I have the habit of drinking a cup of boiled water before going to bed. It is also because of this cup of boiled water that I become more beautiful.
"Mom, the water is hung late and a little hot." I said to my mother, who was meticulously checking her homework, with a hint of blame. Mom, she didn't say anything, but she seemed to frown. I didn't care too much, so I lay in bed and began to sleep.
A little coolness woke me up when I slept at night. I opened my sleepy eyes and looked for the quilt in a daze. Hey! Who is doing what on my desk? Looking up, it turned out to be my mother. She is checking my homework. Suddenly, a drop of water rolled out of her eyes. I looked at the clock again. Oh, my God, it is 12! Why is mom still up? Mother's gray-silver hair looks so old in the light, and the wrinkles around her eyes seem to have deepened, and her tired eyes are strongly supported by her mother.
Suddenly, I was wide awake.
The next day, the water cooked by my mother was still a little hot. I didn't blame my mother as I did yesterday, but turned to "Mom, the water is just right, you really understand me."
Unexpectedly, because of my words, my mother actually smiled, smiling so beautifully, as if she were five years younger. ...
Because of a cup of boiled water, I finally understood "the thread in the hand of a kind mother makes clothes for her wayward son's body". The profound meaning of her careful sewing and thorough repair and her fear will delay his coming home late.
I look more beautiful because of the water cooked by my mother. Now, I dare to wave my arms and shout,' Love makes me more beautiful.'
Postscript:
People who are ungrateful are ugly, believe it! Friend, love will make us more beautiful.
2. Write a composition about things with data, 750 words. My chlorophytum.
My family has a pot of chlorophytum, which my mother bought the year before last and put on the table on the balcony.
The leaves of Dictyophora are light green, thin and short. A few weeks later, the wild leaves grew up and turned dark green, but it was very thin and long, with two white veins on the leaves. If it continues to grow, a small stem will grow from its root, and leaves will grow on the small stem. Small stems and leaves can be cut off and transplanted to other places, and new chlorophytum can grow. When the wind blows in from the window, the leaves dance and look beautiful.
It used to be thought that chlorophytum would only grow leaves, but now it is found that chlorophytum will also bloom. It was in late spring and early summer. I went to the balcony to bask in the sun and looked at the chlorophytum by the way. Just as I was leaving, I saw some white flowers the size of nails on the small stem. I was very surprised, so I observed these flowers. These flowers are about one square centimeter in area and have five petals. The stamen in the middle is golden, and I can smell the faint fragrance when a gust of wind blows. Some of these flowers have beautiful smiling faces and are graceful in flowerpots, like a proud peacock; Some put the petals together tightly, like a shy girl; Others are like a full stomach, which is about to burst.
My chlorophytum is really beautiful. I like it very much and often water and fertilize it. Under my careful care, chlorophytum grows sturdily!
3. A beautiful article, 600-word composition, writing techniques and description techniques. During my growing up, there were many things, happy, unforgettable and sad ... just like countless twinkling stars, shining.
Come down, I'll choose the brightest little star to share with you. "Ding" was over, and my good friend Wang Xiaogang and I ran out of the classroom like arrows.
Playing, Wang Xiaogang suddenly jumped on me, almost fell off his face and chewed on the mud, which startled me. It turned out that Hou Shunyuan of our class gave him a push. Wang Xiaogang was very angry, so he went up and punched Hou Shunyuan. Hou Shunyuan showed no weakness and gave Wang Xiaogang a punch.
In this way, the two of them are like two angry cocks, blushing and thick-necked, wrestling together. Seeing that the situation was not good, I shouted, "Stop fighting, call me again and tell the teacher!" " "This sentence really works. The two of them immediately stopped fighting. Hou Shunyuan gave me a hard look, as if to say, "Dogs take mice and mind their own business".
I didn't think I could, so I went to play somewhere else. Suddenly, there was a sharp pain in my back and I couldn't help crying. I turned my head and was about to watch. Hou Shunyuan punched my front teeth.
I only feel a smell of blood in my mouth, and there are hard things. I quickly spit it out and saw, ah, nothing but front teeth. When Hou Shunyuan saw the trouble, he began to cry with a "wow".
