2. All over the world, measures have been taken to track down the source of the disease, isolation and observation, to prevent Influenza A (H1N1) from spreading. (Inappropriate: remove "no longer" or "not", or change "no longer" to "continue")
3. As a result of the use of scientific methods of revision, his learning efficiency has been greatly improved. (搭配不当：效率与改进不当，将效率改为提高)
4、This year will be the 14th military parade in China and the first in the new century. (Inappropriate: in the "this year" after the "parade" or "is" to "held")
5, bronchitis, allergic rhinitis eat lobster, will lead to aggravation of the disease. (Inappropriate collocation: subject and predicate. Add "patients" after "allergic rhinitis")
6. With the re-excavation of the Terracotta Warriors and Horses after 24 years of silence, it has attracted the attention of the media at home and abroad. (Component mutilation: lack of subject, delete "with")
7, in the current World Series, after the athletes struggled to win the men's group rest again. (成份残缺：缺主语，将 "经过 "和 "的 "删去)
8、The nine-year boarding school with more than 150 students was the earliest school with the fewest casualties in the quake and the earliest resumption of classes after the quake. (Incorrect collocation: subject and object "students are the school")
9. These activities, which are loved by students, have enhanced and cultivated their sense of ownership. (Inappropriate collocation: consciousness can not be cultivated, should be deleted "and cultivate")
10, the improvement of academic performance depends mainly on whether the students themselves are trying hard. (A face to face: "whether" should be deleted)
11, we heartily thank the teacher for years of silent dedication. (Repetition: "sincerely" and "in the heart" are repeated)
12. Recently, penalties for drunken driving have been increased across the country in order to prevent those appalling traffic accidents from happening again. (Multiple negatives cause semantic confusion: "no longer" should be changed to "again")
13, the midterm review, many students have a review focus is not prominent, the time arrangement is not reasonable, some even remember the previous knowledge, and forget the knowledge behind. (Component mutilation: lack of object center word, should be in the "unreasonable" after the addition of "the phenomenon of")
14, in this coal mine accident, the only survivor of Chuangshuo Hu was killed in the miners. (inconsistency:)
15, March Kunming is the best season of the year, every time this time of year there will be a large number of Chinese and foreign tourists to come. (Inconsistency: should be changed to "March in Kunming")
16, all departments around the world to improve people's livelihoods, safeguard people's livelihoods, and attach importance to people's livelihoods as the starting point and landing point of all work. (Reversed word order)
17, effectively reducing the burden on farmers is the key to building a new socialist countryside. (One side and two sides of the improper collocation)
18, Fuzhou City won the "National Health City" is the city's people *** with the results of efforts. (Component redundancy: delete "the reason")
19, through the Dragon Boat Race, dumplings activities, can make Qu Yuan's patriotic spirit from generation to generation. (Lack of subject: delete "through")
20. Whether a person has a healthy body, the key is to consistently participate in physical exercise. (One side and two sides do not match)
21. The successful return of the unmanned spacecraft Shenzhou I-IV has made China join the ranks of major space development countries, which is also a sign of the growing strength of China's national power. (lack of subject: delete "due to")
22, high-speed magnetic levitation train running with the track completely without contact. It does not have wheels and transmission mechanism, train levitation, guidance, drive and braking rely on the use of electromagnetic force to achieve. (Sentence mash-up: should be deleted "rely on")
23, according to data records, growing in the wild long-tailed chicken tail feathers, can grow about one meter per year, and long-tailed chicken life expectancy can live for eight to ten years, so the longest tail feathers can be more than seven meters. (Inappropriate: should be deleted "life)
24, environmental protection incidents occur frequently, some experts believe that the main reason is that some local governments rely solely on the scale of inputs to obtain the rate of economic growth, so that the consumption of resources is alarming, environmental pollution is becoming increasingly serious. (Component redundancy: should delete "recurrent" or "frequent")
25, according to the old man later recalled, the bag in addition to just from the bank to take 3,000 yuan of money, there are UnionPay cards, ID cards, cell phones and other documents. (Logical error: cell phones are not documents)
26, our school this fund-raising activities for the Sichuan disaster area, many school teachers and students of the positive response, in less than a day's time to collect more than 30,000 yuan. (Disambiguation: "many school teachers and students")
27, write an article language to be concise, be sure to delete all the unnecessary verbosity. (Component redundancy: "unnecessary" and "verbose")
28. In our studies, we need to solve and identify problems in time. (Inappropriate word order: "solve" "discover")
29. After carrying out the activity of using ethanol gasoline in motor vehicles, the air in Baise City has been made fresher. (Component mutilation: lack of subject)
30. Some parents over-indulge their children, so that many students lack self-control and live in comparison with each other. (Repetition of meaning: the use of the word "containment": common improper use of the word "containment", "current" and "imperative", "very" and "cool", "very" and "disparity", "to prevent" and "not", "worrying" and "worrying", "excessive" and "over-rated")
31, the education of the new era should cultivate the students' level of observation, thinking, and creativity. (Inappropriate: the verb "cultivate" is "ability" not "level")
32. I grew up in a theater family, and the Yu opera is not strange to me at all. (Inappropriate order: "I" is the subject)
33. After the technical innovation, the cost of the material factory has been doubled, while the output value has increased by 10 percent. (Inappropriate collocation: "decline" and "double" is inappropriate, should be changed to "50%")
34, the following paragraph there are two sick sentences, please find and modify.
