Writing Ideas:
In order to avoid verbosity, in order to highlight the theme, you must tailor the selection of material, can not make every thing all over the place, with transitional words or transitional sentences to make the paragraph to paragraph more natural.
The sample essay is as follows:
Childhood, is every person has had, if childhood is injured, then the joy of childhood will never return.?
--Title?
Game of childhood?
Previously, I played games with my friends, in which we were happy.?
Childhood games let me gain a lot: in playing gunfight with friends, I learned to be brave; in playing catch, I learned to be resourceful; in hide-and-seek, I learned to be careful ...... those people, those things really make people miss. Those laughter still lingers in my ears.?
But in this technologically advanced era, our childhood are hurt.?
We were also happy while playing with cell phones and computers. But this kind of happiness doesn't last long and can't leave good memories for each other. I hold up the phone, all kinds of games "kill" out, the game hall inside the king of glory, every day cool running, temple escape ...?
We wasted our time in the game and learned nothing. Not only that, cell phones and computers are bad for one's eyes, so myopia abounds...?
Silent childhood?
Previously, when I walked down the street, the sound of laughter poured into my ears; but now, when I walk down the street, it's quiet, and there's no more laughter. All my classmates were in their houses, all gone to the game world, and could no longer be found outside.
When I used to go to my classmates to play, we laughed and laughed outside, growing up happily in spring, summer, fall, and winter; now, when I go to them, they don't do anything, they're silent, and they keep playing with their cell phones and playing games. They are far away from me and close to their cell phones. Childhood is wounded, it will never return.?
Childhood flew away?
Once upon a time, the sky was so blue, the trees were so lush, the flowers and plants were so fragrant, and we were so happy. Now, I am like a lonely stone, no one to play with me anymore, I stand there alone, no one to ask. How I miss my old joyful and beautiful childhood!
Childhood, are you hurt? Are you leaving? Will you ever come back?
If your childhood is hurt, then please stay away from cell phones, from computers, from games.?
O childhood, come back soon! I'm still waiting for you.