As soon as I saw him crying, I quickly resisted the pain and comforted him: "Never mind, this is a deciduous tooth. If you drop it, it will grow back. But you have to get rid of your impulse, or you will be in trouble in the future. "
Hearing this, Hou Shunyuan wiped her tears and said gratefully, "Thank you, I will do it later. When I was growing up, there were many things, happy, unforgettable and sad ... just like countless twinkling stars, they shone brightly.
Come down, I'll choose the brightest little star to share with you. "Ding" was over, and my good friend Wang Xiaogang and I ran out of the classroom like arrows.
Playing and playing, Wang Xiaogang suddenly jumped on me, almost fell off his face and chewed the mud, which startled me. It turned out that Hou Shunyuan of our class gave him a push. Wang Xiaogang was very angry, so he went up and punched Hou Shunyuan. Hou Shunyuan showed no weakness and gave Wang Xiaogang a punch.
In this way, the two of them are like two angry cocks, blushing and thick-necked, wrestling together. Seeing that the situation was not good, I shouted, "Stop fighting, call me again and tell the teacher!" " "This sentence really works. The two of them immediately stopped fighting. Hou Shunyuan gave me a hard look, as if to say, "Dogs take mice and mind their own business".
I didn't think I could, so I went to play somewhere else. Suddenly, there was a sharp pain in my back and I couldn't help crying. I turned my head and was about to watch. Hou Shunyuan punched my front teeth.
I only feel a smell of blood in my mouth, and there are hard things. I quickly spit it out and saw, ah, nothing but front teeth. When Hou Shunyuan saw the trouble, he began to cry with a "wow".
As soon as I saw him crying, I quickly resisted the pain and comforted him: "Never mind, this is a deciduous tooth. If you drop it, it will grow back. But you have to get rid of your impulse, or you will be in trouble in the future. "
Hou Shunyuan listened, wiped his tears and said gratefully, "Thank you, I won't do it again." Although it hurts a little, I'm glad to hear that he can correct his mistake.
I will never forget this incident, because it makes me understand that as long as everyone has a tolerant heart, the world will be full of truth, goodness and beauty, and it will be peaceful and beautiful forever.
4. Today, I want to write a composition that uses the technique of restraining first and then promoting, so as to see the big picture from the small (writing that my father's love for people or things is like a cup of coffee, the first sip is bitter, but the more you drink it, the sweeter it becomes; Father's love is like a piece of candy, hard on the outside, but really soft on the inside; Father's love is like a book, which is plain on the surface, but full of knowledge inside.
My father is strict, but he loves me deeply. I remember once, my uncle bought me a skateboard. At that time, I excitedly came to the square with my parents to practice skateboarding. I put one foot on the skateboard first, and the other foot stepped heavily on the ground, but I couldn't stand steadily. The less I skate, the more anxious I am. I don't want to learn, so I said to my parents, "Let's go home."
Dad said loudly, "No, I haven't learned it yet." How should I go home? I can't give up halfway. "I thought to myself: Why not let my mother help me with my study? When I was about to carry out the plan, my father seemed to see what was on my mind and said to me, "You have to rely on yourself to learn everything, so that you can learn better and faster." If you rely too much, you can't learn well. "
How's this? Let's race to see who learns first, shall we? "I dare to speak angrily and say unhappily," All right, let's have a comparison. "I thought: you can learn if you don't believe it. You are much older.
Looking at dad's clumsy body, he kept sliding the disobedient skateboard. This is ridiculous. 1 of "dong" looks bad. Dad fell down. At this time, I saw my father unhurriedly get up from the ground, squatting on the ground and watching skateboarding, as if thinking and studying. After a while, my father stepped on the skateboard, holding the direction with one paw, swinging from side to side, and sliding hard with the other foot. "Look, I can skate."
Dad shouted happily. I bowed my head in shame and thought my father could learn. What else can't I learn? Under the influence of my father's example, I finally learned.
Another time, I accidentally sprained my foot at school. My father was so distressed to see me limping that he helped me sit down and asked me with concern, "What's the matter?" After listening to my story, he quickly took out safflower oil from the medicine box, helped me rub the wound, blew the sore place with his mouth and said, "Hold on, it will hurt a little at first, but it won't hurt when the blood slowly dissipates."
Under my father's "treatment", I gradually feel much better and my feet don't hurt ... ah! Dad, I want to tell you that I love you too. -technique: first promote and then suppress the object: characters: 750+ I hope it will help LZ.
