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In ancient times, there was a scholar who had never been able to get the hang of writing essays. Once he went to ask a teacher for guidance, who took him to a grove, pointed to a spider's web and said, "Worship it!" The scholar looked at it for a long time, and suddenly realized the mystery, and from then on, his writings improved by leaps and bounds. When asked why, he said, "You can't find a spider's web without a center. Spiders weave their webs with a center first, and then they weave it in a circle. Writing an article is also this reason ah!"
So how to write around the central meaning?
First, write a paragraph around the center sentence.
The composition of the middle grade is required to write around the central meaning, to write a thing specific. The students of this school year can be supplemented in the usual piece of practice - around the center of the sentence to write specific.
What is a center sentence?
A central sentence is usually the first sentence in a paragraph, and it summarizes the main point of the paragraph.
Example: The fog was so big and beautiful this morning! The sky and the earth are white, as if floating an incomparably wide veil. The distant mountains, houses, fields, trees, all shrouded in milky white fog, hidden, beautiful. I walked on the way to school, also seems to come to the cloudy wonderland, very interesting.
The first sentence in the example is the center sentence, the following three sentences are around "This morning's fog is really big and beautiful! This sentence is a specific description: "white, milky white" first wrote the color of the fog, "incomparable wide gauze" this metaphor writes out the fog fog fog beauty. And then through my feelings and the characters of the conversation to further reflect the fog is very thick and big.
2. around the central meaning of writingaround the central meaning of writing
scene description, then what is the scene? Scene generally refers to a collective activity for a certain period of time, the scene presented to the people. Just as we see in the drama of a certain scene, a certain scene.
Life, what are the scenes that we have participated in or seen? Here are some examples for reference.
Labor scenes. We often participate in school factories, farms or service labor in school, labor in the heat of everyone, energy and labor in the emergence of good people and good deeds is a lot. We also often go to factories, rural areas, stores to visit, ask, see how the uncles and aunts are working, these are labor scenes.
Game scenes. Students at home or on campus often do games together, sports activities when the teacher also organized a variety of activities. These games are often very active, very interesting, but also students are more familiar with
Entertainment. In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. Cultural performances, carnival activities, watching movies and television, there are many vivid scenes worthy of our account down.
Ceremony scene. At the beginning of each semester, we have to hold a ceremony. Your city, village, town, what new buildings were inaugurated, but also often held ceremonies. These ceremonial scenes are meaningful and educational, and should be carefully observed to record this memorable moment.
Sports scenes. Games, athletes you catch up with me, fight hard, strive to create excellent results; the audience for the athletes to applaud and cheer, cheering and cheering, these exciting scenes are unforgettable.
Life scenes. There are many scenes in daily life is also very characteristic. For example, the purchase of goods, family reunion, car and boat, seeking medical treatment, building and repairing walls;;, decorate the room and so on, all have a strong flavor of life.
Meeting scenes. Class meetings, team meetings, school meetings, ;, and heroes and exemplary characters to meet, to participate in a variety of celebrations, commemorative meetings, that the scene of the meeting also tends to leave a deep impression on us.
In short, practicing scene description can improve our observation and cognitive ability, narration and description ability.
3. around the central meaning of write a word on the subject of 500 words essay, helpSeek
Night light like water, bright moonlight on the sofa, I stand on the balance of the car, whirring shuttle in the living room. Alas! Where to find my English book?
English book, where are you? Without you, my mom will have to peel my skin! I flew in all corners of the house, not in my bag again, I ran to the room, open the bag, a book by book to turn over, one by one to pick up, or the body of the English textbook is not seen, not in the closet? I opened the closet door and turned over one piece of clothing after another, alas! I wish I could see the English book!
I jumped on the balance bike and sped to the kitchen, opened the refrigerator, opened the cupboards, and lifted the lid of the pot. I'm not sure where the English book went, but I'm sure it's there. I sat on the sofa and thought back carefully. I was in the remedial class to let the teacher dictate the words, the teacher put the book on another table, after that, I finished writing the composition, and left ...... Well, in that case, my English book is in the remedial class! OMG! It's so dumb, I can't tell you how much I've suffered!
