On #Month#, 2017, at about 8:00 a.m., after weeks of thorough planning by the school's moral director, our zip line departed without incident.
From the first class of the second grade to the eighth class of the first grade.
From the second year class to the first year class eight.
The flag bearer waved the flag of each class. The class leaders led the shouting > slogans, singing red songs.
Along the way, the trees are shaded, the water is dripping. There are some 'people traveling in the painting' interesting.
Walked about 2 hours, everyone is a little tired. The slogans and songs are getting smaller and smaller.
Thinly spread out, no longer just the momentum of the wind, but the students are all ready to suffer. After all, it is 20 kilometers, without some psychological support is impossible.
But the good thing is that there are teachers and school leaders encouragement. The students carried out the spirit of 'losing skin and flesh, not losing the team', and tried their best to persist.
The sun was getting higher and higher, and beads of sweat were dripping on the students' clothes. Many students no longer have the strength to joke.
At this time, the principal sent us encouragement. And look at always accompanied by our side & gt; class teacher, looking at the more and more fall the greater the distance, we pack up again and hard forward, finally arrived at the rest point.
The students began to eat as a class. Then we took a group photo and sang a red song.
After resting, we then proceeded to start, all the way to the students climbed the dirt slope, over the embankment, do not shout bitter, do not shout tired. In the school leadership and teachers accompanied by the whole process.
We finally successfully completed this activity. After returning to the class, I thought a lot, really understand the purpose of this activity: grinding will, practicing physical and mental.
The same is true in learning. I wrote down these words: comfortable is left to the dead, ten years of struggle, better than a lifetime of struggle.
2. Essay on StretchingStretching Thoughts
Stretching is painful for a person. But when I recall the time when I personally left a series of footprints of my own on the way from the school to the MC Square, I am proud and proud. Walking on foot for hours on end seemed like something I couldn't accomplish in any way before I did it, but now that I think about it, it wasn't that hard. In fact, many times, not because things are difficult, we can not do, but because we dare not do, things are difficult.
On the way to training, we are full of ***, will, physical fitness, but these are gradually consumed in the long journey. Just when we are exhausted and want to give up, one of us sang a pleasant song, followed by a person, two people, to the end of all the people followed the song, the song was sung by everyone has never been more cheerful, the feeling that the sun is shining on us as if the sunshine awakened everyone's fighting spirit. The songs broke the dead air of the previous day. With these songs and the applause of teammates encouraging each other, a great spiritual power was created, the long-dormant potential was stimulated, and everyone possessed a greater energy. For the rest of the journey, our songs resounded through the whole street and sang into each of our hearts, and everyone set a firm goal in their hearts coincidentally - to persevere through the whole journey and become the heroes in their own hearts.
By the time we finished the walk, everyone was exhausted, and I felt as if my body was no longer my own. But by this time the joy of success had long since drowned out all the physical discomfort, and everyone was cheering and marveling, cheering the joy of success and marveling at the incredible thing they had just done. This is the time when a shadow of Ying Difficulty appears in our minds, and that is ourselves.
On the way of pulling, every small step forward represents a new height, which is a journey of self-challenge. For us to give up is easy, adhere to is difficult, is to adhere to let us insist on moving forward, as long as we insist, we will eventually succeed. We are all ordinary people, but as long as we persevere, we can pursue our dreams through hard work, climb the peak of life, and make life extraordinary.
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Because of the pursuit, so choose; because of the choice, so insist; because of the persistence, so endeavor. The choice represents a commitment and responsibility to the team, as well as a commitment and responsibility to the individual. Since the choice of the pulling exercise, we must adhere to it.
Laxing is painful for everyone. The hot sun, deserted roads, long distances, unpredictable weather, etc., can be a psychological barrier to making our choices. Often, it's not because things are hard and we can't do them, but because we are afraid to do them. Being able to make a choice is already a big step forward, and it's amazing.
