1. Use the description method you have learned to write a composition about the characteristics of the person around you
My teacher
My class teacher has a pair of watery eyes Eyes, a pair of thin eyebrows, a sensitive nose and a eloquent red mouth. There is a smile on the round face.
My class teacher is Teacher Luo, who has taught us for four years. She is serious and responsible for us and is a good teacher. She knows everything about homework or uneven writing. For example: A classmate writes It's not neat, Teacher Luo knows who he is without looking at his name.
Teacher Luo treats each of our classmates like his own children. As the saying goes, "Once a teacher, always a mother."
I remember one time, when I was in class 1, Teacher Luo asked us to do homework. During the process of writing homework, I encountered some problems and was about to ask Teacher Luo to tell me, but I As soon as I said it, I actually called it "Mom". At that time, the whole class was laughing at me. At that time, I thought to myself: Hey, why did I call Teacher Luo "Mom" again? However, Teacher Luo really looks like my mother.
I still can’t forget this incident. Maybe Teacher Luo has forgotten it, but I will never forget it.
People often compare teachers to gardeners, who use their hard work to water bright flowers.
Teacher Luo, I will remember the knowledge you taught me, and I will definitely understand the principles you taught me.
My teacher
He is neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, and his skin is a bit dark. But he looks very energetic. Under the thick and black eyebrows, there are two small but wise eyes. This is my teacher. He is also the most innovative teacher I have ever seen!
He first reformed classroom teaching and never let us become "nerds who listen to books." He leads us to read, analyze, and think, allowing us to mount the horse of imagination and gallop on the track of knowledge. If anyone's suggestion is innovative, take the lead in applauding him and congratulating him. I thought: This is better than forcing knowledge to us. If we force ourselves to drink, wouldn’t we become a bottle? How can we be the future masters? So how can you brew fragrant honey?
He lets students make friends with books. Swim in the ocean of books. Let students understand that books are the source of knowledge. He requires students to have at least one hour of reading time every day. He taught us to think while reading, excerpt beautiful phrases and phrases, held regular "story meetings" and held speech contests, which gave us a good training in our eloquence!
He often said that writing cannot be separated from life. He often leads us to feel and understand life. Bring us into the vast world, understand nature, appreciate nature, and integrate beautiful nature into our compositions!
He is my teacher. He is not amazing in appearance, but he loves innovation and is approachable! 2. A 500-word composition using various description methods to describe people
My old father, the person I love most, the sweetness of the world is very sweet, you are the only one. . "Every time I hear this song "Father", I can't help but think of my father. He is a very kind man and the person I admire the most. He was, is and will be in the future.
My father was born as a farmer. Because his family was poor when he was young, he was unable to go to high school. Instead, he passed the normal school examination and later became a teacher in a middle school. My father was a very responsible person and his love was always there. Divide it into two equal parts, one for the students and one for our family. At the critical moment, our share is not enough. With my father as a good teacher, his students always come first in his class. There was a very naughty student who stopped reading halfway through his studies and planned to go out to work. Perhaps his father was very optimistic about this student and visited his home several times. He brought this student to school and talked with him. Be reasonable and let him study hard. In the end, this student was admitted to a good university and is now the head teacher of a key senior class in a middle school. He visits his father every year and sometimes calls his father his "mentor." I asked my father: "You have been teaching for so many years, why do you still have the same enthusiasm as before? "My father said to me seriously: "Leo Tolstoy said, 'If a person does not have enthusiasm, he will achieve nothing, and the basis of enthusiasm is responsibility.
’ Got it? "It took me a long time to react and nodded.