At this point, the "queen" mother came, "Quickly read English, stay what!" I didn't move, "What's wrong? What's the matter?" "I forgot my English book." "Where did you forget it?" "The remedial class." "Oh, then go read the book and look for it tomorrow!" I exhaled y, "Hoo-" finally escaped from Hades, I grayed out and returned to my room, holding up the "Hulanhe biography" to read.
This challenge in the line of death is really alarming, next time, or check the book bag well, no longer so lost.
4. around the central meaning of the writing essay sweet this word 400 wordsWhen I was a child, I liked to eat candy the most, whenever I cried non-stop, my mother would always give me candy to eat, the sweet taste soon let me quiet down.
As I grew up, I began to carry a backpack to school, I gradually found that the original "sweet" is not only the taste of candy, but also can be the joy of being praised by the teacher, is the test paper on the satisfaction of 100 points, is to help others after the joy of ...... sweet. The first thing you need to do is to get a good deal of money to pay for it.
I remember that time, the teacher let us go home and ask parents to pay attention to the QR code she sent in the class group. Back home, I immediately told my mom about it, and she said with a worried face, "Oops, I won't get these ah! Why don't you get it yourself." So I picked up the phone, according to the screenshot sent by the teacher step by step operation, and soon I successfully logged in. Mom came over to take a look, could not help but praise: "Wow, awesome!" My heart is sweet and happy.
I was about to report to the teacher in the class group that I had logged in, when I saw that a parent in the group had sent a screenshot, saying that she had tried many times and had been unable to log in. I clicked on the picture and it turned out that she had filled in her username incorrectly with her child's name not her ID. So I @'d her and told her in text, "The username should be filled in with ID, not name." This aunt quickly @ me and sent, "Thank you, I'll try again." I was so happy that I immediately replied, "You're welcome."
After a while, I went up to the group to see how things were going, and that aunt had successfully logged in. To my surprise, the class teacher also @ me, sent me a thumbs up emoji. I'm so happy, my heart overflows with sweetness.
It turns out that as long as the heart to pay, "sweet" can always be lingering in the heart.
5. to "treasured memories" to write a composition 1 best to write around the center of the meaning, write yourtreasured memories --- 1 ---
Light is like an arrow, day and month like a shuttle, in the blink of an eye, I've ascended the ladder of twelve years old. In these twelve years, I have left a deep and shallow footprints on the road of life. Nodding a glance, the mottled footprints, showing my own colorful life. In this footprints, there is a deepest and biggest, it floats in my mind, lingering ......
It was a sunny afternoon. I was humming a song, bouncing and jumping, "bouncing" into a swimming pool. The playground had several water slides and a pool almost as big as a lake. I didn't know how to swim enough to go to the center of the big pool, but a few water slides were enough to get me excited.
I entered the swimming pool, ran to the top of the water slide with ease, and slid down as soon as I sat down. Enjoy the long-lost ***, listening to the wind whistling in the ear, really say endless pain ah! When I slipped I do not know dozens of times, slippery after, I walked along the "lake" side of the circular waterway, see this waterway has a gap leading to the "lake" of the vast water. I quickly made my way through the waist-deep water toward the gap. In the blink of an eye, I was standing at the edge of the gap.
I saw that the depth of the water in the pool and the waterway seemed to be about the same, so I walked to the gap, ready to step into the "lake", and suddenly felt the water deeper! I was so shocked that I stepped into the water and fell into the deep water.
I sank in the water, and then floated back up, and I found myself in the center of the lake, the deepest part! After sinking and floating a few times, I choked on my throat. I had no choice but to let myself float in the water, and it was pitch black ......
I felt that I was no longer floating, but sinking.
Suddenly, a strong hand grabbed me and lifted me to the shore. I felt like those seconds of sinking and floating were as long as years.
I opened my eyes. In front of me was a strange uncle. He said, "You're all right, take care of yourself" and left.
It turned out that the uncle saw me struggling, and did not think to swim over to save me. In my twelve years on the road, this incident has been treasured in the depths of memory, lingering. Those medals and red flowers representing honor will be forgotten as time flies. However, I can never forget this incident, but also can never forget this I do not know the name of the life-saving benefactor - it let me know what is love, what love is the most valuable.
6. Write about what to look forward to the topic of the essay about 600,700 words: look forward to reunion
Mid-Autumn Festival is a family reunion, *** enjoy the beautiful days of heaven! On this day, people usually hold various ceremonies such as enjoying the moon, eating reunion mooncakes and worshipping the moon to express our yearning for a better life.
