1. Write a composition about chrysanthemums (use the total score) of 500 words
Chrysanthemum Terrace The garden is full of chrysanthemums in full bloom.
Pieces, clumps, slopes, ridges, eyes full, all golden, a sea of ??chrysanthemums. Looking from a distance, it looks like a golden mushroom cloud descending. Could it be that these are the white clouds in the sky, melting the golden light of the sun, and randomly splashing here? Or is the beautiful curtain of the Jade Emperor of Heaven falling? Stepping closer, the layers of wavy golden chrysanthemums are like a piece of golden soft satin being blown up and down by the wind, vigorous, swaying, full of interest, cold fragrance, clear and meaningful, gorgeous and elegant, blooming freely in the fragrance, The passion of life is pouring out unscrupulously. Whose magical hands weave this dreamy tapestry? This surprise and joy always agitate in my heart, pulling my footsteps and walking towards her involuntarily. I have fallen deeply in love with her.
In the dim light of the morning, the chirping sparrows were still calling the morning light like an alarm bell. The golden chrysanthemum opened its beautiful eyes and washed its delicate face with crystal dewdrops, taking advantage of the rising redness. The pink rouge on the sun adorns her pretty face, which is pitiful and charming. I couldn't help but love her. I put my face close to hers, feeling her shyness and sucking in her fragrance.
Under the dusk moon, the gentle breeze lit up the stars in the sky, and the moonlight was soft and rustling like water. The naughty golden chrysanthemum is counting the stars and its own petals to compare their beauty; the subtle golden chrysanthemum is wearing a silver-white skirt and dancing in the soft wind, curling gracefully and gracefully.
I couldn't help but hug her into my arms. The faint fragrance penetrated my heart and made me intoxicated. This plant near the path is my favorite. It is huge, with a round corolla and densely overlapping petals that hide the dark green leaves.
I always want to hold her in my arms and kiss her delicate fragrance intoxicatedly. She stretches out her delicate jade fingers to touch my cheek, pouring out her youth and cooing at me. Whispering and speaking love words, my heart is sweet and crisp. Suddenly, I seemed to hear the sound of laughter. When I looked back, all the flowers were laughing. Oh, they must have overheard our love words, so they passed them to each other. The chrysanthemums on the slopes and cliffs all laughed, Some laughed loudly, and some covered their mouths and smiled. For a moment, I forgot who I was. I seemed to have become a member of the flower family, integrated into the flower soul, and laughed, laughed, and danced selflessly with them. , drunk, upside down, the whole person is as crazy as the flowers, surrounded by fragrant flowers, intoxicated by the chrysanthemum garden, full of love and joy, the flowers are leisurely, and the people are also leisurely.
This elegant chrysanthemum, this faint fragrance smelling on my cheeks and in my hair, awakened my reverie thoughts, as if I had walked out of a fairy tale. That chrysanthemum, her leisurely spirituality bloomed quietly on my shoulder, letting me sway together into a quiet chrysanthemum, growing on the chrysanthemum ridge full of expectations, natural and natural, revealing golden light and smiling face Yingying, thousands of charming, singing songs, laughing, petals hug each other, branches are connected, twisting the waist, dancing, the flowers are dependent on each other, and the leaves are holding each other.
Holding the morning dew, bathing in the moonlight, brewing deep emotions, silence yourself into a permanent scenery. Waiting, waiting for you to pass by me, that hazy yet clear appearance, that endless dream, we meet in the dream, we are drunk in the dream, and we don't want to wake up.
A sense of wonder suddenly arose in my heart. I thought that my eyes, my kisses, and my love should be a medium. How many times have the eyes intertwined, how many times have the kisses Love, how much love is conveyed to the flower. Maybe I just left, and the laughter of the flowers has not stopped, and you walked by. So, if you stop and listen with your heart, you can hear our secret words, and if you touch it with affection, you can feel our affection.