In his spare time outside of work, my father always stayed with our family. When I was young, other girls of the same age as me , I learned to dance, play the piano, practice calligraphy, and get tutoring, but I just liked to play in the sand and run around barefoot. My mother watched those children of the same age coming home with certificates, and she was envious alone... But my father. He happily said to me: "Baby, those children are not as happy as you. We don't want to learn those things, right?" ! "I nodded happily and said: "Yes, we don't want to learn, those things are not fun, haha. "My father never forced me to do anything I didn't like when I was young, and he still doesn't do it now. Therefore, I had a very happy childhood without academic pressure, all thanks to my father. < /p>
In the second grade of junior high school, I started to enter adolescence. I was emotionally unstable and started to be a little rebellious. So I made some mistakes in school, and they were serious mistakes. That time, my father beat me. , because he couldn't understand how his always well-behaved daughter could become like this, when I was his only hope! But I, being ignorant, blamed my father at the time and felt that he was unreasonable. Later, my father had a heart-to-heart talk with me. Tell me: "You can't do this, do you know why people live? People live to bring happiness to others, and if you make mistakes in school and don't study hard, it will cause trouble for your teacher, make your relatives feel sad, and make your classmates look at you differently. This is not good. , Dad actually shouldn't have hit you that day. Dad was also angry. You are my only hope. Don't let me be disappointed in you. I know you blame your dad these days, but what parent in the world doesn’t love their children? Dad loves you so much and wants you to grow up! "That time, I realized my ignorance and ignorance.
This is my father. He is different from other fathers. He dares to express his love for his daughter. He is responsible and I think he He is the best dad in the world. When I started out in the vast sea of ??knowledge, my father accompanied me all the way. When I stumbled on the bumpy road of seeking knowledge, my father’s generous heart always healed me. Father’s love is selfless and priceless. ! 3. Character description writing, using two description methods
Character description is one of the essential basic writings in primary school composition. Many parents do not know how to coach character description in primary school composition. In fact, any writing. They all have certain skills. When writing narratives, characters and events are inseparable. The most critical step is to be able to understand the requirements of the topic. How to write a narrative that describes the characters well? So this article is about how to help primary school students write. How to learn and write character narrative essays.
Writing continuation essays related to characters is not like writing narrative essays, which require that the facts must be written completely. Things run through the entire article. Narrative essays about people are written through an event or event. It is a matter of describing a character through several things.
1. Describing a character through one thing Characteristics are highlighted and expressed through things. The appearance, words, actions, and psychology of the characters are used to describe the characters in various aspects. The so-called typical is things that can fully express the characters' thoughts and express the characters' good ideological qualities.
2. Writing about people through multiple things
Writing about people through several things is to use multiple things to reflect a person’s qualities, but the narration of things should be Completely, clearly describe the development of things, such as time, place, characters, causes, processes, and results of events. You can also describe the characters through cross-narration of several things, but the appearance of the characters must also be described. , behavior, discourse, and psychology are described in detail, so as to highlight the character's quality.
3. How to portray the characters
In the narrative process, the most representative characters should be written. The description of a character's thoughts and feelings, personality characteristics, appearance, language, actions, and psychological activities is the description of a character. 1. Portrait description, which reveals a person's personality through appearance, expression, clothing, posture, accent, and other characteristics. The appearance of the character is closely related to the inner world of the character. Through the description of the appearance, the character image can leave a deep impression on the reader. 2. Language description is both a dialogue and a monologue. A dialogue is between two or more people. dialogue; a monologue refers to a character talking to himself.
The activity that a character can best express his innermost feelings is language, which plays an important role in expressing the character's thoughts and character. Personalized language allows people to know whose role it is through the sound.
Have you learned how to tutor primary school students in writing characters? In addition to the above two points, there is also the description of the character's psychology and behavior. In short, it is necessary to learn to grasp the characteristics and express these characteristics clearly in words, so that the characters and character qualities in the article can be left in the readers' hearts. An unforgettable impression. 4. Write a 300-word essay using character description method
After half a year together, I learned not only physical knowledge, but also valuable social knowledge. It also gave me a new understanding of myself. If someone asked me if I hate you, I would say 'hate' without hesitation. Because you gave me too much criticism and almost no praise. I don’t think my studies are particularly good, but at least I’m not bad (scores in various subjects). The criticism I received from teachers in other subjects was only one-fiftieth of the criticism you received, and many of the criticisms were euphemistic, and they were so sharp and painful that they made people want to cry without tears, and they were unable to stop.
Is it possible that we can only use the desperate method of destroying the boat and putting it to death to survive? In fact, 90% of the teacher's criticism is correct, and 10% of it is far-fetched. Putting aside these trivial matters, let me first talk about what I think is important. The second is that we met too late; if I could have been in contact with you earlier, I think I would have matured and developed earlier. I could have heard you, a wise man, talk about the "beautiful" life earlier, and I could have purified and developed myself earlier. To put it bluntly, being in a relationship with you is like eating a bitter gourd, which is bitter at first and then sweet. Or to use Cheng Pu’s words to summarize, “Being in a relationship with you is like tasting fine wine and being intoxicated again without knowing it.