As night falls, the full moon rises into the sky, surrounded by a thin layer of clouds and mist, adding to its mysterious beauty! I vaguely saw the moon on the crater, and some shadow, like a tree shadow, that may be the fragrant laurel tree! Suddenly, I saw what looked like two things running above. I thought: that must be Chang'e and the Jade Rabbit. Just see Chang'e keep chasing the jade rabbit, while the jade rabbit is naughty to hide and seek, they go around the laurel tree, through the crater, have fun.
Chang'e was tired of playing in a while, she only came to a beautiful water pool in the back garden, silently thinking of Hou Yi in his heart: "It is another year of Mid-Autumn Festival, another reunion day, can you come to see me?" -- "Niangzi! Niangzi!" Hou Yi really came! And carrying a small basket, which was none other than their pair of lovely children! Chang'e excitedly embraced her husband and children: "You are finally here, I have been thinking about it every month in the Palace of the Cold, and finally on this full moon night, I hope you have come!"
7. to "look at the stars" as the theme of the 700-word essay how to write[Ideas analysis] This topic is very strong dispersion, there can be a variety of ideas.
Here are two ideas: First, Kant's famous quote "There are two things, the more we contemplate, the more we feel their sublime and sacred, the more we increase the piety and faith, which is the head of the starry sky and the heart of the moral law." Take this as an entry point to think about your feelings about life and write a philosophical essay.
Second, there have been many poems describing the evening sky: such as "silver candles and autumn light cold painted screen, light small fan puffing fireflies. The night sky is as cool as water, lying down to see Altair and Vega.
"can start from the perspective of poetry, written as a lyrical essay. [solution process] The following is an essay by Guo Xiaochuan: Looking at the stars Guo Xiaochuan Tonight, I stand on the streets of Beijing, looking at the stars.
Tomorrow, a critical task will be placed on my shoulders. I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do that, but I'm going to be able to do it. I can only take a broad step, step on the ocean; I can yell difficulties? I'm not going to be able to do that, but I'm going to be able to do it, and I'm going to be able to do it.
The room, you are not allowed to be so agitated! The first time I saw this, it was a very good time for me to go back to the office.
The night is deep, the wind rests, the thunderstorm fled to another country. The clouds flew, the fog dispersed, and the moon hid in the distance.
The sky and the sea are flat, no waves, and the surroundings are quiet, no sound. But the starry sky is magnificent, strong and clear.
The firmament, deep and wide, in that mysterious world, as if erected layers of mysterious hall. The atmosphere is thick and fragrant, and in that marvelous ocean, as if it were flowing with marvelous syrup.
The stars are bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright, bright.
You are the only one who can afford to live forever! The first thing you need to know is how many times you've seen a glacier thaw and a volcano erupt! How many times have you seen: the poplar spitting green, the willow flying frost! In that distant high place, in that incredible place, you have seen all the beauty of the world, see the vicissitudes of the world. Time for you, like space - endless, vast.
Two, look at the starry sky, I can not help but feel depressed. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on some of the most popular products and services in the world! The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on some of the most popular products and services in the world! What do you say, "I am bold and ambitious, and my heart is full of courage"? How can I compare with your broad-mindedness and unlimited capacity? I love the earth, I grew up in the earth, but compared to you, the earth is far from brilliant.
Walking a thousand mountains, wading through ten thousand waters, can not ascend to your temple.
This is the first time I've ever seen a woman in the world who has been in the world for a long time.
Thousands of fires, ten thousand lamps, not as bright as a small star. The first thing that I want to do is to make sure that I have a good understanding of what I'm doing and what I want to do.
I have traveled halfway around the world, from the East to the West. The vast expanse of the earth has aroused my wonder and appreciation.
But who knows: how many stars in the universe, is the Earth's sister line! The first time I saw this, I was able to see the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky, the sky! The stars in the distance, can you see the Earth? It's all a blur! Land far away, do you feel our presence? How can we imagine? Life is precious, and I have written volumes of poems in praise of the life of battle; but how many chances have there been to look to the stars in the course of life's journey? How many nights, in life's journey, have I seen the starry sky so peaceful! In the space of the great universe, life is but a meteor-like flash. In the infinite river of time, life is just a tiny, tiny wave.