When I was told that I was going to be practicing, I was looking forward to it, and I always felt that it must be a very interesting thing. It was like a field trip, and I was especially excited to be able to do it right away. Maybe it was the first time in my life that I felt nervous and excited. However, when I really experienced the practice, I realized that it was not at all what I had imagined. It was really very, very hard and tiring. I felt that this training had made up for all the roads that I had not traveled since I was a child. Since I was a child, I have never walked so much at one time. Once upon a time, my classmates and I also had a spring trip, but then it was a car to spring trip, all the way to the laughter is very happy, but always feel that there is something missing. Along the way, when we were about to stick it out, the teacher encouraged us. Students are also encouraging, many students are exhausted, but insisted on refusing to sit in the car. They were really good! When I arrived at my destination, I always had an indescribable feeling in my heart, as if I had accomplished such a difficult task. One by one, the red bunches of reds displayed their warm nature under the blazing sun. Everyone seems to be really hungry, exhausted, sitting on the ground and refused to get up, when I got the bread, I was the first time I felt that the bread is more delicious than usual, more sweet, always feel so happy to eat the bread and drink the water. This is the flavor of suffering and sweetness, isn't it? Back and forth, it is even more painful, endless boring, coupled with the lack of physical strength, I have some regrets about their previous decisions, looking at the students one by one to be picked up, looking at the classmates parents that the expression of heartache, my heart is more than a taste, but I must adhere to the zip line is to walk the whole course, I want a complete zip line! I can't give up, perseverance is victory! For the sake of victory, I also have to insist. I gritted my teeth, finally, I won! Experienced this pulling, I finally understand the road in the pulling, although bitter but more is the sense of fulfillment, in this hard pulling road we harvested a lot of happiness and touched a lot.
On the way of pulling training, every small step forward represents a new height, which is a self-challenging journey. For us, it is easy to give up, but it is difficult to insist. With the scorching sun on our heads, feet on the avenue, and the road as our companion, insisting on letting us move forward persistently, we will never regret it!
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3. zipper essayOn the morning of June 9, I went with a group of students dragging big bags of luggage to the Zhuba practice base in Tongan, and after listening to how to organize the housekeeping, we began to go up the stairs in a line to place our luggage.
In the afternoon, we had a ten-kilometer stretch. Originally, I thought the stretching was just a walk on the flat ground and back, but the teacher pointed to a temple halfway up a mountain and said, "Go over there first and take a break, then walk back.
The mountain road is not as difficult as we thought, the trees along the way are lush and very dense, the only pity is that they block the wind. Walked about ten minutes, the front of the students suddenly "ah" jumped to the side, and then look, there is a caterpillar on the ground is flaunting slowly wriggling, black body on the silver-white hairs reflecting the sunlight, this is the most beautiful I've ever seen the caterpillar (compared to their other counterparts), although I did not see their eyes! where.
The ten-minute hike up the mountain ended quickly with a startled look from my classmates, and the next day, we were off to plant rice seedlings. The next day, we ushered in a new day to the wonderful song of the alarm clock.
Although we were punished in the morning by the teacher's decision to run twenty laps in the evening because we were too noisy, it didn't dampen our anticipation of planting rice seedlings in the afternoon, even though I had never done it before. Three hours later, we were finally going to start planting rice.
After collecting the seedlings and walking down the path to the designated spot, before I was ready, I suddenly got a kick - I stepped on mud. Within a few minutes, I suddenly felt a soft, unidentified object on the bottom of my foot, and almost fell down when I didn't stand firmly on my other foot.
Even though there weren't many people next to me, I got splashed with mud. That night, there was a talent show, and the last program was "Run" sung by Class 6, and after they sang "Run," we had to start running 20 laps in the evening wind with flashlights.
The last activity is handmade soap, the basic procedure is to melt the soap base, color, shape. When I was melting the soap base, I suddenly had the feeling that I was cooking porridge.
Three days of social practice activities soon came to an end, we are about to face the next final exams, the exams are like a stretch, as long as you persist, there is always the moment to reach the destination.
4. Seek a composition about the summer pulling (600 words or more)I will soon be in high school, but I know nothing about the life of high school, so I asked my big brother who just graduated from high school, he said some words that I still remember, these words make me decide to change my bad habits in high school.
"The most memorable thing for me was the military training" was the first thing he said when I interviewed him. "At that time, the management was very strict, after a summer vacation of lazy life we can not withstand so strict training, at that time we thought it was not difficult, and even sometimes thought it was very simple, but in fact and we imagined too much difference.