Talking about you Although you have many advantages, you should also point out your shortcomings. After all, no one is perfect! You sometimes speak or criticize people too much and hurt people's self-esteem. Although the starting point is good, you can't let it go. If you accept it with a relaxed and happy attitude, it may even cause people to have a lot of strong resentment towards you. Of course, I have also experienced it, but now I just laugh it off. 5. Use character description techniques to write. Personal composition
My cousin is Yang Yang, who is just three years old this year.
She is chubby and short, and her face is not as tall as my shoulders. She is round, with a small round black mole between her two thin and long eyebrows.
Whenever someone asks about this mole, she will say innocently: " This is called a beauty mark. "Although her eyes are not big, they are very bright.
Her small mouth smiles sweetly, which is really endearing. She loves beauty.
It’s the New Year, My mother bought her a pair of small leather shoes. In a blink of an eye, she opened the shoe box, took out the leather shoes and put them on her feet.
After putting them on, she still imitated the way an adult would do. She walked around the room with her hands held high and her head raised. Her air made everyone laugh.
She couldn't help but laugh when she saw us laughing. stand up.
6. How to write a 350-word essay using three character description methods
The teacher’s smile
The water flows away slowly, just like the years slip away in a blink of an eye... ··Three years of primary school life are coming to an end. It’s time to draw an end and write a new journey. In my eyes, primary school life is like a cup of tea, with too many fragrances to taste... ·
There is a smile that I will never forget. Every time I think of it, I feel like I have gone back to the past, back to the second-grade me. The second-grade math teacher was tall, and I looked at her as if I was looking at a building. On the mountain peak, a pair of small eyes shine with excitement and imagination... Teacher Yin is very serious in class, and his searchlight-like eyes are always in the class to catch some "terrorists" who are afraid of peace in the world, staring at Yin The teacher's "cold and ruthless" face made me feel a little uneasy. When I first saw Teacher Yin, I thought she was so fierce. I took a sneak peek and ran away. After class, Teacher Yin seemed to change her face. With her amiable face and the way she plays with her classmates, she really looks a bit like a big sister. Out of an instinctive fear of the teacher, I never get close to Teacher Yin. Sometimes when I look at her narrowed eyes, I feel... The sweet dimples on the face will also produce an inexplicable good impression. At noon, Teacher Yin took everyone to take a nap. She smiled at me on the stairs on the first floor, and I was a little at a loss. < /p>
Once after class, I was sitting on my seat playing with some gadgets. She came down from the podium, walked to me, sat down, and asked with a smile: "What are you doing?" I answered cautiously. She said: "No, it's nothing." She smiled again, her eyes seemed to be bent into a line, and I was stunned. She took out the homework book from my school bag, turned a few pages, and pointed to the An a- asked me: "You can do all these questions, right? Why can't you do it right? Be careful in the future and ask your mother to call me tonight!" After saying that, she rolled her eyes again, smiled, and got up and left. Go. Did I make a mistake? Want to make a call? I'm a little disappointed. Is my performance really that bad? My heart seemed to be pressed against a huge stone, and I was in a state of loss all day. When I got home, I asked my mother to call. My mother was a little surprised and uneasy, but she still called me. While she was on the phone, she kept calling. I walked around the room, as if we were talking face to face, and my hands would dance a few times from time to time. My eyes followed my mother's footsteps. As the call came to an end, my breathing became more rapid, and a small amount of sweat broke out on my forehead. I hung up. After the phone call, my mother breathed a sigh of relief and said nothing. Obviously, the teacher did not criticize me, but my heart always felt like it was twisted into a ball. Lying on the bed, as soon as I closed my eyes, all I could think of was Teacher Yin’s smile. , Teacher Yin’s words... Since then, I have received many A*s. When I looked up, I saw the smile with two dimples in front of me...