5. The method of writing a good composition. The most important thing is to have true feelings. This is very important. If you write on an ordinary basis, you can add a lot of points as long as you have feelings and intentions. In fact, the selection of materials depends on your discrimination in composition. For different types of compositions, we must find the best material. Sometimes we can write different articles on some topics in life that can be searched carefully. This is what some writers are good at. I can't expect to say that if I tell you a secret, you can write hard and specific immediately. After all, it takes a little time to improve your composition. Don't worry, it will work. This is a good way to enlarge your vocabulary. Read more optimistic composition books at ordinary times. So what's wrong with not writing the central figure? I tell you, the three basic points of writing are true. It is your own. People with poor composition should not argue or put on makeup. You have to be yourself and be as small as possible. Don't write empty words and big words. Write only your true feelings. So you should know a lot of articles. If you want to highlight "I", of course, you can have me for nothing. For example, writing about teachers can set off the greatness of teachers through their own promotion. "It's good to write by yourself, but don't digress. Those who need to stand out must remember three words: true and small. I used to be a teacher. After I was taught by the teacher, my composition rose rapidly. It can be said that no one in the class is better than my composition. As for writing a landscape composition, it mainly focuses on what kind of comfort or feeling the landscape brings to you, and it is necessary to add a little more "tricks". This is a description. Description requires you to have a large vocabulary, so it is very close to what I said. I'm afraid you won't insist on writing. If you insist on writing according to my method, it is only a matter of time before you make progress. You can also learn to have unique ideas in your composition that are different from others. When writing, others can use the first person to write' or the second person to highlight their differences', which will add a lot of points' if you have a wonderful beginning and end, it will be better. Generally, teachers in large-scale examinations read too many compositions, and generally only read the beginning and end once. You should take good care of it. Having said that, we really need to act. When your composition is finished, you will find that writing is no longer a headache. The number of words you write will increase as you express your feelings. ! Growing up, we have an infinite dream, but others say it is always too far away from us.
It's just that in our childish hearts, we've been looking forward to a dream miracle. Time pushes us towards adulthood step by step. As adults, we are closer to maturity, and we understand the difference between reality and dreams.
I also know that dream and reality are two parallel lines that can never intersect. When we recall our childhood dreams, we just think that they are some nonsense, and no one will say it again. We will continue our dream.
When I grow up, the string of dreams follows and floats into the boundless ocean of time and space. Where did it go? I don't even know my own soul. Some people say this is a symbol of maturity.
However, with maturity, why do we become more confused about our past life and lose our direction on the way forward? That's because there is no light in front of us. Without the guidance of this light, we are just lost children.
So, we must install a lamp. What about your dream? Did you lose it? If you lose it, you have to bring it back and clean it, and it will shine.
You hang it on the road or at the end not far away. As long as you look at it, you will feel as safe as I do. If you really despise your childhood dreams, then you must always have a goal.
Such as buying a house, a car, or being with a beautiful wife. Even smaller is a book and a delicious dinner. These can also be a bright light, some you can touch close to, and some you can only hang there forever.
But one thing is, you will look at this lamp and say, I fought for it, I fought for it, and I shed blood and sweat for it. I also put my life into it and attached my heart to it, so I have no regrets.
This is the history of my life. I know a young man who is diligent, but he never gets along well in his work.
He doesn't know what his problem is. I mentioned it occasionally when I was talking to him once. I asked him, what do you need? I didn't expect that he wouldn't answer such a simple question.
He groaned for a long time and didn't spit out a word. I have met several other boys like him, all of whom are full of ambition and seem to have some ambitions.
But they just don't know what they really want, and they are actually very disappointed about the future and life. I told him that you should always know what you want and then pursue it.
If you don't know what you need, how can you pursue it? Your so-called struggle and struggle every day are just scattered into pieces and scattered in the ocean of your life. Set a goal, even if it is illusory, and let it shine on your way forward.
At least it means that you are still looking at this lamp, in fact, you have been slowly approaching this lamp. Its distance will not get farther and farther away from you, but will only get closer and closer.
Even you can't say it's not unattainable at all. It is the pursuit of reality, not a dream. When dreams become your job, you will feel so close to them.
To give yourself a lamp is to set a goal for yourself and leave a realistic hope for yourself. Whether you succeed or fail.