(1) Recently, there has been a big drought in the southwest of China, and the main reason for it is that the high-pressure dams are destroying the atmospheric activity. (2) The high-pressure dam is like a dry wall across southern Guangxi, blocking the westward movement of water vapor from the Pacific Ocean. (3) Although cold air from the north came south, it could not converge with the water vapor. (4) As a result, there was no rainfall for a long time in the area where Guangxi, Guizhou and Yunnan converge, suffering dry weather rarely seen in 50 years.
Sentence 1, comments: delete "because" redundant, and "the main reason" repeated
Sentence 3, comments: "although" to "even though" or "also" to "but" associated with the wrong word
35, the following paragraph, there are three sentences, each with a speech defect, please modify.
(1) In order to create a better medical environment for the people, the Ministry of Health is going to popularize the service model of "first diagnosis and treatment, then settlement" throughout the country. (2) The so-called "diagnosis and treatment before settlement" means that the patient in the outpatient clinic clinic, first pay a deposit, unified to wait until the end of all the diagnosis and treatment and then go to the checkout. (3) The implementation of the "first treatment and then billing" service mode, the patient consultation time can be saved about 20% or more.
(1) "created" to "create"; (2) will be "unified" to "checkout" before; (3) delete "more than" or delete "about"
36, the following paragraphs in the underlined part of the speech defects, the degree of the respective proposed amendments.
April 20 (1) from the city's financial and insurance system as well as some of the school's nearly 1,000 representatives, in Yiyang Grand Theater to listen attentively to the anti-ice relief martyr Xiong Dayong's heroic deeds report. Xiong Dayong was a surveyor of the Pacific Insurance Zhuzhou Central Branch, died on January 16 this year in the handling of claims accidents in the line of duty. (2) The provincial party committee and the provincial government recognized him as "Hunan Province Ice Resistance and Disaster Relief Model" and "Martyr" and other honorary titles. (3) Listening to the report made by Xiong Dayong's colleagues and relatives, the participants were y moved. Everyone said that we should take Xiong Dayong as an example, dedication and courage.
(1) remove the "near" or "Yu" (2) will be "recognized" to "posthumously", and remove the "for" (3) remove the "heard" or "make"
37, the following paragraph has two sick sentences, please find them out and correct them.
(1) Ten provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions across the country will pilot the addition of Peking Opera to the music curriculum this year. (2) Jiangsu Province is one of the pilot provinces, piloting Peking Opera classes in 20 primary and secondary schools in eight cities along the river. (3) In addition to this, the indoctrination will also encourage regions to introduce local operas into their teaching. (4) This is conducive to students' awareness of learning national culture.
Sentence 2, comments: change "开办" to "开设"
Sentence 4, comments: add "培养" after "有利于"
38、Her rosy cheeks were like blossoming pear blossoms. (Inappropriate metaphor: "pear flower" is an inappropriate metaphor for "rosy cheeks")
39, the joyful stream sings a clear song and dances beautifully to the distance. (Inappropriate collocation: verb-object, should be "song" to "song", "dance" to "dance")
40, see this photo, as if to bring me back to the infinite fun of childhood. (Component mutilation: lack of subject, should be "see" deleted)
41, secondary school students go to Internet cafes, has aroused the attention of educators and the majority of classroom teachers. (Logical error: "educators" includes "classroom teachers", the two can not be juxtaposed; should be deleted "the majority of classroom teachers" or change "and" to "especially" "especially")
42, reform and opening up in the past two decades, the Chinese people's standard of living has been significantly enhanced. (Inappropriate collocation: "standard" is only high or low)
43. The Fuxia Expressway is an important transportation link between the provincial capital of Fuzhou and the special administrative region of Xiamen. (Repetition: "important" means "important")
44. In the course of modernization, we need to fully absorb the advanced experience of all countries. (Inappropriate word order: "everything abroad")
45, through the city's people's **** with efforts to make the city's air quality situation has improved significantly. (Component mutilation: lack of subject)
46, Zhuge Liang's superhuman wisdom, excessive boldness, is the key to whether Qi Bei can build a successful career. (One side doesn't match the two)
47, We will do our best and do everything possible to try to solve the Taiwan question by peaceful means. But we will never commit ourselves to the use of force. (Unintelligible: "not" should be added between "commitment" and "use")
48. People were y infected by the old man's clear thinking and optimism. (Inappropriate collocation: subject-verb, emotion can be infectious, thinking can not; can be "clear thinking" deleted)
49. Teachers in order to cultivate us, can really sleep and eat, and to think about it. (Inappropriate word: "to be prepared" is a pejorative word, should be changed to a positive word such as "to devote oneself to")
50, governments around the world amnesty for agricultural taxes is one of the reasons why farmers' incomes have increased year by year. (Inappropriate use of words: the word "amnesty" should be replaced by "remission."
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