moment
C．Hesitant to the gradual loss of unit advantages, the children of workers of the Hydropower Bureau of Water and Electricity Bureau of Water and Electricity in a secluded area began to choose the city as a goal to realize their lives, especially after the 8 of the current generation of the more urgent desire to integrate into the city. want to integrate into the city.
D．Last year's competition was praised for our work, and this year we have been appointed to take part in the whole process of the event, from the proposition, to the final, to the selection and the awarding of prizes. It must be highly valued and not neglected
Answer B
Examination of the ability to correctly analyze and modify the sick sentences, the ability level for the expression of the application of D
Analyse A, the preposition improperly positioned resulting in the lack of the subject, will be "according to the" put in "the company A. The improper placement of prepositions leads to a lack of subject matter, with "according to" being placed after "company"; improper collocation, with "including a large number of grass-roots and high-level positions such as clothing sizers, group-buying salespersons, technical directors and senior design managers" being inconsistent, with "including a large number of grass-roots positions such as clothing sizers, group-buying salespersons and high-level positions such as technical directors and senior design managers". C. Component mutilation, "began to choose the city as the realization of the goal of life" lack of object, in the "goal" after the addition of "place". "D, illogical, should be "proposition, sea election, final to award"; sentence mix or steal the subject, "we have been appointed to participate in the whole process of the activities" should be "we will be We will be involved in the whole process of the event".
The idea of analyzing the problem of language disease questions: the main stem and branches of the sentence, to see if the components are missing or superfluous; see the main components of the sentence that is the main, predicate, object, the sentence of the branches that is the determination, the gerund, complement and the center of the sentence with whether or not; read silently, to see if there is a different mix of sentences, the order of the word is appropriate; comprehensive thinking, whether or not it is in line with the logic of thought, whether or not it is clear
The main components of the sentence are the main, predicate and object, and the main components are the main, predicate and object.
Sentences can also be identified according to the sentence of the language markers: A sentence of the beginning of the preposition "according to" may lead to the subject is missing, the conjunction "and" may be before and after the echo of the improper sign; D: the stop sign may be the sign of improper juxtaposition
3. (09 Beijing Volume) The following sentence, there is no language disease is
A. Nanjing suburbs of Yangshan, there are three artificial sculpture, up to 40 meters long huge stone, experts believe that this is Zhu Di for Zhu Yuanzhang construction of the monument to the divine merits of the monument to the selection of monument material
B. The group's funds are mostly external financing, the interest rate of the inconceivable, but the high interest rate so that the group in the pressure on the group's financial operations.
C. The development of the vaccine was a huge project that took years of intensive research, and was not a one-man battle, but a battle for the whole of humanity.
D. To live together from night to night, no one can be in conflict, but as soon as a conflict occurs, each one holds his own opinion, argues and quarrels, and does not accommodate each other, which is in fact one of the most foolish opinions
Answer A
Exam point Examination and analysis of the sick sentence.
Analyzing B is ambiguous: the meaning of "interest" is not clear, can be changed to "interest on loans"; "unimaginably high interest rate" is repeated with the latter, can be removed. C item after a clause secretly change the subject or predicate center mutilation. In the "time-consuming" before the "need", and remove the "indispensable". D is not clear: "this" is not clear. It is not clear what is meant by "this". If it means that "no conflict can occur", it is not appropriate to mean that "when a conflict occurs, each party will have its own view".
The idea of analyzing sick sentences and modifying them is a piece of chicken ribs for the candidates. In addition to the usual special training, candidates still need to use the sense of reading method, sentence analogy method, compression of the main method and from the synthesis of grammar, rhetoric, logic and semantic analysis.
4. (09 Jiangsu Volume) In the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical disease is ( ) (3 points)
A. With the rise in global temperatures, the frequency and intensity of hurricanes, floods, droughts and other extreme meteorological events are increasing, and climate warming has become a challenge that the whole of mankind has to **** face together.
B. The biggest problem for the post-80s writers is to overcome the homogenization of each other, and to promote their own artistic individuality.
