Seven lines for a night stay at a mountain temple
The moon is dark and the way is lost in the wild village,
The saddle is down to find a place to stay and the door to the mountain is fastened.
It was three minutes after midnight,
and there was one cigarette left in the carton.
The Abbot's tea and water service,
the rough man's pseudo-intent on Buddhist scriptures.
I'd rather have the Buddha's negative,
but I won't forget the kindness of the Emperor.
A few lines of the poem, to the river to savor the Bamboo Poetry Friends of the good aria ......
Seven metrics to travel Pingyao
The city wall four zhang guilty of military worries, embroidered door carved roofs to listen to the rain tower.
The five ridges of the old courtyards bear the ancient rhyme, and the six beasts of the new mansions are modeled after the lords.
The old courtyard has five ridges and the new mansion has six beasts to imitate the lords.
The dusty marketplace, a lifetime of drifting in the state of God!
1, brother: this poem should be labeled new rhyme! If you follow the new rhyme, "spine, house" for oblique, the jaw line is not a joint, I am not interested in down to appreciate ......
2, if you follow the new rhyme, "weaving" for flat, the neck line of six even flat, out of line! The first is to make sure that you have a good understanding of what you are doing! "Weaving" through the banner, flag for oblique ......
3, the first three lines of the neck and neck of the suspicion of flat head, when to avoid ......
4, the first link The word "甍" originally means the ridge of a roof, but in the third line you say "ridge". Imagery repeated ......
5, these poetic disease is also fine! The one that makes me dizzy is "a lifetime of drifting in God's country"? I'm sorry, but I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do that! You must teach me, what is the meaning of this line? It's just a line! Rhyme!
The King of Western Chu
I have been told that the item is also a heavy pupil, and the creation of the sky is deceived by the falling leaves.
The horse and the whip are on the ground, and the king is on the march.
The lords and feudal lords are all looking for fame and fortune, and Julu has made a great achievement.
The king of the Western Chu is a man of hate, and he has sung the song of a river of red.
1, "heavy pupil" that is, an eye in two pupils of the person. This kind of person in the legend is mostly saints! History books recorded only eight people with heavy pupils: Cangjie, Yu Shun, heavy ear, Xiang Yu, Lv Guang, Gao Yang, fish Kuluo, Li Yu. But I have always thought that the so-called "heavy pupils" is actually cataracts ......
2, the first word "Feng" is too close, seriously crowded rhyme ... ...
3. "Creation deceives the heavens"? Ridiculous! The word "creation" often refers to nature or destiny, and there is no such thing as deceiving heaven. Example: The Qing Dynasty's Yun Richu's "The Song of Viewing Wang Shigu's Landscape Drawings" reads, "Spiritual thoughts are silent and connected with the creation of nature, and the unique lapel of the heart writes about the mountains and streams." The second sentence is a sick sentence, and the phrase "empty fallen leaves" is purely a rhyme! Such a broken sentence and then cut ......
4, the jaw "knife beheading, the king of the wind" can fight? Who taught you that
5, the neck couplet "seek fame and fortune, build great achievements" to make up the right to make up the unorthodox ......
6, just! I don't have the heart to savor it. Brothers: learn the basics of couplets in your spare time! You put this poem to push the work of stability, metre will also begin
Memories of Qin'e village night
The sound of the flute is pleasant, the huqin strings move to invite the bright moon.
Inviting the moon, the rice-planting song, the sound of the trumpet cut.
The sound of the local flavor, the cymbals and the drums, the shengxiao, and the pianos.
Pith and pipe, farmhouse song, folk style.
1. The word "ba" is definitely out of tune.
2. There is a "Spring Festival" in Yandu, and a "Village Night" in the countryside! Let me guess: brother is engaged in what kind of occupation ......89.64% is to do musical instrument sales!
3, flute, huqin, horn, cymbals, gongs, drums, sheng, xiao! Brothers: simply the piano, guitar, tuba, trumpet ...... are stuffed!!!! For a "village night" like this, let's call on me! We will play "whistle", but also sing "Tianxian match" ......