For example, to get up, the requirements of ten minutes to get up, and the quilt folded into tofu block, which is very difficult, the results we did not have a completed, were penalized twenty push-ups. There is also a meal, the instructor did not let you sit, you can not sit, the results of a few people into the cafeteria to sit down, and not queuing up the result was punished not to eat.
Next is the thing that I remember most, that is, the weight pulling, pulling is more important in the military training, because the results of military training ultimately affect the graduation results, so pulling this one must make the instructor satisfied. Although we know the horror of the pulling exercise, but also according to the previous things summarized this time must be very difficult, but there are still a lot of people did not hold out to quit, there are many people fainted in the middle of the training, so quit.
From then on, I realized how difficult the life of the middle school, and compared with the elementary school is really a world of difference, so I changed this in the elementary school of bad habits, after these three years of hard work, and ultimately with excellent results into the key high school." After listening to these words, I thought about my bad habits in elementary school, and thought about the upcoming military training, immediately hit a cold war.
Since then, I have made up my mind that I must correct my bad habits, and in the future, I will also take a good high school to realize my own ideal. You change again, I hope it is useful to you, points to me or not you say! I wish you success in your studies and hard work! Come on, I'm looking out for you! November 9 - 11 my school held a three-day field stretching, my class *** have 53 people, to participate in this stretching has 50 people, 1 person logistics, 2 people sick leave.
9 at 8 am we set off from the school all the way through the cross ditch, double streams, Tanshan, Gaoqiao, Damiao, hemp sugar, 11 at 2 pm back to school, the whole *** count 75 kilometers. This pulling, the school leadership attaches great importance to the well-organized, principal marshal, school leaders to the scene to care about guiding the work; all the teachers are dedicated, meticulous, fully committed, and students with the same sweet **** bitter.
In order to do a good job of this stretching work, so that students have a good physique to participate in this stretching, in the last month began to do physical preparation, every day, let students do morning run, the number of laps increased day by day, weekdays also require students to pay attention to balanced nutrition. This pulling exercise every student has performed very well.
This pulling exercise not only exercise students hard work, solidarity and mutual help, *** with the enterprising spirit, but also enhance the class cohesion and group spirit, improve the students' concept of organization and discipline. Practicing the slogan of our initial departure, we did "all actions follow the command, unity and love, encourage each other, care for each other, give the convenience to others, leave the difficulties to themselves, to overcome themselves, challenge themselves!" In general, our class in this pulling in the performance of a good, mainly the following aspects of outstanding performance: first, can bear hardships and stand hard work, perseverance.
For example, my class Yu Ying, may usually at home, pampered, did not do physical work, lack of physical exercise, in this exercise in the idea of giving up, but in the teacher and students encouragement to insist on walking through the whole process, although the pace is very slow, but can insist on walking down the spirit of this spirit is worth encouraging and praising! Second, the field training, road fatigue, no fear; marching, help each other, care, unity and love. In two and a half days of pulling, students care for each other to support each other.
75 kilometers for each student is an unattainable distance, but each student can persevere to walk down, on the way to the students appeared to be physically weak, there is the phenomenon of dropping out of the queue, although the student's waist and legs ache, the feet also played blisters, but they are still insisting. There are also Li Yun, Yi Man and other students when a student can not walk to help carry bags, assist, so that the class as far as possible not to fall behind.
In this pulling exercise to see the friendship between the students, support each other all the way forward, are proof of the great success of this pulling exercise. Although the training is bitter, but without some cold bones, how to get the fragrance of plum blossoms.
As Mencius said, only "first bitter its heart and mind", can "gain what it can not", only after the "bitter" wash, in order to show us the "valiant posture". Only through the "bitter" washing, can we show our "valiant posture". For the future of learning life laid a good foundation.
Third, all actions follow the command, the concept of discipline, whether it is the camp rest or collection of the team to check the number of people, each student can arrive at the designated location on time. Fourth, civilized and polite, civilized behavior.
On the way to the students also pay attention to their own words and deeds, put the garbage into their own plastic belt, do not throw garbage, peel, paper. Fifth, through the pulling, we also enhance the understanding between teachers and students and emotional communication, sleep with students at night, talk to the students, for the injured students rubbing medicine, so as to form a positive and upward good classroom style and class cohesion.
This pulling exercise my class has done a good job but there are also shortcomings: First, marching formation is not neat enough, before and after the distance difference is large. Some of the students' physique is weak, after the students to strengthen the physical exercise.