C. Although the impact of the international financial crisis is still spreading, with the gradual implementation of a series of economic stimulus packages, China's economy has shown signs of rebound, and people's confidence in economic recovery has begun to rebound
D. Because young people are not yet mature and curious, and they lack the ability to distinguish between things, they are easily induced by undesirable information in the media, which can lead to deviations in their thinking and behavior
D. The youths have not yet matured, and their curiosity and lack of discernment of things can lead to deviation of thoughts and behaviors.
Reference Answer C A lack of "extreme weather events" after the missing component "occurred" to the collocation of improper; B illogical, "the biggest problem is to overcome the tendency to homogenization between each other "The biggest problem is to overcome the tendency of homogenization among each other"; D is the misuse of the preposition "due to" resulting in the lack of the subject.
Exam Points to Identify and Modify Diseased Sentences
Types of Diseased Sentences: inappropriate order, improper collocation, mutilated or redundant components, confusing structure; unclear and illogical expressions.
Identifying and modifying sick sentences is mainly an objective test, and modifying sick sentences is mainly a subjective test
Analyzing the proposers still left the 2nd question for the sick sentence test, which is different from the orientation of many model papers that came out before. The idioms that can be examined seem to have "run out of food", the simulation paper and non-stop "blocking"; the sentence can be used flexibly to fresh material, the students' ability to express the requirements of the examination and higher, "go to idioms to stay in the sick sentence The propositional idea of "to remove idioms and keep sick sentences" is reasonable. A lack of components after the "extreme meteorological events" "occurred" to the improper collocation; B illogical, "the biggest problem is to overcome the tendency of homogenization among each other. The most important problem is to overcome the tendency of homogenization among each other" is puzzling; D is the misuse of the preposition "due to" resulting in the lack of the subject.
5. (09 Hubei volume) the following items, there is no language disease is
A. Many high school graduates fill in the volunteer, is to give priority to consider the profession or priority to consider the school, to a large extent is affected by the market demand, social orientation, parental willingness, the person's preferences and other factors
B. May 4 in Beijing, the National Center for the Performing Arts held a "red" large-scale poetry recital. The large-scale poetry recital "Proverbs" was held on May 4 at the National Center for the Performing Arts in Beijing, and the college students were y shocked by the recitation art of many famous performing artists.
C. Grand View Garden tourist souvenirs shopping mall full of celebrity paintings, root carvings, guide maps, antiques, jewelry and other handicrafts, a wide range of beautiful. Tourists pick and choose, bargaining, lively
D. Winter days are short, wait until the end of the work back, it is already sunset, the mist to the village covered with a layer of hazy veil. As usual, my mother brought out a hot meal from the stove house and greeted us to eat
Answer D
The test is to analyze the sick sentences.
Analyzing A. The two expressions "affected by ...... and other factors" and "caused by ......" are B. "Through the recitation art of many famous performing artists" lacks the object center phrase "the performance"; C. "celebrity paintings and calligraphy, root carvings, guided tour maps, antiques, jewelry, etc." Some of them do not fall into the category of "celebrity paintings and calligraphy, root carvings, guided tour maps, antiques, jewelry, etc."; D. "The most important thing is to make sure that you have a good understanding of what you are doing. "Some of them do not belong to the category of "handicrafts", so they should be changed to "commodities".
Thinking AnalysisCandidates should familiarize themselves with the six types of sick sentences. For the sentence hybrid (such as A) and improper collocation, most can be judged by the sense of language, for the improper order, improper collocation, mutilation or redundant (such as B "through the many famous performing artists pure recitation art" compressed into "through the artists of the art of recitation After compression of item B into "through the art of recitation by artists", it can be found that the center of the object is mutilated), and sometimes it is necessary to hold a grammatical analysis. In addition, for semantic and logical errors by sense of language and grammatical analysis is not enough.
6. (2009 Tianjin Volume) The following sentences have no grammatical errors and the meaning of the sentences is clear
A. 90 specially numbered "Olympic percussions" ended the online bidding in Beijing, and were sold at a total price of 12,836,500 yuan, with the average price of each percussion exceeding 140,000 yuan.