Immediately, a magical force pulls you closer, and you whisper, dance with the flower, and rub your ears and temples together. As a result, this flower becomes the medium of our fate, passing it on to everyone. Your deep love. Perhaps at some inadvertent moment, their eyes collided, and they seemed to have known each other before, their souls were touched, and they began to appreciate the beauty of fate.
Perhaps as the chrysanthemum grows and withers, this memory will be brought to another reincarnation, and I will meet you by chance and stare at you with a smile, as if I have known you for thousands of years.
Perhaps this is the so-called incomprehensible fate, a fate that is mysterious, vague and desirable. I know that my eyes must be extremely gentle at this moment, and a soft and indescribable feeling wells up in my heart, as if everything in my heart is... The dust has been wiped away, and the world is relatively pure and quiet compared to the chrysanthemums.
I know that at this moment I hold out the stamens carved in jade and ice, and quietly tell you some extremely humble longing for life. I also know that you are listening with tears and listening to my simple and beautiful heart.
This is actually an animistic world with a mysterious connection and induction. As long as the heart is connected, the deepest spring of life will never stop and will reach the ocean of dreams.
When you are brought to this chrysanthemum terrace by the footsteps of fate, you will definitely see my story written on the petals of the chrysanthemum. She is like the radiant chrysanthemum petals, revealing her heart to you. Please embrace the chrysanthemums and have a dream. I think her memory should be very clear and permanent. She has been reincarnating on the earth like an elegant and refined elf for thousands of years.
On the road of life, there are so many moments worth stopping, so many scenery worth gazing at and contemplating, and so many heart doors worth opening. Tap the firewood leaf lightly, and perhaps what comes to your face is that the flower path is sweeping for you, and the canopy door is opening for you.
This is how fate leaves its mark inadvertently. 2. Write a composition about chrysanthemums in the form of total-point-total
Autumn is here, the season of fragrant chrysanthemums...
Everyone knows that chrysanthemums are very vital. Plants, every time autumn comes, when the dew turns to frost, the leaves fall off and the flowers wither. Only the chrysanthemums stand in the wind, blooming proudly against the frost, in various colors and shapes. Look, the flowers are red like fire, white like snow, and pink like clouds. The big ones are like balls of color, and the small ones are like exquisite lanterns. Chrysanthemums bloom alone in the season when flowers are withering, adding vitality to nature and cheering up people who are sad for autumn. When winter comes, although its leaves fall and its stems wither, it is rooted in the soil and breeds new life. The next spring, they grew vigorously again, more and more beautifully...
Chrysanthemums are native to my country, and later spread abroad, becoming one of the world-famous flowers. Chrysanthemums are generally propagated by cuttings. There are many varieties of chrysanthemums. According to the flowering time, they can be roughly divided into early chrysanthemums, autumn chrysanthemums and late chrysanthemums. According to the flower radius, they can be divided into large chrysanthemums, medium chrysanthemums and starry small chrysanthemums. According to the flower shape, they can be divided into single-petal type. , compound type, oblate type, positive type...
Our common chrysanthemums include "Hydrangea", "Thread Chrysanthemum", "Golden Back Big Red", "Golden Back Crab Claw", "Thousand Heads" "Chrysanthemum", "lazy dressing", etc. These chrysanthemums are colorful and gorgeous.
I love white hydrangeas. Its stems are straight, the leaves are fat, and the stems and leaves are green. The most eye-catching thing is the flower. The white petals are densely packed layer by layer. From a distance, they look like a big snowball. When you smell it, there is a delicate fragrance. There is also the August chrysanthemum, whose leaves are oval and have many small teeth on the edges, like a woodworking saw. The leaves are large and small, and are uneven. Some leaves are still hanging down. I think it's probably to absorb more sunlight, perform photosynthesis better, and accumulate richer nutrients.