Later After changing the teacher, I rarely see that smile again. In the sixth grade, I see Teacher Yin again. Maybe she can’t remember me, but she will always be imprinted in my mind and remain fresh in my memory...I sincerely and gratefully Smiling at Teacher Yin, he said hello: "Teacher Yin!" Teacher Yin turned around in response, smiling and nodding to me just like he did when he was a child... Teacher Yin has changed a lot, and his shawl-length hair has become ear-length. She has short hair and is not as tall as before in my impression. The only thing that has not changed is her encouraging smile...
This seems to be more than 500 words 7. The person I know best Write a 400-word essay using the method of character description
My Foolish Mother
My mother is the housewife of our family. She is also a big fool and often does wrong things.
I remember one time, my mother was cooking and reading at the same time. She was so mesmerized that she forgot about the dishes, which were burnt. Later, she also changed the salt, sugar, soy sauce, and vinegar. That time, my father and I were going to suffer because this dish was sour, sweet, bitter, spicy and salty. But my mother still ate with gusto. Another time, my mother went out to buy oil, and I asked my mother to help me buy a copy of "Getting Behind the Celebrities" for more than 50 yuan. Unexpectedly, after my mother finished shopping, she chatted with her friends in the store for an hour. She actually put the oil and books she paid for on the ground and came back empty-handed. She didn’t know what happened. Woolen cloth! But it pissed me off! Another time, my mother wanted to go to the market to buy groceries, but she got up late. She casually tied up her hair, put on her clothes, and hurriedly rode her bicycle to the market.
At this time, my father walked out and said: "She will definitely come back in less than 10 seconds." I was a little confused: Mom went out, why was my father so sure? But I still counted 10 secretly in my heart, and my mother really came back on her bicycle when I counted to 10. I took a closer look, and it turned out that my mother was wearing mandarin duck shoes! I laughed uproariously, and my mother also laughed: "I am so stupid, how can I not even wear shoes!" So my mother quickly changed the shoes and started to rush to the market again...
< p> Although my mother is very stupid and stupid, I like my idiot mother very much. I love her more than anyone else in the world. 8. Use character description method to write about a personI dragged my tired body off the bus and walked home along the sidewalk.
When I came to the elevator door, I pressed the elevator button hard, hoping that the elevator would come down soon. But after waiting for a long time, I didn’t see the elevator coming down. It turned out that the elevator was out of order again, so I had to climb up feeling sulky. On the tenth floor, as I climbed, I kept muttering to myself. Pushing open the door of the house, I saw my sister sitting in the living room. There were twenty or thirty pieces of paper scattered on the table, and the floor was full of scraps of paper.
As soon as she saw me coming in, she picked up a piece of paper and showed it to me with a smile on her face: "Sister, sister, do you think my lion cut looks like it?" I really wanted to tell her not to do it. She yelled, "I'm not in the mood to play with her," but when I took a closer look, I saw that the piece of paper was densely filled with numbers and equations, so kind! When I saw it clearly again, "Oh! You're going to die!" I shouted, "Use my math homework for paper cutting!" I burned the midnight oil to finish 20 math problems last night and forgot to put them away, sister. What I thought was waste paper was actually used to cut into various animals! I was already very angry, but seeing my hard work turned into a pile of waste paper in front of my eyes only added fuel to the fire. My sister shouted like this to me, knowing that something was not good, so I ran away quickly. I was so angry that I lost my mind and chased my sister, so the two of them chased each other in the living room.
Finally, my sister ran to the door, opened the door, and was about to escape. Before long, I grabbed her with one hand, pulled her into the door, and then slammed the door. closed. Unexpectedly, my sister suddenly screamed. I took a closer look, and to my surprise, my sister’s fingers were caught in the crack of the door. I opened the door immediately, and I was at a loss for a moment.
At this moment, my mother came back. She immediately took my sister to the doctor, leaving me alone in the house.
I just woke up at this time. I really couldn’t imagine that I would treat my sister, whom I have always loved, so roughly. Where did my love go? If my sister's finger is broken because of this, what should I do? I regret so much and hope nothing will happen to my sister.
After a long time, my mother and sister finally came back. The doctor gave my sister injections to relieve the pain and took X-rays. Now there is no serious problem.
I wanted to apologize to my sister, but she seemed to have forgotten what happened and complained to me: "Sister, the injection hurt!" Fortunately, my sister was fine, otherwise I would have felt guilty for the rest of my life. . It was a midsummer evening. I went downstairs for a walk and met my old good friend Wu Wenbin.