B. Although the past "May Day" holiday has made every effort to engage in promotional activities, the merchants in the Mother's Day slot is still unabated, once again set off promotional waves
C. Plant nutrition is the study of how to fertilize and other measures to increase crop yields and improve the quality of agricultural products, so plant nutrition is not only important to the quality of food, but also to the quality of agricultural products. Therefore, plant nutrition is crucial not only to food quality and safety, but also to food quantity safety.
D. Whether a school can develop a good and facilitating school culture and whether learners can really adapt and integrate into it plays an important role in the effective implementation of teaching and learning activities
Answer B
The test is to identify speech defects.
Analyzing A, "each" and "average price" and "both" are ideologically redundant, because "average price "is the price of each, with "each" "are" duplication, only retain the "average price"; C associated word misuse, logically speaking, the "Therefore" indicates the antecedent and the consequent, while the logical relationship of the statement in C is "antecedent and consequent" should be "because"; D "can D "can" indicates two aspects of things, so the corresponding conclusion should also be two aspects, while "effectively carry out" only indicates the positive aspects, before and after the obvious mismatch.
Thinking PointsCandidates should familiarize themselves with the six major types of sick sentences. For each type, a few typical examples can be memorized. Most non-logical and semantic errors can be identified by using sentence-making analogies and semantic interrogation
7. (09 Chongqing Volume) Of the following choices, the one that has no grammatical error is
A. Modern medicine has proved time and again that when a person's energy declines, and he or she lacks curiosity and interest in things, the functioning of the circulatory system deteriorates with him or her.
B.More than 1,800 Min business elites from more than 40 countries and regions at home and abroad and 31 provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions in China gathered in Fuzhou.
C.Yesterday, the city's cultural relics bureau organized 39 experts to rush to the rebuilt Gongtan ancient town to pass acceptance of the completed project.
D.Strolling along the path, the wind sent a pungent fragrance. Looking around, I saw a branch of waxberry exposed on a high wall where it was releasing its fragrance.
Answer A (B "at home and abroad" and "countries, regions and domestic" have duplicated and unclear semantics, delete "more than 40 countries, regions and 31 provinces and municipalities directly under the Central Government". C. The word "through" is not used properly, and should be changed to "to carry out". D. The word "see" is not used properly, and "see" is not used properly. "The latter sentence should be changed to "Looking around, I saw a branch of plum exposed on the high wall, and it was from there that the fragrance was released".)
Solution GuideThis question examines the ability to analyze the sick sentences, the ability level is D. The key to the sick sentences is to analyze the sick sentences from two aspects. The key to the sick sentence should start from two aspects: one is to read the textbook and extracurricular books carefully to cultivate a sense of language; the other is to familiarize with the six types of sick sentences required to be mastered in the "Examination Syllabus". The content of this question is a common and typical sick sentence. See a sentence, first of all, to mobilize the sense of language, from the sense of the statement of the problem, that is, according to the customary sayings to see whether it is not twisted, if it is not twisted, the sentence is likely to be a sick sentence. Then use the means of grammatical analysis, first of all, the additional components of the sentence (determiners, gerunds, complements) to remove, tighten out the main stem, check whether the main stem is faulty; if the main stem is fine, and then check the local, to see the modifiers and the center of the word between the modifiers and the internal faults. These two steps can often find improper order, improper collocation, component mutilation or redundancy, structural confusion, unclear meaning and other speech defects. Some statements from the grammar is not good to find fault, you can use the logical meaning of the analysis to see whether it is consistent with the matter, reason
8. (09 Anhui volume) the following sentences, there is no disease, the sentence is clear sentence is (3 points)
A. Strong typhoon hit the seaside city, the howling winds clamped with the dense rain clattered down, and an hour later part of the section of the water will be water was up to 60 centimeters deep in some parts of the city after an hour, paralyzing traffic for a while.
B. At the end of April this year, influenza A (H1N1) broke out in parts of Mexico and the United States, to which the World Health Organization attached great importance and quickly took a series of emergency response measures.