I like the beautiful chrysanthemums, and I also like the character of chrysanthemums that stand proud of the frost and fight against the cold! 3. Composition: The colorful botanical garden uses the form of total score
The botanical garden is colorful and amazing.
Colorful flowers are the highlight of the botanical garden. The camellias bloomed proudly like red lanterns, full of dignity.
Pink peach blossoms are in swarms in the botanical garden. Viewed from a distance, it looks like a sea of ??flowers and colorful clouds.
White little angels are dotted on the thick tree trunks. The flowers in full bloom are even more admirable, like a graceful girl, and like strips of white lace.
The golden rapeseed flowers also squeezed into people's eyes. She was like a girl in a golden dress nodding to people. There are also white and black broad bean flowers, and snow-white pear flowers.
Enjoy the beautiful flowers, and let’s meet the colorful birds. The sky above the botanical garden is full of traces of soaring birds.
Look, there is one there, and there are five here. It is dazzling to see.
Red birds always leave fiery red traces in the sky.
The feathers of colorful birds are constantly intertwined and infiltrated, like a colorful picture. Sparrows are even more common, with brown feathers with black spots.
Walking along the trail, there are also many birds with beautiful feathers. Purple, yellow, red, green, it’s simply wonderful.
Not only the birds in the botanical garden are colorful, but also the insects. There are black and red beetles, transparent aphids, and white silkworms.
There are also many insects that I can’t name. Ah, the botanical garden, what a colorful world. 4. When writing about flowers, you should write in a total score
Chrysanthemum Among all the flowers, my favorite is the chrysanthemum that is not afraid of wind and frost.
It is not like delicate jasmine, nor is it as flashy as rose. It does not require much fertilizer and nutrients, and it does not require you to take careful care. It only needs a simple flower pot, and it can take root and sprout. , thrive. There are many varieties of chrysanthemums, and each one has its own characteristics.
They either look up or lean, gather or disperse, some are in full bloom and some are in bud, singing and dancing in the wind, which makes everyone dazzled! If you look closely at chrysanthemums, you will find that although the shapes of their petals are different, some are like the bright moon, some are like fans, and some are like curly hair... But no matter what posture they are in, they are all as smooth as jade, light as gauze, and light. After a gentle touch, a gentle feeling penetrates the heart and spleen, and the whole person suddenly feels much more relaxed! The leaves of the "new generation" are bright green and look soft. The green leaves are evenly surrounding the straight stems, a bit like a few lively and cute children whispering around a column.
Those leaves are a bit like goldfish tails, with a circle of small serrations growing on the edges. This may be their self-defense weapon! In this late autumn when the west wind is bleak, the flowers are withered, and the frost is thick, the chrysanthemums are still in full bloom. And the stronger the west wind, the more luxuriant the chrysanthemums bloom; the thicker the frost, the more gorgeous the chrysanthemums bloom.
No wonder Grandpa Chen Yi praised it so much: "The autumn chrysanthemum can be proud of the frost, but the wind and frost are full of evils. It can withstand cold by nature, but what can the wind and frost do?" Yes, in front of the chrysanthemum with such a strong nature, what can the wind and frost do? How about that? Chrysanthemum not only has an admirable tenacity and is pleasing to the eye, but it can also be used medicinally! And after drying the chrysanthemums, brew them into chrysanthemum tea. Drinking it can make people cool, relieve heat, and have the effect of repelling the heat! So, chrysanthemum, I want to praise you. 5. Total score and total format of the essay about flowers
In summer, the last gardenia is fragrant
Occasionally, I pass by a gardenia bush, which was dressed in white not long ago. There are only a few white stars left on the gardenia tree, where the fragrance is lingering.
Have you ever remembered your face in late spring? The bud is ready to bloom, with a slightly green appearance, gently, gently bringing a little fragrance to the world you have just arrived in. Tentatively, looking at the new world approaching summer.