Strive in the next year, our class did not fall out of the phenomenon, in the march to do neat. Second, the work of the class teacher I think I still have deficiencies, lack of careful observation, the class is not very comprehensive care.
This pulling exercise, let us appreciate the atmosphere of the barracks, feel the style of the soldiers, have a soldier's feelings. Further strengthen the sense of national defense, enhance the patriotic enthusiasm.
Through the stretching, the students strengthened their physical fitness, sharpened their will, exercised the quality of resistance to setbacks, cultivated the spirit of unity and cooperation, formed a good concept of discipline, learned to discipline themselves with discipline, and regulate themselves with cultivation. After this stretching students have a deep feeling, back to school after the stretching summary, each student talked about their feelings, so they benefit a lot.
Stretching so that students have less of a spoiled, more mature; less of a weak, more of a strong; less of a lazy, more of a hard.
5. Unforgettable military training stretching essayOn the first day of military training, we heard that we have to go to the Xixi Wetland stretching, and we are all very excited, I am no exception.
But in the excitement, excitement, I'm still a little worried, in case of sudden rain how to do? What if my foot is sprained? In case ...... soon, we will have to gather to go pulling, I had to take such a complex mood, on the road. To the Xixi Wetland, I quickly forget those problems, because the charming scenery y attracted me: clear streams, green grass, and the low white clouds in the distance, let a person intoxicated.
But after a while, the view was no longer appealing to me.
But after a while, the beauty of the scenery did not attract me. This is because, I have been a little unable to walk, two feet sore, as if filled with lead, can not lift up.
At this point, I realized that the military training is not out to play and relax, but out to suffer. I would have liked to play temper, not go, but on second thought, thought of those two words: "I want to train, I want to suffer, I want to be successful!" "Bleeding and sweating, not shedding tears, shedding skin and flesh, not falling off the bandwagon!" Yes, the PLA uncles ate more pain than us, but none of them gave up, they all persevered, they are all men sweat! So, I gritted my teeth and followed the team, although my feet are still sore, but I don't feel; although my feet still can't lift, but I don't feel! Finally, we walked back to the military school, we are so tired that the words do not want to say.
Although I am also very tired, but I am very happy. I feel that I have opened up, I can suffer, I can already take some responsibility! This military training, unforgettable, but to go to the Xixi wetland pulling, but let me have the deepest impression.
6. On the pulling feeling essay topicsOrganize two for reference: pulling the day of the night march finally came ...... In fact, I am quite fond of walking, the student age I dreamed of one day to carry out a hiking: a few like-minded partners, backpack, all the way to enjoy the beautiful scenery, we all the way! I think it's a wonderful thing to have a hike one day: a few like-minded partners, backpacking, enjoying the beautiful scenery along the way, all the way to talk and laugh, singing songs.
Gradually, as we get older, we move less and less.
As we get older, we move less and less, especially in the past two years, when we've been pregnant and giving birth to children, and I can clearly feel that I'm not as strong as I was before.
The morning run on the 4th and 5th, after which I felt particularly comfortable, I felt that I should do more physical exercise. Because I didn't feel particularly tired from the first two days' morning runs, and because I used to be really good at walking, I was still confident about tonight's night march.
To be honest, although I know that 30 kilometers is very far, but in the end how far, the heart does not have a very clear concept. I just feel that I can walk if others can walk.
At 8:00 pm, the training officially began. At first, I felt particularly energized, because I walked slowly, while walking and jogging, and did not feel tired.
Half an hour later, the abdominal muscles began to ache. At this point it felt like I had been walking for a long time, but it was only 2 kilometers, which was nothing compared to our goal - 30 kilometers.
It was only now that I started to really realize that 30km, really isn't an easy thing to do. Just thinking, hang on hang on and hang on, I've got to keep going.
At 5km, my feet started to hurt. I blamed myself for wearing a new shoe today, and the shoe was a bit cramped, so my feet and toes were rubbed to the point of raw pain.
Fortunately, I can still endure.
It's a good thing that I'm not a big fan of the new shoes, because I'm a big fan of the new shoes.
Slowly, the muscles of the body do not hurt, and it seems to have passed the period of feeling particularly tired. The only thing is that the two feet, when they hit the ground, it is like stepping on nails, and the toes are also swollen and painful.
