Needs are divided into two main categories, one is the material needs, the other is the spiritual needs, and this composition class I really feel the power of the spirit.
The small author began to use a few strokes of the language depicting the time, place, characters, events, open the door, straight to the point, first use the metaphorical approach to the Flickering Bay compared to a beautiful woman in a Tang suit, but also for the following beautiful town buried the ambush. Five Lights Lake Square, Flickering Flower Square, Smile Square several subheadings clear up the article's vein, so that the reader is clear at a glance.
Five Lights Lake Plaza describes the fountain when the use of prose, so that the reader as if they were there, the fountain in front of my eyes, so that a person in front of my eyes, so that people have unlimited reverie. The author also used a long Zen music to lead us to Flickering Square, skillful use of sentence type: "Can't hear **** the clamor. They have all gone to the ends of the earth." The bright light of the tower is also described in a bottom-to-top order, as if it were an original visual feast. Then use the crowd to attract us to the smile square, focusing on the description of the light and shadow, and give it the allegory of the flow of all things, points and gathering and dispersal, with the gathering, twisting, dispersal, the image of the light and shadow flow, and the real writing of the inner feelings: meditation, at ease, joyful.
The author of the end of the use of prose, the article to the climax of the symbolism of the smile of the flowers to do the best interpretation, the last sentence, "a smile in the blossom, in the flow of years, in the silent, and even more in the Wuxi of the Bay of Flowers," word overflowing with the author of the Bay of Flowers of the little bit of the fondness of the Bay of Flowers, I listened to the mesmerized.
This article is a masterpiece, but there is a slight lack of beauty, I think you can "gathering and dispersing sometimes, happy usual" to Su Shi "Song of Water" in a sentence: "people have sadness and happiness, the moon has a clear and round and missing", is not better!
These are the most important of all!
(Wu Mingxuan fourth grade)
On May 1 vacation, our family of three flew to Wuxi's Flower Bay. The Bay is like a beautiful woman in a Tang suit, dancing with a light and agile belt, beautiful.
In order to avoid the peak of the crowd and better experience the life of the town, we decided to stay in the inn and visit the Bay at night. We first came to the center of the town's five lights Lake Square. Accompanied by an ethereal melody, the fountain a moment to the air, a moment to the bottom of the lake drilling, a moment to our tourists pounced. Lotus center a fairy, dancing in the moonlight, graceful water column swaying with the wind, as if to the fairy put a pair of wings, at any time will fly to the moon. I was so mesmerized that I felt like I was in a fairyland.
Unconsciously, the night fell, long Zen music from the Flickering Square, the sound of the guqin deep and distant, can not hear the noise of tourists, they have gone to the ends of the earth. Flickering Tower radiant, we hurried to speed up the pace, rushed to the tower lighting ceremony. The tower is 27.98 meters high and has five floors, making it the high point of the town. At this time, each of the three middle floors had a Zen practitioner dancing with a lantern. Along with the guqin's staccato, the eaves of each layer of the tower emitted different colors of light from the bottom to the top, as if there was a pair of invisible hands playing the guqin and lighting up the colored lights. My eyes became candlelight.
I feel like floating, follow the crowd to continue down to the west, to the deepest smile square, to see a long heard of the "smile". In the middle of the square, there are six 18-meter-high sculptures that form a circle. Each pillar is a rocky pillar that has been formed over the years and has been chiseled through by the light, making it transparent and bright. Under the bright starry sky, as the music changes, the pillars slowly and continuously gather towards the center, and eventually merge into one, becoming one person, interpreting the flow of all things, divided and scattered. We then walked through the open space, under the flowing light and shadow, gathering, twisting and dispersing. Here, I feel I can go anywhere I want to go, and I also feel meditation, ease and joy in it.
Gathering is the call of the heart. The first time I saw this is when I was a little girl, and I was a little girl, and I was a little girl. Gathering and dispersing sometimes, joy usual. A smile in the blossom, in the flow of years, in the silent, more in Wuxi's Flower Bay.