At the beginning of summer, your face is no longer shy, and you boldly open your pretty and petite face. Not only that, your fragrance is gradually and quietly getting stronger and stronger, attracting a few mischievous little bees from time to time, becoming small and naughty embellishments in the dense green leaves.
It is midsummer, and some of your petals are slowly turning yellow. But you, who are weak but tenacious, seem unwilling to give in prematurely. You return to your roots and continue to use your power to exude this inconspicuous fragrance, swaying your inconspicuous beauty in the wind.
Although summer is in full swing now, your life has entered its final chapter. A season of ups and downs has allowed you to understand a chapter of the world, and it has made you yearn firmly and persistently to play the most beautiful note in the final chapter. The closer the threat of death is, the more melodious fragrance it brings. This is you, still strong before withering.
The last gardenia, what kind of faith supports you to the end of your life but still doesn’t give up? Is it your yearning for a better life and contribution to the world? Or do you want to be responsible for the unfinished mission to the end, so you decide to spend your whole life to complete it?
I am not a gardenia. I don’t know what it is like to be a flower. But I don’t know why, every time I see this little gardenia, it reminds me of a person, an unfortunate but determined person.
She is just like the last gardenia in the summer. Although she is small and inconspicuous, she has the courage to fight against the powerful destiny and complete her mission. It is the gardenia that will always be fragrant in my heart. Your little snow-white flowers will never wither, mother! 6. Composition: The colorful botanical garden uses the form of total score
The botanical garden is colorful and amazing.
Colorful flowers are the highlight of the botanical garden. The camellias bloomed proudly like red lanterns, full of dignity. Pink peach blossoms bloom in swarms in the botanical garden. Viewed from a distance, it looks like a sea of ??flowers and colorful clouds. White little angels are dotted on the thick tree trunks. The flowers in full bloom are even more admirable, like a graceful girl, and like strips of white lace. The golden rapeseed flowers also squeezed into people's eyes. She was like a girl in a golden dress nodding to people. There are also white and black broad bean flowers, and snow-white pear flowers.
Enjoy the beautiful flowers, and let’s meet the colorful birds. The sky above the botanical garden is full of traces of soaring birds. Look, there is one there, and there are five here. It’s so dazzling to see. Red birds always leave fiery red traces in the sky. The feathers of colorful birds are constantly intertwined and infiltrated, like a colorful picture. Sparrows are even more common, with brown feathers with black spots. Walking along the trails, there are also many birds with beautiful plumage. Purple, yellow, red, green, it’s simply wonderful.
Not only the birds in the botanical garden are colorful, but also the insects. There are black and red beetles, transparent aphids, and white silkworms. There are also many insects that I can’t name.
Ah, the Botanical Garden, what a colorful world! 7. How to write an essay on the beautiful Huadu Lake in third grade based on the total score
1. Rigorous layout: As the saying goes, everything is difficult at the beginning, but as long as you get a good start, this essay will be very easy. So easy to write.
Fengtou: It is the first paragraph of the article. It is the first place that the marking teacher catches the eye. The center of the entire article must be grasped. The following paragraph must be coherent and closely integrated with the first paragraph. It must be passed through The beginning should give the following something to write about, and the beginning should have the effect of refreshing the marking teacher. For example, rhetorical techniques such as parallelism, metaphor, and personification are skillfully used, and through these rhetorical techniques, the main theme of the whole text is guided.
Pork belly: In a good article, the paragraphs will be just right, but when there is only one large paragraph or two or three paragraphs in the article, no matter how outstanding the literary talent is, the article will not be A score that is too high is because the grading teacher has to judge an essay every three minutes when grading the paper. The workload is quite heavy. If the grading teacher is not good at segmenting the paper, the grading teacher may lose patience and cannot finish it, and will be hasty. Give a score. Therefore, in my opinion, an article should be divided into at least 6-8 paragraphs, but not one line or several lines and one paragraph, but it should look like tofu blocks, with the pieces neatly arranged together to make the article tight but loose. There is a degree of relaxation.