I felt that this 10 kilometers is so far, I can't hold on any longer. It was horrible to think that it was only 1/3 of the way there.
I told myself in my heart: 5 kilometers left, 5 kilometers left, you can rest, maybe half an hour of rest feet do not hurt. With this thought, I limped along.
I got to my destination.
I rested for half an hour, and felt that I had regained my strength, and I had confidence in myself, and I felt that I would be able to persevere to the end.
It's also strange that I don't feel tired anymore. I'm not sure if I'll be able to do it, but I'm sure I'll be able to do it, and I'm sure I'll be able to do it, and I'm sure I'll be able to do it, and I'm sure I'll be able to do it.
Thank you, Mr. Li, for accompanying me and encouraging me, and for resting a few times in the middle. I really hate my feet, if my feet don't hurt, I will be able to hold on to my strength until the end of the race.
Maybe I can't bear to see my limping steps and face hideous touch, Mr. Li said: you can get on the car. My feet, I really can not hold on, I got on the car in the end.
22 kilometers, although it is not too close, it is just a pity that I did not accompany everyone to the finish line, next time if there is still a chance, I must try again, no matter whether I can walk to the finish line or not, I have to try again. Back home, rubbing his feet with oversized blisters, I felt that today's experience makes me a lifetime hard to forget, just feel that my willpower is still not enough, maybe I do not have a good objective condition (I just gave birth to a child, physical strength is not good, and the shoes are not comfortable), but everyone may not be much better than me.
In the future, I must work out more and strengthen my body, just as Mr. Sun said, a good body can withstand the pressure of work. Next time I will change my shoes to the most comfortable ones, and I won't give up in the middle again! This training has taught me that in times of trouble, you must have the will to persevere, rise to the occasion, and never give up is the best way to get out of trouble.
The closer we get to success, the tougher it is, and the closer we get to success, the more we give up. So be sure to stick with it to the end in order to achieve real victory.
The work will inevitably encounter a lot of difficulties, this time absolutely can not retreat and avoid. Difficulties are springs, you weak it strong.
We must have the determination to persevere to the end, do our best to think of all the ways to solve the problem, the victory is not far away. Mr. Li held this pulling activity is really significant, so that I learned a lot from it, I will always remember this day! With the heart to feel hiking on the road, we can stop to enjoy the scenery along the way; head of the blue sky, we can enjoy close contact with nature; feet on the ground, we can use our feet to measure the motherland's mountains and rivers; close your eyes, we can feel the warmth of the sun; this hiking activity, the whole more than 40 kilometers! I know it's quite a long distance! I know it's a long distance, and I'm sure there's a section or a few distances that we need to accomplish with our will, and it's going to be very tiring! But as long as I persevere, I am sure I will be able to reach my destination as well as many others ...... January 1, 2011 New Year, New Hope, Today we chose to hike through the Xiaokeng National Forest Park! Starting point: Shaogang Eastern District of the back of the mountain end point: Xiaokeng National Forest Park, the whole more than 40 kilometers.
The first day of the new year, choose this activity is mainly through the challenge to sharpen their will. We challenged the nature but also challenged ourselves. There were several sections of the road that I insisted on with my will, and the physical strength that I was worried about before didn't become an obstacle, but the pain in my feet became one of the reasons that I had to insist, and I knew that my feet were seriously hurt because my shoes weren't ready, but of course, it didn't become a resistance for me to insist to the end.
The hike took us through concrete roads in the countryside, endless rice paddies, larch forests, camphor tree forests, mountain paths, crystal clear countryside streams, plains, mountains, mines, and the fantastically mysterious Xiaokeng National Forest Park scenic area. Everywhere we passed, from a different angle, can constitute a very beautiful picture of the landscape.
To be honest, this kind of walking is not too much for each of us in our lifetime; but for me, it will become the wealth of my life, very worth treasuring. Walked, seen, left behind are wonderful memories.
Fatigue, tired, calm down and slowly taste, in the nature of this natural oxygen bar every step is so happy and full, that filled with confidence and strength! I know.
7. pulling essay two hundred wordsPulling activity thoughts
On this Friday, an important event will be held. In that event, we spilled sweat containing Pengzhi's teenage spirit.