C．This work report not only comprehensively summarizes the continuous reform and development of health care in the county over the past 30 years of reform and opening up, but also points out the direction of building a health care security system in the county.
D. The city's high-tech zone continues to improve the market-oriented, enterprise-oriented, industry-university-research combination of technological innovation system, and actively participates in the construction of the "Hewu Mussels Autonomous Innovation Comprehensive Supporting Pilot Zone. ...... down" is inappropriate. B "Mexico and parts of the United States" is ambiguous. C "summarizes the reform and opening up of 30 years in the county's health care reform and development" lacks an object. C) "summarizes the continuous reform and development of health care in the county over the past 30 years of reform and opening up" lacks an object. However, the juxtaposition of "market-oriented, enterprise-oriented, industry-university-research combination" in item D is rare in contemporary language use. From a grammatical point of view, if there is more than one "to ...... for ......", you can use a "to" at the beginning and a "to" at the end. at the beginning and omit the "to" at the end. Such as "agriculture-based, industry-led", can also be said as "agriculture-based, industry-led", but I think it is "to ... ...for ......" format side by side, no more. The problem is that the two prepositional structures in the front, the sudden addition of a subject-predicate structure in the back, and then the juxtaposition of all three is, at the very least, structurally disorganized. Whether or not it is a speech defect, we still have to ask the experts to clarify. As a high school exam question, is it not rigorous enough to come out like this? Or misleading?
9. (09 Liaoning volume) the following sentences, there is no language disease in the sentence is (3 points)
A. This badminton invitational tournament was held in the newly built Hejiashan Gymnasium, the participants through the group stage and rematch, the final fierce competition, and finally Zhang Bijiang, Deng Danjie won the first and second runner-up respectively.
B. Establishing a patient-centered service concept and providing high-quality services to patients can give patients more psychological comfort, and is also conducive to improving the hospital's social reputation and economic benefits.
C. Due to thorough planning and preparation, the 29th Olympic Games held in Beijing last year became an event with the largest number of participating countries in the Olympic Games and the most wonderful opening ceremony performance, which was well received.
D. In China, although dinosaur fossils have been used as "dragon bones" and as a kind of traditional Chinese medicine for a long time, their discovery and study from a scientific point of view began only in the 20th century
Answer B
The point of the test is to analyze the speech defects.
A is illogical. In the second clause, the phrase "the contestants competed" contradicts the third clause, which states that "Zhang Bijiang and Deng Danjie won the first and second prizes respectively. The third clause, "Zhang Bijiang and Deng Danjie won the first runner-up prizes", contradicts the third clause, which should be changed from "by" to "through".
C improper word order. The word "Olympic Games" should be "Olympic Games".
D Inappropriate word order. In the parallel phrase "discovery and research", the two verb words in the phrase, which contain order, should be "research and discovery".
The idea is to be familiar with the six major types of sick sentences. For each type, you can memorize a few typical examples. The use of sentence analogies and the sense reading method can identify most of the non-logical and semantic errors
10. (09 Jiangxi Volume) In the following sentences, there is no language disease in the sentence is
A. The language classroom is in fact a miniature social communication field, where the students learn to enter the broader society of the future need for communication skills and literacy
B. The wife of the king lost her son after a good time, but she had to go to the hospital. After Mrs. Wang lost her son, it was not easy for her to get a son again, no matter from the maternal instinct or from her own rights, Mrs. Wang is precious to Baoyu.
C．Just a few days ago, he received a group of provincial and municipal leaders, including the secretary of the provincial party committee, who came to the county to specialize in researching the problem of returning migrant workers.
D．Modern science and technology is developing rapidly, and the field of research is constantly expanding; science is not off-limits, but it is not without the norms of scientific ethics
Answer D
The point of the examination of the analysis of the sick sentence
A． B. "Mrs. Wang" and "Baoyu" are inverted. C. "A group of provincial and municipal leaders" is ambiguous.
The use of various types of sick sentences to carry the key points of their language and the end of the linguistic signs, can quickly identify sick sentences.