4, you more or less in the bluffing old man! A "village night" if all rely on fiddling with musical instruments to render the atmosphere, this is also too underestimated the aesthetic level of our villagers friends! At least ask Zhao Benshan to do a piece of "Guerrillas of Supernatural", and ask Lao Bi to do a piece of "Wisdom of the Tiger Mountain" ......
5. The local flavor of the earth plot" in the old man's impression, only whoever family funeral, will be so drumming musical instruments ......
6, brother: the subject matter is very good, on the que scenarios, the idea is also wonderful. The next que should be "virtual" write, the combination of real and virtual can produce aftertaste, should not rely on musical instruments to make up the Xing, make up the sentence ......
seven law a Demoiselle Demoiselle smoky rain Ren Ping Sheng
near spring new willow new buds, gradual passing of the New Year's light have a different flower.
The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on a new pair of shoes or boots, and you'll be able to get them to fit in your pocket.
The rain is always falling, and the wind is blowing.
It's not too late, so I'm going to go with the flow to the end of the world.
1. "The new willow has new buds": what is "new willow"? It is because of the "new buds"! This sentence is a contradiction in terms, the old willow out of the new shoots ......
2, "There are other flowers"? It's hard and obscure! I've got a rhyme for "flower". "Gradually past the New Year" absolutely no willow flowers, willow flowers bloom in March and April ......
3, "white miles of goose down, the river between the color of the snow" jaw line if the willow, then this poem is purely The first is that the poem is not about the willows, but about the willows! "Nearly spring" can not have willow floss; if it refers to the remaining snow, then "goose down, snow color" together palm! The first two lines are so obscure, the neck and the last two lines become no "foundation", I'm not interested in going down to appreciate ......
Seven Lines
Alone in the west tower, I look at the moon, and I feel a sense of frustration.
I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do this, but I'm going to be able to do it, and I'm going to be able to do it.
If the past can follow the water, the years can be accompanied by clouds.
I'll take a short walk and write a poem.
1. "Disappointing thoughts"? The first is that the first is a "good" one, and the second is that the second is a good one! "The "thoughts" are definitely a noun. "Thoughts" as a noun is oblique. Rhymes with ......
2. "Watching and observing" in the third line! "Idle look at the romantic time" raw sick sentence ......
3, neck couplet "with the water mooring" what do you mean? Your original intention should be with the water "drift", but drift is moving, mooring is quiet, a separate "mooring" word is the meaning of stay! Who taught you the language? Poorly worded ......
4, "if you can, when you can" used in the neck joint is very hard!
4, the final couplet alone taste, okay. However, in connection with the preceding text, "happy, at ease" and the first line of the "frustration" context contradictory!
5, brother! The poem was written to pour out his heart, not a pile of words ......
Seven rhymes of the reunion feeling
Qing Hua graduated from the West and East, thirty years in a dream.
Cardamom feelings are unforgettable, Ban Jing story look forward to reunion,
Meilan, peach and plum according to the end of the spring, rich and famous in the twinkling of an eye empty.
The wine peer waved his hand, the mountain flowers rosy sunset red.
Note: Qinghua is Zhejiang Qingtian Overseas Chinese High School.
1, almost "Qinghua" as "Tsinghua"! Luckily, my brother made a note that there is no water ......
2, the jaw "Ban Jing" on the "cardamom" lack of work! Ban Jing, refers to the meeting of friends, *** sit and talk. Example: Tao Qian's "Drinking" poem 15 "Ban Jing sitting under the pine, several pours have been drunk again." Ban: spread; Jing: Huang Jing (a deciduous shrub), Ban Jing for the movable-bin structure ......
3, jaw and neck of the two lines have the suspicion of flat head ......
4, the last line is good! "Sunset red" although the imagery is old-fashioned, but the metaphor of youth has passed, and leave a few points of calm and relaxed, but also with the "thirty years a dream, cardamom feelings" corresponds to ......
5, this law Although there are flaws, but the beginning, bearing compact; neck link to turn far away; end link to close clean, free. I appreciate ......
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