We hadn’t seen each other for a long time, so we started chatting enthusiastically when we met. As we were chatting, he suddenly asked me; "Maomao, how many push-ups can you do?" I shook my head and said, "I don't know."
Before I could finish speaking, he lay on his back He started doing it on the floor, and while doing it, he said: "I can do more than 20, and you must do more than me." Not long after he finished speaking, he stood up and said, "I did 25 in one day." , you should try it too.”
I had no choice but to bite the bullet and do it. You know, I am the worst at sports because I am too fat.
I lay on the ground and did less than 5, and then I was exhausted and defeated. Wu Wenbin looked at it and said: "I didn't expect you only did 5. How great did I think you were?! "When I heard this, my face turned red to the root of my neck. If there was a crack in the ground, I really wanted to crawl into it, but it was impossible.
When I got home, I lay on the bed, tossing and turning, unable to sleep. I secretly thought, he can do 25, why can’t I? Am I stupider than him? No, it's impossible! I'm by no means stupider than him, I just have less practice than him.
Yes, I must work hard to surpass him. So, from that day on, I made up my mind to do 5 push-ups every day. As the number of days increased, gradually, gradually, I could do more than 30 push-ups in one breath.
After a period of hard training, I can already do more than 40. A year passed quickly, and on a midsummer night, at the same place, I met Wu Wenbin again.
I took the initiative and proposed to compete in push-ups again. He agreed without hesitation.
He did it first and still made 25. After he finished, he looked at me triumphantly and said to me as if he was mocking, "Can you do so much?" Now it was my turn. I thought of that night a year ago and the price I paid for my hard training. I couldn't help but feel inspired. I suddenly burst out with an unknown force and did 50 in one breath.
After I finished, I saw that Wu Wenbin was dumbfounded. After a long time, he regained his composure and asked me stupidly: "Why are you so great?" I smiled and replied: "Thank you for that.
If you hadn't touched my strong will, why would I have trained so hard? How could I surpass you? ""Oh, I understand..." he said with a wry smile. That's one thing I'm going to tell you.
In fact, I am also very strong in other aspects. Because of this, I can always win. This is me, a strong person. 9. Write an essay using the explanation method of listing numbers. Write about the characteristics or qualities of the people around you 300
There are many unknown people around me, and they are all doing their jobs tirelessly in their positions. And the people I admire most are the cleaners.
It's a hot summer. The birds were hiding somewhere; the grass and trees were all lowering their heads; the puppy was so hot that it stuck out its tongue and kept panting. The cicadas kept making irritating sounds on the branches, as if cheering for the scorching sun. On the still wicker, a cicada lay motionless. In the dull air, its cry seemed to keep saying: It's so hot_It's so hot_
At noon this day, I I went to the canteen to buy an ice cream stick and threw the wrapping paper on the ground. At this time, a cleaning worker walked towards me. She pushed the garbage truck and waved to me from a distance, as if to say, "Fanggang is my home, and it depends on everyone to keep it clean. Please don't litter, okay?" I looked at her carefully, her short and fat body , wearing a blue uniform that seems to have faded away, as if that is their eternal symbol.
The somewhat dark skin exudes a healthy atmosphere, and the deep wrinkles on his forehead seem to have been weathered by the years. There is a slight smile on the face. That smile is like sunshine, bringing brightness to the dark soul; that smile is like rain and dew, moisturizing the dry heart; that smile is like the breeze, bringing freshness to the noisy crowd; that smile Like flowers, they bring fragrance to the complicated world and make us feel the warmth of the world. What is most unforgettable to me is the eyes full of infinite hope and love for life. There is no complaint about life in those eyes, let alone helplessness about life. They just quietly seem to be their bounden duty. She held the broom that had been replaced countless times tightly in her hand, and the garbage cart, which seemed to be her belongings forever, and placed them tightly behind her. When I was cleaning, my bent waist seemed like a stone arch bridge leading to a happy future. It was strong and generous, so I couldn't help but pick up the wrapping paper and throw it into the trash can.
I praise the cleaners, if it weren’t for them, the city would not be clean and tidy. Unexpectedly, some people think their work is despicable, but their souls are noble!