In front of this lamp, you will only look forward to the glory of life. You won't feel helpless in life. These helplessness and pain are flowers on both sides of the road, and they will also give a touch of color to your life.
From now on, set up a lamp for yourself, and let it guide you forward, and then move forward. You can also use this lamp to slowly forget the disappointments in life, because you have already pursued.
You'll put your.
6. Narrative writing method A general example of narrative writing method: 1. Determine the center and write the profound meaning.
We should try our best to dig out the philosophy of life contained in the written events or find out its bright spots, think repeatedly and determine the central idea of the article. Is that he is good at writing profound meanings from ordinary little things.
2. The six elements of the article should be explained clearly. The occurrence of a thing can not be separated from six aspects: time, place, people, cause, process and result of the thing, which is the so-called "six elements". Only by explaining these aspects clearly can readers have a clear and comprehensive understanding of the things described.
3. Speak methodically and clearly. Arrange the materials in a reasonable order according to the time.
There are three kinds of general narration: direct narration, flashback and interpolation. 4. Be detailed and appropriate, and highlight the key points.
The materials of general events are divided into primary and secondary, which can reflect the center of the article. This part should be written in detail, and the secondary content can be slightly written or not, which will leave a deep impression on readers. 5. Make things concrete.
Whether you can make things specific depends on whether you are good at describing things layer by layer, that is, dividing things into several stages and writing out the development and changes of things in these stages. Only in this way can the content of the article be concrete and vivid.
6. Render the environment, vivid and touching. Everything can't happen and develop without the environment. Grasping the characteristics of the environment to write will render the atmosphere, express feelings and make the article more vivid and touching.
First, why narrative can generally be divided into several types, such as remembering people, narrating, writing scenery and chanting things. Remember people, to show the thoughts, feelings and personality of the characters; Narrative, writing the meaning of events, these meanings can be political and ideological, can also express a certain philosophy, or a certain interest; To write a scene, we should express some personal feelings or profound feelings through the description of the scene; Chanting about things, or revealing some pleasure of life in the world, or expressing meaning with things, shows one's feelings for some people and phenomena in society.
So we always write narratives for a certain purpose and always express some thoughts and feelings, which is actually what we usually call "the theme of the article". The theme is the soul of the article, which runs through the article like a red line. Narrative without a clear theme can only be a running account, so to write a good narrative, we must be clear about "why", that is, the theme should be clear.
We should pay attention to three points when defining the theme: First, we should be positive, that is, the determined theme, thoughts and feelings must be healthy and meaningful. Second, there must be a key point. An article can only have one theme, and the full text should be written around this center.
When some students write, they want to write this and that. As a result, the articles written are either aimless or have several centers, and many centers have no centers. Third, it can be implicit, not necessarily explicit.
The theme should be included in the specific narrative and description, and it is generally not appropriate to reveal it with obvious words. For example, the industrious quality of characters should be expressed through concrete things and vivid details, and it is not appropriate to label characters with the word "industrious". Another example is to describe a meaningful thing. It is not appropriate to talk about its "meaning" in an empty and abstract way, but to show it naturally in a specific plot.
Engels said that the more hidden the meaning of the event and the character, the stronger the artistic charm of the work. Second, what you say is what you write, and what materials should you choose to write a narrative.
Three criteria should be adhered to when selecting materials: first, typicality, that is, choosing materials that can fully express the center; The second is authenticity, that is, selecting real people and stories, including artistic truth from real life; The third is reality, that is, selecting materials with realistic positive significance. In the specific operation of material selection, the most effective method is to expand association and combine life, that is, when selecting materials, you can choose people and things you are familiar with and contact with from any aspect such as family life, school life and social life through association.
For example, when writing "Thank you for your love for me" (1995 composition topic of Nanjing senior high school entrance examination), we might as well start to communicate, and choose the love materials given to me by grandparents and parents from family life, teachers and classmates from school life and enthusiastic people such as neighbors, passers-by and police from social life. When selecting materials, we need to carefully cut them to be meticulous and appropriate, so we should pay attention to two points: First, we should cut off similar materials.
Some narratives use more than one material to express the center, so these materials should express the center from different sides. If they show the center from the same aspect, some of them are "similar" and should be deleted. Second, we should pay due attention to the details.
