A possible version:
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A possible version:
A healthy diet and regular exercise may help prevent obesity. Take Li Ming as an example. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, but a year ago, he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. Besides, he spends a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV and doing little exercise. As a result, he gained so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.
What a terrible thing! Li Ming felt very sorry. He decided to change his unhealthy lifestyle, which did great harm to his health, although it was a little difficult. He began to eat a balanced and healthy diet, including fruits and vegetables. He also participates in various sports activities, such as swimming, skating, running and playing basketball. A few months later, Li Ming became as healthy as before.
Fortunately, Li Ming has got rid of his old lifestyle. His example shows that a healthy diet and regular exercise can help prevent obesity. Those who face the same problem, why not give it a try?
Test analysis: This paper belongs to a composition with pictures. Candidates are required to use English thinking directly, convert the effective information contained in the pictures into English language, and then make the publication surface according to these points. Ask candidates to express the pictures they see in words. Candidates should not only express the information clearly in the pictures, but also expand and develop their imagination according to the requirements of the number of words, so that the narrative of the article is not monotonous. If it is a narrative writing material, candidates should pay attention to the time, place, character, cause, process and result of the story; This article is a narrative, describing what happened in the past, so we use the simple past tense.
The highlights show that the use of conjunctions in this sentence is reasonable, such as dreams and results. At the same time, there are many advanced sentences in this sentence: he spends a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV and seldom exercising. What a terrible thing it is! This sigh; There are attributive clauses, why not try them? Advanced words such as: detachment, obesity, etc.