Well, the starry sky, I can not help but feel depressed! So I took the melancholy mood, toward the heart of Beijing ...... three Suddenly, the magnificent starry sky, all of a sudden changed its appearance. The sky is dark, the star is small, the high sky appears to be dark; clouds did not come, the wind did not blow, but like a haze cover the sky.
The sky is narrow, the stars are low, the starry sky is no longer brilliant.
The sky is narrow, the stars are low, and the starry sky is no longer glorious.
Well, this sudden change perplexed me, and I could not but look around with extraordinary wonder: near me, in Tiananmen Square, rose a wonderful People's Tabernacle; and in the interior of that Tabernacle, in the cups and glasses of the banquet-halls, was poured the fragrant wine of friendship; and on both sides of me, in Chang'an Street, hung a long string of lights; and under those lights, in the center of Peking, was erected a building, which was the most beautiful of all. center of Beijing, a bridge like the Milky Way was erected. Is this heaven on earth? No, earth in heaven! Is this the earth in heaven? No, heaven on earth.
The real world, not at all false; you describe it plainly, without any exaggeration! Who said that the stars are more glorious than the earth? What kind of person feels sad under the starry sky? This is the night when I should be most calm and collected! Yes, I was wrong, I was so agitated! Now I realize: I was looking at the stars, not the stars at me. We live, and the lifeless universe neither lives nor dies.
We are thinking, and will not think of the vault, always showing a dull look. Starry sky yo, facing you, I am entitled to lift my chest.
IV When I look to the stars again with pride, my body overflows with extraordinary strength. For I know: above all the best traditions, our ranks have been formed, like the mighty Yangtze River.
And I myself, long ago, fully armed, in our ranks, as a small soldier general. However, I, like my comrades, never before the red lights and green wine, the soul wanders.
We want to build a corridor between the earth and the starry sky, and move the buildings on the earth to the vast paradise.
We want to build a bridge in the infinite sky, the earth's mountains and sea food, sent to the distant heavens.
Really, like my comrades, I will never just "sweep the snow in front of the door", but to manage "other people's frost". We want to extend the lights on Chang'an Street to faraway places, and let the cloudless night sky, there are thousands of suns.
We want to turn the desert vault into a bustling sky door square; let the sky full of stars, all become the home of mankind. And the starry sky, do not laugh at my absurdity! I am honest, never delusional.
Life is short, but only human hands, can dress the universe; the world ah, due to the survival of man, and endless hope. You, what hardship you have, so that you can not be? Look up again! The new rockets that departed from the Allied States are traveling in the distant starry sky.
8. 700 words on the topic of longingI wrote one recently, which is somewhat similar to your topic, so you can change it a little bit yourself.
The call from afar
The mood is flat and clueless, crouching in front of the window, counting the pieces of flying yellow that fall over the eyelids, quietly feeling the passage of time. Suddenly, a touch of white intruded into my line of sight, in the caress of the wind, jumping freely, dancing. The furry top like a perfect umbrella, open, through the wind in the air swings, high and low, sometimes left and right, sometimes look to fall to the ground, and a breeze blew over, the small umbrella and wobbly rise, stretching its white plume, with its dreams and hopes, the higher the higher, the farther away.
A hand reached out, it fell into my hands, soft, soft, very warm. Then sniff, there is no flavor ah! I looked at this little guy, I can not help but wonder, what is the dream is you flying in the sky, never stop?
Lift your head, dandelions in the sky wantonly flying, they seem to have the same magic, firmly attracted me, it is too beautiful, so beautiful that I could not give birth to the power to divert attention. It was flying, and I had a strong thought - flying. I'm not willing to be trapped in this small fence, small yard, I want to go outside under the vast sky, flying to the end of the earth, flying to the corner of the sea. The dandelion is independent, brave, confident and free.
However, before the dandelion flies to the faraway places, it has to draw enough nutrition, to grow up, to blossom, and finally to fly with a free heart. This is not exactly what I am now? Skills not yet learned, sloppy and careless. What I need now is to absorb the nutrients and accumulate the strength to be able to cope with the outside world adequately. Eventually, I will be transformed into a dandelion, carrying hope, waving my wings, heading in the direction of my ideals, echoing the footsteps of my heart, chasing after my aspirations, believing that my dreams are in the distance, in the place where the sun rises to find my own dreams. Above the azure sea, dancing with the dandelions **** in the sky....