Materials that are not closely related to the center should be written briefly, and materials that are closely related to the center should be written in detail. Third, how to narrate is how to write an article concretely, which involves the structure, expression, wording and sentence formation of the article.
Let's talk about the structure of the article first, that is, what structure is used to express the narrative to be written. Including how to write this article in several layers, which materials should be written first, which materials should be written later, which should be written in detail, which should be omitted, how to arrange the transition, where the stage is located, where to echo, how to start and how to end, and so on.
From the whole narrative, the common structures are sequence, flashback and insertion. Xu Shun is based on the occurrence, development and process of things.
Including the following situations: first, it is described according to the passage of time; Second, according to the development of things to describe; Third, according to the process of cognitive development; Fourth, describe it according to the author's whereabouts. Flashback is to write the ending or highlight of a thing in front, and then describe it in the order of events.
There are four kinds of flashbacks: one is to advance the end of the event, cause suspense, and then describe the occurrence and development of things in chronological order; One is to intercept the most exciting or tense fragments in the event, write them in front, shock and attract readers, and then describe the cause, development and ending of the event in chronological order; One is to write what is in front of you first, so as to evoke memories, and then trace back to the past to form flashbacks. The other is to write about the present situation first, and then recall the past, in sharp contrast, leaving a deep impression on readers. Insertion is to temporarily interrupt the narrative clue and insert some content related to the central event in the narrative of the article.
7. Write a composition (750 words). Open the book gently. There is a story about a boy struggling to climb to the top of a tree, clutching a bird in his hand just to send it home. This passage tempted me to look under every tree. I always look forward to seeing that boy. Cheer him up and hope he can catch the bird. What about me? I will also quietly take off the nest and give it to him, and enjoy the joy and happiness of the bird returning to the nest with him. Isn't this the beauty full of goodness?
Slowly analyzing the album, there is a picture of a group of old impala. In order to save the impala, they actually used their bodies as pedals. After the impala ran out, it fell into the valley. This scene left me speechless. How I want to become a rainbow bridge, so that these impala can save the day, warm their cold hearts with the light of the rainbow, and support their falling bodies with clouds. Then use this endless bridge to send this group of impala into the forest and disappear into a lush. Isn't this the beauty of selflessness?
Looking at the photo album slowly, there is a photo of dandelion waiting for a distant child to return. When I am old, I refuse to hang down my yellow head and quietly wrap my body with a grass. Despite the test of wind, rain and sun, I never waver. I just expect my children to return. This moment is firmly buried in my heart, taking root and sprouting silly fantasies, hoping to find its children and give them to it. Don't let it rot into the soil, and really feel the forgetfulness of reunion after a long separation. Isn't this full of affectionate beauty?
In fact, you can easily find it. There is no shortage of beauty in this world, but the eyes that find beauty. As long as we grasp it, cherish it and polish our eyes, we will not let the original fresh heart form a thick cocoon. Then, the fragrance of beauty will linger on your nose.
Let's bathe in the story, let's smoke incense in the picture, and let's carefully comb the feathers of love and beauty in the photo-OK?
8. The sword of 750-word composition using various rhetorical devices has finally changed from a piece of steel to a sword, which has been honed again and again on sandstone, reflecting its own value. Plum blossoms finally went through hardships and bloomed in cold moments, becoming the best example for people. This indomitable spirit is especially needed in our study. Learning English is a boring thing, which gives me a headache. I really don't want to learn. However, I have no reason to give up. Learning is one thing, learning well and learning well is another. You can't learn it overnight. You need to persevere and keep learning every day to learn well. This is especially true when learning English. I am very afraid of learning English. Look at the words that have evolved from these 26 letters. I must be able to read, write, recite, make sentences and write phrases. It's hard to remember. However, when. You can recite five words in less than twenty minutes; Play computer less, I can recite a phrase; You can listen to the recording more times if you watch less TV. Although I don't pay much, I can master this language over time. Compared with the living environment in Meihua, I am really much happier. Therefore, I want to learn its perseverance spirit, so that I can learn better and better on the road of learning, go further and further, and finally get good grades. Winter is coming, and I seem to smell the unique fragrance of plum blossom again. I like it very much. I prefer people who are fearless like plum blossoms. They are brave enough to face and overcome difficulties.