This important activity, hiking and stretching, opened on a bright morning. Teachers asked us to dress neatly and walk neatly. The opening was announced by the stirring sentiments of Principal Wu and the county commissioner of our county! We felt honored and excited by the emotion of Principal Wu and the arrival of the county party secretary.
After that, we went out of the school in order, led by a fast-paced team. As soon as we left the school gate we started roaring out our slogans, but the other classes were not to be outdone and roared as well. As soon as the activity started, the air was filled with the smell of huǒ medicine, which could ignite at any time. After that, a beautiful song was sung under the lead of our class literature member. Of course, this made Principal Wu's favor towards our class increase, and also made our class teacher happy. Here, it made this big family closer, and also hazily understand what unity is.
After walking 3/2 of the way, we took a break and moved on. We reached our destination in about half an hour, we had a little something to eat and then moved forward to the famous attraction, the Mid-level Pavilion. Mr. Shi introduced us to the famous minister - Zhang Zhidong. After that, Principal Wu led us on a tour of the Banshan Pavilion, which left us in awe. Zhang Zhidong's deeds will always inspire me and I want to learn from him.
After the tour began to return, in the return road, I have several times can not hold down, but saw the students are holding on, so I clenched my teeth and also hold on. Maybe because of the last step of their own did not insist on down, and lead to the ultimate failure. So, this pulling activity teaches us what is a strong will.
When we returned to the school again, we all saw a spirit called hard work in the eyes of the students. After Principal Wu also said some feelings, this meaningful stretching activities finally closed. After the teacher explained, we flew back to the dormitory to rest.
"Do not go through the wind and rain, how to see the rainbow; there is not a cold bone, where the plum blossom fragrance" This sentence shows that our activities are meaningful, is worth to recall, to recall the spirit of not afraid of suffering!
8. third grade write farmers uncle how to plant cucumber essayWith the deepening of the new curriculum reform and the continuous promotion of quality education, essay teaching has become a very important work in language teaching, it is an important part of the elementary school language teaching, but also for the overall improvement of the quality of the students to lay the foundation of an important work.
But at present, composition teaching is still a major problem in language teaching. Then, how to guide the good third grade composition start teaching, it is even more difficult.
As the saying goes: "ten thousand feet high", "everything is difficult at the beginning", as long as the start of the third grade essay teaching guidance, the work behind is good. So, for the third grade students, they just contacted the writing, how to teach? I think it should be guided from the following three aspects.
First, the third grade essay teaching, should fully stimulate students' interest in writing Einstein said: "Interest is the best teacher." The elementary school language program pointed out that the requirements for writing in the lower grades are: "interested in writing, happy to write down what they want to say."
For the third grade of elementary school assignments can not be too high, otherwise, not only can not meet the requirements, but also easy to cause a psychological burden, which I'm afraid is also a lot of primary school students "afraid" of composition, teachers always feel that the level of student assignments is low for important reasons. The third grade essay just started, the key to writing should not be placed on what students write, how to write, but should be placed on how to make students want to write, willing to write, happy to write, inspire students to write interest.
Then, how to mobilize students' interest in writing? (A) contact with the actual life, educate students to observe more, stimulate their interest in writing composition material extraction of one of the sources of personal observation and experience, and the second is derived from the indirect channels of saying or listening, there is no work material, it is impossible to talk about the writing of the text. Some students, it is in the observation of the discovery, only to realize the significance of the desire to write.
Third-grade children, after all, are still young, they often do not observe, often in the observation of the observation of the task of forgetting their own observation, by some of the fresh object to attract their attention, so I often take them to the life of the observation, and teach them some of the methods of observation. After learning the text of "Autumn in the North Great Wasteland", I let the children go to look for autumn.
Tell them to observe in a certain order, from the whole to the parts, from the characters to the scenery, from far to near or from top to bottom. I led the students to first observe the high and blue sky, the sky to the south of the geese, and then observe the blue sky under the woods and the woods in the leaves, seize the maple tree focus on observation, inspire students to imagine the maple leaves fluttering in the wind, the last observation of the distant fields, the farmers uncle's harvest scene, observation of fruitful orchards, the golden rice paddies, so that the observation from afar and close to the observation.
After the observation, the students came back to write, the results were out of my expectation, the vast majority of students were able to write a more beautiful composition in the order of observation - "I love autumn".