When the thoughts drift, the hand to slightly loose, a little wind blowing, the dandelions in the hand and slowly floating up. Are you going to answer the call from afar?
9. Around another world as the center, write a 700-word essay"Life is only like the first time to see", "at that time is only unusual", a simple fourteen words but out of the heart of how many people. If all like the initial encounter so beautiful, life will not have so many regrets exist, but life is not if. People always learn not to cherish the immediate always think it is usual, lost only to understand the word 'cherish', but it is a pity that it is already too late. It was these two lines of poetry that aroused my curiosity about him. I also got to know Nalan Rongruo and his "Nalan Words".
He, the first lyricist of the early Qing Dynasty - Nalan Rongruo. The father is Yehe Nara's, the mother is Aixinjueluo's, such a distinguished family but not half the arrogance of the nobleman and did not inherit his father's political skills. Born in that prosperous society, but the heart is away from the hustle and bustle of the outside; the real children of the eight banners, but prefer to get acquainted with the literati, a lifetime of tired of love; when the time of splendor, but hastily left e79fa5e98193e4b893e5b19e31333335336465 the world. Perhaps he was not a man of the world, after the love of his life away from his own, he also followed.
Some people say that Nalan Rongruo weighs 21 grams. 21 grams - Westerners through precision instruments to measure the weight of people in the death of 21 grams will be instantly reduced, and so think that this 21 grams is the weight of the soul. If the soul does weigh 21 grams, then Nalan Rongruo weighs 21 grams. Nalan Rongruo, until his death to face the world with a child's face, his whole life in a pure heart for people in the world. He is my faith.
His life is unfortunate, the death of his favorite in him, is not out of the shadow. The most important thing is that he is not a man of love, but a man of character, and he should not end up like this. I have been thinking, if Nalan Rongruo was born in modern times, his wife would not have died in childbirth, and Nalan's early death would not have happened, but if so, Nalan's life would not have been a legend.
If I were to compare Nalan to a flower, it would be the lotus flower, out of the silt, the Maundy League and not demon. The flower of the gentleman is also, Nalan is also a gentleman.
Read Nalan Rongruo's words, will unknowingly into his world. So, Nalan words are my other world, inseparable world. I have, madly, fallen in love with Nalan Rongruo and his Nalan Words.
10. around the expectation, write a junior high school essay not less than 600 wordsLooking forward to growing up
All along, growing up is a kind of yearning, a kind of attitude to the ideal of the heart to pay efforts.
I remember when I was a kid, I was looking forward to growing up, because my neighbor's brother and sister always rode their bikes to the countryside, and I always wanted to be one of them, but my mother said, "You're still too young". Whenever I hear such words there is always infinite aggression in my heart, age limits a lot of behavior. I will be sitting in front of the house, looking at the older siblings' silhouettes, looking up at the sky, and thinking: "Grow up, grow up, grow up.
Later, enrolled in school, became a student. The first thing I want to do is to have a mature face and a long body like the upper classmen. The reason why I want to grow up is because I want to experience the completely new life of middle school. And now is already middle school life, and began to look forward to growing up, looking forward to high school to sweat the three years of struggle, and even began to envision the university in our eyes leisurely life.
The time passes easily, we all understand that we have long left that unattainable childhood, we can no longer without fear to say "on Mars" such a sky-high ideals. Nowadays, when we think of those ideals we once talked about, we unconsciously use childish words to perfume the past. Those lofty ideals pale in comparison to our increasingly realistic thinking. However, in our minds, as we mature, our definition of the future becomes more practical. Instead of taking things for granted as we once did, we have a clear goal, make the best assessment of our own abilities, and then set a feasible ideal toward which we can firmly stride forward. It may not be the lofty ideals that we used to believe in, but it is the one that suits us and we can see the hope. Because of growing up, we learn to grasp the tail of the future that suits us, and move toward the dawn. This is perhaps the greatest benefit of growing up.
Nowadays, we are on the bumpy road of the future, but hard to move forward. We need to keep growing up, and use the process of growing up to improve ourselves to lay the most solid foundation for our dreams.
Every day we look forward to growing up, just to be closer to the dream in our hearts, and then closer