The entire article should look like a whole, not fragmented. Leopard's Tail: At the end of the article, the theme should be made more prominent, the theme should be sublimated, and the leopard's tail should be pumped! Or make people feel that there are twists and turns, a bright future or a further special effect.
At the end of the article, the topic should be mentioned again, closely linked to the central idea, so that the central idea throughout the article can continue to be extended and thought-provoking. Especially at the end, it should echo, contrast, progress, etc. with the beginning, to trigger the reading teacher's scream! 2. Delicate writing style: whether it is narrative, discussion or prose; whether it is writing about people, events or scenes.
It must be presented in delicate writing to make the midpoint of the article more prominent, so that the marking teacher can think deeply when reading the test paper, slow down the reading speed and repeat reading, and let the marking teacher Being immersive makes the article more spiritual. 3. Thoughts and feelings throughout: In an article that is properly laid out and well-organized, there must also be a line of thoughts that runs through it. This line is as important as the spine of a fish. This line must be Be clear, unambiguous, never vague. 8. Write an essay about the school garden, based on the total score method
Simao No. 1 is my school. My school is very beautiful. I think the most beautiful thing is the small garden.
As soon as you enter the gate, you will arrive at the small garden less than 10 meters away. There is a small road between the south and north sides of the small garden, and there is also a small road between the west and east sides. This divides the small garden into four small ones. Block, the shape of the small garden is a square.
On the left side of the small garden is a century-old ancient clock and well. Whenever the flag is raised on Monday, the bell must be rung. The ancient bell is like an upside-down trumpet. Students should go and take a look before going to school or after school. The well is like a big bowl.
There are various flowers planted in the garden, some are like pineapples, some are like a huge umbrella, and some are like a hat.
In front of the small garden is a large playground, with a five-star red flag flying high in the center. Whenever the flag-raising ceremony is held on Monday, students in school uniforms stand on the playground and salute to the national flag.
Spring is here, and the colorful flowers in the small garden are blooming, so beautiful!
Summer is here, and the grass in the small garden is growing taller and blowing in the wind. As long as it is a hot day, I can only see a few white clouds floating in the clear sky. By noon, people could no longer bear the heat. They were sweating profusely and panting, so they had no choice but to go to the shade of a tree to enjoy the coolness. The flowers, plants and trees in the small garden looked listless under the scorching sun.
Autumn is here, the flowers in the small garden have faded, and the withered yellow leaves are flying all over the sky, as if they are turning the earth into yellow.
In early winter, the small garden is like a beautiful, noble princess, dancing with her magical veil, sending gusts of cold wind.
The small garden changes throughout the year, but I still think it is beautiful. 9. Write an essay on the beauty of the garden using the form of a total score
1 Among the four seasons, I like autumn the most because it is colorful and the fruits are fragrant.
The earth put on colorful clothes. In the orchard, the apples were too hot after a summer. They came out to get some air, but it was still very hot outside, and they forgot their keys at home, so their faces were sunburned and turned red. Each grape wanted to learn how to swim. I kept practicing holding my breath and my face turned purple.
The persimmons imitate the appearance of lanterns, hanging red on the trees, trying to bring a little light to the earth. Chestnut couldn't wait any longer, and jumped to the ground one by one, fell into the soil, and then climbed out.
In the garden, small flowers bloomed in full bloom. Sunflower kept looking at the sun and wanted to know its secret.
The chrysanthemums are red like fire, pink like clouds, and white like snow. They are extremely beautiful. The flowers sometimes sway, as if welcoming the arrival of the autumn girl.
In the forest, the leaves are so naughty! They play peek-a-boo with their tree mother. One by one, they hid under the mother tree's feet so that "mother" could not find it.
The leaves of ginkgo are like small fans; the leaves of maple are as red as a burning fire, and they are soft when stepped on the road, because there are leaves! ah! What a beautiful autumn, I love autumn.